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(ooc: I understand, Cyber-Slig. I just hope what I've been doing so far is fine...)

*Groll goes to find #7 slig in the Security Office.*

Groll:*Knocks on door*"Hello? Anybody in there?"
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OOC: sry i wrote the wrong name i meant Ixon not Sligslog.
i just wanted a cool way to just have to worry about 1 char.
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noe: i just got saved by a scrab! wow! (sees a slig skeloten) this is the poor guard it picked on!
(random vyker appears and brings the chunks of scrab meat and the sligs skeloton)
vyker: now to create life!
noe: good luck, now, to get back to the boss.
fuzzle: me me mee meme me!
noe: who?
(a whole pack of fuzzles appear)
you want to work? i don't think you can. sorry.
fuzzles: (sadly) me me meee!
(they follow noe towards the boss's door)
noe: ok, here we come, the boss's door!
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Slislog saw Noe and the fuzzels: Hey what are these doing here?
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noe: they're my loyal arm...ah....friends. they want to help work aswell. i'd try introducing them with the ratz, but i don't think it would go so well.
fuzzles:me me me me, mee me meememe!
noe: well, be in the door shortly. don't get impatient now, will you fuzzles?
fuzzles: me me me.
noe: good!
(the fuzzles see a piece parimite pie and run towards it)
noe: hey, come back here! here we go again!
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Slislog: Hey thats mine!
He ran after them.
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ooc: sorry i kept you waiting, man loads has happened in the last day!

Stivik is one of the few sligs clever enough to see the intelligence in this (you have to be in his line of work). For a few seconds he's slightly surprised but he also knows that this new idea won't look well on the Cartel's regime.
After a few seconde he regains his composure: "Ok, cheers. Where's the security office?"
Stivik takesdirections from Arnie and leaves the office, stepping carefully around a hoarde of fuzzles and an idiot mud trying desperately to control them. "Hey, mud, MUD! You can probably go see the boss now."
5 minutes later Stivik has regained his composure and is knocking on the door to Slig #7's office.
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noe: (to fuzzles) now you stay here. (quickly eats the parrimtie pie)
fuzzles: (angrily) me meeee!
noe: oh, sorry! (he knocks on the door and comes in)
(the fuzzles stream into the room)
noe: these are my freinds, the fuzzles, they wan't a job. any way, i was wondering what you thought about my position in the new job, i can show you my qualifications if you like. i am a breeder, animal care taker, animal teacher, spooce grower and chef. whatever you want me to be, right now i've just been guarding places for the sligs.
(hears a machine explode and a smell of wonderful food come into the room. the fuzzles hop off.)
noe: what was that all about?
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ooc: Splat please dont write with that text its annoying.

(Sligslog heard the bang too)
Sligslog: What the...?
(he saw some sligs and muds running past him.)
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OOC| I personally do not mind Splat's way of writing, and maybe you should consider giving some advice instead of just saying that you don't like it, Seriff. So i'm gonna do it for you.
Splat, try putting paragraphs between actions and dialogue It's much easyer to read that way.

---IC---

Anni looked around, the whole place was filled with people.

"Wow, so many people joined, her were did that new slig go?" Anni said, and walked away.

"I don't kno- HEy! Where did you go??" Kix asked, but couldn't see Anni anywhere.

She shrugged her shoulders, and whent away. Inside the cafeteria, where no one was. She needed a break from all the newbies.

Anni on the other hand when to look for anyone she could bother. She found Stivik.

"Well, hello new guy." she said with a big grin, filled with exitement.

"You'd better watch out.... The angry slig and the maniac is behind that door" she said. (razer and Nick)

She showed off a big smile, examining the new slig.
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OOC:i meant that the text was so BIG!
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OOC| Big??? In which way??? Don't tell me that you can't take big posts...
So now everyone has to make their post small, just to please you??? Now please explain yourself, before i make more judgements about you...
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ooc:I mean that the letters are so thick and has big size!
understand now?
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OOC: Uh, actually on my screen all my writing is exactly the same size as yours and everyone elses. I'm not quite sure what your problem is, maybe you should check your monitor settings.

