Syrom's Retribution

[odd chick]

Oh, no! Poor Grunt!! He died a horrible death-how sad. That chapter was great, BBS...it was so emotional. At least Slug is still alive, though....for now.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

The battle had stopped...for now.
We were eating Chunky's exposed liver when Slug popped up with an idea.
"Why don't we let them win, Syrom throws a party, we come back with a bomber squadron so big, we nuke the whole of the monosaic lines!" Slug said, taking a bite out of his share of liver.
"He won't let us loose unless i'm dead! I can't just let him kill me, and leave you, Monty and Richy alone! We've already lost Chunky, Ziggy and Grunt! I'm not going to loose you three!" I Yelled.
The monosaic lines went quiet.
Monty stopped eating.
Richey stopped drooling.
Even the faint barking of Syrom stopped.
"One of us has to go. For all of the remaining sligs." I said.
"I'll go." Said a voice.
We turned around to face a most familiar person.
Maniac.
"Maniac! You survived the Screw-driver attack?" I screamed.
"Time for some revenge everyone's been waiting for." Maniac said.
Suddenly, a tiny phone rang.
I picked it up.
"Hello? BBS?" Said Splinterz.
"Yeah?" I replied.
"Have you even left the Monosaic Lines? Have you saw what Syrom has caused? The whole of Mudos is at war!" He screamed.
I didn't answer.
"Scrabania has been bombed, and then mines planted. Paramonia is crumbling away form the wars going on. Necrum Mudokons have summoned the dead and attacked! I've had to call up the Slig barracks and get every single unit into battle! All the sligs are either fighting or being tortured!" He screamed again.
This time I answered.
"Nuke them. All of them. Take all the sligs out of battle. Then nuke and bomb all the armies. Now!"
The phone went silent.
"This time, Biggy bro slig- I think you are the general of the army."

[odd chick]

Great chapter, BBS. Maniac is alive! I'm glad that you put him back in this story! Didn't you put him in "The Guru's Revenge"? I couldn't exactly remember for certain, but I just wanted to know so that I'd know for a fact. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

A big, black ODD (Oddworld Disaster Diver) plane flew overthe monosaic lines.
"Maniac to BBS. I see them. Hurry up and leave! I'm about to bomb." The ODD pilot said.
I picked up the walky-talky.
"We're evcuating the sligs through the escape mine." I said.
All the sligs ran through.
I counted them all, and then I went through.
"Fire when ready." I said.
"1...2...3!" Maniac screamed.
At the sound of three, a grey lump of metal dropped from the ODD bomber.
Syrom walked out of his hut.
"What a beautiful morning!" He said.
He then saw the bomb.
"Oh Sh*t." He said, mouth open, eyes wide.
The bomb hit the floor, and everything went white.
The mine shook. And clumps of mud fell.
The sligs ran for their lives.
I then saw the white fire speeding towards me.
I ran as fast as possible.
I then saw an opening.
We jumped out, and landed somewhere I wish I had never seen again.
The arena.
The arena was the place where I was won by Molluck, in a bet on a racing game.
Glukkons were sitting in this little box.
There was Grutoque, the mastermind Wolvark who created the arena.
He spotted me.
"Biggy Bro slig! Nice to see you again, you filthy Bastard!" He screamed.
"You, will be my first slig, ever, to race against me!" He shouted.
At that moment, I new I would never return home.

[odd chick]

Oooh, a race! That's awesome! I can't wait to see that-I'm planning on writing a race in my fanfic later on, but I don't quite know how I'm gonna do that. Well, keep the story goin', BBS.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

