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I got this idea from Dipstikk and I thought you might just want some background information on Bailey, plus there’s some piccies of her (if I can get them to show up).

Name: Bailey Farr

Age: 13 Earth years old

Birthplace: England, Earth

Gender: Female

Species: Human

Height: 5’1’’

Weight: 97 Ibs

Weapons: Mudokon make bow, arrows, sling, whip, dagger and homemade spear

Bio: Bailey was an Odd kid from a single parent family, her mother - a workaholic, her father, an army scientist - dead. Bailey had to look after herself since she was eight. She’s an outgoing, cheeky loudmouth that always has to have the last word and seems fearless.

She was pretty lonely as she was considered a bit of a freak and didn’t have any friends, expect a select few who were ‘outsiders of society’, until she found a flock of ‘mutated pigeons’ living in the back garden. Eventually she discovered that the pigeons opened a portal and she was sucked into it, finding herself in Oddworld.

She was captured by Sligs and taken to a Glukkon run processing plant and set to work. The entire workforce was unusually, female.

While there, Bailey met an albino Slig named Slick that feels he has the worse deal and he’s sick and tired of watching the Glukkons suck Oddworld dry and enslaving it’s inhabitants. The pair escaped, while on the run Slick was captured, but Bailey escaped.

Bailey stumbled upon Rupture Farms and yet again became a slave worker.

She befriended Abe while at the meat processing plant, and helped him rescue the other ninety-nine Mudokons from Rupture Farms, joining him on his Oddysee, also having to journey through Paramonia and Scrabania and run from scary things that want to eat her as soon as look at her (this is because the Scrabs and Paramites have become vicious and untrusting as the Glukkons hunt them to extinction). She also learnt to ride an Elum among other things and the freed Mudokons saved her as well as Abe when they are eventually captured.

Bailey stayed with the freed Mudokons for a while and then joined Abe on his Exoddus. She found Slick in the Necrum mines working with the slaves. He joined the little band of Mudokons freedom fighters.

After coming back from Abe’s Exoddus Bailey and Slick stayed around with the Mudokons. Bailey became especially friendly with a wild Scrab and Paramite (at the good ending they seem to be able to get along with the Mudokons without eating them) and things start to settle down.

While on a hunting trip months later, Bailey was attacked by bounty hunters and separated from her group when the Mudokons opened a random bird-portal for her to escape through.

Found herself on another part of the Oddworld with her weaponry and one of Slick’s Slig rifles…

Acquaintances: Abe, community of Mudokons, the three Weirdos, Slick, Scrab, Paramite and now Stranger.

Accomplishments: Helping to free around 399 Mudokons and rebuild a safe haven for them at Monsiac Lines. She’s also known for her tea and pancakes (exclusive to Alf’s Tea and Rehab).

Attire: Black pants, black and green sneakers, a dark t-shirt, green strap top and woollen green jumper, black fingerless gloves and a green bandana.

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Okay, just a note, I only have other fictions to work off with the geography, town names etc so if I use something you created, sorry but I don’t know any better.

And has anyone ever gotten these leg cramps while they’re asleep? It flippin’ hurts I can tell you.

Cramps And Sawing Logs
Bailey slept with one fist pressed under her chin. Somewhere in the middle of the night she rolled over and unconsciously stretched her leg while she was asleep.

Immediately the muscles clenched, part of Bailey’s sub-conscious groaned. Not again.

Sigh.

Bailey sat up quickly and rolled over grabbing hold of one of her arrows and putting the shaft between her teeth before the pain set in.

It did. A moment later. Excruciating pain engulfed Bailey’s entire lower leg. Bailey uttered a muffled sound and bit down on her arrow to stop from screaming.

She was sat, clutching at her leg, head bowed when Stranger was woken up by her muted whimpers.

When you were a bounty hunter, being a light sleeper was always a good thing.

He saw Bailey, moaning to herself and holding one of her legs. Quietly he crawled over.

“Bailey? Bailey what’s up wiv yer?” Bailey blinked by at him, her eyes were wet from the pain. She didn’t speak, just nodded her head towards her leg. “Yer leg hurts?” Bailey nodded vigorously. “How canna help?” Bailey began to rub her leg, to get the blood flowing and relax the taut muscle. Stranger watched what she was doing and the brushed her hands away and copied her actions, rubbing the limb in question.

A few minutes later Bailey took out the shaft from between her teeth and blew air from her cheeks.

“Thanks.”

“Yer get leg cramps?” Bailey nodded and patted her leg.

“It’s an absolute menace.” Stranger smiled briefly, Bailey yawned.

“Go ter sleep squirt.” Bailey nodded and made herself comfortable.

“Yer fell ‘sleep on yer sendry dudy.” She accused sleepily before she drifted off.

“I’m a light sleeper.” Stranger said, but Bailey was already asleep. “G’night Bailey.” Stranger muttered before he drifted off as well.

Bailey jolted awake several hours later. For a couple of seconds she just lay where she was, completely still, eyes staring into the dying embers of the fire, wondering what had woken her.

It became apparent when her she registered the harsh grinding that sounded like someone was sawing at logs with a hack saw.

Bailey sat up abruptly. Aching nausea lanced through her head, Bailey took a deep breath to keep from vomiting. After a moment or too the pain and nausea abated and Bailey looked around for the source of the noise.

It was Stranger. Snoring. Like a rusty chainsaw.

Bailey stifled snickers, half to keep from waking up Stranger and half to stop the headache she was getting from escalating.

She highly doubted anyone would find Stranger half as intimidating if they saw him now. How he managed to sleep in that position was beyond her, and it made the whole thing all the more amusing.

He was lying on his back over a rock, head and legs hanging from the stone, his mouth open and snoring. His hat had fallen off, showing a thatch of pale brown fur, or hair (Bailey still hadn’t decided which) in a creamy coloured pony-tail and two small erect, triangular shaped ears. He didn’t have his poncho on anymore either, just a green undershirt and tan pants. Definitely not as intimidating. She’d got one thing right though. He could certainly rip her in half if he put his mind to it. He had the muscles for it at any rate.

Bailey cracked a grin, what she wouldn’t give for a camera right now. She considered waking him up but decided against it,

“Let ‘im sleep.” She thought and watched him for a bit longer before she stoked the fire and picked up the Slig semi-automatic. She began to clean it with a rag from her pocket, if any of the moving parts got encrusted with too much grim then it would stop working all together. She had to stop and scratch an itch on her forearm a couple of times.

When she’d finished she opened the bullet chamber, it was about three quarters full. For such a small gun it didn’t half had a large bullet capacity. “Need more ammo…” she mused, “Need to get hold of some cash first though.”

“Moolah.” Bailey looked up quickly, she was so engrossed with her gun maintenance she hadn’t noticed Stranger stop snoring and sit up.

“’Ello, how long ‘ave you been up?”

“Few minutes.”

“What’s moolah?”

“It’s tha currency of Oddworld.”

“Ah.” Bailey went back to the gun, checking all it’s parts. When she was satisfied with the results she laid the Slig rifle aside and picked up the Outlaw shotgun, and grimaced. “Holy crud on a stick! This thing’s been through the mill,” she began rubbing the gun with the polishing rag in small intense circles, muttering about people not looking after their things.

“Yer take good care of yer guns.” Stranger commented, nodding in approval,

“Yeah well, if it packed in, I’d be Fleech food.” Stranger cocked his head to one side, the expression he always took when he was getting curious.

“Fleech?” Bailey gave him a completely serious look.

“Believe me, you do not want to know.”

“That bad eh?”

“No, worse.” Stranger sucked his teeth,

“Nasty.”

“You have no idea.”

“Yer had a run in with these Fleeches then?”

“Several and none of them were pleasant or pretty, in fact I nearly got eaten by one at one point.” Bailey put aside the gun and rolled up one leg of her black trousers. On the calf there was a perfectly round mark, three concentric circles that grew redder as they went to the middle and ending with a small red-black dot, in the very centre. “Fleeches,” Bailey grinned strangely, more like a rueful grimace and shook her head slightly, “Nasty beggars.” She rolled down her pant leg again. Stranger was looking at her oddly. Bailey took up the gun again and continued cleaning it. “That’s why I use guns.” Bailey whispered, checking the shotgun’s barrel.

“Why?” asked Stranger in a soft, low voice.

“Close calls are the story of my life.” Bailey said softly, “I’d be dead already if I hadn’t used a gun. I might not like it…but it’s all I got…” Bailey looked up at the still dark sky. “The stars are fading.” She said suddenly. She looked back at Stranger. “When are we starting off again?”

“Right now if yer want.” Bailey nodded,

“Yeh.”

So an hour later, just as the sun was coming up Bailey and Stranger were already on their march again.

“Where are we goin’ anyway?” Bailey asked finally,

“Buzzarton then Birdington.” Bailey blinked and scratched at her arm, it was itching again,

“What the- yer know what? I don’t want to even know.” She kept scratching, the itch stopped.

“There’s hear-tell of a purdy bounty up that ways in Birdington.” Stranger explained,

“Oh really? D’you know anything else?”

“Nope, but I intend to find out.”

“And bring it in yes?”

“You got it.” the pair walked in silence for a while, Stranger in front and Bailey trotting behind, looking at her surrounds, the jungle may have been packed to bursting with horrible little atrocities but it was still a fascinating, beautiful place.

After a minute Bailey’s gaze fell on an unusually straight branch of wood, just a bit taller then she was, in fact it was the perfect shape and length for-

Bailey stepped over a rotting log to the side of the path and picked up the shaft, with her callous, nimble finger she lightly touched the branch in her hands. It was young wood, strong and not brittle or rotten, Bailey used a nail to scrape off some of the bark. The wood underneath was healthy.

“Bailey!”

Stranger’s voice called her name and Bailey scrambled back onto the main track.

“Here.”

“Whadda ya doin’ kid?” Bailey waved the stick in her hand,

“I just got me a new javelin.” She gushed, Stranger blinked, shrugged and started off walking again, Bailey caught up with him and continued inspecting her latest project.

Completely satisfied she got a penknife from the pouch on her belt and flipped it open, after making sure the blade was sharp Bailey began scraping at the wood with it.

It wouldn’t take her long to make a javelin. And it didn’t either.

As they walked and Bailey worked, she didn’t notice Stranger keep glancing back to see what she was up to and why she wasn’t talking much. But he knew not to say anything while she was concentrating.

Finally Bailey finished the last touch, the blade groove at one end of the now pale and completely straight spear shaft and blew the wood shavings from it. She closed up the penknife and replaced it in the pouch and brought out the spear head, wedging it in and finishing it by tying it securely with a coarse twine from her pocket. She twirled the finished product, it was a perfect replacement and hopefully this one wouldn’t snap…

Stranger stepped over a large fallen tree that lay across the path. Bailey, being a lot shorter and therefore with shorter legs slipped the newly constructed javelin into the vacant loop of leather behind her shoulder and scrambled over it as well.

Just then another wave of agonising nausea swept through her head, many times stronger then that morning.

Bailey gasped and nearly fell off the log but she tightened her hold on the fallen log and managed to keep her balance and slid off. Another pulse of pain and sickness passed through Bailey and she staggered to one side, leaning against and upright tree by the road before she slid to the ground, sinking to her knees.

Stranger turned immediately when he heard the thud of Bailey hitting the ground. She was holding her head and whimpers of pain crawled from her like an injured Paramite squeaking it’s distress.

In two strides he was next to the cringing human, Stranger dropped down on one knee and put a huge hand/paw on her shoulder.

Bailey was shaking and she was deathly cold, her skin was a sickly yellow-grey and clammy. Why hadn’t he noticed it before? Bailey was obviously very sick. Stranger began rubbing Bailey’s arms to warm her up.

It didn’t work.

Stranger started getting a bit frantic at this point, Bailey needed heat and the only source he had available was his own body-heat. He gathered the smaller being into his arms, pressing her to his own warm body, Bailey’s forehead on his chest.

“C’mon squirt, yer need ter warm up.” He muttered, “Bailey? Bailey, can yer hear me kid?” Bailey whimpered but nodded shakily. Stranger felt the human’s forehead. Her skin was burning…

The pain in Bailey’s head seared every brain cell with white-hot heat. And then suddenly, it stopped. The pain, the burning heat, the nausea, everything.

Bailey was still for a moment, blinking, confused. Her forehead was resting against something warm. Bailey looked up. Stranger had her in a desperate cuddle. Bailey was somewhat surprised by this. She was about to ask why Stranger had had the sudden urge to give her a hug but Stranger’s neon green eyes gazing into her own hazel-amber ones, looked concerned and stopped her question.

“I’m fine…let me up.” Bailey muttered, Stranger looked like he wasn’t going to let her move for a second but he did and Bailey rose, locking her knees to stay upright.

“What was that!?” Stranger asked, also rising, worry making his voice harsh. Bailey closed her eyes and rubbed her head,

“It was…nothing…”

“Like hell it was!” Stranger exploded, “Bailey, what are yer not tellin’ me!?”

“I’m not-” Bailey broke off and scratched her arm, “That damn itch…” she muttered to herself more then anyone else, but once again Stranger’s keen hearing picked it up.

“What itch? What’s up wiv yer hand?” before Bailey could actually answer Stranger took a firm grip on her hand and stripped off the fingerless glove that covered her hand and some of her arm.

“It’s probably just another Zappfly bite-” Bailey began to say, but stopped. On her arm, just above the wrist was a sore looking swelling the size of an egg and the colour of a day-old bruise. Bailey blinked at it.

Stranger however lifted his gaze from the bite and glared at Bailey,

“When were yer bitten by a Bolamite?” he asked in a furious but low voice. Bailey blinked and looked up,

“W-what? Oh, one of the smaller ones got me when I was strung up. Why?”

