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11-27-2006, 12:24 AM
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Ralph left the grinding area through to where the stairs were, but decided against going up them, instead going through the door on the other side. Walking through the passages for a short time he found signs pointing out the different rooms and decided to head for the cafeteria; there should be someone who could help him there.

As he came in the doorway he took a quick glance around the room, taking note of who was there. Hmm, must be my lucky day, he thought, seeing the glukkons there. The older, more experienced looking one was most likely the boss, so walking straight to the table where the glukkons were standing he looked directly at Arnie and spoke,
"Hello there! I hope I am not interrupting anything of importance, but I'm a new arrival here and I understand that around here, even the mudokons come directly to you to seek employment. You are the boss of this factory, correct? If so, I'm here to offer my services."
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11-27-2006, 07:38 AM
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IC: As they continued, Sturg grew bored, and since he saw nothing around and they were in a hidden area, he decided to ask a question "Hey, since this is meant to be passages only us 'anaimals' know about, are they used often for raids, or anything? And how much farther are we going?"
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11-28-2006, 05:23 AM
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Anni was puzzled. "Why are you suddenly so interested in robots and stuff Kix? Anyway, for now it'd be quicker and easier to just go to the kitchen, and maybe we can get Somi too help us look around the stockyards later."

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Somi replied to Sturg, "Sometimes a few of us come up to steal food, when we can't find enough to catch. But most of us don't want to upset the industrials; they mostly just leave us alone when we don't do anything. Paramites once tried to attack the factory and they just killed us all. I was a baby then, and a mudokon, the one we're looking for now, saved me." Somi had already spied on the kitchen and the cafeteria, and hadn't seen Anni. "It might take us a while to find her, so have patience."
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11-28-2006, 06:36 AM
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IC: "Sure, tell me if you need something." Sturg tried to sit quietly, but the smell of easily accessible food was hard to resist "That food is really far too tempting..."
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11-28-2006, 06:34 PM
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Praetyre waited for the Mudokon to follow him. After a couple of minutes, he stuck his head out of the hub door and yelled;
"Hey, you coming?"
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11-29-2006, 05:40 AM
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Wash was leaning over Linc's still form. He glanced sideways at the monitor, and the Vykkers and Interns standing around, watching intently. He raised a fist and thumped Linc's chest, immediately waking him.
"Hey everyone, I'm back!"
*Put your glad rags on and join me, hon/We'll have some fun when the clock strikes one/We're gonna rock around the clock tonight/We're gonna rock, rock, rock, 'til broad daylight...*
Wash Straightened his leather jacket and made a double thumbs-up.
"Heyyyyy!"

"Hey, you coming?"

Oh crap...

Wash stood up, knocking the bench over. He stumbled over it and hurried after the Vykker. That was a peculiar turn.
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11-29-2006, 11:45 AM
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Praetyre watched the Mudokon come to him. He then began to walk up the stairs and towards the labs.
"To quote a certain terrorist; follow me" he said while walking up the stairs.
Praetyre then opened the upper hub door and walked up to the lab door.
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OCC: Sorry i've been gone so long guys, it's just my internet has been down a long time. I don't think i'll try to rejoin, since I'll probably just complicate things. Just making it official Mech is not in this anymore, even though you probably forgot about him.
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11-30-2006, 09:34 AM
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ooc: Mitsur, you don't have to leave, I thought you had some potential. If your internet is alive again, you can either start again with your character, join again and ignore what happened before, or make a new character to bring in.
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11-30-2006, 03:21 PM
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Praetyre knocked on the lab door, and called out to the Mudokon. He was obviously somewhat out of it due to a recent traumatic experience, and as such Praetyre exercised a careful, parental attitude.
"Don't feel bad. I've had the experience of a friend getting heavily injured too. Hell, my aunt was killed in the Lab 13 incident. So don't think you're alone. Come along."
Praetyre turned to the door;
"Sir, I've got the Mudokon's friend. You can let me in. Is our patient okay?"
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OCC: Ok, I guess i'll get back in then. I know you guys'll probly accuse me of trying to get attention for my character, but i'm not. Ok, here we go! Leaving off from Mech's discovery in the freezer! Heres the previous part, since it's so far back:

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Mech shifted uncomfortably in the small corner of the train he had stowed away on. Coal dust and dirt flew into his eyes and mouth, making him cough and blink quickly. He hated this, but it was the only way to get into Rupture Farms without alerting the bastard who had done this to him. Mech closed his eyes and tried to sleep. But it wouldn't come. He was so worked up about this lead that he hadn't even been able to take a nap.

