Job Fan Fiction

[Kimon]

Thanks guys. I'll probably have a new chapter tomorrow.

[T-nex]

ok... *can't wait for the new chapter*

[Angel-FoX-crescent]

Aww... bless Job the poor guy...
Cool work keep on writing dude!

[Kimon]

Sorry I haven't posted the next chapter, guys... my computer is broken and will be till Tuesday. I'm using my friend's comp to type this, so check out the story on Tuesday.

[odd chick]

Hey, it's alright, Kimon. We'll be waiting for it.

[Abe16]

I cant wait to see what happens!

[Kimon]

Turns out my computer is still broken, and I can only get on about 5 minutes at a time. Not enough to write a story, sadly. Maybe in a week or so...

[Abe16]

Aw man! Hope your computer is fixed.

[odd chick]

Yeah. We hope that your computer will be fixed soon. Until then, we'll still be waiting for that next chapter!

[Kimon]

Alrighty, after the long wait, here's chapter 6!

Chapter 6 - Revelation

Aww crap. We were in BIG trouble. That Vykker was gonna kill us! We had to escape somehow. Me and George turned around and started bookin'. We didn't know where we were gonna go, but we had to find a place to hide. I was running for a spot I saw behind the vat when BAM! I nailed my head on a low-hanging pipe. Ouch. That was gonna leave a mark.

Then the strangest thing happened to me. I started to black out, but something was different. I still felt like I was still awake. I though I was dreaming, but I could move around and stuff without waking up. That was weird.

Anyway, I saw some figure in front of me. It looked like a Mudoken of some sort. Yeah, it was a Native! And not just any native. It was the Shaman! Then it dawned on me. I wasn't dreaming, I was having a vision! All of a sudden, the Shaman started talking to me.

"Hey Job, you're in big trouble! You gotta get outta there soon! And that monster is more than just an experiment. Us Mudokens NEED that guy. So you and your buds gotta escape!"

"Well, duh," I said. "How am I gonna do that?"

"You obviously need some assistance. That's why I'm here. I have been sent by the Almighty Raisin himself to open a spiritual path for you. You must use the spirit chant to get out of there!"

The sacred chant? I had no idea what that was. I knew Abe used it, but how was I gonna? My question was answered pretty quickly. A flash of lightning appeared in front of me and started shockin' my head! It hurt like heck, but it was over quick.

"Now you can use your spirit to overpower your enemies," said the Shaman. "Now if you'll excuse me, my burrito is getting cold. Good luck!"

It was about that time when I started coming to. It was as if not even a second had passed. I was lying on my back behind the vent, and the door was starting to open. I heard a Vykker yell.

"Whoever's in there is about to be Fuzzle chow!"

I heard the footsteps and I started to panic. I didn't know what to do! But then something inside me said: "Use the chant, Job. Use the chant....... RIGHT FRIGGIN' NOW OR YOU'LL BE A DEAD MUD!"

So I started chanting. I didn't know how I knew it, I just did. The footsteps stopped suddenly.

"Hey, what the hell? What's that? Hey... HEY! Aaahh!"

Now it was time for some fun.

END OF CHAPTER 6.

How was it?

[Abe16]

That was absoulutly great! i'm glad you got your computer running.

[odd chick]

That chapter was excellent, Kimon. I can't wait to see what else you write. Job is a very interesting character as well.

[Kimon]

I've been busy lately and haven't had time to work on the fan fic, but here I am, and Job is making a triumphant return!

Chapter 7 - We're out!

Alright! I had just gotten that Vykker under my control. He was freakin' out, too. I could feel him all scared and confused, and I actually felt sorry for him. Then I remembered he was a Vykker. At that point I lost all my sympathy for him.

Anyway, I started searching his mind for a way outta this place. "Hmmm... nope, heavily guarded... Oh! No wait, that's a bathroom... Bingo! A drop chute!" I started 'researching' the chute and found that it was only guarded by 2 lazy interns. That was our way out.

So I (and by 'I' I mean the Vykker I possesed) started down the hallway to where the chute was. It wasn't that far, probably a couple hundred feet or so. When I got there, I found the Interns sleepin' on the ground. Lazy bastiches. Anyway, I was thinkin' about luring them away from the chute instead of shooting 'em up with the Snuzi. Ya know, for Quarma purposes. Then I remebered they were Interns. So I whipped out my gun and said:

"Guess who's back, Shmucks!"

Blamblamblamblamblamblamblamblamblamblamblamblamblamblambalmblam! When I was through with 'em, they looked like friggin' pincushions. Hehe. They had it comin'.