“Why? Why!? Bolamite bites are poisonous!” Bailey didn’t have time to even open her mouth before Stranger spoke again, “Yer need ta see Doc. C’mon.” Bailey went to start walking but Stranger stopped her, “Where d’you think yer goin’?” Bailey frowned,

“I thought you just said I need to see a doctor?” said Bailey confused,

“Yer do but you ain’t walkin’ there. More yer move the faster the venom’ll move. I’ll carry yer.”

“WHA’!?” But Stranger wouldn’t hear any of Bailey’s protests and swung her up onto his shoulders, she didn’t weigh very much to him anyway.

“Yer’d better enjoy it while yer can, I won’t be doin’ this again.” Stranger grinned, silencing Bailey’s objections. He heard a frustrated sigh.

Fine.” Bailey muttered. She propped her chin on Stranger’s head and muttered to herself. This time Stranger didn’t hear her.

¤§¤

Sometime later Bailey began to feel drowsy.

“Stranger.” She muttered, “I’m getting’ a bit-” she yawned. She felt his head vibrating as he chuckled,

“Then go ter sleep if yer tired.” Bailey made a sleepy affirmative and laid her cheek on the top of his head, a few minutes confirmed to Bailey that it wasn’t very comfortable.

Irritable because she couldn’t drop off Bailey took off Stranger’s huge leather hat and then laid her cheek on his hair…or fur…(she still hadn’t decided yet) and put the hat on her own head.

That was definitely more comfortable, even if Stranger’s fur tickled her nose…

Stranger felt Bailey take off his hat but didn’t object, if it let her sleep, well…he’d let it slide.

But just this once.

He just hoped the Bolamite venom hadn’t taken a firm hold on her system. Bailey’s symptoms suggested that it was a female Bolamite bite. The males had the paralysis venom, which caught the prey, but the female venom put the victim into a coma while it liquidised the internal organs, it was how Bolamites fed when they were younger.

“No wonder she doesn’t like arachnids…” he thought, “Hold on Bailey.”
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OOOO! Liquidizing her INSIDES!? >.< Sounds painful! And disgusting!

Yet, again, a very nice chapter, Lobo! Me, I'm still going to get up my next part. Probably today without writing on paper. BUt anyways, good work! I can sense some 'fluffiness' as well, ey, Lobo?
Keep it comin'!
Oh, and yes. I've had those HORRIBLE leg cramps, always near the middle of night. God, I was nearly SCREAMING when my cramps came up. The next day, my leg would feel like jello. How bad is 'dat?
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OOOO! Liquidizing her INSIDES!? >.< Sounds painful! And disgusting!
Muahahahaha! It's meant to be Dark Elite dude! And yes, I believe tis fluffiness in this one. Wha'? I like writing fluff! And leg cramps are pretty hideous aren't they, I wake up screaming blue murder as well...

[Edit] Oh, and another thing, how d'you attach that piccy of Umi??? I can't do it...it's incredibly annoying actually...
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Just a side note, the quotes from the game I’m using are from the Favourite Line thread, and they were so damn funny I had to use ‘em, even if it’s out of context. They had me in stitches and hopefully you’ll like ‘em too.

And ¥ means Moolah remember.

And can anyone tell me how to attach pictures…I got some of Bailey and I can’t get them to show up…

Shaken And At The End Of The Tether
Part 1
Three hours later, in the town of Buzzarton, Stranger burst into the home of ‘The Doc’, the only medical expert in these parts and a Vykker by species.

Stranger found the Doc hunched over his desk, muttering to himself and scribbling on some sheets of paper with an ink pen.

“Go h’away.” He wheezed, “I’m busy.”

“Doc, it’s Stranger.” The Vykker looked up and peered at Stranger through his spectacles. His whole demeanour altered.

“H’Ah! Young Stranger! Just who I vanted to see!” he waved the papers, “I’ve just finished your-” The Doc stopped talking when he registered Stranger’s expression. “Vhat brings you here?” it was then that the Vykker’s gaze was drawn to the tight, sweating bundle in Stranger’s arms. Curiously the consultant got up from his chair and hobbled over to Stranger. He examined the creature the bounty hunter was holding in interest. “Vhat is this?”

“She’s a human, her name is Bailey. I think she’s been bitten by a female Bolamite.”

“Vell then ve had better have an examination!” Stranger was slightly unnerved by the Vykker’s enthusiasm. “And h’about the price…” the Doc began to say but faded off when Stranger fixed him with a disturbing, bright green gaze. “Ah…this one’s on the house, you being such h’a good customer.” The Vykker wheedled. “Come, come, this vay.” He beckoned and led an impatient Stranger into the back room of the surgery. “Put her on the table, how are the stitches holding up by the vay?”

“Fine.” Stranger said and did as he was told.

“Go and vait in my office m’boy, I’ll come and see you when I’ve treated your small friend here.” Stranger hesitated, then nodded and left.

The Vykker Doc picked up a silver instrument that looked rather worrying and began his examination.

“Pity, pity.” He muttered, “I vould have liked to know more h’about this ‘uman.” The Doc looked quickly back towards the surgery door, hoping Stranger hadn’t heard.

If Bailey had been anyone else other then a friend of Stranger, she wouldn’t have made it alive off the operating table, and her organs would probably have been floating in green pickling jars a week later…

The Doc considered just leaving the creature Bailey to her fate and tell Stranger it was too late for her. He quashed the thought, Stranger would kill him, he could smell a lie a mile away.

The Doc doubted that even the fact that he was the one that would perform the specialist operation on Stranger would save him.

The Doc put aside his disappointment and began Bailey’s treatment.

In the Vykker’s office Stranger sat in a chair, unable to keep still he rose and began pacing the room, he wouldn’t admit it but it had been a very long time since he had been this worried.

His mind went back a couple of hours, reluctantly remembering the events leading to this moment;

For a while Bailey had slept peacefully, using his fur as a pillow. And then she had begun to dream, at first Stranger wasn’t worried by this. But when the sounds coming from Bailey became more distressed Stranger had become edgy.

And then Bailey had started to scream.

Stranger sat in the chair again, head in hands, the unwanted memories swirling.

“NO! GO AWAY! LEAVE ME ALONE! GET OFF ME! STOP IT!” Bailey was shaking, feebly fighting off some unseen foe. Stranger stopped dead and swung Bailey spasm ridden body from his shoulders into his arms.

“Bailey! Bailey wake up!” He shook her shoulder, trying to wake her. She wouldn’t. It was then Stranger understood that Bailey was no longer asleep but delirious. She was hallucinating, and by the sound of it, reliving her most terrified and traumatising memories. Bailey thrashed, fighting against him but Stranger kept a firm grip. “Bailey, listen ter me kid. It’s not real, yer safe, none of it’s real!”

Bailey seemed to react to Stranger’s voice and stopped screaming, her voice choked down to pained, petrified whimpers. Instead of fighting him, she had a death grip on his shirt now. And pressed her face into his fur. Shaking. Always shaking.

“Hold on kid, we’re nearly there.” Stranger muttered and broke into a run…


“She is stable, for the moment.” Stranger looked up, the Vykker Doc had entered the office.

“She’ll be alright then?”

“Yes, I have neutralised the poison, she is unharmed but it vill take h’a few hours for her too recover.” Stranger let out a breath. Bailey was going to be alright.

The Doc sat down on the chair behind his desk and looked at Stranger intently through his spectacles.

“She is h’a fascinating creature, your small friend. Her biorhythms, her biochemistry, everything h’about her – is completely unique. Any other creature of Oddworld would have been dead from the poison already.”

“She ain’t from Oddworld.” As soon as he said it Stranger mentally cursed, he really shouldn’t have said that. Doc leaned forward,

“Really? Then vhere is she from pray tell?” Stranger shrugged,

“I ain’t asked her.” The Vykker deflated,

“Pity, h’a great pity.” Stranger decided it was due time he changed the subject, he wasn’t comfortable with talking about Bailey to this person. He felt like he was betraying Bailey somehow.

“Yer said yer wanted ter speak ta me about somat?”

“H’Ah yes,” the Vykker seemed somewhat disappointed of the subject change. “I have just this minute finished those designs you vanted. I’ve done h’a lot of research and I think I may just have a solution for you.” Stranger leaned forward, interested,

“Oh really?” The Doc nodded,

“But it von’t be cheap I can tell you.” The Doc could barely contain his glee…he knew what would happen if Stranger didn’t agree to his terms… “That could be h’a problem now couldn't it?…For yooouuuu.”

“How much would yer be chargin’?”

“H’about ¥10,000.” Stranger considered this, he didn’t have that kind of cash right now, but if he went after some bigger paying bounties…and he needed what the Doc was offering…

“Fine, I’ll be back fer the op as soon as I get yer cash.”

“Excellent, you vill be pleased vith the results, oh, and for future reference-” The Vykker pushed a small pile of papers towards Stranger. Stranger looked over them for a moment before nodding and slipping the papers into his shirt.

“I’m off ter check out the bounties in this place.” He finally said, standing up. “Look after Bailey.” He added as he headed for the door, there was clearly an ‘or else’ tagged to that statement and not even if the Doc was desperate to see what Bailey was literally made of, would he dare to touch her.

“Yes yes, she vill be cared for.” The Vykker assured quickly. Stranger tugged on the brim of his hat in thanks and left. The Doc slumped in his chair.

A few minutes later he got up again, a malicious grin on his face.

There was no reason he couldn’t…examine Bailey while she was asleep, just as long as he left no marks and was finished by the time Stranger returned…

The Vykker hobbled excitedly towards the back room, where Bailey lay prone on the recovery/operation table.

“Now…vhere to begin?” The Vykker thought…

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Sorry it was a bit shorter then the others, but the suspense, you know…
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Shaken And At The End Of The Tether
Part 2
Stranger headed back to the Doc’s medical surgery. There had been a few bounties worth checking out and the Moolah would tide him over until he got to Birdington, no, enough to tide both himself and Bailey over.

Stranger had considered making Bailey stay with the Clakkerz but his instinct told him to take the human kid with him. The Vykker’s reaction to his young charge had confirmed his decision, there was no way he was going to leave Bailey to her own devices when there were creatures like the Doc who’d rip her organs out the first chance they got…

Continually having to think of someone other then himself was an alien feeling to Stranger, but not entirely unpleasant.

He entered the Doc’s office and was greeted with;

Silence.

Stranger’s fur bristled. Something was horribly wrong…

Suddenly his sensitive hearing picked up a choking gasp coming from the back of the surgery.

“Bailey…” fearing the worst Stranger bolted for the door and threw it open, almost ripping it from it’s hinges, and was met by the mirror image of what he had been expecting.

Bailey was sitting up on the table, teeth bared, eyes blazing and one hand locked around the Doc’s throat, squeezing, crushing the Vykker’s windpipe, all the muscles in her arm taut and straining. A deep, rumbling sound was rolling around Bailey’s chest like a wild animal and she was breathing hard.

“Thought you could pull that one on me?” she growled, squeezing harder. The Vykker was on his knees, his skin turning an unhealthy purple as he tried to choke out an answer. “I know your kind you little cretin. I know the little games you play and I will not be your plaything anymore. Ever. Do You Hear Me?” The Vykker nodded feebly and Bailey let him go, he slumped on the floor sucking in great gasping breaths as he scrambled backwards, all the time, his eyes on Bailey.

And Bailey watched him, the way a terrier watches a rat, narrowed eyes following him constantly, ready to pouch and tear him limb from limb if he did anything that could been seen as hostile.

Neither of them had seen Stranger and Stranger watched the performance play out in front of him, completely stunned, which was rapidly becoming fury. He noticed that Bailey didn’t have her jersey on anymore and that she wore a dark shirt and green sleeveless top with straps.

The terrified, retreating Vykker noticed the bounty hunter when he bumped into him in his desperate attempt to escape from Bailey’s anger.

He wasn’t even as afraid of Stranger as he was of Bailey as he began babbling in relief as he saw the hunter.

“I vas just checking her over and she attacked me! Started shouting about how she vould not let them do it h’again. I tried to snap her out of it but she just started choking me!” Stranger wrapped his own hand around the Vykker’s throat and hoisted him to eye level.

“What did yer do?” he snarled,

“Nothing! Nothing!” wailed the Vykker, he was telling the truth, he hadn’t actually done anything to Bailey, that didn’t mean he hadn’t planned too.

Stranger watched The Doc’s eyes but sensed no lie and dropped him. The Vykker sprawled onto the floor for the second time in so many minutes, looking fearfully at Stranger. Stranger moved his gaze from the cringing Vykker to the human girl pulling on her jersey.

“Bailey,” his voice was still a low growl, Bailey looked at him, “We’re leaving. C’mon kid.” Bailey jumped down from the table, grabbed her belongings from the corner where the Vykker had put them (and thankfully not stolen) and stormed past both Vykker and Stranger and out of the medical practice.

Stranger glared at the Vykker and then followed his young human charge. He caught up with her, Bailey walked, her furious gaze glaring straight ahead, heading for the wilderness. Stranger didn’t try to stop her, the human was angry, but he could almost smell the fear and confusion she feeling as well so he just fell into step beside her and waited before speaking.

“Bailey, where yer goin’?” he asked softly.

“Away from here.” Bailey answered unsteadily.

“But, where are yer gonna go?”

“I dunno, just away…” they had reached the outskirts now, the wild jungle of Oddworld lay before them, it was here Bailey stopped. She just stood and gazed at the tangle of life, not really seeing it, just staring through it and seeing something that wasn’t there. Stranger suppressed a shiver. Something in the human’s eyes chilled him to the bone.

“Bailey,” Stranger said in a persuasive tone, “Think rationally about this. You are not helping yerself, yer can’t go out there by yerself. Calm down-” Bailey face froze and she swung around to face Stranger, she was completely livid.