After what seemed a lifetime, the train finally started to slow down. It came to a screeching halt, send more dust and dirt everywhere. Mech grimanced, and pulled himself up. Looking around carefully, he made sure the way was clear. Satisfied, he jumped off the train and onto the hard yet cool concrete. He pulled a katana halfway out of it's sheath, and slowly walked to the nearest door, which was marker MEAT PROCESSING LEVEL 7. He opened the door and quickly back away, but no one jumped out. He took a tentative step into it, and, gaining confidence, strode into the abyss-like door, and a pair of auto-lights flicked on. Scrab meat hung on grisly hooks while a slight chill permeated the air. Mech could see his breath. At the end of the room, another steel door waited. Mech grabbed the handle, and heaved. The door clanged back, revealing the horrible sight within.
Still OCC: Ok, now to start the next part.

Mech reeled back from the freezer door, clutching his stomach, which was threating to forcibly and disgustingly eject it's contents. He eyes burned the sight in front of him into his brain forever. Letting out the first adult scream of terror he'd ever had, Mech slammed shut the door, and pushed his back against it, breathing heavy. He shivered invoulintarily, and dashed away from the door, and turned back toward it when he was roughly 10 feet away. The rusted-metal, frosted door glimmered innocently in the dull lamp glow only an industrial section can have.

Mech stared at it. The door continued it's illusion of innocence. Mech stared. This silent Steef vs. Innocent Door continued for many moments, until Mech finally averted his eyes. He walked away from the door, still facing it. He didn't want that thing at his back until he was a good 50 feet from it. He went into the nearest corridor, and read the sign above him:

RUPTURE FARMS STORE ROOMS

What the hell Mech thought. Anything's better than the door again.

He opened the store room door, paused, and looked at the inconspicous freezer door again.

Something behind it thudded against the door, and the light above it went out, plunging it into darkness. Metal being bent reached Mech's ears, but he was already running, halfway through store room #1.

The thing behind The Door gave an indescribable sound, and subsided.

OCC: You never will find out completly what is behind That Door- at least from my writing- but rest assured, Mech will see it again.
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OOC: I might of made an unintended reference to "the thing behind the door" when Praetyre talked (last post on page 10) about the Slig that got in an accident and became vomit inducingly hideous. Interesting..
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Wash looked upon his friend for the first time since he was wheeled into the O.R. He had never seen anyone with so many machines connected to him. Tubes, wires, linking up to displays that bleeped out of sync. Linc himself lay still, only his slow breathing indicating that he was alive at all. He was very pale and gaunt, looking very ill. Wash looked uncertainly at the Vykker who had brought him.
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ooc: Mitsur, so as to avoid confusion, I just want to remind you that W@RF is set after AO. The factory has been reopened by a glukkon called Arnie who is a reasonably nice guy. Mudokons are well treated. I just want to make sure that's clear before things start going wrong. BM got a bit confused by that and it caused him to struggle for a bit.

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Dek looked on in a hopeful mood as Wash stood over Linc. "Come on, wake him up already!"
He turned to Praetyre. "I asked you to get me some food. Where is it?"
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12-01-2006, 12:28 PM
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Praetyre was surprised at the speed the Mudokon went in and the door opened, but followed. He then heard his superior inquire about food.
"I'm sorry sir, but I can't recall such an order. If you did, then I'm sorry. But it seems this chap called Arthur has made an absolutely smashing recipe for soup that Slap enjoys. Of course, that's designed for those poor souls who have cruelly been denied the delights of opple and Scrab pies. So us Vykkers might not enjoy it as much."
Praetyre turned to the grim looking Mudokon.
"After I used my Palm o' Pain, his heart briefly started beating and solved the blood pressure problem. However, it then died, and I could not get him up with pushes. My superior came in and suggested a pacemaker operation. And after getting Krik out of the room, giving myself a mild injury, and putting your friends taken out bits in a jar, both of us trying to motivate him in several ways, and me going to you, here we are. And sorry again if you heard what I said to Slap. My superior and I are quite competent."
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12-01-2006, 02:04 PM
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OOC: Err sorry I haven't been posting a lot. Lots of homework to do and that kind of stuff.