Anyway, I just pushed the bodies on into the chute and pressed the big read RELEASE button. Bad idea. Apparently, the RELEASE button triggers an alarm when it's used during night hours. That woulda been a tasty little bit of info about 5 seconds ago.

"BREEEEEEEEE! BREEEEEEEE! BREEEEEEEE! Kill the bastiches! Kill the bastiches! BREEEEEEEEE! BREEEEEEEE! BREEEEEEEE!"

Crap. Guards were comin', and they were comin' fast. We had to get movin'! So I unpossesed the Vykker (man, blowin' up a Vykker felt SO darn good), and I shook outta my trance. George was standin' next to me smackin' me in the head.

"What the hell was that? What were you doin'?"
"No time to explain! We gotta get this thing outta it's cage and skeddadle!"

Uh-oh. Another crisis. How was I gonna get this thing outta it's cage? Suddenly, the Shaman's voice popped into my head.

"Use the chant, Job, use the chant."

So I did. I started chanting and chanting, and when the chant energy got big enough, it shot outta my hands and blasted a hole in the cage! Apparently the monster already knew we were trying' to bust it out, cuz it just got out and looked at me expectantly.

"Alrighty, let's book!"

So the 3 of us (I didn't know where the others went) started running down the hall towards the chute. We all piled in, and the last thing I saw before I hit the RELEASE button was 2 biggy bro sligs with HUGE guns rounding the corner, along with some smaller slig poppers and about 4 Vykkers, all screaming at the top of their lungs.

"You can't get away, you sons of bi-"

Then I hit the button, and we flew out into the great unknown.

END OF CHAPTER 7.

Is that a triumphant comback, or what!?!?

[duveaux]

I don't really like reading from behind my computer, but I did it this time...

great work, kimon!

[Fuzzleman54321]

Yeah great work! Pleeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeeeee continue!

[Abe16]

That was a GREAT chapter! Please continue on, hehehehehe, (devililish laugh)

[General Dripikk]

These are really cool chapters, please continue.

[odd chick]

Wow, that was by far your best chapter yet, Kimon! I love your style of writing-you keep the story interesting and it doesn't get watered down ever! Keep up the good work!

[Kimon]

Well, thanks a lot you guys. I'm on vacation now (i'm using my family's computer) so the new chapter will probably be done in a week.

[Fuzzleman54321]

okie dokie! *Jumps up and down waiting*

[odd chick]

Ok. We'll be waiting.

[Abe16]

Me too!

[Kimon]

Hi Everybody! Here's the Ocho:

Chapter 8 - Monster

Finally, we had escaped! I pushed the button, and we were sailing to freedom! The only problem was, we didn't know where the heck we were. That soon became apparent. I personally was expecting to fly into some sewer and see some dead Fleeches or something. That wasn't what happened. I looked down and saw trees: big, green, pretty trees. It was great.

Wait a minute. How was I looking DOWN and seeing trees? Oh boy. It was just at that moment I realized there was about 300 feet of air between us and the trees. We were falling, and fast! Air was wooshing through my eyes, and it really hurt (I wasn't used to having wind in my eyes cuz, you know, the stitches). I thought to myself, "At least we won't die with those scumbag Vykkers."

Then I saw the water. Sweet, saving water would break my fall. Closer, closer, closer we got until the big SPLASHSMACK! George did a belly flop. Ouch.

Meanwhile, I was under the water, flailing around like a madmud, when I felt something lift me up. It was the monster! He was swimming me and George to the shore! What a nice guy... I mean girl.... I mean monkey monster thing. Anyway, he saved us.

When we got to shore, we shook off the water (George was tenderly rubbing his sides) and took a look at our surroundings. It was some kind of forest. I'm not sure why, but I felt strangely at home. I was even changing from a grayish brown to a muddy green. This was great. I turned to the monster and tryed to thank him.

"Uh... thanks, dude."

It looked at me like he knew what I was saying. I think that Shaman did something that let me communicate with the guy. It was cool. Then George started to speak up.

"Hey, Job, we have to save those other guys. There's still more in there!"
"You're right... but how? We don't even know where the ship is anymore. It flew away!"
"I dunno. Let's just find something to eat and sit down.
"Yeah, whatever."

While Georgie went off to find some food, I stayed with the monster.

We're gonna have to thing of a name for you, ya know. How 'bout something like Teok or Munster or... no those names suck. Hmmm...."

So for like 20 minutes I just sat there thinking up names, when finally I got it!