“CALM DOWN!? YOU WANT ME TO CALM DOWN!? After what that, that, that thing almost did to me YOU WANT ME TO CALM DOWN!?” she roared,

“Bailey, he didn’t touch yer!” Bailey clapped the heels of her hands to her temples and paced back and forth making small noises of frustration and anger and distress.

“He didn’t, didn’t,” she glared at Stranger, “But he wanted too,”

“Yer have no proof-”

“I know how his kind think!” Bailey snapped beating the heel of one hand against her forehead, “I know what makes them tick and what they does for pleasure. I know,” she gulped, “Torture, pain…tormenting helpless creatures…” Stranger suddenly grabbed Bailey’s shoulder and shook her gently,

“Bailey, how could yer know somat like that? Yer couldn’t.” Bailey’s face changed before his eyes, as she snarled,

“You want a bet?” she said in a low, deadly voice, she backed out of his grip and rolled up her sleeve, on the upper part of her arm was a brand and a lot of small puncture marks. The brand was a Glukkon icon. The puncture marks…someone had stuck Bailey were multiple needles, injecting not even Odd-knew-what into her system. “I don’t know what they do?” she asked, her tone dead and lifeless, “I know. Because I was a test subject…” she swallowed and rolled down her sleeve.

“Bailey,” Stranger’s tone was pleading now, “Bailey, yer’ve had terrible things done to yer. I understand tha’. Let me help you.”

“No. I don’t need help, I don’t want help. I don’t need you.” Her tone sounded both furious and on the verge of tears. She wasn’t looking at him, so she didn’t see the bounty hunter recoil like she’d just slapped him.

Wait a minute…

“When did I start carin’ if she needed me or not? When did I start needin’ her?”

“Why did I even follow you around?” she sounded like she was talking to herself more then to him, she glanced up at Stranger. “I’m leaving.” She said bluntly.

“I’ll follow yer, yer know I will.”

“No…you won’t…not this time…I need to be alone and I will disappear. You taught me too much about your world. G’bye Stranger.” Stranger could feel desperation and anger rising in him, the anger won.

“Fine! Go then! Leave! What makes yer think I eva needed yer!?” Stranger yelled, but even as he did, another voice in his mind called him a liar. Bailey didn’t look at him as she did just that and plunged into the Oddworld jungle.

Stranger just stood where she’d left him, unable to move, unable to turn away from the spot she’d disappeared.

Bailey had gone. True he hadn’t liked her to begin with and just wanted her to Get Lost, but now…now he had the feeling he’d just lost something important to him.

And he couldn’t help feeling it wasn’t the first time…
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Oooo....I hate them Vykkers. Nasty lil' creatures, if yeh know what I mean.
Aww, Stranger? Heartbroken? Because of Bailey leaving? I thought he hated her.
Huh. Anyways, another good chapter. My next part is definately gonna take a while. If my second part did, that the third should be longer. Keep it comin' still, Lobo!
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Well Not Exactly

I wouldn't say heartbroken exactly, just a bit depressed and hurt, and no, he didn't particularly like her to begin with but he sorta got attached, I mean Bailey's alright isn't she? And they were getting closer in the last couple of chapters.

And I think it was how she left more then she actually left which hurt a bit and you know what they say; you don't know what you have 'till it's gone.

Anyway, glad you like and I'm looking forward to your next bit of fic!
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Yeah...and like you see in mine, Umi and Stranger are already getting close without any trouble at all. Hell, she even played around with him, and he didn't mind! How funny...I'd think he'd shove her off...Ah well. Yeah, I think she and Bailey are alike, they're both tough, even though I have'nt got to the part where Umi shows her true colors...but it's getting close. Anyways, yeah.
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Fear, Hate And Hurting
Bailey stumbled through the Oddworld jungle, neither seeing nor caring where she was headed. She just had to get away from Stranger. She didn’t know why and she didn’t have the emotional energy to work it out.

She just needed space, she told herself. Yeah, that was it, space. Even as she tried to convince herself that was all she wanted she knew she was a liar.

But she wouldn’t turn back, she was too stubborn, had too much pride in her to turn back.

There was no turning back. She had made her decision and she was going to stick to it…

¤§¤

Stranger sat on the barstool, depressed. He should have gone after her. But he had been too stubborn, too aware of his pride. And now it was too late. Bailey was long gone.

“What canna get’cha?” asked the Clakker barkeeper.

“Anything.” Muttered Stranger, “Just as long as it knocks ma flat…” the Clakker raised an eyebrow but shrugged and did as he was told, if someone wanted to drink themselves into oblivion who was he to complain? It was all good business.

Stranger wasn’t normally a heavy drinker, so it was only a few drinks later that he was singing a drunken beer-song and giggling stupidly with the other patrons and making a pointless, disjointed rant while the others at the bar all nodded sagely and tried to look as if they were actually understood what he was talking about…

“So I told ‘er,” continued Stranger, swaying slightly, neon green eyes unfocused, hat askew, “I told ‘er, ‘Fine, go then, what makes yer fink I needed yer!” he swayed more violently and sobered marginally, his voice lowering, “So she went, she went an’ I neva said I woz sorry…I didn’t mean it, I woz jus’ angy,” he frowned drunkenly, “No, tha’s not it, I was arguy? Nah, I was ang, aggy, I woz real mad…but I need ‘er really, she’s all I got, the only friend I has…”

“Bah! Women,” spat one of the other Clakkerz, who was also, completely sozzled, “Oo needs ‘em?”

“I do…” muttered Stranger and took another swig of his drink. And fell ungracefully over the stool. Unconscious.

Some of the other patrons tutted and shook their heads,

“Can’t hold his liquor that wun.” They agreed before drinking themselves into similar stupors…

¤§¤

Stranger groaned. His head felt like it was going to explode and that sunshine wasn’t helping either. Nor was the sensation he’d just swallowed a mouthful of sand, which may have been accurate as he was sprawled out on the floor outside the bar (‘The Drunken Chicken’) with his face pressed into the dirt…

Finally Stranger decided it was time to get up and slowly, painfully inched his way to the wall of the tavern so he lever himself to his feet. He managed it eventually but swayed unsteadily as the world spun crazily.

He wondered why he had drunk so much the night before…and then he remembered.

Bailey.

She was gone.

Delayed misery made Stranger slide back down to the floor, back against the wall. He was such an idiot! He’d just let her go when she’d needed him most, even if she wasn’t ready to admit it.

“I should ‘ave gone after ‘er…I should-” he put his head in hands. What if she got hurt? What if she died? She was only a kid. He cursed to himself, he shouldn’t have blown up at her like that. He should have said that he didn’t want her to leave him, said he liked her company, said he needed that loudmouth, cocky kid…said he needed her.

Stranger let out a sigh and forced himself to his feet.

There was no point in this. What was done, was done, there was no changing it. He’d just go on to Birdington like he’d planned. He’d been alone for a long time before now, he could do it again.

But he had the feeling it was going to be a lot harder going back…

¤§¤

Bailey hadn’t slept but had walked through the night. It had been the worst night of her life. Unknown noises shrieked in the darkness and voices screamed in triumph of a successful hunt – or fear of a successful hunt.

Bailey shivered.

Even now in daylight she could still hear the echoes of those screeches in her mind, magnified hideously until they blocked out everything else.

She ached inside and out, she missed Stranger and felt stabs of misery as she remembered Abe and Slick, Scrab and Paramite, and all the others she’d left behind.

Finally Bailey couldn’t take it anymore, she sank to the floor and curled into a ball as she gave a scream of her own that silenced all the creatures near by as she let out all of her tears.

She was alone.

¤§¤

Stranger walked. Mechanically setting one foot in front of the other, but his mind wandered, mostly just thinking miserably of Bailey.

He therefore didn’t notice the shadow matching his pace, hidden in the tree-line. A shadow armed with a gun… A shadow that watched him constantly and melted into the darkness of the trees at every opportunity that Stranger could have seen it…

Stranger walked all day non-stop along the dusty trail between Buzzarton and Birdington. And finally, as the sun was setting he topped a rise that ended in a sheer drop and saw it before him, like a long dead animal skeleton picked clean and half-buried in sand, nestling between the two clawed ends of the crescent shaped cliff.

This was it. This was where he was going to find that big payoff. The bounty that would sort his problem once and for all.

And Bailey wasn’t here with him.

Stranger shook his head. He had to forget her, forget the little human that had made him laugh and argued with him when no-one else would. The only person that was not afraid of him. He’d only gotten used to the idea of having a companion and started to enjoy Bailey’s company and now she had gone.

Stranger pushed those thoughts from his mind. He had no time for them.

He looked around for a trail that led to the bottom of the basin and soon found it. An old track used by the Clakker hikers that lead around the wall of the basin, past a ranger outpost and down to the town itself.

Stranger remained where he was for a moment, savouring the sensation that would finally be able to fund the operation procedure and put his past behind him. And then he began to follow the path downward, the shadow darting from outcrops of rock behind him…

When he reached the ranger station (which he found deserted), it was already dark and Stranger, knowing the town gates would not be opened until daybreak, prepared to spend the night in the abandoned outpost.

Above him, on one of the shed rooves the shadow bunkered down as well, tomorrow, there would a confrontation…

¤§¤

Stranger was woken up by the prod of a gun barrel.

“Gittup. And put yer ‘ands where I can see ‘em.” Said a harsh voice, the voice of an Outlaw. Stranger cursed silently, why hadn’t he seen this coming!? He was getting slack, Bailey’s departure had evidently affected him more then he’d taken credit for. He obeyed the voice and rose, putting his hands in the air and reaching surreptitiously for his crossbow.

Only to find he didn’t have it.

Stranger cursed out loud this time, the Outlaw snickered.

“Yer sleep deep Stranger, it’s not ‘ealthy.” The Outlaw chuckled again. “I’m sure I’ll git a nice price for that purdy head of yours.”

“Yer ain’t takin’ ma in alive then?” Stranger asked innocently, “Yer get a bigger payoff I’ll warrant.”

“What? And give yer time ta escape? D’you think I’m completely stupid Stranger.”

“Well…”Stranger shrugged and made an indecisive sound.

“Nah, I’ll takes ya in dead, easier fer the both of us.” Stranger heard the click of the Outlaw’s gun being cocked, “WHAT THE-!” and another voice laughing;

“A-LOHA!” A shot fired, Stranger flinched but the bullet whizzed past him, missing him by several feet. There was a yell that at first confused Stranger until he realised that it wasn’t one voice but two, one was raised in fury and the other in shock and terror and then there was a wet thud…

Stranger turned and looked over the each of the platform he and the Outlaw had been on.

The Outlaw’s body lay in several pieces on a narrow shelf in the rocks below. Someone came up beside him and looked over as well. They didn’t say anything, but just looked.

Stranger turned and faced none other then Bailey, still brandishing her spear in one hand and holding his crossbow in the other.

“I believe this is yours.” She said and offered it to him. Stranger took it.

“Thankee kindly.” An uncomfortable, self-conscious silence hung between them, Bailey looked at the floor and shuffled her feet. “Well? Yer…comin’ wiv me or what?” Stranger asked slightly hoarse. Bailey nodded.

“Yeah,” she glanced at him, those bright green eyes were glowing, “Yeah I’m comin’.”

¤§¤

The awkward silence had yet to abate and lift. Every time either one of them had tried to start a conversation they had petered out and the silence had fallen again. Obviously they were still hurting from their earlier argument, and their friendship had been shaky as it was.

It was mid morning when the pair reached the main gates of Birdington. But no-one seemed to be up yet…

“Odd-damn lazy…” Stranger’s mutterings were too low for Bailey to hear but she had the shrewd suspicion that they weren’t flattering. “OI! Birdbrains! GET UP!” he yelled towards one of the guard towers at the side of the gates. There was a far-away squawk and thud as if someone had just fallen out of bed. And then an irate voice that forcefully reminded Bailey of some kind of kid’s cartoon animated chicken at home.

“Whadda ya want!?” squawked the voice and a head that completely matched the voice poked out of the tower’s window. Bailey blinked.

“Well damn, it’s a giant chicken!” she muttered. Stranger threw her an amused glance and then yelled to the ‘chicken’,

“Open tha gate yer lazy Clakker!”

“Well I neva!” squawked the ‘Clakker’ clearly offended, “Folks have no manners these days!” Bailey expected Stranger to yell some kind of threat but instead Stranger deflated;

“Yer’d better open that gate!...Please…” Bailey was so surprise by Stranger’s reaction that she said the first thing that came to mind, and for a second the uneasiness lifted as she commented;

“Oh yeh, that’s real scary Stranger…” She grinned broadly and Stranger grinned at her in return but then the awkwardness fell again and they both broke the glance.

“Tha’s betta! Just a moment please.” The Clakker disappeared and a few minutes later the great town gates creaked and opened.

“C’mon kid.” Stranger nodded his head toward the gate and led the way into Birdington.
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Still, a very good chapter, Lobo. Good thing too, 'cause I just finished my part on paper, but still got's to do the other part, so it'll be such a long while...but don;t worry. I'm a fast writter, and it'll probably be done within one or two days. Depending on how I feel. Anyways, keep writting! It's starting to get interesting!
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Sorry this took so long…

Unpleasant Revelation
“Yer hungry Bailey?” Stranger asked as they padded side by side down the main street of Birdington. Bailey shrugged,

“A bit-” her stomach grumbled in protest, “Okay, make that a lot. Why?”

“’Coz we’re gonna git somat to eat, that’s why.” Stranger grinned, trying to coax out a return smile but Bailey didn’t comply, she just nodded. Hiding his mild disappointment Stranger led the way to the nearest tavern, this one called The Stoned Crow, “I am so sick of these names…” he thought as he pushed open the doors and went in, Bailey trailing after him, looking around in interest.