IC: Kix down on the ground thinking about what she had been doing these past few moments. Suggesting guard tower as a source of water, worrying intensily about Anni, and thinking about this escaping Mudokon. All of which are a bit nutty for her to consider doing. She started to mist her eyes and replied to Anni, "I'm, I'm, I'm just worried about you guys. I thought Snoozers could help us clear wildlife out of the Stockyards, since Jim is scared of Sligs. And the whole guard tower thing, I just believed that we could bring the hose here, and we could use it every time we come here. There, the garden could be worked on in minutes, instead of spending about an hour trying to control the garden, we would use only 15 minutes. And guys, you might not like to here this, but a Mudokon today has disturbed me. I don't know his name, but I do know he is brownish grayish, and wants to save everyone here from slavery in Rupture Farms. And I got reminded of the time Buddy died two years ago in these Stockyards. I don't think you were around when that happened. I just didn't want that kind of loss happen again. But if it makes you feel any better, I will go to the kitchen, all right?"
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Slap hated to tell any of his war stories at the Vykker Labs he grew up at. Most of them leave people throwing up or passing out over the horror and gore that had happened there. In fact, he only gets a little dizzy from those subjects these days, since he is use to them. Slap tried to ignore them, but he could help but feel pity for all of those sad souls that were tortured in manners that are illegal in his mind.

He waited there, thinking that Arthur was going to respond. He continued to think of ways that Molt can remain in the factory. Prehaps just a small talk with him will do. He continued to think about this subject while imagining of the pain Molt must of gone through. Prehaps worse than the Slig Praetyre had talked about.
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Anni knew about Buddy, and she had the book he had made with a list of all the times he'd tried to escape. "Don't worry, Kix. I wouldn't try to escape now Stivik's gone. And I would tell you if I did. It'd be a lot quicker to go to the kitchen, and I don't like those vykker's robots. Anyway, do you know how to control them? You and Dean can go to the kitchen now, and get some rubber pipe or something, and when we see Somi she can show us to the tower and we can set up a pipe from there to here so there's always water." She was getting a bit excited by her ideas now. "And if we can find a pump or something to put on the end of the pipe, we can leave the water on at the tower all the time and only turn it on when we need it. If we tlk to Arnie, I think he'd get someone to help us!"

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Somi was currently on her way upstairs, rather more slowly than she would have liked, because having Sturg with her meant she couldn't just climb her web and go up that way. So they were winding their way up slowly in the wrecked part at the back of Rupture Farms. Somi was planning to look in the R+R and have a quick glance in the grinders. "Almost at the top now," She called cheerfully to the meech behind her.
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Kix began to smile after hearing what Anni had talked about. At least her new ideas were getting Anni to think and allow them to plan for the future. Kix grinned at her excitement in the end, and thought that she did good. She replied happily, "OK, that's great. And actually, I don't know how to control a Snoozer. But I guess Arnie could set us up with someone other than a Slig. Maybe if he is still in the kitchen we can go talk with him. For now, let's look for that plastic pipe, Dean. Let's roll."

Kix grabbed her bucket and went off.
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Isaac was disappointed by the reaction of the Mudokon he just saw. It didn't really appeal to him much that some Mudokon was stuck up and selfish to no end. In fact, 2/3 of the Mudokon here that he met were just that. He tried to think that those Mudokon were probably just the only ones that were like that, but he didn't know for sure. He just had to wait and see.

Isaac roamed the Grinders as he was puzzled on that subject. He didn't believe that if these Grinders could look this new that it didn't have barrels. As he searched for the barrels, he saw one its side. He smiled to himself in victory, but when he went over to it, he saw that there was a ledge. And on the ledge showed a whole area of barrels. It was marvalous, as he saw Sam carrying some of them. Sam was carrying them over to a conveyor belt, just waiting to be used for production. It was set in a manner where it was below another conveyor belt that duped food into it. But that conveyor belt by far was not even twitching. Maybe that was because Matthew was in control of the belt, and was waiting for meat to come by onto his belt. And as he could see, that one had a sign gleeming above it, 'Scrab Legs'. If that one was just for one product, what did other products get? Isaac pondered on this, as he found the answer, for there was far more belts, just like the next one. And they all seemed to be flowing into belts that exited the Grinders and into the Production Lines. As he could see, Isaac didn't believe that eight Mudokons were going to keep Rupture Farms running.