"Go ahead! Watch your leader race me! Step into the arena and sit ing the stone seats!" Grutoque screamed.
The sligs stepped forward.
"Don't! It's a trap!" I screamed.
They ignored me, and stepped forward.
They dissapeared.
"Why does nobody listen to me?" I said, rolling my eyes.
I stepped after them.
The true state of the arena. Piles of rubble and a wolvark standing at the special booth.
But that wasn't what was disturbing.
Millions of sligs were fighting against Mudokons.
I saw the brown, navy blue coated Shrykull dotted with medals all over his jacket.
I hated him.
I saw Monty walk into him.
Tyronus turned around, pulled out his sword, and stabbed Monty right in the Heart.
Monty vomited up blood, and then Tyronus sliced of his head.
He Laughed, and turned to me.
This time Tyronus was dead. Big style.
Before I could run, Richy Came bowling out of nowhere and struck Tyronus like a boulder.
Tyronus jumped back up, and stabbed his sword into Richy's head.
Richy didn't die.
Tyronus cut right down, and seperated the two halfs.
Nothing was in there.
Tyronus pulled his sword out, and stabbed Richy in his lungs.
Richy gasped and fell to the floor.
I charged towards him.
I sliced of Tyronus' hand and he dropped his sword.
At first he didn't notice, until he tried to kill a slig.
He roared, and turned to me.
I pushed him on the floor.
"Do you really think it's wise to kill me? I can help you kill Syrom. I can give your dead friends life. I can help you!" Tyronus said.
I thought for a while.
"Okay." I said.
Syrom charged with his army into some sligs.
Tyronus did a series of signals at a Shrykull.
He then switched on a radio tower, which told the Shrykulls something.
The shrykulls turned to Tyronus.
He nodded.
The Shrykulls turned to Syrom.
Syrom was surrounded.
"You cheated." Syrom said to Tyronus.
"I just wanted the job. I've always hated you." Tyronus winked at him.
Syrom smiled.
I signalled at the army to attack Tyronus.
They went charging towards him.
Tyronus screamed, and was overun by millions of sligs.
Me and Slug walked towards Syrom for the rest of the job to be done...

[odd chick]

Poor Monty....and RICHY!!! I was hoping that idiotic buffoon wouldn't get it in the end. Oh, well...nice battle scenes-they were pretty gruesome, but in a good way because it made the battle seem real. (By the way, in case you didn't know-I posted another chapter of my fanfic on your forum-why does no one go on there anymore? :/. ) Anyway, keep up the good work.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Yeah, I noticed, it's just I havn't got time to right another...I'm going away for two weeks in Italy.

[odd chick]

Italy? Sounds like fun! Well, enjoy your trip.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

WAHEEE! I'm back!
Wow! Two weeks in Italy really let me have time to think about the whole story-line!

Tyronus swirled over, and the Sligs went flying.
He flashed his lightning and everything stopped.
The sligs stopped in mid air.
Syrom stopped shooting his rifle.
Even slug had stopped shooting.
Time had froze.
Everything but me and Tyronus had frozen.
Tyronus walked towards me.
"I can save your friends. By freezing time. I let you save your friends from dying, You stop me from dying." Tyronus said.
"How do you die?" I curiously asked the Time freezing Shrykull.
"How? Syrom turns on me for loosing one of the battles and Slug killing Travis." He replied.
"Yes. Okay. But why did Chunky turn on me?" I asked him.
"You will find the answer when you save him. You may find a terrible truth out while saving your friends." Tyronus said.
"How do I get there? Who do I save first? Will you come? Why-" I said no more. I was stopped by Tyronus.
"I will come with you. I will change the time and we will save your friend, Zigget. But you must never, ever, let your other self see you." Tyronus gasped.
"Why?" I asked the blue coated general.
"Too many questions, too little time! I can't let time freeze like this forever! It'll stay like this if we don't hurry up!" Shouted Tyronus.
With a flash of lighting, a portal opened up.
Me and General Tyronus walked in...

[odd chick]

Wow, it's been a long time since your last chapter! I hope you enjoyed your trip-it sounded like fun! Anyway, about the story, you came back with a bang on that one-it was phenominal! I love the whole time-freezing thing that happened. Great job, BBS.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Thanx, OC.