The Clakkerz clustered around the inn looked up as Stranger entered but went back to drinks, meals and conversations – it was only Stranger. But they did double-takes as Bailey came in after him, first off because she was a completely alien creature but their beaks dropped open when the pair of them got to the bar (which was for some reason twice as tall as the ones from Earth even though the Clakkerz were smaller then Bailey) and Stranger picked up the creature around middle and sat it on the barstool.

The barkeeper smoothed over his expression before Stranger could see it and give him a taste of the well-known ‘Stranger Temper’.

“What’s ya pleasure?” Stranger considered getting a drink but an echo of his early hangover changed his mind and he decided to lay off the alcohol, besides, he didn’t want to have one to many with Bailey there, he glanced at Bailey, Bailey shrugged,

“I’ll try anything once.” She said. So Stranger ordered something.

Bailey couldn’t begin to guess what it was as she couldn’t even pronounce the name. As the bartender went to inform the kitchens Bailey leaned over to Stranger,

“What was that?” Stranger said it again, Bailey blinked at him. He repeated the word, very slowly. Bailey tried to copy him but ended up sounding like a kitten sneezing. Stranger chuckled, “Nevermind…” Bailey muttered. Stranger’s first impulse was to pat Bailey on the head and make a snarky comment but he held himself back, their relationship was cool at best.

When their food came Bailey poked at it curiously.

“Stranger,” she whispered, “Stranger,” Stranger was already eating and had to answer with his mouth full,

“Uhum?”

“You sure it’s dead? Looks like it’ll get up any second an’ start bouncin’ offa the walls…” Stranger choked as he tried to laugh and swallow what was in his mouth at the same time. Bailey slapped his back until he recovered. “Didn’t think it was that funny meself…” she muttered, but she obviously had found Stranger’s reaction intensely amusing as she was grinning as she gave the plate one last poke before digging in. Stranger eyed her for a moment,

“Well?”

“Ish very nicsh.” Bailey managed, cheeks bulging like a hamster’s. Stranger spluttered and many of the Clakkerz looked up in shock, no one, but no one had ever heard stern and strong Stranger laugh before (even so, many of the Clakkerz found the sound somewhat alarming) and here he was, chuckling with the small alien creature. Bailey swallowed. “What? What’s so funny?”

Stranger just shook his head and kept sniggering, luminous green eyes bright and shining. Bailey blinked innocently at him, completely non-plussed and Stranger laughed harder.

“They slipped somat inta yer food didn’t they.” Bailey said, completely innocent and with a straight face. Stranger snorted and leaned his forehead on the bar, shaking with laughter. “Gee, no need to get hysterical on me Stranger. People’d think you had a sense of humour.”

Stranger didn’t know what was wrong with him but he knew he had a stitch in his ribs from laughing too much and he couldn’t stop. And he also knew that he was so very glad he had his Bailey with him again. He needed her sharp wit and sense of humour, he knew that now. He knew that he was becoming soft and he didn’t care either, Bailey was good for him, she could make him laugh. It was what he needed. It was Bailey, Bailey made him lighter, calmer, a better person. And he liked it.

Bailey just watched the normally gruff and intimidating bounty hunter crack up right before her eyes. And found it sort of pleasant. She was glad she’d come back. She knew now that she needed Stranger, just as she needed Abe and Slick (she felt a pang when she thought she might never see them again), just as she had needed a parent…but she’d never had one of those…not in the sense of a parent anyway…

Bailey’s smile faded as she thought about her mother, the workaholic that had left her at home all alone since she was eight years old…

Stranger noticed Bailey’s abrupt change of mood. That was another thing, he’d become aware of, he always knew what Bailey was feeling and right now she was depressed. His laughter died.

“Bailey? Kid? You okay?” Bailey nodded but Stranger knew she was lying. “Liar…” he sighed, “C’mon, what’s up, tell yer ol’ Stranger what’s bugging yer.” Bailey shook her head,

“Not now…”

“Later then.” It wasn’t a request. Bailey nodded. “Okay then.” Stranger said cheerfully, “Now, cheer up kid. It could be worse.” Bailey looked at him, the beginnings of a grin on her face,

“Don’t ever say that, I can guarantee it’ll get worse if you do.”

“Oh really?” asked Stranger, “How d’yer know?”

“Personal experience.” Bailey was grinning again. Stranger inwardly sighed in relief, good, he didn’t want his young Bailey being depressed.

Bailey went back to eating and soon had cleaned the plate. Stranger grinned,

“Yer liked it?” Bailey nodded,

“Yup, it’s very good. Just don’t tell me what’s in it…” Stranger chuckled.

“’Ey Stranger, I got some bounties yer might be innerested in.” it was the barkeeper and he slid a pile of Wanted posters towards Stranger. Stranger nodded and began looking through them while he ate. Bailey soon got bored and looked around the tavern.

Nothing caught her interest until she saw a group of Clakkerz around a table, one of them was grinning and shuffling a pack of cards, he had a hat on that was practically a mini version of Stranger’s only with a loose cord so it could hang at the back when not worn.

“Wha’? No takers?” Bailey heard him say, she grinned, slid off the stool and went over. She just stood and watched them for a moment until the one with the cards saw her. “Hey kid, you wanna play?”

“What’cha playin’?”

“Poker.” Bailey grinned,

“Yeh, ‘kay, but I don’t have any Moolah on me.” The Clakker with the cards and hat waved his wing,

“No problem kid, yer don’t just havta bet Moolah.” Bailey nodded and drug out a chair, joining the game.

“Whadda the values of the cards?” Bailey wanted to know. Indulgently the Clakker with the hat laid down the deck and showed her the suits, they were basically like the 52 playing cards that Bailey was used to, apart from they were based on Oddworld animals rather then King, Queen, Jack and the suits.

There were four suits; Fuzzle, Bolamite, Sleg (which looked to Bailey like a deformed Slog) and Chippunk. With little pictures of the aforementioned animals for the numbers, which still went from the Ace to 10. The cards that could have passed for Joker surprised Bailey at abit as they were clearly showing Shrykull and she didn’t remember thinking of a Joker when she saw Abe turn into him, more like run screaming in terror…

For the King, Queen and Jack, Bailey was surprised to find she knew what two of them were as well, a Scrab and Paramite, the Clakkerz didn’t know what they were however. Somewhere along the line, when the critters died out on this side of Oddworld they had been forgotten…

“And that red and yellow critter, yes that one, that’s the highest of the picture cards, and the small animals they’re eating tells yer the suit it belongs to.”

“Charmin’…” Bailey thought,

“And this one here, that looks like it has one o’ yer hands stuck to the front, yep that one, that’s the lowest one, and this one, this one’s in between.” Bailey gazed at the card, not entirely sure was it was. It looked like some kind of hybrid of raptor, Scrab and tiger prawn…she shrugged it off and nodded.

“Got it.” The Clakkerz smiled to each other and the first one shuffled the cards again. Bailey kept a sly grin from her face. They thought they were going to rob her blind.

Yeah, whatever.

A few minutes later Bailey fanned her cards and looked at them, adopting the poker face she’d been taught by her gang friends, Red especially.

“Yer wanna swap yer cards kid?” asked the dealer,

“Yeah, I’ll take two.” Bailey slid two of her cards face down across the table and got two in return.

“I’ll raise the stakes then,” began another Clakker to Bailey’s right and put a pile of Moolah coins on the table. Another Clakker bet a clean deck of cards and a very nice looking dagger. The dealer put in his hat and some more Moolah. When Bailey’s turn came she unclipped the Outlaw shotgun from her belt and put it on the pile.

“Outlaw shotgun,” she said, “Clean and in good working order, fully loaded and ready to rock.” The dealer nodded and Bailey could almost hear him saying ‘Nice, very nice. Make a decent addition to my collection…’.

“In yer dreams buddy boy…” Bailey thought to herself. The dealer was definitely the best player, and her biggest enemy in this game.

The betting continued for a few minutes until one by one the other Clakkerz folded,

“Yer ready ta give up kid?” asked the dealer smirking, Bailey allowed herself a small smile.

“Are you?” she asked in a low voice. Smugly the Clakker laid down his five cards,

“Three cards.” Bailey sucked on her teeth and shook her head,

“Wow, you’re good.” The Clakkerz grin widened and he reached out for the stakes, Bailey caught his wing, “Unfortunately, not the best,” Bailey turned her cards so he could see them and looked apologetic, “Flush in Slegs, sorry, you’re beat mate.” She smiled quietly. Just then the poker players heard the clomp of heavy boots and Bailey turned to see Stranger standing behind her, fists on his hips.

“What are yer doin’?” he asked, knowing perfectly well what she was up too.

“Collecting me winnings, lookie.” Bailey grinned, Stranger nodded,

“Well c’mon, we’re leavin’.”

“Right, sorry guys.” She added as the Clakkerz protested. She pulled out the lining bag of her arrow quiver and shut the quiver flap to keep her shafts dry and swept the winnings into the lining bag, jamming the hat on her head and slinging the pair of edible lizards that were tied together by their tails over her shoulder. “It was nice playing with yer guys.” She grinned and scampered after Stranger as he left The Stoned Crow. “Where we goin’ Stranger?” she asked when she’d caught up with him.

“Bounty Store, see if they got anything worth goin’ after.” Stranger explained,

“Oh. A-see.” Bailey dug around in her winnings, taking out what wasn’t Moolah and treating them appropriately, Stranger watch her out of the corner of his eye.

“So, whadda ya win?” he asked eventually.

“Loads of stuff.” Gushed Bailey, she clipped the Outlaw shotgun back onto her belt and tied the dagger and it’s holster on her upper arm, under her jumper. Stranger laughed gently.

“I bet them Clakkerz had no idea what had hit ‘em.” Bailey grinned brightly as she put the pack of playing cars in her pouch and wound the dark scarf one of the Clakkerz had bet around her neck.

“And I got this spunky hat.” Bailey grinned, she tipped the hat so it covered her eyes, “Yer talkin’ to me?” she said, imitating the well-known Robert DeNiro line and snickered to herself. Stranger raised an eyebrow but didn’t comment as they’d reached the Bounty Store just then.

A bell over the door tinkled as they entered. Stranger went straight to the counter but Bailey peeled off and began looking at the guns and ammo that was on offer.

“Yer got anythin’ fer me?” Stranger asked. Bailey noticed that his tone changed when he was talking to her to when he was talking to Clakkerz and Outlaws. Right now his voice was a deep, intimidating growl while just a minute ago it was been a soft purr more then anything else.

“Yep!” squawk the Clakker, “Gotta load fer ya. And there’s a mighty big one here, the guys who want it, big hotshots and they’re mighty innerested in paying big fer it.”

“Oh, what kinda ‘hotshots’?”

“Corporate kinda hotshots, very big on the other side of Oddworld, organisation called the Magog Cartel-” there was a yelp and the Clakker and Stranger turned, Bailey had just knocked a box of bullets off the shelf but managed to catch it.

“Sorry.” She grinned sheepishly, replacing the box back on the shelf. Stranger turned back to the Clakker and examined the blurry photograph on the Wanted poster, it was a very familiar person, arms cross and scowling in an expression he knew extremely well, and he nearly choked…

Bailey.

That was Bailey! On a Wanted poster! Why did Bailey have a bounty on her head!?

“Anyone else gone afta this one?” Stranger finally managed to get out.

“No, by what I ‘ear she’s a devil of some kind, just disappears into thin air. She ‘elped start a revolution but then ‘er and ‘er companions just faded into the jungles.” The Clakker said dramatically. “’Asn’t bin seen inna while but they want ‘er bad, closed down two of their biggest plants apparently with ‘er and ‘er pals.”

“I’ll takes it, the Moolah’s good even if it is a wild Sleg chase.” Stranger muttered and slipped the pile of posters into his poncho. Just then Bailey clattered up to the counter and dumped an assortment of weaponry and ammo onto it. Fortunately she had her hat and the scarf on her head and around her face, plus Clakkerz weren’t known for their IQ’s so the store owner didn’t notice that she was in fact the one on the poster.

“Yarg! What yer expecting kid? A war?” squawked the Clakker,

“Better safe then screwed, don’t you think?” Bailey replied, grinning. Amongst the pile was a money belt, a hatchet, something like a sniper rifle and two miniature versions of Desert Eagle handguns and ammunition for them plus the Outlaw shotgun and Slig semi-automatic.

“Mebbe you should git one o’ these as well.” Said the Clakker bringing out a metal ring that could have fit around Bailey’s neck.

“What is it?” Bailey asked curiously.

“Called a ‘Compressor’, produced on the other side of Oddworld, very popular for Sligs, they works for the Magog Cartel, I found that out when one of ‘em came to gimme this bounty.” The Clakker looked extremely pleased with his ‘extensive’ knowledge. “Yer clip yer guns and ammo onto it and it shrinks ‘em, makes ‘em take up less space and don’t weigh as much.” Bailey nodded,

“’Kay, I’ll take that as well then.”

The Clakker added up what Bailey owed him and Bailey only managed to use part of her poker winnings to pay him before Stranger hustled her out of the store.

“Stranger? What’s up?”

“We gotta get outta here…” Stranger muttered, looking around warily before heading out of Birdington…

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MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I bet none of yer saw that coming did yer!?
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Just a side note for the chapter, there was about a three day gap between chapter 3 and 4 but nothing really happened apart from Bailey and Stranger bickering so I didn’t feel the need to write them. This is just so you know that they’ve been a duo for a while longer then you’ve read.

…Okay, did that make any sense at all?

Incognito
“Stranger, what is going on!?” Bailey hissed as Stranger led the way out of the Clakker town.

“Not now, wait.” Bailey was so surprised by Stranger’s tone and short answer that she shut-up immediately. Something was very, very wrong.

They reached the outskirts of the town without any incidents and Bailey followed mutely as Stranger left the settlement altogether and led her back to the trail where they had come down, Stranger remembered that they had passed an old mine shaft on the way down and made his way to that.