Isaac was trying to imagine that maybe new Mudokons were coming any minute. Maybe they could help him or his brothers package these products to make the Glukkon here proud. Yet he was losing hope. But he guess they had to deal with the lack of activity. He grabbed his barrel and set off to the meat saw he needed to go to.

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Mech was still running when he reached the third storeroom. Then, when his lungs were about to burst, he collapsed to the dusty floor. The crates on the walls watched him impassively as Mech struggled for breath. Finally, though, he managed to sit up. Even though The Door was far behind him, he was still terrified it would somehow release the beast inside. Mech forced himself to calm down.

He took stock of his condition, and noticed he had somehow ripped off a chunk of his synth-skin. The metal circuits and plates beeped and glowed in the darkness of the store room. Mech ruffled through his sack o' crap (as he liked to call it), and grabbed his flashlight. He turned it on and set it so it was pointing at the ceiling. Then he grabbed a can of insta-fire (Just like the fire that survival expert you saw on TV made!), and lit it. He turned off the flashlight, not wanting to waste precious batteries.

As he sat by the warmth, Mech began to doze off. Strange figures and voices shouted at him. Releasing himself into the flood, Mech slipped toward sleep.

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The insta-fire was almost out when Mech was jerked awake. Shaking away the sleep, Mech grimanced. A bad taste was in his mouth, and he was still groggy. Shouldn't of let myself sleep in the middle of the day. he thought, and pushed himself up. He grasped his katanna's handle to reasure it was still there, and started to make his way through the maze of boxes.
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Praetyre turned to the Mudokon, making sure he wasn't drifting off again. He spoke to reassure and guide.
"Do not feel bad. Judging by the scars on him, I'm sure he's pulled through worse before. All we need is for you to motivate him by talking to him, by convincing him that this world is worth it, that life is worth living. Only you seem to able to do it, and so, get going, trooper."
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IC: "Okay" Sturg observed the old cracked walls and scenery. As he looked out, he realised he had never really climbed particularly high before. He noted that little life came up here. He saw a single Fleech squelch down quickly trying to get away, and that was the only extent of life he saw up here. The obvious answer would be there is little food up here, but who knows? Maybe there's other reasons...
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OOC: Mitsur has given me permission via PM to use his character "The Thing Behind The Door". My new character's profile is in the W@RF Profile thread.
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Arrack awoke. His eyes wrenched themselves open like a Slog opening his jaw for meat. His first sight was like the flash of a grenade. It was of ice, several metres worth of ice, and it encased him like a suit of armour. He was so overwhelmed by the shock that he began hyperventilating. He closed his eyes again, trying to recall what had happened. Only vague flashes. A pole. Falling. Broken plasteel. Biohazard labels. A fan. A tube. The final thing he could recall was some kind of pool, and a bizarre device. The room seemed so familiar, and yet so strange. It was rusted, broken, old, decaying. The stench of death no longer masked by the smell of Sligs, Glukkons, and machinery. He was alone.

There was no sign of a massacre nor of any death. His eyes could register that as they darted around the room. It did not even appear to be a kind of psionic vanishing or leaving the room. If it was, there would be voices in the wind. But all he could hear was the hum and releasement of gas. They were not simply gone, but it seemed like they had never existed. Could it all of been a dream? Could his life itself be an illusion, like the film The Tyranny of the Mudokons? He probed into the deepest areas of his brain as far as he could. He thought he had found that his reality was a lie, that all of the people, that everything except Odd himself were but lies, but the truth was far more frightening.

His reality was real, but he, Arrack, had awoken to a changed world. Arrack tried to calm himself, but to no avail. But suddenly, he felt a feeling of calm wash over him. Arrack thanked Odd, then collected himself. He was still in Rupture Farms. He was still on Oddworld. He was still in this dimension, this level of being. This level of familiaraty, of assurance, was enough to calm him, enough to save his from utter insanity. He then realized something. The door to the next room had a bent lock, from the strange corrosive gases being released above. If he could break his way out of the ice, he might be able to escape from the room entirely, and find out what sort of world he was in. But did he really want to? After all, this cube was comfy;

"Yes! Yes! I want out of this prison! Out of this cube of conformity! Out of this box of oppression! I want revenge! Revenge on the government, always watching over me. I bet they arranged this. I bet they didn't like me for my singing. Well I'll show them! I'll show them all! He! He! HAAA! HAAAAAAAAA!." his psychotic (althougth not necessarily evil) part and currently dominant part said, or rather thought.

