OOC| I personally do not mind Splat's way of writing, and maybe you should consider giving some advice instead of just saying that you don't like it, Seriff. So i'm gonna do it for you.
Splat, try putting paragraphs between actions and dialogue
It's much easyer to read that way.
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Anni looked around, the whole place was filled with people.
"Wow, so many people joined, her were did that new slig go?" Anni said, and walked away.
"I don't kno- HEy! Where did you go??" Kix asked, but couldn't see Anni anywhere.
She shrugged her shoulders, and whent away. Inside the cafeteria, where no one was. She needed a break from all the newbies.
Anni on the other hand when to look for anyone she could bother. She found Stivik.
"Well, hello new guy." she said with a big grin, filled with exitement.
"You'd better watch out.... The angry slig and the maniac is behind that door" she said. (razer and Nick)
She showed off a big smile, examining the new slig.