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Bart enters the Exectutive Office to finally see Arnie. In his excitement, he forgets all about the attack.
Bart: Arnie! I want to talk to you about a job, and I won't take no for an answer!

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

Raid's ... uh ... raid on the invading mudokons seems to be a big help to the large BigBro firing at them from below. He is feeling pretty confident ... when a stray spoocebolt stabs into his motor. Raid feels pressure in his chest ... and then nothing.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

The mudokon that shot at the devilish slig in the harness with guns mounted on it laughed. The explosion was spectacular--what with all the firepower it held.
In the end, the slig flying it didn't have much of a body left.
With the air threat (at least partially) taken care of, the invaders began to regroup, and turned back against their attackers.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

Logan slowly made his way back to the kitchen ... it was almost time to set up lunch. Sure, there was an attack ... but lunch was still scheduled.

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hey guys.....

name:rob

species:slig

gender:male

age:30

position:an ex-slig marine(the highest ranking for a soldier),rob was the leader of a squad of six,samual was second in command and is robs best friend.

story:rob was sent to a maximum security prison which is in the forbiddion sector of the factory,rob was sent there due to some events which happend durring a mission.rob has waited 5 years for reveange,and today rob is freed from the prison for serving his time.

personality:rob used to be a bright person before he was inprisoned.....but now it's like hes a different person.

appearance:has a scar on his face and a long scar on his chest,he also has a tatto which goes from his left shoulder to the palm of his hand.rob has old and rusty equipment(not for long)due to his years in prison.

rob was sitting in his dark and dingy cell,the doors slid open and a security guard stood there in the doorway.

security guard:it's time.....

rob:geez.....took you long enough

rob slowly stood up and walked to the door,there was a loud thud as rob walked due to his old metal pants and gear which was rusty after his 5 years in prison.

the security guard came to a halt,he spoke into a voice box,the door slowly opend.
rob walked through the door,

security guard:see you soon rob.....

rob:don't coun't on it

rob walked up to the warden's desk,a yound slig was sitting in the seat,he spoke up.

warden:here you go rob.......

rob:hope you didn't take anything

rob was handed some key cards to his barracks,amoury and other various things,he was also handed his old gun.rob headed to the door.

rob: *mumbling*time for some revenge....

warden:what was that?

rob: oh.....nothing

rob walked out the door and headed down the hall off to the barracks

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can someone tell me what's happening so far........cause i'm too lazy to read it.......theres a cookie in it for you......
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(occ: welcome to the rpg brewmaster, the story in the rupturefarms, read the thread first and the rules...)

*Dave wathces the giant flying machine...*

Dave: Cool!

*Dave activated the rotors and fly out from the building...*

-------BELA&STEVE----------

Bela: one hundred and thirty-four...

Steve: twenty-nine...

Bela: Huhh... Whats that?

Steve: Huhh?

*Béla and Steve watches the Flying Destroyer...*

Both: Whoa cool!

*Dave fires a lot of rockets to the muds*

Dave: Eat this!

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(if someone want's to control samual then i'll give him to you.......oh and can we control other peoples characters or not?)

rob reached the barracks,he pulled out his key card and slid it into the control panel,the old and rusty door opend,rob walked in and saw six sligs,the six sligs which were in robs team.the sligs lined up and saluted.the six sligs names were boris,jack,goerge,yuri,arthur and finally samual.

boris:welcome back sir!

rob:thanks...it's good to be back.......and it's good to see all of you again

rob walked over to the armoury and opened the door,the room was full of top of the line new weapons and gear,rob walked in,he closed the door and searched for good equipment,he took some pants and changed them,he took a infared,nightvision mask and changed it with his old one...and finally he grabbed a slig assault rifle,the latest one for that matter,it had a laser sight and grenade launcher,rob opend the door and walked out.

voice box:rob.......please report to admiral frank's office immediatly

rob shot the voice box and walked out,he walked up the corridor and into admiral frank's office.

frank:well if it isn't rob.........

rob:well if it isn't the reason i was put in jail

frank:that was then this is now!

rob:it was five years!

frank:well if you want to go back then just keep complaining

rob:why the hell did you call me here.....cause i'm not in the mood for a lecture(sp?)

frank:i need you......theres a giant mudokan army which ain't happy with us...

rob:am i gonna get paid anything

frankne thousand moolah per day....

rob:for a thousand moolah a day i'd kill anything......but remeber i'd happily kill you for free.

with those last words rob walked out the door and back to the barracks.

rob:gear up guys.....looks like we have some work to do

slig team:YES SIR!
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(occ: no...)

*Lot of mudokons died in the explosions...*

Dave: Yeah, I love this baby!!!

----------FMF---------

Bob: All you! Retreat! We attack again later... I have a plan!

