poetry thread

[FreshlyFriedOktigi]

I love poetry, so if anyone else has some poems that they've done... I'd like to read them as well ;D

Here's some that I've done; Tell me whatcha guys think :B

Second Floor Suicide

Pointed dagger skewers flesh
And blood dried on the floor there
Leaving such a dirty mess
Stains that we'll never ignore

Suicide, the second floor.

Ubiquitous

Can you fathom my ambivalent gaze?
The meaning is uncertain to this age.
A reason is lost and my mind is too.
Fleeting with sanity, I'll dance with you.
Come with me to the rainbow land;
The pleasant paradise made for man.
The utopian garden of no return;
A place for which we all yearn,
Heaven is ubiquitous in nature.
Just look for it in your stature.

Esoterica

Secrets linger in the recess of the mind.
A code to be cracked; what a glorious find.
Fingers and keystrokes... cryptic text.
My body is maimed by the complex.
Infected beings peruse the index.
Sound minds are barcoded, left to order.
Cash or credit, intelligence bought per quarter.
A healthy heaping of humanity will do
wonders, but may leave you too.
Left fruitless, without a home or card
to buy, sell, trade, stock. That'd be hard.
Leave the mantra at will... peace is set.
Money can buy happiness, you can bet.
Esoteric readings in the paper line
the headlines... only blind to the blind.
What makes better bacon than capitalist swine?

A.S.F.R

Robotic. Anatomic. Aeronautic. Erotic.
Hypnotic. Neurotic. Phonic.
Accent simply Tonic
If you can save me
from my dreams
Maybe you can see
Nightmare realities
My head's empty
Mannequin menageries
Mechanical ladies
Dressed in black fleece
Sucking blood from the living
Pale victims lying writhing
Sterile and stunned
From their vocal guns
Voices pure techno
A grasp a capella
Waiting for my turn
Oh how I yearn.
Sadistic, yet pleasant
My future is my present
And I watch them work the keys.

Solemn voices listen to your hurt
Crying out to their messiah
They can only hope for the worst.
Anti has captivated the masses
And savior is lost - drowned out
By their arrogant science.

Future overload. Overboard overlord.
Systematic motherboard.
Soul control.
Ctrl. Alt. Delete. The mindless meat
Human flesh is brain food
On rise is a new brood
Our brethren commit
To higher warrant
Stomp out the past
We're the bio-hybrids
Mechanical minded
Blast. Clash. Flash.
Kodak moment.
Reverie of solvents

Somatoplasm sonata
Destruction of the lame
Thine brain is inferior
to the higher caller's name
Lines twist on
As robotic venders sell
Your organs fresh
Soylent green
Hacking utensils smell
Of caked red
Rotten stench known well
Find your answers in your before
When things were simpler then
Nature communed once
Humans died again.

[Lord Stanley]

Interesting poetry. Kinda gory, but good.