Once inside and out of sight of the Clakker town he turned on Bailey and pulled out her bounty poster brandishing it.

“What tha’ hell is this about!?” he snapped. Bailey took the poster and gazed at it.

“Oh…” she murmured.

“Oh!? Oh!? Whadda ya mean ‘oh!?’ Yer on a flamin’ Wanted poster! Someone’s paying good money ter have yer killed!” Bailey looked up at him, looking embarrassed.

“Er…well…remember when I said I’d had a couple of adventures with the Mudokon Abe? Well…we kinda…freed the slave workers in Rupture Farms and SoulStorm Brewery and sorta…shut down the plants…permanently…”

Stranger sat down on a boulder inside the cave, massaging his temples. He had not signed up for this when he’d taken Bailey under his protection. She was a Magog Cartel revolutionary/terrorist for crying out loud! No wonder they wanted her disposed of…

“Don’t freak out Stranger, it could be worse…” Bailey offered weakly. Stranger sighed. “You…you’re not going to turn me in are you?” asked Bailey after a moment.

Stranger looked up, Bailey was looking at him with large, uncertain eyes and twisted the hem of her jersey around her fingers. She looked young and pitiful.

“No.” Stranger said after a moment, “I won’t turn you in. Yer think I would?”

“No…not really…but…” she faded off.

“But?” Stranger prompted, fixing Bailey with his iridescent bordering on neon green eyes.

“Don’t you kinda need the cash?”

“I ain’t about to turn in tha’ only friend I have fer Moolah, whose only got a bounty on ‘em fer freein’ slaves…even if you are an annoying snit.”

“I thought you hated me…” Stranger leant back on the mineshaft wall, Bailey sat down, cross-legged across from him.

“I neva hated yer.” Stranger said, “Strongly disliked mebbe but that was only fer the first coupla days… an’ then I tolerated yer, an’ then I enjoyed yer company and yer cracks became amusin’ instead o’ irritatin’ but I dunno when I started to actually like yer. But I did, tha’s why it hit hard when yer left an’ it was then tha’ I pretty much realised I really did like yer.” Bailey beamed.

“Aww, well I like you too.” Stranger blinked his luminous eyes at the young human. And then he smiled and went several shades darker under his fur. “Are you blushing Stranger?” Stranger coughed,

“Er…no…”

“You downright liar!” spluttered Bailey, “You so are too blushing!”

“No I’m not…” Bailey began laughing,

“The great bounty hunter Stranger, blushing just because some human kid said she liked him. D’you have any idea how amusin’ that is?” Stranger had a completely straight-faced expression which just made Bailey laugh harder. She calmed down after a minute and became marginally more serious. “You tellin’ me no one’s ever said they liked you before?” Stranger’s blank stare answered the question. For a second Bailey just watched him. “What, no one? Not ever?” she asked softly,

“No one. Not ever.” There was an awkward silence, Bailey broke it after a moment,

“So what are we going to do about…yer know…” she nodded her head at the Wanted poster, Stranger rested his chin on one fist and eyed Bailey thoughtfully.

“Yer need ter go incognito, lucky fer us Clakkerz and Outlaws are pretty stupid so we could git away wiv it.”

“What kinda disguise?” Bailey asked curiously,

“First yer’ll need to cover yer hair, tha’s pretty unique and most of yer face and yer hands too.” Bailey nodded,

“Okay, what else?” Stranger stood up.

“Stay here, I’ll go an’ get something fer yer to wear, hide those clothes yer got.” Bailey furrowed her forehead, confused but nodded. Stranger went.

“Poor old Stranger…hasn’t he ever had a friend?” Bailey thought sadly. Her musing was interrupted when she looked at the bounty poster. She sighed.

Even on the other side of Oddworld the Magog Cartel were still after her.

While she waited for Stranger, Bailey went through her newly acquired equipment and checked it all and put it in meticulous order, cleaning and loading all her guns and clipping them along with their ammunition onto the Compressor (expect for the Slig rifle which she put back in it’s back holster and the handguns which clipped behind her back under the arrow quiver), putting her Moolah stash into the money belt and replacing the inner canvas of the arrow quiver. She clipped the ring of metal onto one of her pant belt loops. It looked a large key ring with a load of toys on it…

She checked her wooden weaponry next, her bow was unstrung and the bowstring in her belt pouch, her arrows her clean and dry and safe in their quiver, the spear wasn’t showing any signs of wear yet. The slingshot was in good working order and the whip with the three rocks on the end was coiled up on her belt. Both daggers, the one on her belt and the other up her sleeve were sharp and firmly strapped in their scabbards and in easy reach. The hatchet she hung on her belt. All in all Bailey was ready for the war the Clakker had joked about.

Stranger returned after little under an hour. He was carrying a bundle…

“What’s all that?” asked Bailey when she saw it.

“Yer disguise, c’mon, up yer get, put ‘em on.” Bailey complied, taking the hat off her head beforehand. The biggest part of the bundle was a brown poncho that went down to Bailey’s knees when she put it on. She gave it a tug at the back though so that the front part came a little higher. Then there were gloves that covered her hands. “Now yer can cover yer face an’ hair with yer hat and scarf.”

“Wait, wait, I gotta idea.” Bailey suddenly said, wiggling out of the poncho and gloves, she put then aside and untied the bandana. She flicked out the dagger on her belt and handed it hilt first to Stranger, “You’ll have to cut me hair, it’s too long.” Stranger looked uncertain, “Oh c’mon, just do it.” Bailey insisted jiggling the dagger. Stranger took it dubiously and Bailey turned round and sat on the floor. “Off yer go.”

Stranger understood now why Bailey’s hair looked so uneven and badly cut, she’d had to do it herself with her blade. Sucking his teeth in concentration Stranger began to cut the human’s hair from just below her shoulders to just above.

“Done.” He said after a few minutes and brushed off the cut hairs.

“Wasn’t so hard was it.” Bailey said and mussed her hair, itching her head. She tied her hair in a small ponytail and tied the green bandana back around her head. “Do I have to wear this all the time then?” she asked as she wiggled back into the poncho and hat. “I’m gonna overheat otherwise.” She added, putting on the gloves and covering her mouth and nose with the dark scarf. Only her eyes were visible now.

“Not all the time.” Stranger answered. He studied Bailey critically. Finally he grinned, “There, that’s it, yer own mama wouldn’t recognise yer.” Bailey stiffened and dragged off the scarf and hat, looking at the floor to one side, as she took off the disguise and all her equipment and putting them in a corner.

“No.” she said finally, her tone dead-panned, “I bet she wouldn’t…” Stranger sat on the same boulder as before.

“Right.” He said firmly, “Sit. Now.” And patted the rock next to him. Bailey did as she was told. “Now, yer are gonna tell me what yer’ve bin bottlin’ up since I met yer.” Bailey muttered something almost inaudible. “No. Right now.” Stranger cut her off.

“I haven’t been bottlin’ anything!”

“Yer a liar, even a Clakker couldn’t ignore all tha’ dark hints and comments yer’ve given out, so c’mon, out with it.”

“Don’t wanna.” Bailey muttered stubbornly.

“I want ter help yer, an’ talkin’ about yer problems always helps.” He inwardly cringed, he was such a hypocrite… Bailey didn’t answer for a moment or two, just stared at the floor a few feet in front of her. Then, finally;

“Fine. You want to hear what’s been botherin’ me? Alright then.” Bailey took a deep breath, “I used to live with me Ma, me Da died when I was about three and it hit Ma pretty bad. She threw everything she had into her work and she was quickly promoted. Trouble was that her new job needed her to leave the country, and she couldn’t take me so she left me at home while she went all over the world and I had to learn to look after meself. I was eight years old… It sucked, and I mean really sucked. Sure we had a big house with a huge garden and a pool but I’d have happily lived in a shack if it meant I could have Ma around…” Bailey faded off and leaned back on the cavern wall, drawing her knees up. She looked up at the ceiling as she continued. “Then, I found a flock of these mutated pigeons in the garden.” Bailey smiled grimly, “Fed those ‘pigeons’ all the time.” She murmured. “Until I found out that they weren’t actually pigeons, they were the portal birds that Mudokons used. They kinda chant and the birds open a portal from one place to another. Anyway, for some reason the flock in my garden had been left on Earth and hadn’t gone back. So I got the shock of my life when one day they all flew in a circle while I was feedin’ ‘em and this swirling vortex thing appeared and I got sucked into it. And here I am on Oddworld.”

“But that ain’t all is it.” Stranger said as Bailey went silent. Bailey didn’t answer. “Bailey, keep going.” Bailey let out a breath and continued to stare at that ceiling until she spoke again, but it was disjointed, rambling.

“Don’t, don’t want to…it, it hurts.” She blinked and her eyes reflected the late afternoon sunshine pouring into the mineshaft, more then before. “Why won’t it stop hurting? Make it stop, someone, make it stop…” Bailey shivered, took a shaky breath and closed her eyes, leaning her head back against the wall.

Stranger didn’t say anything, he didn’t have too. Something still hurt inside Bailey and it needed to heal if she was going to get over it. After a moment Stranger picked up the shaking human and settled Bailey on his lap, letting her lean her head on his chest, resting his chin on her hair, curling the uneven strands around one finger and running the claws on his other hand through the rest of Bailey’s hair. Just silently telling her that she was not alone, that someone cared, that someone was listening.

“What did yer mean when you said you’d never be the Vykker’s plaything again?” Stranger felt Bailey shiver more violently and a hand gripped his shirt. At first he thought Bailey wasn’t going to answer but after a moment she spoke in a small voice,

“When I first arrived…I didn’t know where I was, just lost in this jungle with noises, in the night…screams, howls…and then I ran into a company of Sligs…they thought I was docile enough to become one of the slave workers in one of the Magog Cartel plants, one of the smaller meat-processing factories…they made us work – me and the Mudokon worker-slaves – to make snacks for Glukkon bureaucrats… I was only there for a while before I was taken away from the production floor and to one of the labs, to be…examined… The Vykkers there were working on drugs among other things, using unstable substances.” Bailey paused and swallowed and her grip tightened on Stranger’s shirt. “After a few tests they realised that for some reason I had a higher tolerance to these substances…my body must just work differently to Oddworld inhabitants…so they used me to test out their theories. But not just the drugs…other things as well… They thought that if what they were using didn’t work on me, well then it wasn’t worth having…” Bailey went quiet.

“What happened next, how did yer escape?” Stranger asked in a low, soft tone, Bailey felt the deep rumble of his voice vibrating on her cheek. The steady thud, thud, thud of Stranger’s heartbeat calmed and soothed Bailey’s strung nerves and she began to feel exhausted, emotionally drained. Her eyes closed and she stifled a yawn to answer;

“An albino Slig…he wasn’t like the others…he was sick of the Magog Cartel – and anyone else – sucking Oddworld dry. He knew that it would do no one any good to enslave the natives and let the world die…and he was sick of the mistreatment, so one night, while he was on patrol, he got me out and we escaped, we were going to find other natives, try to get them to fight back, to save their culture. But we got caught…and Slick was taken while I got away…”

“What happen to yer both?”

“I got captured again, and taken to Rupture Farms, the biggest meat-processing plant on that side of Oddworld. I met up with Abe and we escaped, saving as many as we could and finally we managed to destroy the Farms. Afterward Abe was visited by three ghosts and we went off to free more Mudokons from SoulStorm Brewery, I found Slick and he came with us and we destroyed the Brewery too.” Bailey felt herself drifting closer towards sleep, Stranger sensed it too and asked one last question,

“How did yer come to this part of Oddworld?”

“I was with a hunting party… one of the young Mudokons of the tribe was missing…we found him but we were attacked by bounty hunters who were after me…now I know why…” She muttered, “The Mudokons opened a portal for me to go through and they escaped. They must have thought I would come out near the village, but I didn’t…came here instead…” Bailey was starting to slur her words in her lethargy,

“Did yer…eva wish yer’d never come here…to Oddworld?” Stranger asked uncertainly. Only Bailey’s easy breathing answered him.

Stranger let out a breath and moved the sleeping human more comfortably in his arms. Leaning back on the mineshaft wall Stranger watched as it became darker. They had been in this cavern all day. Tomorrow they would set out again but for now he decided to let Bailey sleep.

The human in his arms shifted and muttered something a little later but she didn’t wake and her grip on Stranger’s shirt didn’t loosen. Stranger made a deep, reassuring sound in his chest, like a panther purring, and Bailey calmed again.

Stranger yawned. Maybe he should take a sleep as well. Stranger pulled his hat over his eyes and soon was snoring like a rusty chainsaw.
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That's so sweet....Lobo, yer such a good writer and a good person to mak e me choke up...And Bailey's past kinda matches with Umi's but slightly different. Woud you...like me to tell? I'd be happy to if yeh want me to...
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And Bailey's past kinda matches with Umi's but slightly different. Woud you...like me to tell? I'd be happy to if yeh want me to...
If ya want to mate, go right ahead, it might be better if yer put it in one of ya chapters, it's a good gap filler (plus it's a decent excuse for a cuddle fest and showing of Stranger's cuddly side - he has got one of them right?).

And I'm waiting for yer next chapter!
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Dunno if I can fit it in one of my chapters. It may be a long time before I even put her past in, like, near the end of my story. Which is purdy far away... But ok then...I'll figure a way out.
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And the fluff and sickening sappiness takes centre stage! Hurray for fluff! All hail and bow to the almighty fluff!

Worst Jokes EVER!
Bailey yawned and had to drag herself out of sleep. She rubbed her cheek on the soft, warm thing she was leaning on. It took her a second to process that the thing was rhythmically rising and falling and had a heartbeat thumping next to her ear, which she found strangely comforting.

