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01-29-2017, 11:43 AM
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Add floating crystal shards around it.
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The right tentacle needs a hat now
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Add floating crystal shards around it.
You weren't clear on what "it" was so they're around the pet rock.
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01-29-2017, 01:07 PM
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I think it's pretty clear that "it" refers to the thing you're drawing.
Also, you should add a clause in the OP, "I might honour your suggestion or just change it completely, who knows?!"
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I think it's pretty clear that "it" refers to the thing you're drawing.
Also, you should add a clause in the OP, "I might honour your suggestion or just change it completely, who knows?!"
But I also drew a pet rock. And bananas for hair. And a mass of tentacles for the body at your request. I lumped yours and STM's together because they were both similar and I didn't have room to do both of those slightly seperate things.
Either way please reread the rules if you're confused because I said in them that I am able to do exactly that.
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Stick a sonar in Roger's head.

Because Munch.
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Stick a sonar in Roger's head.

Because Munch.
Roger that.
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Add to the pet rock a hat with the words #makeoddworldgreatagain written on it
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Add to the pet rock a hat with the words #makeoddworldgreatagain written on it
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Make the lips scarlet red.
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Make the lips scarlet red.
Roger's lips were already red so I did the pet rock's instead.

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The sonar implant needs color to make it easily discernable.

I suggest a vibrant gold.
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The sonar implant needs color to make it easily discernable.

I suggest a vibrant gold.
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Make the lips scarlet red.
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Make the lips scarlet red.
I already did that.
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Can the right tentacle have a beard?!
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This thing looks like childhood innocence with his pets. Give it a halo floating above its head
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Can the right tentacle have a beard?!
Despot Time: Seperate (If there's more than one being in the image then seperate them.)
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Needs more scenery.

Could you draw some spiky mountains on the horizon?
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Needs more scenery.

Could you draw some spiky mountains on the horizon?
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Make the lips scarlet red.
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I already did that.
Make it green, then.

EDIT: Also, none of these cacti are shaped like a friend (Taking the slig art as a template)
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Make it green, then.

EDIT: Also, none of these cacti are shaped like a friend (Taking the slig art as a template)
here you go
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I believe coloring the floating crystals a soft, ethereal blue would have a pleasing effect.
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Make the lips scarlet red.
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I believe coloring the floating crystals a soft, ethereal blue would have a pleasing effect.
I'm running out of things to give scarlet red lips

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The mountains have nothing to speak with. They should have mouths with luscious lips.

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The mountains have nothing to speak with. They should have mouths with luscious lips.
If these peaks could speak. Oh wait they can.
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Make the mountain lips green.
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