Me and Tyronus landed splat in front of Syrom.
Syrom stared at me.
I stared at him.
It was Syrom who made the first move.
He pulled out a tiny little dagger.
I saw my other self.
"Tyronus! Stop Me from meeting me! Now!" I yelled.
Syrom was getting really confused now.
I took my opertunity, and grabbed the dagger.
I had two weapons now, A dagger, and a rifle.
Syrom smiled, but I didn't back.
He pulled out a shotgun. A very large shotgun.
He then loaded his gun.
He aimed, and was about to fire when a huge fist went flying into the barrel of the gun, Knocking it in Syrom's eyes.
He yelped, and he dropped it.
He was about to strangle me, when I saw his Firelighter.
Brilliant! I thought. Target sighted.
I dived for his belt.
I grabbed hold of it, and Syrom ran as fast as he could.
I was holding on to the belt, and grabbed the firelighter, and let go.
Syrom went flying into the air, and landed next to Ziggy.
Perfect. Now to get Tyronus back without Me seeing me.
I ran, and chucked a Rock at him.
Tyronus yelped, and said to my other self:
"I'll finish you off later!" Said The general.
He ran towards me.
I was hiding behind a rock, so I didn't see myself.
Tyronus ran and hopped over the rock.
"Open the portal. I've got Syrom's firelighter." I said.
He clicked his fingers, and we dissapeared.
We re-appeared back in the ruins of the Arena.
"Were's Ziggy?" I asked the Shrykull.
There was a flash of light, and Ziggy apeared out of nowhere, frozen, like everyone else.
"Who was killed next?" Asked Tyronus.
"Grunt." I said, anger filling me.
Tyronus smiled, and said "Actually, you would have to save Chunky from turning into his true self."
"Chunky it is then!" I said.

[odd chick]

Great action-packed chapter as usual, BBS. I liked it! Keep it going!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

We appeared in the Monosaic lines...again.
The war hadn't started yet, and I walked into a hut.
There was Chunky being zapped to life by Tyronus.
Tyronus stopped, and stared.
The other did the same.
They had saw each other!
Time froze, and both of them dissapeared.
I was the only one in the entire world who had not been frozen.
I looked around.
I walked towards Chunky.
I Pushed him out of the frozen electricity.
He smashed into a million peices.
Oops. I shouldn't of done that.
In that case, My robotic Guru hand dissapeared, and was replaced by my old one.
The mission had been ruined.
I walked into the next hut.
There was Syrom- I smiled.
If I pushed him, he would smash, and my crusade would be over.
I pushed him.
He fell over, and didn't shatter.
Syrom jumped back up, and kicked me through the wall.
I went flying throught a series of huts.
I'm stuck in a different time, and How is Syrom moving?

[Munch's Master]

Ooo, nice twist! I've been reading this as a non-member, and now that I can finally post, I must say it's very good, all 3 of you fics so far are.

[odd chick]

Cool chapter, BBS. The only thing I can point out is that you could've joined the sentences a bit better. (Ex- Instead of "Time froze, and both of them dissapeared.
I was the only one in the entire world who had not been frozen.", "Time froze, and both of them dissapeared, but
I was the only one in the entire world who had not been frozen." ) Other than that, the content in this story is excellent. Keep it going!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Thanx, both of you.