Strangely… Stranger…must be Stranger she was leaning on. Bailey curbed the habit of stretching her arms, she didn’t think Stranger would appreciate getting clouted under the chin.

Instead she made herself comfortable and waited for Stranger to wake up by himself, and she couldn’t say that she wasn’t enjoying the cuddle she was getting. She hadn’t been cuddled since she’d been about three years old…

Bailey rested her forehead against Stranger’s poncho, lightly tracing the patterns on the stiff leather surface with the tip of one finger. Stranger stirred in his sleep but didn’t come round, only tightened his hold on Bailey, muttered something unintelligible and continued snoring. Bailey stifled laughter and turned her attention to the short, pale brown fur covering Stranger’s arms, running her fingers through it and pressing it to her cheek. Stranger’s snoring stopped and was replaced by a deep, vibrating purr even though he was still sound asleep.

Bailey smiled. She knew she was safe here. She knew Stranger would protect her and she let out a breath of relief. She curled up to the bounty hunter and drifted into a light doze.

¤§¤

Stranger stirred into the world of the waking just as the sun was rising. The bounty hunter yawned widely, treating anyone watching (not that there was anyone watching) to a good long look at a mouthful of sharp teeth, two particular canines of which looked suspiciously like they’d been filed down…

Stranger looked down at the small human he was still holding and smiled to himself, as cute as she looked while she was sleeping it was time for them to move on.

“Bailey.” Bailey stirred but instead of waking up she snuggled closer to Stranger’s heartbeat and the hand draped on his forearm twitched in the fur,

“Nuh uh.” Came the mumbled answered, “Just five more minutes, I’m comfy.” Bailey moaned.

“We havta git going Bailey, c’mon kid.” Bailey frowned,

“When I wuz awake you wuz sleepin’.” She grumbled. Stranger chuckled, Bailey could feel it shaking in his ribs. “Stop laughin’.” She complained half-heartedly.

“Yer don’t havta fake sleepin’ just ta get a cuddle, yer only havta ask.” Stranger was hoping that this comment would get Bailey up and arguing, so he got a shock when Bailey let out a satisfied sigh and cuddled closer.

“Then I want one now, I’ll just go back to sleep.”

“Oh no yer don’t, up, now.” Stranger stood, Bailey in his arms. She protested groggily before opening one eye and glaring at him.

“Meanie.” She muttered. Stranger grinned and set her on her feet. Bailey stretched and mussed her hair sleepily. “Where’s that hat gone now.” She muttered to herself as she strapped on all of her arsenal and wiggled into the poncho, shoving the thick gloves and scarf into her belt pouch and pulling on the fingerless gloves.

“Yer mean this?” came the deceptively innocent voice of Stranger. Bailey turned and narrowed her eyes at Stranger, twirling her hat in his claws and smirking.

“Aww, gimme me hat Stranger.” Bailey sighed. Stranger came closer, just to remind Bailey that she only just came up to his elbow.

“What yer gonna do if I don’t?” he asked mischievously. Bailey tapped her chin, mockingly thoughtful.

“Hmmm, now let me think.” She suddenly brightened, “I know, how about this?” Bailey threw her arms around Stranger’s middle and gave him a hug. Stranger was so surprised he dropped Bailey’s hat and she caught it, put the cord around her neck and hung the hat on her back. She grinned. “Bailey, one. Stranger, zero.” She remarked. Stranger folded his arms, narrowed his eyes and shook his head slightly.

“Lil’ varmint…” he muttered, then, “C’mon squirt. Let’s go.” He said finally, Bailey nodded and followed Stranger out of the cavern, pulling her hat onto her head to shade her eyes from the early sun.

“So where we headed Stranger?”

“North.” Came the simple reply.

“Alrighty then.” Bailey shrugged. Stranger set off at an easy lope, Bailey trotting to keep up,

“Er, Stranger?”

“Hello?”

“Whadda we do if anyone puts together that I’m on the Wanted posters?”

“We run like tha clappers.”

“Is that it? That’s your strategy?”

“Well if yer can come up with somethin’ better I’m all fer hearin’ it.” Bailey grunted, “Exactly as I thought, cheer up Bailey, hey, did I eva tell yer the one about the broken pencil?” Bailey blinked stupidly at the sudden change of subject,

“Er…”

“It had no point!” Bailey stared at Stranger for a second.

“Did you…just tell me a really bad joke?” she asked incredulously, Stranger grinned. “Stranger that has to have been one of the worst jokes I ever heard!” Stranger grinned more broadly.

“How d’yer make a tissue dance?” he asked slyly, Bailey gaped at him in complete shock, Stranger was telling her jokes!? “Put some bogie in it!”

Back in the Birdington gate guard tower the Clakker (who’d been sleeping on the job) awoke with a squawk and fell off his chair as he clearly heard Bailey’s horror-struck voice across the desert…

“Oh NO!”

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By the end of the day Bailey knew for a fact that the only jokes Stranger knew were the bad ones. What was more worrying was that Stranger knew they were amongst the worse jokes ever told, and relish the fact.

“You just like tormenting me don’t ya.” Bailey finally accused. Stranger put on a completely unconvincing mortally offended expression and placed a hand on his heart.

“Me? Torment yer? How could you think such a thing kid?” Bailey scowled and Stranger grinned and before Bailey could stop him; “A coupla strings go into a bar, and ask for a drink. The bartender says, "Hey, I don't serve your kind here, yer just a couple of strings!" One of the strings ties his ends together and says, "Frayed knot!" Get it? Frayed knot? Oh wait, maybe that's not how it goes, it's...hey, wait! Come back!” But Bailey had already taken off in absolute horror, bolting down the canyon they had been walking through. Stranger grinned ferally and followed, dropping down to all fours and charging after the human.

“I can’t take it anymore!” Bailey wailed, “I’m gonna go crazy with all these bad jokes!” she had had quite enough of Stranger’s rotten jokes. Of course she wasn’t really trying to get away from Stranger, she knew he’d catch her up, but at least she’d get a short reprieve before the next joke from hell.

Suddenly Bailey felt the ground vibrating beneath her. She skidded to a halt and turned in confusion, just in time to see Stranger running at breakneck speed, in the strangest pace Bailey had ever come across – using all four of his limbs, fail to put on the brakes and careen right into her, sending them both flying. They rolled over several times before coming to a stop in a tangled pile of confusion.

“Owie.” Muttered Bailey, a pause, then; “Okay, so what you do that for?”

“Yer ain’t gittin’ away from me again that easily.” Stranger growled, but it wasn’t a threatening growl, and then he ruffled Bailey’s hair fondly.

“I wasn’t trying to get away from you, you dolt, just those hideous jokes you seem to have an unlimited supply of.” Bailey argued. She groaned, “Oh this hurts…” she muttered, she twisted to free herself from the jumbled pile of herself and Stranger, “Ow, ow, ow.” She muttered but managed to free herself and flopped onto her back.

A minute later a shadow fell over her face, Bailey squinted up at Stranger.

“What do you want?” she asked. Stranger grinned.

“How d’yer keep a moron in suspense?” There was a long pause, in which Stranger’s grin widened by a few molars.

“Oh I so hate you right now.” Bailey glared. Stranger tilted his head to one side,

“Funny that, I don’t hate you at the moment.” Bailey sat up and sighed, covering her face with her hands. There was a silence until Bailey said,

“I didn’t mean that…I don’t hate you.” Came her voice, muffled by her fingers, “I hate those jokes.” Stranger chuckled. “Stranger?”

“Yes?” Bailey dropped her hands and looked over her shoulder at the bounty hunter.

“How the hell did you do that?”

“Do what?” asked Stranger, cocking his head to one side, eyes questioning. Bailey was surprised to find that he wasn’t half as intimidating with that expression. Closer to completely adorably in fact. Bailey inwardly howled with laughter. Stranger? Adorable? That was majorly screwed up…

“That, that thing. You know, that…well running I guess. It was bizarre whatever it was.”

“Oh that…er…” Stranger petered off and scratched the back of his neck in embarrassment. Bailey watched him curiously. Finally he shrugged. “C’mon, we need to find someplace to camp.” He added quickly changing the subject.

“Awww, but I’m tired, why can’t we stay here?” Bailey gestured the sheer canyon walls around them. Stranger looked around and shook his head,

“No, it’s too good a place fer an ambush. C’mon kid, just a bit further, I promise.” Bailey rose grudgingly.

“D’you remember when you said that and we didn’t stop for three hours?”

“That only happened once.” Stranger protested.

“Exactly, so it’s well overdue for another incident isn’t it?” Bailey said, with a look on her face liked she just proved an irrefutable point. Stranger sighed, swept Bailey in his arms and began walking. Bailey blinked a couple of times before crossing her arms and pouting. “That wasn’t the cue for you to carry me.” She muttered.

Stranger chuckled.

¤§¤

Finally Stranger found a place that he liked and he and Bailey set up camp, Bailey roasting the two edible lizards she’d won in the poker game.

And later, for the first time since they’d met Stranger and Bailey didn’t sleep on opposite sides of the fire.

As Stranger was making himself comfortable, lying on his back and gazing at the dark, star-studded sky, Bailey crept round to him and snuggled up to his side, using his shoulder as a pillow. Stranger was surprised but after some hesitation he put an arm around the small human, gently playing with her hair.

“I’ll make you a deal.” Bailey said at last, Stranger looked down at her,

“Oh really? An’ what might tha’ be?”

“I’ll let you play with my hair as much as you want, if you try and cut out the snoring.” Stranger froze momentarily in surprise.

“I snore?”

“Like a rusty chainsaw.” Snickered Bailey. Stranger was quiet for a moment,

“Alright.” He murmured eventually. Bailey made a sleepy affirmative sound and dropped off to sleep, putting an arm across Stranger’s stomach as she did so. Stranger smiled to himself and continued stroking Bailey’s hair.
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*sigh* Go ahead and laugh at my Outlaws…c’mon they were the best I could come up with…

That’s really bad ain’t it? I am ashamed…

And this is a longer chapter then the others, just so yer know…

Taking The Plunge
Stranger led the way through the huge, warped trees, he had, after all, been doing this a lot longer then Bailey had. Bailey followed him silently, eyes and ears straining for any disturbances.

It was three days later. Stranger had decided that their best bet was to stay within a day’s journey of Birdington so they could pick up the bounties. So now the pair of them were hunting a couple of particularly nasty Outlaws, brothers, known only as Wart and Bunion.

Stranger stopped suddenly and Bailey came up beside him. She watched Stranger’s ears twitching and knew he’d heard something that was beyond her range. She tapped his arm, Stranger looked down at her.

“Outlaws?” Bailey mouthed and signed. Stranger nodded and grinning put a finger up to his lips in the universal signal for ‘Shh’, Bailey nodded. Stranger beckoned with the same finger and set off again, Bailey following. After a while the two hunters came to a pile of rocks heaped amongst the tree. Stranger climbed up with ease. Bailey had a bit more trouble. But she managed it without giving them away.

When she reached the top she found Stranger crouched behind a lip of stone, peering into a telescope. He ignored Bailey for a second before wordlessly handing her the spyglass. Bailey put it to her eye and directed the tube in the same direction Stranger had been looking. She saw a couple of Outlaws stomping along a twisted tree limb. She broke into a grin and handed the telescope back. Stranger crouched behind the rock lip and turned to Bailey.

“I think you better stay out of my way.” He said in a low voice after a pause. Bailey scowled,

“I want to help.” She protested in a furious whisper.

“Stay Here.” Stranger told her firmly.

“But-” Stranger tapped her chin with one claw and shook his head.

“It’s safer here.” Bailey growled in annoyance but nodded. Stranger grinned in relief. “I’ll be back.” He muttered and vaulted over the rock lip, sliding silently down and slinking after the Outlaws. Bailey breathed an irritated breath through her nose.

She unclipped the sniper rifle and followed Strangers progress through the scope. She considered slowing the Outlaws down with a couple of well placed bullets but decided against it.

Stranger would not be pleased.

Bailey contented herself with just watching.

¤§¤

Stranger padded after the Outlaws in a loping pace that Bailey could never have kept up with – she wasn’t built for it. Ahead of him the Outlaws had stopped and looked like they were discussing which way to go. Okay, so it was closer to arguing. Outlaws were always arguing.

Stranger grinned ferally to himself and climbed up above them.

“We shoulda started going East when we got to that giant rock you idiot!” yelled one Outlaw, the bigger one – Bunion.

“Hey! I was following you!” shouted the second, the smaller, younger one - Wart. “And now we’re lost thanks to you’re crap sense of direction! Sekto’s gonna have our hides!”

“Shut yer freakin’ trap!” snapped Bunion clipping the back of his brother’s head.

Stranger chose just then to make his entrance. He dropped down from the canopy above, right behind the Outlaws.

“Mornin’ ladies.” He smirked tugging on the brim of his hat in mock greeting. The Outlaws spun to face him. They saw Stranger and cocked and aimed their guns at the bounty hunter.

“Looks like yer outnumbered Kimosabi.” Said Bunion, smirking widely. Stranger grinned hugely, showing a mouthful of sharp fangs.

“Always liked a challenge.” He purred.

¤§¤

Bailey watched Stranger and the Outlaws’ exchange through the sniper scope with apprehension. She’d learnt from experience from the last three days that whenever Stranger and the Outlaw he was hunting started bantering, the Outlaw got extremely incensed and Stranger almost got himself killed. Every Single Time.

“Don’t talk, just bag ‘em you twit.” She muttered. After a minute or two Stranger finally attacked the two Outlaws, knocking aside their guns and decking the smaller one under the chin. Wart dropped. And Stranger faced the bigger of the pair, smirking smugly. He said something else and Bunion gave a roar of outrage and flung his considerable bulk at Stranger. Stranger dodged easily and ducked under the Outlaw’s huge fist, cracking Bunion’s chin with his own fist.

