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Idea The Daemn Terra

Well I thought i'd throw together a little project, a bestiary, a story of planetary oblivion? Well here goes. (all themes are fictional and are not endorsed by any chrisitan, hindu or muslim church)

Introduction

The Daemn Terra is a vast planet that, for the last millenia, has been at war, there are two massive opposing factions hell bent on destroying the other, each believing it's own path as the right.
The planet is split almost in two, in the North, the great Army of Light rules with an iron fist, full to the brim of zealous warrior angels.
The south is inhabited by the great Daemn Verdvous or Daemon Hordes.

History

The history of the Daemn Terra stretches back billion and billion of years, it is draped in ancient secrets and soaked in powerful magic.

Around 12.5 billion years ago, God had perfected the Daemn Terra and had allowed angels in to inhabit it, it was a time of undying peace and prosperity.

By 10 billion years ago, the Shivos had inhabited the Daemn Terra, it is thought they came by accident from another plain, they inhabited the ten thousand post jungle and worshipped God as did the angels therefore, God was happy and allowed them to stay.
The Shivos have a presence in the plains and have been seen in visions by eastern humans hindus have adopted them as a god Shiva or Vishnu (possibly either).

At 2 billion years, the Miskal Verdvs evolved, these dog like beasts had small presence in the plains and just before the extinction (8000 years ago) they where observed by the Egyptians and godified - Anubis became there human name.

900 million years ago the Angelic upising occoured, God sent legions to Exvsiai where the fort had fallen under control of free thinking angels, the war lasted a year until a great light wiped all angels in Exusiai and the surrounding areas away.

500 million years ago, the first imps evolved from the lizards of Vphir and Northern Aimvvs (continent of Vphir) these primitive creatures never truly flourished and even now their numbers are limited.

64 million years ago, God banished the Antichrist and his followers from Heavn and the divine limbo, they travelled to Nybras in the distant south, the repurcutions probably caused the extinction of the dinosaurs.

12 million years ago, God created humans though evolution of the apes however, once they disobeyed in Eden, he banished them to fair on Earth and reduced them back to apes , the few that survived the exodus have hidden from God, the majority worshipping false idols such as Baal, Moloch and Asherahvm.

700 thousand years ago, the apes on earth evolved to primordial humans.

210 thousand years ago, the humans evolved in the humans we are today, instinct mixed with a miniscule presence in the warp allowed them to rekindle the knowledge of worshipping God. He was pleased and gave them the first leader, Jacob and the twelve kingdoms.

60 thousand years ago, The banished angels renounced worship of God and perfected their army tribes, Hell and the great mound had been created.

32 thousand years ago, the armies of the south marched towards Vphir and gained control, it is still theirs today, they then travelled east to Schirim.

12 thousand years ago, the Southern Askal became controlled by the dark armies, it was renamed the Badlands.

(more coming up)
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Oh yeah, fair point. Maybe he was just tortured until he lost consciousness.

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It's hard to come up with a detailed world, so well done.

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Thank you, ok so now the inhabitants of the Daemn Terra part 1
The Angels

The Anglic beings where the first species on the whole of Daemn Terra, they follow under God as his legions and are enginerred to obey orders.
Angels are born in the largest factory on the Daemn Terra, Manvfactorvmai, hundreds of worker archangels work to create young angels or Angelia, they are fed while in their embryos, a mixture of ambrosia mixed with pure liquid fire. An Angelia is born about three days after it's DNA is manipulated into a drone hole (similar to a bee hive) after birth it will rise up on its wings and dry them, next the firsr ritual is upheld, birth of fire, the Angelia is held under a pit of fire, if it is alive after being pulled out of the fire it will have consumed the fire into vacant spaces in it's DNA, if not, it will become a worker at one of the factories.

The Angels are ranked in legions depending on how long they have served and how many kills they have made on daemns. The ranks are as follows (in order of highest to lowest). -note on angels - Angelic ranks are also the names of continents, the capital city is usually the Latin or Greek version of the name.

Seraphim
Cherubim - (and their cherub counterparts though less important)
Thrones (Thronos)
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Dominions (Kyriotes)
Virtues (Dynamais)
Powers (Exusiai)
- Choirs (the inbetween)
Principalities (Archai)
Archangels (Archangeloi)
Angels (Angeloi) - (sub denom. include - Sharpshooter, hunter, standard and legionairre)

Vehicles

(Machine Soulsai)
Exai Engine (retributor)
Divine Crawler (Divinator)
Death Master (nightwing/pentience comupance or the angel of death (apparently the only vehicle that has presence in the plains)

The Daemn and UnderLord

Some sceptics believe that the more powerful side is that of the Daemon Horde, thye inbuke fear around all that they come up against and even the most ppowerful Seraphim will make sure he has spent many a year on his tactical advance before encountering even the smallest army. The horde is more powerful in number though, not skill and to encounter a small army is to encounter a battle force.

The ranks of the Daemon hordes are not entirely known because they are so loose, depening on how much a general owns in peace time can change his rank in war time, age comes into factor, The great general of Vphir and Schrim - Disor is around 61 thousand years old, kept alive with thousands of soul enhancers, this makes him the third greates general under the Antichrist.
The ranks that are known are listed here:

Antichristai
Hades - Satanai -Lucifer and Lilith
The Origional Fallen
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Leviathan and the Behemoth
Abaddon
Falsities and Idols
The Incubi, Succubi and Fallen Seraphim
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Djinn and the ranks of ghosts
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Greater and lesser daemons

Vehicles

Sand Crawler
Hyoui Excidsa
The Fallen Pentients
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Important Characters for the Daemn Terra Story (good)

Archaisaii
Gender: Male
Age: 350,000
Height: 7 feet
Weight: 6lbs
Powers: Firestorm, Shroud, Halovasiaii

Info: Archaisaii is a principality angel, he controls Europe on Earth and the northern tip of the Badlands, he failed to stop the battle for the Southlands when it was Aychai, under light control, he did however uphold the promise to regain control of a small temple in the north known as Vyalon, it is now the only defence on the entire southlands under northern control.

Butoraii
Gender: Male
Age: 70,000
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 16lbs
Powers: Firestorm, Magnificent Re-construction, Exorcism by fire

Butoraii is fighting on the Southern Front, a tank driver, he has risen through the sub ranks of angels to become an Exai Engine Driver, a powerful yet lumbering tank, the drivers of which have had ferocity and anger enginerred back into there bodies to allow a righteous fevor. Each driver will compete with others on how many demons thye kill, thye tally up on the side of there tanks, Butoraii has had 64 by longshot and 300 by machinefire.

Angelicusbain (affectionatley Big Bain)
Gender: Female
Age: 500
Height: 7"3' feet
Weight: 280lbs
Powers: Firestorm, divine punch, crush.

Big Bain is one of the heaviest angels in existance, once a high ranking Cherubim, she was bainshed from the first limbo of power for commiting sin, an accidental genetic imperfection, Big Bain was a glutton and fed on many Purgatorial Souls rumoured to have been shippped by imps from the southlands. She is till accumulating weight even now and apparentally, she can squash a tank simply by falling on it, many a demon has been killed by her fantastic punch. Big Bain prefers hand to hand combat rather than any weaponry and is sent in in the inicial charge.

Ichorian Celbib (Shivos)
Gender: Male
Age: 700,000
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 40lbs
Powers: Firestorm, Magnificent Re-construction, Exorcism by fire


Ichorian Celbib is a mrecenary general that ius rumoured to have pitted his clan of 100 against 1000 demons and won! What is fact is that he defends the outer rims of the ten thousand post jungle and fights along side the local angels.
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