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11-09-2002, 07:15 PM
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Bike Fury....

Bike Fury....

Devils Spine.



*bring....*bring....

"hello" I said

"hay kid Race tonight ya up for it?"
"pale i thgoiught i tolde ya not ta call me at work...."
"hay it was irgent i need ya in the race Pluse ya need the mony"said Pale
"ya..Ya shuer i'll do it...But i need ta pick up my bick at the shope"

*Tich....Errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

"Damin Ya always hnge up on me"

I left work erly that day and drove over ta the shop ta pick up my bick....


I swong open the dore

"hay Chase here for yore bick right?"

"ya"

All of the colores hit me like a speeding artow or love to the hart....Sept for one it perst my EyE with it's lightning blue colore I got on the fresh smelling leter and unscrached paint...I started it


*Vvverrunmmmmmm.....*
Then i smiled
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11-09-2002, 07:43 PM
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nice story are you going to keep it going
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11-10-2002, 01:12 AM
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Chase drivs out of the shop drops a bage of mony...

"that should be enofe" He said


"Hay" the shop owner picks up the bage. He opens it "WoW" "this is alote"....."thanks"


"Wa hoo Yaaa!!" I said (chase).

I speeded up upcomeing on the the high way coming up on a ZX300 moter cycal.. I was on a ZX500.

Mine would blowe it away I smiled and went Faster doing a pop awaely...



NEXT PART SOON CHEK BACK LATER....
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11-10-2002, 02:36 AM
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It was Just me and this other racer if he was one.. I speed up on him amost well to welll I blinked my lights hopeing for the resons I wonted..

Hi galted it so did i

I pased him up and He stalled his Bike i craked up and went faster,

I got of on my town stop (Richison Vill) home of devils spine.

The race was that night and I needed to win not lose not die like my brother....

Hi died on devils spine the werst track that i no of , he made the misake of looking behind him when he looked back he hit a car BOOM he was goun no part os his mutalated boddie was found sept for his wotch I baried it in ohner of him and I have his cros....
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11-11-2002, 02:20 AM
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I showed Up like i was supos to it was 9:00 PM...

And my Pomped heart was redy to race it started We went off berning ruber intently felling better about who I was...

I shifted First second then thered the spedometer said 120 mph.....



Indeniln pomped threw out my hole bottie.....


I was in firest A big crosing was comeing up I looked back to see who was behined me......


(there was my mistake).....(looking back).....



I looked forwored Shit i said hiting a Front of a Truck I flew My life pasing threw my eye's My bike blowing into Scape peses for the aretistic abiltity of the mide to fined out what it was later in life.....


I hite with my scraping metal of me pades and my plastic helme....


I lay there for what seemed my life ....But only a few breef secons...

"Ooooch heeeeh.....God damin Shit..." I said I beleve

I got up poping my sholder back into ites soket that made it posebel to werk....


I toulk off my helmet blood dripping doun my face that made me realiz this was Reality not a dream I could wake up out of it was rwal And i would pay...By going ta gail..

There was no point of runing the sirins were comeing so fast you could say that they were already parked.....
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11-11-2002, 04:37 AM
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carry on please
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11-11-2002, 02:16 PM
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I spent my night ni Jail that night along with some other unhappy Smellp people it was no fun so i dif the werest thing i could ever do.....He he heee.......

I caled the cail cell keeper over as soon as he came i grabed his neck pulled him forwerd fast and nocked his head agenst the coled rusted medal gail bars,,,(he was out coled spo i toulk the key'sd and unloked the dore.....

I couldent get cout so I drest up as the gail cell guyput on his hat and toulk his ID cared tham morning i left...Just like that walked out the dore ansd toulk his car I drove off to my home to pick up some things.....
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11-12-2002, 07:43 PM
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I walkeed out of my apartment with my things got to the geroge...I toulk outr my key I opend it (the gerage)...

I uncoverd my car the 67 GTO mint condition.....Dark moon light peple I got in and started it...

I drove off with its roring ingen...


I cam acrosse this bade part of town im the street corner i drove by there was a guy puting up a good fight but geting his ass kiked so i got out of my car walked over pushed the guys away fome the guy..." What the hell is your problem guys..." I said...


*they pulled there guns So did i...

I klicked it back and aimed....They said "wow" and ran

I got the beat up kid in my car and drove off so i dident get any attention droued to us....


I asked him what his name was (i guess i made a new firend) He replyed his name was "I'm KAI...."....
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11-13-2002, 04:19 PM
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Hehe. Based on kaimana? hehe cool! This is great! MORE MORE!
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