He was so busy fist-fighting that he didn’t notice the Wart get up and groggily aim his gun at the bounty hunter. Bunion saw it, and Bailey saw it too.

“Say g’bye Stranger.” Bunion growled in triumph Stranger froze in surprise. Bunion grabbed the surprised bounty hunter’s fist and walloped him in the stomach, light flashed on a blade as it came from nowhere and Bunion slashed at Stranger. Stranger gasped and keeled over, dropping to his knees. He heard Wart and Bunion cackling, heard the gun clicking and then a shot. He winced but felt nothing. Wart started screaming and Bunion yelled. “Hell! He’s got reinforcements, let’s git outta here!”

A few minutes later Stranger heard a very out of breath human skid to a halt and drop down to her knees beside him. He felt cool human hands touch his cheeks.

“Stranger, are you okay?” came Bailey’s concerned voice. Stranger looked up, grinned faintly.

“’Part from the bout of déj* vu, I’ll live.” Bailey smirked and hooked one of Stranger’s arms around her shoulders, helping haul Stranger to his feet

“C’mon, up yer get.” Bailey groaned as she helped him to walk. “Next time you can sit on the sidelines and I’ll bag the bad guys.” She added.

“Yer’ll do no such thing.” Stranger growled, Bailey gave a sigh,

“How many times am I gonna have to save your hide, and how much am I gonna get paid?” Stranger swatted at her shoulder,

“Varmint.” Bailey sniggered.

“How’s yer gut by the way?” she asked after a moment. Stranger still had one arm across his abdomen.

“Hurts ter breathe.” Came the answer. Bailey stopped and frowned.

“Alright, let’s take a look at you.” And she made him sit down and take off his poncho. She pressed an ear to his chest and listened, frowning. Stranger blinked down at her.

“Er…Bailey…whadda ya doin’?”

“Breathe for me.” Bailey commanded. Stranger did as he was told. Bailey listened to his breathing. “Sounds alright…” she muttered. She pulled away and prodded his stomach. Stranger hissed.

“Tha’ HURT!” He snapped. Bailey ignored him.

“I think you’re just abit tender, nothing seems horribly wrong. Bad bruising most likely.” Stranger blinked green eyes at the small human.

“How d’you know that!?” Bailey shrugged,

“I was bored when I was left at home so I read a lot.” She answered. “C’mon, we need to get out of here before-” an angry voice cut her off,

“It’s only an Odd-damn kid!”

“We get company…” Bailey sighed.

Suddenly she felt an arm clamp around her middle and knock the air right out of her lungs in a whoosh. Then she felt a bump and found herself on a tree limb that was about twenty feet higher then she had just been a minute ago. Stranger let her go and dropped to his hands and knees, coughing violently. Bailey scrambled over and began rubbing his back to ease his breathing. Stranger slid onto his stomach and with an effort rolled over, groaning.

“You’re never going to recover if you keep pullin’ stunts like that!” Bailey whispered furiously, “What were you thinkin’!?”

“Savin’ yer hide, that’s what.” Stranger croaked hoarsely, he sounded like he wanted be angry but didn’t have the energy.

“Saving my hide won’t help me if you die.” Bailey said. “And I don’t want you to die.” Stranger watched Bailey with luminous green eyes and propped himself up on his elbows.

“I’m not gonna die Bailey.” Bailey went to answer but was cut off as the two heard the Outlaw brother’s below,

“Where in Odd’s name did they go!?” Bailey peered through the foliage and broke into a malicious grin. She began to creep past Stranger but he grabbed her shirt,

“Whadda ya doin’!?” Bailey turned and Stranger noticed the grin and her shining eyes.

“Payback.” She grinned, “Don’t worry, I got an idea.” She turned and put her arms around his neck momentarily, giving him a brief hug, carefully making sure she didn’t touch anything tender and then crept away, along the tree limb. She turned and grinned at Stranger again, “It’ll be a blast.” And then she hopped to another tree.

“Tha’s what’s worryin’ me…” Stranger muttered, keeping his eyes on Bailey.

Bailey made her way to a broad tree limb across from Stranger and then lay on her back to stay hidden while she got out one of the mini-Desert Eagle look-a-like handguns and loaded it. She leant over the side of the branch, took aim, and fired. Immediately the thick air in the forest was rent by wails.

“SHOT ME! SOMETHING ODD-DAMN SHOT ME!”

Bailey snickered and rolled on her back, Bunion was flailing around like a hoard of Fuzzles were attacking him...speaking of Fuzzles… Bailey looked over at Stranger, he was itching to join in.

“Oi, Stranger.” Bailey whispered to get his attention. Stranger looked at her with sharp eyes. “Fuzzles.” Bailey grinned. Stranger returned the grin and loaded his crossbow with two Fuzzles, he took a firm hold on the branch and hung over the side, aimed and fired. The Fuzzles hit Wart and he shrieked and began running around in circles like a headless chicken.

“GAAAAAH! GERROFF GERROFF!” he screamed. Bailey and Stranger were both stifling laughter by now.

Bailey lay on her tree limb, her snickering abruptly cut off when she heard a crack. She sat up quickly, leaning on her hands and looked for the source of the noise.

The branch was splitting…

“No way.” Muttered Bailey, “Oh crap!” Cracks ran all through the wood with alarming speed and Bailey was too choked with fear to make a sound until, finally. “Stranger.” Her voice sounded odd, strained and choked. Stranger looked over, the grin on his face rapidly morphed into horror. He tried to get over to Bailey but his injured midsection impaired him and he wasn’t able to move fast enough as the tree limb that Bailey was perched on, fell away, taking Bailey with it. There was a crash and an explosion of dust and leaf-matter as it billowed up as Bailey and the branch hit a stack of dead leaves in the hollow between two other twisting branches.

The only pro to this horrible situation was that Wart was swatted by the debris brought down by the tree limb’s fall and put down for the count, which meant Stranger only had to deal with one Outlaw.

Stranger didn’t think. If there was any chance that Bailey was alive after that he needed to get the remaining Outlaw, Bunion, away.

Ignoring the pain that ripped through his stomach Stranger jumped down and grinned at Bunion. The Outlaw howled in anger and without Stranger provoking him, he charged at Stranger, swinging his rifle like a club. Stranger dodged and took off, dropping to all fours to move faster.

¤§¤

Bailey groaned, everything ached something awful. She dug her way out of the debris and sat up. She groaned again and put her head in her hands, leaning against the part of tree right next to her.

“Ug, jackhammer in the skull…” she moaned. She looked around. “Where is everyone? Stranger? Stranger!” No answer. Bailey pulled herself out of the rut between the two twisting parts of tree she had fallen into and staggered to one side into another tree trunk and put a hand to her head as a wave of dizziness swept over her. “Ug.” She muttered again.

All around her was a messy mass of dead leaves, sticks, other debris and the huge broken off branch. Bailey brushed the dirt from her clothes and picked fragments of bio-wreckage from her hair.

“Stranger?” she tried again, still no answer. Suddenly a groan made Bailey looked round. Wart sat up, he rubbed his forehead then shook his head to clear the stars, Bailey froze, just staring in horror. When Wart saw Bailey he gave a yell of anger and jumped to his feet, fumbling with his gun. He brought up the rifle…to find it too late, Bailey had bolted. Wart swore and lumbered after her.

Bailey tore through the dense vegetation like a mad thing. She wasn’t about to waste her time on Wart, she had to find Stranger. What if Bunion had taken him? Then where would an Outlaw take a bounty hunter? Bailey’s heart pounded in her ribs and her breath sobbed, panting, trying to take in more air.

And she had no idea where she was going.

She could hear Wart behind but she was confident she could outrun him. Her first worry now was Stranger. Bailey slid down a steep twisting tree fighting to keep her balance and hit the dirt at the bottom, no sooner had she hit the ground she was off again, small leaves and branches lashing in her face and whipping at her arms.

Finally she burst out of the dense jungle, tripped on a root and went tumbling forward, rolling over and over until she hit something. Bailey groaned and fell over onto her hands and knees. She looked towards the forest, there was no sign of Wart. Bailey grinned. She sat with her back against the thing she’d hit and regained her breath.

When she was calmer Bailey twisted around and looked past the thing, and proceeded to fall over again. The whole area behind her was filled with graves, the headstones made of grey rough stone and each one with the same message;

Cry not for us
Our souls survive

Justice awaits
The waters rise


Bailey just stared at them for a moment, her mouth open, she scrambled away from the thing she’d been leaning on, finding that that too was a grave. Bailey looked around. She was even more lost then she had been before. And even worse, she was officially Creeped Out.

“This sucks.” She whispered, “Really sucks.” All she could hear was the buzzing of the flies and the chirp of the small creatures in the grass. Suddenly she heard a voice, deep but breathy like a whispering of a soft breeze on grass. Bailey spun on the spot. “Hello?” she breathed, “Stranger?” the whispering continued and the first voice was joined by others, all whispering things she didn’t understand. Bailey was frozen in place, looking round slowly, the small hairs on her arms and the back of her neck rising.

Bailey shivered.

Swallowing Bailey began moving, weaving her way through the graves, the wild grass coming up to her knees in some places. She climbed up a slight slope in the graveyard and when she reached the top, bright sunlight seared into her dark-accustomed eyes. Bailey rubbed her eyes and blinking squinted down. What she saw made a pain lance through her chest and she put a hand on a stunted tree nearby to steady herself, one hand on her heart. Slowly Bailey sank to her knees.

“What happened here?” she whispered. Below her stretched a long, deep valley. Everything was dry and dusty and dead or dying. Bailey could make out the faint remains of what once must have been a great river, but something, or someone had drained all the water.

Bailey was used to seeing dry places, but this was different. The atmosphere was wrong here, water had been here and it had been taken, and it wasn’t natural. Bailey saw a settlement that would have been on the riverbanks of the dead river. Dimly she could make out a group of little figures with fishing nets.

This drought was unnatural.

Bailey watched them crowd together to observe what she assumed was the pitiful catch. This was a fishing people, but the river was dry and the fish would therefore he dying right along with this valley.

Suddenly a gunshot shattered the brittle quiet. The whispers were silenced. Bailey watched the valley below like a hawk. A dark and familiar figure suddenly charged through the gathering of the short fishers.

“Stranger.” Murmured Bailey, a scant few seconds later the Outlaw Bunion crashed through the group, sending many on them flying, he levelled his gun and shot again then with a gesture of annoyance he tore off after Stranger, leaving Bailey line of sight.

As if someone had just unturned on the volume on a muted television set, the whispers returned, but this time Bailey understood them;

Go said the whispers, Go now. Help him. Remember us. Bailey didn’t move for a second, the wind picked up and seemed to push her backwards. GO! Bailey turned, and fled.

¤§¤

Stranger practically flew through the jungles of Mongo Valley, moving with that unique gait that Bailey had found so fascinating, utilising all four limbs to move, jumping from place to place.

Stranger turned momentarily to check if Bunion was still following. He was, and his pace was remarkably fast, every so often he caught up to Stranger and swung his gun but Stranger managed to dodge each time.

Stranger clambered up on huge tree root and pause for a second, letting Bunion take a swing at him, he dodged and changed direction, swinging himself around on a stubby protruding branch that exploded as soon as he’d let it go, the fragments flew in all direction and sprayed Stranger as the bullet it the wood.

He slid down another root and continued the deadly race, towards an old trap he’d built some time ago, avoiding the barrage of swings from Bunion. Stranger dashed through the ribcage of a giant animal, using the rib bones to swing himself into the air, sliding along yet another root like a skateboarder grinding down a rail.

He paused and turned back, watching the Outlaw fighting his way out of the ribcage, which had evidently collapsed on top of him into a pile of bones. It didn’t take him long and soon Bunion was barrelling towards him.

“That’s right.” Muttered Stranger jumped out of the way just as the Outlaw swung his gun.

Stranger vaguely heard a yell of ‘ODD-DAMN! GET OFF! GET OFF! GET OFF!’ before they was a crack, a splintering of wood and Bunion shot past him, covered in snarling Fuzzles.

Stranger unfolded his crossbow and loaded it with a Bolamite in under thirty seconds and fired. The arachnid hit the Outlaw and trussed him like a Zappfly caught in one of it’s webs.

Bunion hit the ground and the creatures scattered. Stranger dropped down in a perfect four-point landing, rose slowly and stalked towards the Outlaw.

“You jerk! You broke ma favourite gun!” hollered Bunion. Stranger bent down and picked up the gun, sniffing the busted gunpowder canister and shuddered at the disgusting smell.

“Never liked guns.” He grinned and snapped the gun in two, dropping the two pieces in front of Bunion.

“Aww man.” Whined the Outlaw. Stranger bent down and grabbed hold on the Outlaw’s bonds and brought him almost nose to nose, his green eyes blazing.

“That was fer Bailey.” And then Stranger shoved the Outlaw away from him in disgust.

His ears twitched suddenly. He could have sworn he’d just-

“Oi! Stranger! You tryin’ ter get away from me or what?” Stranger looked up, ignoring the grumbling Outlaw.

Bailey was standing on one of the tree roots he’d led Bunion over. She grinned and waved. She suddenly stopped and her gaze snapped to her left. She then began climbing down the network of latticed roots and branches until she was on solid ground again. She cast an apprehensive glance upward before darting over to Stranger.

“Stranger, we got company. The lil’ scum-bag’s headed this way.” Stranger nodded and was about to reload his crossbow when he gave a gasp and bent over double, clutching at his stomach.

“Can’t,” he gasped, “Can’t take on another one.”

“Then I will.” Bailey said firmly, Stranger shook his head but it took him a few seconds to muster enough energy to speak.