"Yes. I want out. I can't hide in this cube like a coward. I must confront my fears, and try to find out what's going on. I'm not the centre of everything, merely an instrument of this world, and I am not being persecuted. Remember Praetyre. His face drained completely of colour up seeing me unmasked, and he was a Vykker who had taken medicine to stop such reactions. I may have faults, but I can still help people. I can still help this facility. I can still help my friends. My friends are what's paramount. Not myself, not my fears, not anything. I am a Slig, bred for the protection and serving of society. Not a coward!" his normal and good side said.

"No! No! Don't take me out of this cube! I love the cube! It's nice and cold and no bad people coming after me and I can sing all day. Not like that idiot Ordrairan's house. He spat on me. He abused me. He killed my brother-mate. He deserved the fire, he deserved the pain, he deserved death!" his depressed side said.

His good side gained dominance briefly, rising up to speak.
"Praetyre. My other friends. My brother-mates. Are they dead? Are they all.. gone? Is all that I loved, all that they loved, all that we all cherished, are they gone..? Have I awoke in a world where my friends are old and suffering, my loved ones are mourning, where I am alone? How could I of caused such suffering! I am terrible! Terrible, terrible, terrible terrible, terrible..!"
The thoughts finally rose to the surface, and his hands ripped out a large chunk of ice. It rapidly began to melt. He would have to close the door, or else whoever went in that room would end up crispier than Paramite Pie.

He waited for several minutes, until he was able to move his joints. He was about to leave the room when he noticed something reflected in the doors surface. It was not the fact this room contained deformed, rotten, and diseased creatures discarded by the Vykkers long ago, still preserved it ice. It was a sight of something else which horrified him. He remembered back to the moments before now. Falling, a pole, and then plasteel. All of these events flashed before his eyes, forming a semicoherent picture of what had happened. He had been frozen, he was maskless, and he had been deliberately left here. Someone must of not liked him, or wanted to get himself a pay rise, until inconvenient old him showed up and screwed up the bosses private smuggling operation. He would show them. He would show them the price for messing with Arrack. But his pants were not destroyed. He tapped a button on their side, switching to completely manual control. He swaggered and struggled a bit, but soon relearned the manual control system. That's one thing he could thank the Vykkers for.

Arrack ran out of room, slamming the door. He then ran again to the opposite side of the meat processing area, carelessly opening the door at an incredible speed. He tried to find out the time, so he could have revenge on Molluck. His good side told himself that this was selfish and petty, and that Molluck held no grudge against him, but his psychotic side won out. He read the time on the clock near the center of the corridor. 13:24 PM. Halfway through lunchtime. Not too early, not too late. He had Molluck now. He always liked to eat at his special executive table when he needed to destress. He liked laughing at the Mudokons, their silly, primitive minds and topics. He liked making jokes with his yes men, who always laughed at him. But now he was going to laugh no longer. He was going to die.

Arrack looked both ways, and ran in the direction indicated by a nearby sign, towards the cafeteria. He burst through the doors, gazing angrily at the whole room. He then shouted;
"Come out Molluck, you betraying scumbag! Come out of your little hidey hole and face me like a real Inhabitant! And, you, Mollucks little suckups, you get out before I kill ya. Before I kill ya all!" he yelled at the Glukkons and the green eyed Slig sitting at a table.

"What's going on? Where am I!" his good side shouted at everyone.
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Praetyre was about to try and motivate the Mudokon again when he heard an atrocious racket and yelling coming from outside the room. He turned to Dek;
"What on Oddworld is that? A Paramite mating call? It sounds like a bloody stampede just occured.
Praetyre walked up to the speaker mike;
"To whoever is out there, please get whatever that noise is under control! I can hear it through nearly a metre of solid steel! We've got a fragile patient and emotionally damaged friend in here, not to mention sensitive equipment. This is a meat packing facility, not a Scrab safari."
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ooc: I'm starting to think MM may have slipped away again. If he doesn't post in a couple of days, we might have to get on without him. Slaveless, if you want, just assume Dean and Kix went to the kitchen together. If MM still doesn't post you can say he stayed behind there to do some cooking.
Patrick, be careful with that character, you don't want to upset the flow of the RPG too much. And... What's the noise Praetyre heard?

