Sorry for being lax in my moderation, but I need to sleep too, you know.
Splat: (Though this does apply to everybody) No more people with signs, please. Unless it's an organisation. I like a bit of variety, and a person with a sign could represent anything. For instance, to represent the fatty's lack of healthy eating you could have him chased by a salad. Great knight, by the way!
Enchilado: A similar point to before: NO RANDOM MONSTERS! They could apply to anything. If you can, replace it with something more specific.
Josh: May I suggest a dress, flowing hair, pointed hat, anything to make it look a bit more Medival? Though it may be funnyto assume the Knight has had to respond to duty halfway through... something. In which case:
Her servant chasing her with her clothes.
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