“No.” Bailey looked like she was going to argue but just then a bullet exploded right next to her feet and they heard Wart yell,

“I got ya now yer lil’ freaks!” Stranger didn’t wait to give a comeback. Summoning all the strength he had left Stranger grabbed hold of Bailey and took off again.

“Stranger stop!” yelled Bailey, “You’ll do yerself in!” but Stranger didn’t listen, just kept running.

Then, abruptly the ground fell away. Stranger skidded to a halt and the two peered over the edge. At one point Bailey presumed this must have been a waterfall but the water had stopped flowing by now and Bailey was surprised that there was still a pool at all below.

Stranger finally let her go and Bailey dropped to the floor as Stranger fell to his knees, his breath coming in painful gasps. Bailey knelt beside him.

“C’mon Stranger, you can’t give up yet. We can make it.” Stranger didn’t even have the energy to answer straight away, and when he did he only managed a few words.

“I’m sorry Bailey.” Bailey laughed softly,

“What for?” she asked,

“I’m sorry I wasn’t strong enough.”

And then Bailey knew.

This was the end.

Bailey put her arms around Stranger, pressing her forehead on his fur.

“It’s not your fault. None of it is your fault.” She murmured, she felt Stranger put his arms around her and she tightened her hold. He was shaking, Bailey realised. He didn’t want to die, neither did she, but there was no way out…

Or maybe there was…

“Stranger, you have to get up, we can make it.” She tried to get Stranger up, he didn’t at first but then he managed, rising unsteadily to his feet. Bailey put his arm around her shoulder and Stranger sagged onto the considerably smaller human. His eyes were closed and his head rested on Bailey’s shoulder. Bailey got him over to the rim of the waterfall cliff and peered over. “At least it looks deep enough…” there was a crash of foliage snapping and being trampled behind them. Bailey looked back once before she took a deep breath.

And took the plunge.

Jumping from the cliff, dragging Stranger after her…the water rushed to meet them and there was a huge splash that knocked everything out of Bailey as she hit the freezing water.

Everything went black as she and Stranger sank below the surface…
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Sweet! Now the end thar, was fluffiness. But other that that, it was awesome! Oh, and the part where Stranger captures Bunion, well, sorry if I messed up yer story, but it sounds exactly like the capture of Blisterz Booty. But still good!
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I dunno who Blisterz Booty is...but I saw this wicked trailer thing on the net where Stranger captures someone (is that Blisterz Booty then?) and I liked the style so I used that...I did change it abit...

Sigh, am I gonna get a kick fer this?

Blegh.
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What's up with fluffiness? Although the action will be making it's appearance soon if that's what yer after.
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oh no! You just did action! Eh, anyways, there's nothin' wrong with flufiness. I use it sometimes. Oh, and I'm doin' s'moe in my fic, so hold on tight!
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Cutting It Close
Bailey’s eyes flew open as the shock of cold water loosened it’s grip on her and consciousness returned. At first she panicked and began to flail, then she kicked her legs and propelled herself towards the light of sun on the water. She broke the surface and sucked in a great gasp of air. Treading water she looked up at the ridge.

The Outlaws must have given up, she couldn’t see or hear them anymore and they’d made enough noise to wake the dead…well, okay, maybe not that much…

Bailey splashed over to the bank of the pool and dragged herself out, shedding her poncho, hat and equipment as well as practically a bucket’s worth of water.

“I feel like a sponge…” she groaned to herself and squeezed water from her hair. Bailey suddenly felt a nagging sensation in her stomach, she looked around. Where was Stranger? Bailey began looking around more frantically. Stranger wasn’t there. “Oh no.” Bailey moaned, she quickly waded into the water, took a deep breath and plunged beneath the surface.

The water was dark, Bailey couldn’t see. The flotsam and jetsam in the water swirled around her and the lungs burned but she refused to resurface to take in air.

Finally, after what seemed an eternity Bailey saw a shadow, darker then the water. A shadow that was slowly sinking and leaving a vaguely red trail. Bailey pushed her failing body to swim deeper and she managed to grabbed hold of Stranger. Using every last vestige of willpower she had left Bailey resurfaced and dragged Stranger’s limp (and let’s face it, very heavy) body onto the bank, taking off his hat and poncho.

Bailey dropped to her knees next to him and pressed an ear to his chest, listening. She almost cried in relief when she heard a faint heartbeat. Bailey mentally shuffled all she knew about resuscitation into order like a pack of cards.

She checked Stranger’s airways and nearly succumbed to panic when she realised that Stranger wasn’t breathing.

“Oh don’t you dare do this to me Stranger, don’t you dare die on me. Breathe damn you.” Bailey pressed on Stranger’s chest, trying to force the water out, and the oxygen into his lungs. “Please, please don’t do this to me Stranger.” She whispered and pressed harder. Nothing. “You will not do this to me!” Bailey growled, “I won’t let you.” Bailey sat back on her heels, as she tried to remember CPR. She let out a groan when she realised her only option. “Oh you better appreciate this.” She muttered and proceeded to perform mouth-to-mouth resuscitation on Stranger.

She almost gagged.

She pulled away after a minute, coughing.

“First thing I’m gonna do when we find civilisation,” she muttered as she returned to pressing down on Stranger’s lungs, “Is find you a toothbrush and even if I have to sit on you and do it myself, I’m gonna get you to clean yer teeth. Your oral hygiene stinks, and I mean literally…” Bailey pressed on his chest again. “Stranger please, I need you to wake up. You promised you wouldn’t die. You promised. Stranger…you’re the only friend I’ve got…you’re my family… I need you…”

A trickle of water dribbled from Stranger’s mouth, and then he heaved a great breath and began coughing.

“AH HA!” yelled Bailey, “YOU’RE ALIVE!” she threw her arms around Stranger’s neck and promptly burst into tears.

Stranger’s breathing steadily became easier and he closed his eyes to recover his strength. He felt Bailey’s hot tears on his fur. Slowly he pushed himself up into a sitting position and put his arms around the girl sobbing on his shoulder. Holding her close.

“Shh Bailey, it’s alright, I’m here.” He finally managed to croak. Bailey tightened her grip on Stranger and sobbed harder. Stranger made a soothing, purring sound and stroked Bailey’s back. “Bailey…I’m alright. I’m fine…”

“You-” Bailey choked, “You almost…” Bailey was the one shaking now. Stranger pulled her closer to his chest.

“But I didn’t. I’m fine.” Bailey took deep breaths and pressed her forehead to Stranger’s cheek, her eyes closed.

For a long time the two just sat in silence, eyes closed, mustering all their willpower and energy to move. Silently reassuring and being reassured that each of them were alive and well.

After a while Stranger took a deep breath and fire seared across his stomach. Bailey felt Stranger’s muscles tense and he let out a hiss of pain. She pulled away quickly.

“Stranger what-” and it was only then that she saw the red staining Stranger’s shirt. “Damn.” She muttered and ignoring his weak protests, forced Stranger to lie back. “Hold still, this might sting.” She peeled Stranger’s shirt from his stomach and winced. “Ow.” She muttered. A long, bloody cut went right across his stomach.

Bailey had to think fast.

“Don’t move. I’ll be right back.” Stranger groaned. Bailey rummaged around her equipment and finally located her scarf. She went back to Stranger and used the scarf as a makeshift bandage, wrapping it around his abdomen and tying it firmly.

When she was satisfied Bailey donned her poncho, hat and strapped on her pack, then helped Stranger with his poncho and hat and hauled him to his feet. Stranger sagged against her.

“Stranger, you have to help me out. I can’t walk for you.” He did make the effort, he really did try but blood loss was finally catching up with him. He drifted in and out of consciousness, worrying Bailey, the only way she could think of to keep him awake was talk to him. Which is exactly what she did. “Stranger,” she had to keep saying his name to get him to pay attention in the first place, “How d’you know the Doc? Well, I assume you know ‘im, he seemed to know you…” Stranger’s eyes were closed as if he was sleepwalking but he managed to answer.

“He…can help me…only one who can help me…” By his tone Bailey suspected that he wasn’t fully aware what was happening and almost delirious, he wouldn’t normally answer a question like that. Bailey therefore used the situation to find out more about Stranger. There was a lot about him she didn’t know, she realised.

“Help? Help you with what?”

“My…condition…it’s why I do the bounties…to fund it…” he was almost done in and still Stranger wasn’t about to give away important information. Bailey gave a futile sigh. Even when he was almost on his last legs he hadn’t let his guard down…

Bailey only hoped that they could get back to Birdington and to the Doc before (1) Outlaws found them, (2) Stranger dropped from his injury and blood loss and possible infection and (3) anyone realised that she was a wanted felon.

She didn’t have Stranger to protect her right now. It was the other way around now, Bailey smirked at the irony. Instead of needing Stranger to protect her, Stranger now needed the protection.

And Bailey’d be damned if she didn’t look after him.

“How can he help? The Doc I mean.”

“He can…do tha operation.” Bailey stopped dead.

“What operation?” Stranger sank down to sit on a log, Bailey crouched in front of him, “Stranger, tell me, what operation can the Doc do?”

“It makes me…normal… I’m a freak, an’ I don’t wanna be.”

“What are you talking about!?” asked Bailey, completely stunned by his response, “Take a look around! All that inhabits Oddworld are screw-ups and oddballs. We’re all freaks. What makes you so special?”

“It’s dangerous…fer me…fer what I am…I’d be hunted down…” Bailey frowned,

“Why?”

“Because…that’s tha way it is… Bailey…”

“I’m right here, what is it?”

“It’s dark Bailey…I can’t see yer…I can hardly hear yer…” Stranger was fading fast. Bailey got him on his feet again.

“Stranger, work with me, I need you to stay awake, listen to my voice…c’mon Stranger, you’re stronger then this.”

“I’m…not sure I can go on fer long…”

“You don’t need to,” Bailey panted, Stranger weighed an absolute ton! “We’re gonna get there real soon.”

“Yer promise?” Bailey didn’t answer straight away, such a childish question from someone so much older and sterner then herself put Bailey off balance, but finally;

“Yeh. Yeh I promise. We’ll make it…” Bailey paused but spoke again, “Whatever happens, I’ll always be your friend and I will always be there if you need me. I promise that too.” Stranger smiled sleepily and nodded. Bailey blew air from her cheeks.

Now all she had to do was keep that promise…

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It was getting dark by the time Bailey and Stranger stumbled into Birdington. Stranger was practically on his knees. Bailey had to drag him into the town’s gates, straining every muscle, but she made it and let out a relieved breath.

“In tha name o’ Odd!” squawked a voice, “What ‘appened ter you two?” Bailey looked up, the Clakker from the guard tower was clambering down the ladder to get to them.

“Outlaws.” Bailey said heavily, “And Stranger’s not at his best.”

“I can see tha’! Yer need to git ‘im ter tha Doc’s.” Bailey nodded and put one of Stranger’s arms around her neck, and heaved. But she didn’t have anything left and she sank to the floor. She slammed a fist into the dirt and tried again and after a struggle got herself and Stranger up. “Methinks yer need some ‘elp lil’ miss.” Remarked the Clakker as he propped up Stranger’s other arm.

“Thanks…” said Bailey in a tired voice. The Clakker waved away her gratitude,

“Stranger’s ‘elped us a lot, I think I can ‘elp now, after all ‘e’s done fer us. Best bounty hunter in these parts is Stranger.” Bailey nodded, she didn’t have the energy to reply.

And it was still a way to the Vykker’s practice…

Ten minutes later Bailey was pounding on the door of the Doc’s surgery.

“Doc!” she yelled, “Doc! Open up!” a window on the floor above opened and a very irate Vykker looked out, looking ridiculous in monocle and a purple and white pinstriped nightcap and matching shirt.

“H’and what do you want!” he snapped in that nasally voice that made Bailey inwardly cringe and grated on her annoyance. She was not going to put up with his idiocy, she had no time for this. She’d throttled him once, she could do it again. She’d make him obey her.

“You get down here right now and open this door or I’ll break it down!” she roared, the Vykker gave a yelp of fright and dropped his monocle.

“It’s the mad human!” he squealed, “What d’you want!?”

“Stranger needs your…expertise!” Bailey called.

“I’ll be right down…” The Doc whimpered and disappeared from the window. A few seconds later the door opened and the Doc was met with a glaring Bailey. He visibly shrank before her. Cowed, utterly terrified of the human girl that only just stood eye to eye with him. He glanced at Stranger and then back to the fiery eyed Bailey. “Bring him in.” he squeaked. Bailey nodded and turned to the Clakker.

“Thank you for your help-”

“Grissum.” Bailey inclined her head. Grissum left and Bailey got Stranger into the back room of the Doc’s surgery and onto the table. The Vykker who’d been holding the door open entered after her.

Once she was sure Stranger was comfortable Bailey whirled on the Doc with a frightening ferocity and had him by the throat in a second.

“You do anything that will hurt him, and I will rip out your spine and hang you with yer own entrails.” She dragged him closer so he could see the cold seriousness in her eyes. “You get me?” The Vykker nodded vigorously.

“Yes, yes, of course.”

“Good.” Snarled Bailey and dropping the Vykker in disgust Bailey went to the office.

Waiting to see if Stranger lived or died.
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Now I have to be honest. At revival, Lobo...you made me cry. Seriously, I ain't jokin'. You made me shead a tear at the corner. The bond between Bailey and Stranger are the same, seriously. In my story, it ain't showin' is it? But their bond is growing with every moment they have. Good work, and I have to go stop my waterworks...
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GAH! Good Grief!

Good grief! I'm sorry, *hands DE another virtual tissue* I didn't mean ter make ya cry. I thought it was kinda melodramatic actually... but gee, sorry. But I gotta say it's gratifying to an author to know they've really affected their audience. So thanks, and sorry...again.

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Me and Stranger? My name ain't Bailey. See, you're talkin' about a kinda self-insertion and I don't write like that, I have to create characters. Just the way I work.
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