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Please, no more insults.
I thought the 'oops' bit was a bit confusing; the few times I got there, my momentum from the previous fall and my general instinct to try and make the jump meant I never got further. If you're supposed to go down there, I think you should make it clearer.
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(You're right, the insults were a bit much... I shall remove)
Okay, Looks like I have some editing to do..
I'll remove the oops and put a huge arrow.
That should help, unless you're schizophrenic and are hearing voices telling you to not go down there.
(That's how you Know I was procrastinating)