"Oh! I know, we'll call you Shilah! I think that fits you."

So came the name that you will be hearing throughout this story. Anyway, just about then George came back with some funny green berries and -PRAISE ODD- Spooce! We chowed down for a long time, and dozed off. Tomorrow we'd figure out what we were doing.

END OF CHAPTER 8.

[Abe16]

And Kimon makes another excellent chapter! That was great! I wanna hear more please!

[odd chick]

That chapter was fantastic, Kimon! Just keep on writing because this story gets better and better as it goes along!

[Kimon]

Alright I'm continuing the story. Thanks for the name, Oddchick.

Chapter 9 - Through The Forest

I slept peacefully in the great big forest that night. Something there made me feel at home. It was wonderful being with nature again. I hadn't been there for so long. Anyway, when I woke up, the sun was poking through the canopy, and the birdies were chirpin'.

I yawned, stretched, and went over to wake up George and Shilah. When I went over to George, he was muttering in his sleep. "Oooh, yeah, I'll have some more Spooce. Mmmm... thanks princess." I started chuckling. I still didn't know George too well, but I knew him well enough to scream "HOLY ODD THE SLIGS ARE COMING!!!!" in his ear. It was hilarious! He jumped up all scared and started screamin' like a little girl. Then, when he realized I was jokin' around, he got pissed and smacked me, and we rolled around on the forest floor for a while. This woke Shilah up, so we started to have some breakfast and talk about what we needed to do.

We sat around the campfire and talked for a while. We decided that we needed to head in the direction we last saw the airship travelling in. But the main problem was we didn't know how to catch up! But Shilah solved our problem. He indicated that he could carry both of us pretty fast through the forest. What a nice beast!

So we ate up the last of the Spooce and went on our way. Shilah was haulin' butt! He was really flying. The first couple of hours were great. We flew through the forest, seeing all sorts of ponds, creeks, big huge trees, and all sorts of cool nature stuff! We also saw birds, animals, and Fuzzles and stuff. It was great! After that though, it started to slow down. I could tell Shilah was getting tired, so I told him we could take a break. We rested for a little bit, found some stuff to eat drink, and started up again.

Shilah was still going slower than before. It was a few hours before he collapsed, and we still weren't even out of the forest. So I told the guys to start setting up camp. George tried to light a fire whlie I went out to get some grub. I was just walking throgh the woods, pickin' up whatever I could find, when I heard something in the bushes. The camp was out of earshot, I had deal with whatever it was myself. I was repeating the chant mantra in my head for when the thing came out. I was ready to take it on. The bushes started to wiggle a little more. Then they started to shake reall hard! I was getting scared. That thing was ready to charge me. Just as I started chant, the thing popped out of the bushes!

I was so scared. It was big, it was muscular, it was ready to rip me to shreds! It stepped into the light, and I saw that it was... an Elum! I switched from scared outta my mind to super-happy in a second. I was stunned. This guy would solve our travel problems. I went up to pet him, and he took an immediate liking to me. I grabbed all the food I brought and started leading him back to camp.

George was really excited. He started jumping for joy. He took the Elum, started petting it, feeding it, and cleaning it up. He even began to make a saddle for it. They were gonna be best buddies, I could tell.

I layed in my makeshift hammock (which I made out of leaves and some grass), looking up through the trees at the stars. It was a good day. Tommorow we'd get up and out of this forest (the prospect made me fell sad; I had grown to love this forest). Nothing could go wrong. Nothing at all.

END OF CHAPTER.

I hope you enjoyed it!

[Abe16]

HORRAy!!!!!!!!!! that was an awesome story! i was wondering if you were going to finish! I think you should name him,.....Rodney,Gary or Tony. hope i helped ya! ;D

[Kimon]

Thanks, Abe16. Although those are cool names, they don't really fit the character. I suppose it's hard to try to name something when you don't know what it looks like or what kind of personality it has (As the writer, I connect with my characters in ways that I can't express in words). I'll try to get a picture of him up soon. Maybe that'll help.

As for finishing the story, it's not gonna happen anytime soon. I just love writing this story, and I don't want to give up the characters before at least 20 chapters. I'm gonna drag this out as long as I can, trying to develop the characters and story in an interesting an coherent manner. So I'm guessing I'll keep this story up for at LEAST a few more months.

[Abe16]

You mean there's gonna be a sequel? Or are you gonna edit and erase The End continue? I look forward to it!!!

[Kimon]

Oh, whoops. I forgot to "OF CHAPTER" at the end. That was just the end of the chapter, not the entire story.

There, it's been edited.