*And the army dissapears in the mountain...*

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RUPTUREFARMS 38:78 PM DAMAGE: 38% MOOLAH NEEDED FOR REPAIR: 3 000 000

*Peter readed this sign...*

Peter: 3 000 000 moolah? I must buy this facility! #8! Where is Arnie?

#8: I don't know, sir!

Peter: Find it!

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rob and his team walked outside rupturefarms,they saw all the muds retreating over the mountain.

rob:they won't get away that easy......

the squad ran after the muds,the sligs came to a fork in the road and they set a trap for the muds,samual make trip wires on the two paths and then come with me,george,arthur,jack,boris and yuri take up flanking positions at the tree line.

the muds had come running and neared the trip wire.

rob:FIRE!!

all the sligs opend fire on the muds with bullets simply tearing through them,the muds fell like flys,then there was silence,there was only the sound of flys gathering around the dead corpses,the remeaining muds dropped there weapons and surrenderd,robs men tied up the prisoners and headed back to rupterfarms.

(because i'm sick of writing my team members names all the time i will now refer to them as numbers samual #2,george #3,arthur #4,boris #5,yuri #6)
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(Will... the entire point of role playing is that you never know what someone els is gonna do... so you can't say: I started this war so im gonna end it. I think things will works out a little diffrently...)

Nick reached the security office and took the seat. He let his eye's glide over the monitors, all useless message's damage reports, door status, camera's...
And then a message that gave a smile of relief:

Requesting Elite Force's from Slig Barracks: Incoming

Nick looked for the microphone, then set it to factory width, with exeption of the stockyards becouse the muds where there.

Nick: Attention all employees! Attention all employees! For those that didn't know, RuptureFarms is under attack! We are leading serieus damage. Source of the attack is at the stockyard. We have team of elite SSF (OOC: Slig Security Forces) coming in from Slig Barracks to assist us. Till they are here, every employee hold off any attacks at the stockyard gate's.

Nick sets the message to repeat then goes to check on the camera's. Then he saw the ESSF fighting outside RF, near the mountains.
He changes the microphone settings to the region.

Nick: Attention ESSF! Good to see you are already here! Make your way to the nearest entrance and I'l give you a short briefing...
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um.....

rob walked up the main gate at rupturefarms,they opend the main door and pushed all the muds in,robs team took up defense positions at the door in case of another attack.

rob walked over to one of the prisoners.

rob:shut up!

rob hit the mud with the butt of his assault rifle

rob:stupid muds........

rob kicked the mud in the stomach,he then took out a cigar and waited.....
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*Dave going to land with the FD...*

Dave: Lets see...

*Dave pushed a button...*

Supersonic speed activated! Enjoy your vacation!

Dave: What!!!

*Dave flyed to the mountains, he saw the retreating mudokon army...*

Dave: I must stop this!!!

*Pushed a button again, and Dave... crashed to a swamp...*

Dave: Uhhhh.... again...

*Dave looked at the message in a tree*

Warning! You have entered the Ogdesin Swamp(r)! Watch out for Ogdesins(r)!

Dave: Auuhhh....

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Halije: *Gets to the executive office, wheezing*
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Logan hears the announcement (All employees fend off invasion) just as he finishes setting up for the lunch hour. He rolls his eyes.
Logan: "... okay."

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*Dave searching for an exit from the swamp...*

Dave: What a mess... I must find a way...

*Dave heards a sound...*

???: Sqqrrruuueee

Dave: What? what who'that?

*Heard again from the swamp*

???:Sqqrrruuueee

Dave: Haha... That's funny... haha... who's that?

???: Sqqeeuuuurrrrr

*And Dave seens a creature, a creature with ballhead, three... claws (like the sligs mouth), Two giant scrab like leg and a... fin... that was an Ogdesin(r)!*

Dave: Hiya Ogdi! Nive to meet ya... Stand back!!!

*Dave shooted the ogdesin...*

Dave: Got'cha!

*Dave heard a lot of ogdesin voice again...*

Dave: Uhhh, man, somebody HEEEEEELLLPP!

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rob put out his cigar as he heard a gunshot in the mountains

rob:sigh......#1,2,3 come with me......#4,5,6 stay here

rob headed towards the mountain,he took cover behind a rock,he peerd out the side,he could see a slig.......who is having some trouble.

rob: *wishpering* ok take flanking positions.....on my signal fire

little laser dots were flying around and took postion on their targets,suddnly rob called out and in seconds the creatures were on the ground in their own blood.

rob walked over to the slig.
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Dave: Thanks man! Thanks!

*Dave and the others walked back to rupturefarms...*

------S&B------

*Béla went to the all-in-1 vendo...*

Talking Vendo: A Zap Cola. 1.25 moolah!

*Bela drinks the cola...*

Béla: ahhh... so the FMF and the army returned to the mountain?

Steve: Yes...

Béla: Uhh... ok, I go to sleep...

Steve: Good night!

----P----

Peter thought: Where is that @&*_!? #8! Ok I find that Arnie alone!

