Oddworld: Twice Ze Flavour - Logo Idea

[Pirfsich]

Hello! €8~

Maybe you remember my posts in this thread:

http://www.oddworldforums.net/showth...209#post596209

I tried some things and came up with this "Twice Ze Flavour"-Logo in style of the New 'n' Tasty logo just to get some basic colors and Ideas.
It's not finished of course, the mudokon skull is currently just a concept art and badly placed, the bubbles are made quick, but it's a fairly good starting point. I would like to hear all the nitpicky things you can think of!

Destroy my design, if you want to! Every Feedback is always welcome.

So here it is. I will post updates whenever I have time.
(How can I limit the picture size? q.q)



Man, it's wierd to make fanart for a game that's not even planned yet...

[Varrok]

Destroy my design, if you want to!

[Pirfsich]

I love you xD

[Job McYossie]

I think the skull needs to not be semi-transparent. It makes it not as big and up front.

[Pirfsich]

Yes, otherwise it won't catch attention.

[MeechMunchie]

I think you shouldn't let yourself be too constrained by the look of the original logo. Soulstorm Brew is a very different kind of product to Mudokon Pops.

How can I limit the picture size?

<img src="http://www.oddworldforums.net/attachment.php?attachmentid=14026&stc=1&d=1405611794" width="100%">

Becomes:

See, Nate, I told you we should retire the [IMG][/IMG] tags.

[Xavier]

I think the idea is quite good but you should realy re-do the mudokon skull

[Crashpunk]

Looks great. I tried to recreate the New 'N' Tasty logo myself and I couldn't quite get it right. (See my sig pic) I'd love to know how you did it

I would say that I'd prefer if the skull was this one:

[Pirfsich]

I tried to recreate the New 'N' Tasty logo myself and I couldn't quite get it right. (See my sig pic) I'd love to know how you did it

You mean the font and the shadow + outline? I can record a video on how I did it with the "Twice ze flavour".

And yeah, the simple skull is better, but it's hard to position it, as it isn't as tall as the glukkon head.

[Pirfsich]

Video is up.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vTk...ature=youtu.be

[Crashpunk]

Thank you! I'll try and improve my sig soon.

[Pirfsich]

Nice to hear! I can only recommend Paint.NET for these kind of work.
I really like your logo, though!

[Pirfsich]

Still some errors in there but they will be fixed later.

[MeechMunchie]

Yeah, I think the skull should be printed in the bottle (i.e. slightly curved). Also the subtitle could use a white border or something.