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Krik was moving quietly through the passages beneath Rupture Farms. He was reasonably certain he was in the basement of the Rupture Farms: the floor was less mud and more metal, which was making following the meech more than a little difficult. He was walking, head bent, when he heard some voices from ahead. Worried that someone else may have found his prize before he had, he hurried on and quickly came across a ancient model security robot and a pair of sligs. He hurried forward and demanded in his most demanding voice, "What's going on here?"
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OOC: Yep, I agree with that, we don't need another psycho worker. Noone succeeded with that since Jammer. But I think he will calm down eventually, eh?

The noise was Arrack's ranting, I guess.

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Arnie was still in the Cafeteria with Otto and #7 Slig. The latter was eating a Scrab Leg, while Otto asked Arnie. "So, what about business? I thought you have things to do in the Office."

"No hurry, the deal has been made. All we have to do is to load the crates and barrels up the train." said Arnie.

Suddenly, a serie of various rants came from the corridor. All three of them froze and looked at the door. A new Slig came inside with a rather disgusting look.

"Now please, I'm eating here!" said #7 Slig indignantly and covered his vizor with his free hand. But when the Slig shouted at them, he stood up immediately, forgetting about the newcomer's appearance. "Shut up before I knot your tentacles together." he said threateningly.

"Enough, both of you!" said Arnie, looking at the Slig. "Well, this place has been called Rupture Farms since its completion, and we're in the Cafeteria now..." he said, but a sentence reminded him of someone else. "Come out Molluck, you betraying scumbag!" RG-49 was also looking for Molluck when he was reactivated. It was likely that the new Slig was in the same shoes with RG - he is an elder worker of the factory, and have been there before the Shutdown.

"Say, how long have you been around here?" asked Arnie.

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RG-49 finally managed to get to his feet. "You just bought yourself a one-way ticket to the Production Lines." thought RG-49, looking at where the Wildlife creatures disappeared.

A Vykker scuttled towards him and asked about the situation. "Just a slight clash between us and Wildlife organics. They fled to safety, so I only have to finish what I came here for."

He stepped to Gappiqu, with his rifle in his hand. "Don't try to confuse me, Slig organic. The boilers are working just fine. But I have to get you to proper authorities, because of several reports of you destroying factory property. Cooperate, and I won't have to go the Armory to get some new ammo clips." said RG.

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OOC: Yeah, I just didn't want to ruin the sheer drama of The Door, so I'm making this guy a basket case. He won't always be like this, due to being bipolar.
IC:
"Well I.." his normal side regaining control;
"Well, I don't really know how long I've been out. I was working for Molluck for several months, and then poof, I get frozen somehow. Sorry about all this, I suffer from numerous psychological disor.."
His psychotic side took over again.
"Yes, disorder, yes. That's what THEY want you to think, ignorant pawns. I've seen your meetings, your secret plot to take over the world with robots. It's all here in my case, see?" he said, holding up air like a mime.
"Yes, you cannot see it, but that's only because of their SECRET MIND IMPLANTS OF CONTROL AND ULTIMATE POOOWER!" he said, hyperventilating.
"You Sheephabitants call me paranoid, but only because I see THE TRUTH! The truth of the giant robot scrab army. The truth of the conspiracy against me. The truth of Paramite muffin cakes! It's all here in front of your eyes, and yet you deny. You DENY!"

