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10-27-2002, 01:42 AM
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A Ninja's Quest for the truth of life.

Along the way of this vary hansome warier " lie hamtarow".

He is folowed by a Asassin Killer that has been Forbiden from her home villig, She hase been forbiden from here because of useing the achent art of the screat Shitarow fighting skills.If you would like to no more about this story tell me aless you think it is a waist of your time...
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10-27-2002, 11:19 AM
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Interesting...Please continue.
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10-27-2002, 11:31 AM
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When the Ninja Lie was just a boy of the age of 5 a master samerie "Takura". Had killed his mother and Lie's fother unlocking the secret of life. Lie Swor to adveng his familly for if it Would be the last he would do.



But Takura had other plans for him ever if he would have to kill Lie himself. Sence Takura had found the secret of life 15 years ago the two warers were the same age witch would make it dificalt for Lie to kill Takura.
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10-27-2002, 11:52 AM
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10-27-2002, 11:57 AM
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I decided to move this story, it does not have anything to do with Oddworld, thus is placed here in MA&L. Please refer to the FC rules next time. A friendly reminder.



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10-27-2002, 08:28 PM
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A NINJA'S QUEST.

Story one.




"Lie....Lie" said the waiter. "yes you called me " "what will you order today stop sleeping here you have to order. "

"Ok ill have the soop with a side or fried rice" Said Lie
" vary well then " said the kind waiter "right away".

Lie finished his soop and smiled " it's vary good" he closed his ieys and sleped. Lie was sudenly slaped on the head Wack "ouch "


"MMMm yes Lei now get get out of my hut NOw" Said the waiter "ok" lei walked out and looked back


Thhhhhssssssss T... Lie had cout a 2 inch arow heding direcly for his neck he looked in the direction it hade came from he squinted his iey's no one was there......



But how could any one wont to kill him if no one new who he was that he was a ninja.......


Story two

Assassin ninja.
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10-29-2002, 12:43 AM
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AT THE INN.


" Well ill take the soop and rice" Sad Lie
"thank you vary much" said Lie carying his soop and rice to his place the Hut in the Inn.

Lie set doun his tray on the ground. It buged, He jummped back starteled It buged again and agai intill Lie went to go lift the life like tray. The tray was pushed upwerd and was spillt at the same time Lie grasped his sword tytly in his hands. There was a Roting fleshful hand sticking out of the ground Lie shreeked at the sight, He pushed the hand with his sword to see if it would budg it did Lie swong back the sword and cut the hand off as soon as he did that the hand disinergreated. Lie's iye brows twitched " Hmmm" he walked out of the INN.


" Something wrong" said a old voice, Lie ran as fast as he could "Would you like some hand soop" said the old voice chuckalling
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Its actually got a good feel to it, I wondor, who could be behind the attacks. Its got one of those good movie plots. Cant wait to hear more.

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oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE! I'll go crazy if you don't! comon its well cool! Tell us more!
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10-30-2002, 01:21 AM
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The Dead walk.



Lie kept runing more and more intill his heart could not take it he herd foot steps behind him.

Lie ran faster tored a tree and jumped kiked off the tree and ternd around slicing threw the person behind him.

Going past the victom he looked back and saw that the roting bundal of flesh like person hade disintergreated he twiched his eye brows knowing some thing was vary wrong about tjis situation.


It hade to be the black magic of one of his enimys ocomplesis, He new it was not right.



Lie kept his sword tightly in his grip hering the movmens from the ground foug sudenly and frekeshly aperd. Lie sprung up onto a post of wood and stud there looking doun at the moving ground. Seeing that arms and swords of achent warers were arizing from the ground.

Sudenly he notised he was serounded by what he could see of dead roting warers, he puller his sword as they rised theres. Lie was silent so were they intill one of them let out a Grouel " errch".
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10-31-2002, 12:40 AM
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The walk of the Dead fight.



As Lie herd that grall he looked at the hidious creacher then a nother gralled at Lie " Grrrrechhhh"


Lie raysed his sword at the same time one of the Warers jumped and rushed Lie, Lie stould there and moved to the side as the warer was runing into the sword. He was kut in half and disinergreated....


Lie ran tored the others slcing them in half one by one his pwer his rage it was unbeleabel it whent on for howers none stop no mersy for thes once peasful men but now pasesed.

One or to fought back as the one swong his sword at Lie ,He duked and slced off his arm. Then the pesfulnes look and evil look combinded and made a Scared and inisent look " Ssssch" whent the sword it was over the last warer was decapitated into ashes.



The Camera zooms out on Lie as he puts his sword away....
Then the camera watchs him walk away from the screan.
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OOOooohhhhhhhhh aaaaahhhhhhhh!...........COOL! Hurry up with the next bit! Where is he walking to?
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Sorry story delayed grounded intill Fri the 8 Sorry.
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SORRY NO MORE



But check out my new story ( Bick Fury....) coming soon to your lockal Oddworld MA&l
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