I got up, and walked throught the Huts.
This is madness!
I pulled out a weapon that never dissapointed me.
The Extrordinary Vomit gun 9000!
Syrom jumped throught the huts.
I ran out of it, and ran towards the edge of the Monosaic lines.
Teasing Syrom was not a good idea.
I figured that out when he pulled out a sword, and sliced the Gun.
Hot Acidic Puke poured out, rotting away the ground.
I dropped the gun.
I looked at a mudokon with a sword in his hand.
I pushed him over, and grabbed the sword.
I lunged for Syrom.
I defended it off, and sliced his blade towards me.
I dodged the sharp steel and circled Syrom.
Syrom was now at the edge.
I dived with the blade and Syrom defended it off.
I pulled out a pistol.
"You can try." Syrom said.
"And succeed." I added. I pulled the trigger, and a bullet went into Syrom's arm.
Syrom yelped, and pulled out his shotgun.
I chopped the weak shotgun in half, and stabbed Syrom in the chest.
Syrom dropped his sword, and fell to his knees, as a stream of blood trickled down his mouth.
He managed one sentence.
"Kill Tyronus or he will kill you." Syrom coughed, and fell backwards, and fell off the side.
Syrom was dead.
I walked away, with my Blood-drenched sword.
I thought back to when Tyronus first unleashed his power.
"How? Syrom turns on me for loosing one of the battles and Slug killing Travis."
He was lying. I was the one who killed him. He wanted Syrom out fo the way so he could rule and kill me.
That was not going to happen.
At this thought, he must be related to Kakulana, constantly switching sides.
But if I got Tyronus back, I couldn't kill him straight away, otherwise I couldn't get out of the frozen world.
I walked back to where I had last seen Tyronus.
Bingo!
I had to finish my mission- put Chunky Fueller back together.
I had no idea how to do it though.
I sat next to the Shattered pieces and thought...

[Munch's Master]

Good chapter! But how can he get Tyronus back if Tyonus saw himself and disappeared? Maybe I misinterpreted the last bit, but i don't get that.

[odd chick]

Yeah, I was wondering that myself...Anyway, that's a good chapter, BBS. And the Vomit Gun...who can resist that?! Well, keep your great story going!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Well to bring Tyronus back, BBS will have to fight the biggest Industrial being ever.
Sekto.
I'll post the next soon...

[Munch's Master]

Ooh, sounds like a good upcoming chapter! And I was wondering, will Marty and Timothy (Monty and Richey's doubles) ever return, or are they dead for good?

[odd chick]

Well to bring Tyronus back, BBS will have to fight the biggest Industrial being ever.
Sekto.
I'll post the next soon...

Your putting Sekto in this story?!! Awesome!! I can't wait to see that-Sekto is one of the best industrialist characters in Oddworld!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Thanx, OC.

[odd chick]

No problem, BBS. I can't wait to see what happens-you're doing a good job with this story.

[Munch's Master]

Why's the title of your post called: "the rising of the". Anyway, I look forward to the next bit BBS.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Oops. I was writing it and I pressed a key. Ahh well, here's the chapter.

An Oktigi was sucking life off a wolvark, using the body.
The Oktigi walked into New Yolk City.
The stranger walked into the Jail.
"I would like to visit Flint Explosivez McGee." The stranger said.
The Clakker lifted his head from his work.
"Listen hear, Pisshead. I'm working, so shut up, you turd!" The Clakker stated.
"Maybe you said that the wrong way." The Wolvark/Oktigi said.
He took a step forward.
The Clakker looked up.
"For the last time, Turd, I'm working here!" And the Clakker stopped, as a fist went round his neck.
The Clakker gasped, and he let go from all life.
He was dead.
"Never mess with Sekto." The Wolvark said.
Sekto walked off, and opened a jail cell, and Flint woke up.
"Sekto? What you in here for?" Flint asked.
The Oktigi de-tatched itself from the wolvark, and slithered towards its target.
The Oktigi sucked onto the head of the Outlaw.
Sekto got up.
"Now to go to an old enemy at the monosaic lines." Sekto said, and walked out of the cell.
He picked up his Shotgun.
He walked out.
He started his journey towards the Monosaic lines, not Knowing his enemy was dead.

[Munch's Master]

Ooh, intrguing! But I din't think Sekto was an Octigi. Mind you I don't have Stranger's Wrath so... Anyway good chapter, I can't wait for it to carry on. And who is this old enemy? (Don't tell me who it is just yet, I love suspense)

[odd chick]

Oops, spoiler! Anyway, that was a nice chapter, BBS-I enjoyed it, but could you be a bit more descriptive? Everything is just flowing a bit too fast, that's all. Other than that, the story's great-keep up the good work!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Yeah, I'm feeling a bit sick today, so I just wanted to get back in bed.

[odd chick]

Oh, sorry about that-I hope you feel better. Well, we'll still be here-it's not like we're going anywhere! Anyway, get some rest.