Arrack began running towards the kitchen, ignoring all else there.
"You see this boiling water? It's not really boiling, but THEY want you to think it is. For you see, only the painful TRUTH can set you free!"
Arrack dived in to the water, feeling the scalding pain. He quickly jumped out;
"Yes, for they don't want you to see. Their robots will KILL you with their LASER EYES! But I'm not really burnt, and this steel door isn't really.." he said running out of the room towards the lab door, and consequently knocking himself out.
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Praetyre heard a loud bang on the door. He then spoke on the mike again.
"You know, you don't have to bang on the door like an angry Scrab. I can hear you quite well."
Praetyre walked towards the door, trying to see what was making the noise.
"I'm terrible sorry if I kept you waiting sir, but please knock gently this time. We wouldn't want to cost the boss a lot of.."
Praetyre looked through the external view and felt every word, and every colour drain from his face. Was this possible? Was this a prank, or real.
Praetyre turned to his superior;
"Sir, don't look outside. I would hate to make you sick."
Praetyre swung open the door, picking up the Slig outside with metallic hands and draggings his pants along.. Even through them, he could feel intense heat. The heartbeat of the Slig was incredible. It was nearly three times the regular rate. He wondered what could keep someone alive under that stress.
"Sir, it looks like we have a visitor."
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OOC: I haven't snuck away at all. Just had no reason to post.
IC:
Dean followed Kix off to the kitchen for the rubber tubing. He satrted looking in the cleaning supplies cupboard. Mops, brushes, rubber gloves. No tubing. "How big d'you want this tubing? Cause I've heard stories the cooks in the old RuptureFarms used bunsen burners to cook. If there's any of the tubing used to link them to the gas taps, and that isn't too small, I could go to the storeroom and get that."
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Arthur hurried off down to the Train Station. Fones were there, and he could use a fone to call a train to deliver a sample of his soup. Provided all went well, he'd be rich.
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Dek swivelled. "A visitor? Who exactly? From all that commotion he sounds either violent or desperate. If he looks hurt mentally or physically, let him in, if he's a friend of our patient, let him in. If you or I know him quite well, let him in. If none of those fit the description, keep him out there. We have to get this chap here up and about again before dealing with psychopaths."
OOC: Paramite muffin cakes? Bwahahahahahaha!!! That's a hilarious conspiracy!! Sounds like this Slig believes Oddworld is like The Matrix. Which incidentally, I am getting the special edition complete set of for Christmas.
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OOC: Actually, I based him a little on Boyd Cooper from Psychonauts. He has paranoid and delusional psychosis, as you can tell.
EDIT: OOC: Aw, nutbunnies. Must of read the map wrong. Let's just say that Arrack went up and down the stairs during his rants., and that a bit of loose plaster caused them to leak to Praetyre's level.
IC:
Praetyre replied to his superior;
"I'm sorry sir, for that lapse in judgement. But I do know this Slig. His name is Arrack. But I thought he had commited suicide 10 years ago. Judging by the temperature of the water dripping off him, and by his resistance to the high temperatures enveloping his body, I think he was somehow frozen, and has awoken to a new world.

He is.. or was.. a close friend of mine. I believe the stress of awakening to a new world, coupled with the invasion of privacy committed upon him by that old law which required him to wear a plasteel mask within 50 metres of anybody excluding certain parties, even when asleep, must of been too much for his mind to handle. I've read about this in textbooks, but never seen a case of trineural psychosis before. At least that's what I'm guessing it is, because the yells outside seemed to vary over three pitches, and this guy was not an adolescent last time I saw him. I can only hope that we can restore this guy to a healthy state of mind, because I'd hate to lose an old friend just after finding out he was alive. Maybe Slap could help. He's had experience with Sligs like Arrack.

But I'm very sorry sir, I'll get back to working on our Mudokon friend right away. You decide what to do with Arrack." Praetyre said, laying Arrack gently on one of the unused beds.

Praetyre turned to the conscious Mudokon;
"Sorry about that. Most people think we Vykkers are the ugliest you can get, but we're only the tip of the iceberg. Now, could you help me motivate our friend here?"
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OOC: I hope this will start my character off good.

IC: Another train was coming to Rupture farms for sligs. Jet was so nervous. He was watching a news brodcast on the train of the executive of Rupture Farms "Arnie". The train made a stop. As Jet entered a halway of Rupture Farms and waited. "Hello! Can anyone give me some advice for new slig workers?"
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"Linc? Liii-iiinc? Ah... LINC!"
Nothing happened. Wash ploughed on regardless.
"It's me, Wash. You know, the dirty one? I came all the way up here to see you. Aren't you even going to say hi?"
"..."
"The animals are running riot in the stock yeards, and only you have the skill with a mop to clean up after them. Do you accept your mission?"
Linc lay there.
Ugh. I don't know what they expect of me here. In my experience people need more than a couple of hours rest after major surgery.
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