Anyway, cheers T, I'll keep that in mind.


Stivik: "Oh, er, are they?"

Stivik slowly reaches down and presses the play button on his box.

Stivik: "So you aren't happy with the sligs around here? The Boss told me this is where I should go to meet the head of security, #7 Slig. How do you find him? Your boss told me the sligs round here are ordered not to attack the workers without good cause."
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OOC: the 517th post looks like the letter are bigger and thicker.
but it could have been my comp too...
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518 wasn't me, it was mudling.
517 was me but that ones perfectly normal.
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Sligslog walked around hysterically, trying to find something to do...

Sligslog: maybe i can tame those fuzzels that mud were trying to control, i got the job as a tamer so...
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#7 Slig: "That's right. The workers don't deserve the beating here. Only if you have a reason, then you can act more agressively. But it's rare that you have to. The employees are doing their job. Hey, I know it sounds weird, but things are done this way. And I think the boss is doing well. He respects the workers and they respect him, too."



*Rick wakes up in the RR*

Rick: "OK, up and away."

*goes out of the RR*

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he ran to where i had seen that mud, and asked him; hey i can help ya controlling these....things.... im a tamer!
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"Oh...." Anni said, and looked at #7 Slig.

A small grin showed on her face.

"Well, then i'd like to report Nick for unnessesary violance against Muds. And especially Math. This guy obviously has something against Math. And.. and he tried to strangle me." she said, and looked at nick who obviously was in the room too.

Razer stared at Anni and Nick in disbelievement.

"Wait... eren't you the mudokon-lover?" he asked confused.
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Nick overhears Anni and steps out of the room. He eye's the new slig for a moment but decides not to say anything yet.
He gently grabs Anni's shoulders and directs her into the security office.

Nick to the slig: Eh... don't take her to seriously. She's just a kid, and a whacky one to. You know... big meat factory... no place for a kid.

He gave him a quike grin then shut the door.
He planted Anni in a chair and leaned against a wall.

Nick: What the hell are you doing! You nuts! Your gonna get me killed!
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"So what? You were gonne get me killed, right? Consider this payback." she said, and felt the urge to stomp on his feet or something.

"Oh... And i don't think they'd want to kill you, i mean you've been a good worker, right? They would most likely punish you, if anything." she then continued and rolled her eyes, "You better get yourself out of this mess..."

Then she turned around to leave the room.
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#7 Slig: "To strangle you? Well, we have to figure that out. Tell Nick that you two have to come back later this day. I'll call the boss too, he can solve these situations. We'll hear your stories about the case and we'll decide."

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"Yes, sure whatevah. And of course the slig will win...." she said, while she went away.

She hadn't really expected anything big to come out of this, she just wanted to scare Nick a bit.

Razer still looked at Nick, and then at Anni.

"You? Strangled her? And why am i not allowed to beat her then? This is unfair." He said.
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noe: the fuzzles, yeah, you can tam them. but for what? it seems that they're not allowed to work.
fuzzles: me me meee meee!
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just so you can have some pets if you like...
its my job so i will do it for free.
shall i take them to the sloughter p... uhm...taming yard then?
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noe: ok, justlet them do work, run the machinery, i don't think they're allowed, but they're getting a bit too eager.
fuzzles: meeeeee!
noe: they don't trust you! wait, i'll talk to them.
(fuzzle huddle)
fuzzles: meee me me!
noe:lets go then
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"i wonder why, i wonder how!"

Sligslog: awww, cmon ill slought...tame them.
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noe: they're all yours. now, about that job...
(knocks on the boss's door)
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(ooc:Erm... did nobody see my post? Nevermind, it'll fit in here as well...)

*Groll goes to find #7 slig in the Security Office.*

Groll:*Knocks on door*"Hello? Anybody in there?"
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