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ooc: That's a lot of work there. You have to continue without me in the next 7 days because I'm going on holiday. This whole stuff with the Mudokon army is a bit confusing now, we should concentrate on the factory.



Arnie: "OK, the place is safe now. We'll talk later, it's late now. You can go and sleep if you want. Come on, Otto."

*yawns*

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(oocI could'nt brother to read the it all)

*Ade walk's out on top of a roof. He is out side looking a moon*

Ade: I just got passed that Slog, when the strangerst thing i saw, a biiig moon was before me, and it face was a... gabbit leg.
Then i slipped down the roof.

*slips down the roof*

Ade: And then smashed my box.


*smashed box*

Ade: Then some big eye said i was dead (Uhhh?.. ok)

*Ade spins around*

Ade: He told me my face, was the ugylest of the rest.
Hey!

*continues*

Ade: Thenhe... uhh... forgot.

*Wake's up and sees something wild*

Ade: Whoaaaa.. 5O% off Hot wax!

*Walks, then run's, faster,faster bang's him self agianst the wall*

Ade: Ouch... why dose these thing'd happen!
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Bart: "Wha? Go to sleep!? You're kidding me! You ... I ... but ... urgh ... whatever. I'll be here first thing tomorrow morning!"

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

Logan went back to his room to go to bed. It was late, after all.

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occ: I agree with that HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA my stomach hurts HAHAHAHAHA

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(hey hey! )

Ade: Ooo i'm starving! Well gotta to lunch.

*Ade Goe's ito the cafe*

Ade: Hmm.. i'l have one Hotslog and a Meep burger please.

Server: Would you like Stang's with that?

Ade: Yes please!

*Other poor's mud's sees he is eating meat*

Poor mud's: :O :O :O

Ade: What??

*Ade's start's chewing*
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(occ: WHAT???... nevermind... i don't had now ideas but join to the new RPG "Created a monster" by Cyber-Slig, its a good idea! Now I going to sleep, and tomorrow I try to continue write my fanfic, "Team to Moon" and I try to translate it!)

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(ooc: Back and weady to RPG! )

*Go's to clean some signes, again*

Ade: Hmmm.. "New SoulStorm brew! made with Mudokon swet. 102% extra fat!"

*Poster. gasp*

Ade: Brew is made from our swet! this is bad, wadda do now?

Mud: How about get us otta here!

Ade: Ahh ok, wait still!

Mud: Uhhh ok! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaa *SPLAT!*

Ade:??? i don't even know how you did that.

*Look's around with his eye's*

Ade: Yeah...
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(occ: Oddish: you are thinking in those... things or they're just come?)

*8# walking in the corridors... seens a Shrink*

Shrink: Everybody wants to eat you!

8#: Really?

Shrink: Uhh... you're not Abe, sorry...

*8# walking... walking... walking... falls from a ledge... he has a vision...*

Weirdos: Abeee! You must got to save the mudokons! The glu...

Man: Cut! What you guys doin' it here!

Cameraman: What this camera workin'?

#8: What? Freeze!

*shhots everybody... wakes up from dream...*

#8: What?

*Walkin' walkin'*

#8 to himself: One time, we are alone... But, it's before they're not sending webs but pay some moolah to our queen... now, I find anybody... my name is Eight and I uhh... use my voice... uhh... but I find anybody... untill this night... I don't find anybody...

*Walking, walking...*

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(ooc: I think them up, and i like'em, then post'em)

*Ade scrub's*
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(Occ: Ok, back to the normal Rpg!)

*Steve and Bela wakes up... they seen a glukkon coming...*

Glukkon: Bela and Steve! We know you're defended well the factory, but you must pay for the damage of the ball car and the zulag 5. You must pay 400 000 moolah! Good bye!

Bela and Steve: 400 000!

Bela: What we do now?

*Steve thinking...*

Steve: I have an idea! You have the Corion Onion recipe, right?

Bela: Yeah...

Steve: So why we sold the recipe to the bosses?

Bela: I don't know...

Steve: C'mon, we must get some moolah!

Bela: uhhh... ok... but, they don't need some meat to try it?

Steve: You right! We need some Corion meat! Let's go!

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This RPG is screwed up... thanks to certain persone's (Im not gonna mention name's, I think we all know what Im talking about.). I might be back when things get back on the right track... its just to messy now...
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(occ: I know who is they: me and Oddish (especially me) so sorry and back to the Rpg!)

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OOC:
I don't think it's that the ideas are entirely bad ... its mostly that people seem to be doing their own separate things, and there is waaay too much going on. This is an RPG. Singular. Everyone that participates should be following on the same storyline. It really takes away from things if everyone is doing something completely unrelated.

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(ooc: i alway's had my own path since i first came on this RPG)

Ade: This is starting to get boring... i'll better find Arnie.

*Get's going*

Ade: Hello? is anyone in here. Hello!?
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