The Reckoning

[mitsur]

Yay!Another fic made by me!!!*starts congo line*any suggections or wanting to be in the story PM me please!but I won't really go to the next chapter without at least 1 post of feedback!Drumrool please!*drumroll*Mitsur and friends are proud to present...............

THE RECKONING

Jack woke up suddenly with the sun in his eyes(scanner whatever)"Oh *beep* I'm late!" he yelled.He quicky grabbed his best gun,ate a quick Instant breakfastTM and ran to the line in front of the barracks. "you are SOOO dead" said one of the sligs. "Oh shut your mouth Jim" said Jack.Jim was one of the stuck-up sligs who thought his gun was bigger and he was higher in rank.(his gun really was bigger but only by an quater centimeter becasue a worker was a little tired during the mesuring prosess) "Jeez,i'm lucky that the boss got here late" as a glukkon walked up. "Now you idiotic sligs that I trained,it's time to see how good you did!I will place this target 10 kilometers away and you have to try to hit the target dead on!" Jack smiled.This was going to be easy.Everyone knew he could hit it easily since he was a sniper. "But when Jack is up I wil make it MOVE!!!!" said the glukkon.So the morning went by as the sligs shot the target either really close, or some lucky ones getting it out of luck.Finnaly,Jack's turn was up.The glukkon pressed a small button and the target started to move at about 5 miles per hour. Just good timing thought JackI can do this

[thebomb372]

sounds good i want to be in it

[mitsur]

okay a little more feedback peoples!

DA RECKONING

Jack fired. "O my odd he got it" said a slig."no he didn't he missed"this slig was right,he really did miss but only by an centimeter.The glukkon was SO surprised the cigaret fell out of his mouth(which is very hard to do). "T-the results will be posted tommorow so you get some good sleep ya *beep*s.Jack,follow me." said the glukkon. "M-m-e?" said Jack suddenly felling a little nervous.All the colors outside kind of circled around in his scanner.
What would the glukkon want with him?

[thebomb372]

that was sort write some more

[Stripe]

Maybe the gluk has a special assignment for Jack?
Maybe.....promotion (?) to teach other sligs shooting techniques?
Or maybe....maybe........Maybe I just better sit down and wait for the next installment?

*grabs popcorn and sits down*

[mitsur]

I will if I get better feed back!!!

[mitsur]

I have decided to bring this back because some people liked it.

THE RECKONING

As we left off, the glukkon wanted to see jack. As Jack walked into his office,he saw two shadows on the wall moving.He froze.
"You know we can't keep him alive.He to much of a threat if he rebels.You have kill him today"Jack heard one of the shadows say. "I know I know....Can't we just keep him in the cell for awhile just to let him go mad before we kill him?We won't feel that bad then." "Fine.Anyway,we got an apontment with the Magog Cartel.".Jack didn't stay to hear anymore.To big a threat?I'll show them! he thought and ran to his bunk.He grabbed his sniper and survival pack,switched to heat vision and got to the nearest sniper tower.As he started climbing the ladder,he grabbed a flying slig pack and climbed up.Suddenly the alarm went off. Slig number 345289 has just takken a slig pack and is gone from his bunk.He has been spotted on tower 6.Please open fire Knowing he had barley anytime before bullets flew,He used his heat vision to locate the gas tanks that powered most of the systems at the barracks.He fired.Jack felt a blast of heat and he jumped putting the flying slig pack on him and turned it on and flew as far as the pack would let him,seeing the smoke coming from the barracks he had blown up.He fainted and hit the ground,unconsis

[Stripe]

*begins chanting*

MORE! MORE! MORE!

[mitsur]

Thanks.Hey Stripe if you want to be in it with me,PM with your guys stuff(name items ect.)and ideas k?I have no good ideas right now but I'll right the story later k?