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Nyaoin Stories

Author's note: Let me introduce you to the world of Berathen. It is a magical planet very similar to our Earth. It was created by a friend of mine by the name of Tavin. His idea was to create a world with his friends. Him, myself, and other friends each made our own country. Most of these countries were large portions or an entire continent. My country however is the smallest of all the lands. While my friends' lands range in size from about Europe to Africa my country is about the size of Hawaii if not smaller.

The island was named Nyaoin by its ancient inhabitants that are mysteriously absent today. The new inhabitants follow the teachings of the Nyaoin and are mostly all scholars/teachers/professors and the like. However the people of Nyaoin are beginning to change their traditional ways due to the influence other people in the world have over them.

Queen of Corsairs
Warning this story isn't for the little kids and is a bit graphic though I did my best to leave out details while still portraying the story in its ideal light.

"Yes! This is it!" Ashley thought to herself. The young prodigy, after months of calculating, had created an advanced version of her mother's Krar. Ashley decided to name her creation Eefath. Eefath, like Krar, is a combination of crsytallapari and zhvoleth. The two products are both meant for the treatment of body damage. The product stimulates the body's regeneration abilities while increasing the speed of the process exponentially. The body uses the energy from the healing solvent rather then its own allowing for the radical healing to take place. The difference between Krar, Ashley's mother's invention, and Eefath is that the ladder is cheaper and faster to produce. Not only that, but Eefath had proven to stimulate the body faster. Ashley couldn't contain her enthusiasm she just continued to shout, "Yes! This is it!"

Joshua Boche lifted his head from the lab table having been awoken by his twin sister's shouting. She was holding a vial filled with some green substance and seemed to be screaming at the experiment creatures. "What in Berathan is going on Ash? You don't look like you're on fire." His sister just giggled and wiggled gleefully. "Well Ash?" Joshua continued, "You gonna answer with words?"
Ashley visibly calmed herself, but said with a smile, "I've done it Josh! I've remastered mom's invention. It works almost instantaneously! No more people bleeding to death! No more need to replace organs when you can just purify them! This is a gargantuan step for medical science and an amazing achievement for the Alchemist Guild!"
Joshua tried to put a smile on for his twin sister, but he was just too exhausted. He had been up all night working on his own project. A fellow member of the Alchemist Guild had discovered that the heart reacted very strangely to water near the Maelstrom. It had been a proven fact that the water near the Maelstrom was different, but no one knew exactly how so. Joshua had been tried a few experiments and well he wasn't sure if he liked the results. For some reason if the water is flowing and not stagnant when it touched the boar's heart he was toying with... it started beating... just the heart...

"Josh! Did you hear me!?" Ashley roared as her little brother stared off into space, "This is a breakthrough!"
Joshua nodded and gave his twin sister the thumbs up.
The ecstatic girl began to pace back and forth, "We have to unveil this as soon as possible! I've tested it time and again it's perfectly safe and is ready for distribution. Eefath will broaden Nyaoin trade with all of Berathan! Just think about it! Heiwans, Mechs, Seitans, everyone using my invention! Everyone will finally see Nyaoin for the great place that it is! We are more than just a small island! The Alchemist Guild will be the biggest guild around! Think of all the recruits we will get! I'll show it to the rest of the guild at the next meeting... I need to write a speech!"

Ashley Boche had been up all night reevaluating her research to make sure everything was right. Ashley made her way to her office and upon arriving changed into her casual robes. Locking her office she left the Alchemist Guild with no destination in mind. The Nyaoin scientist could see the sun was beginning to rise. "Is it morning already!? I promised Master Anura I'd watch the sunrise with him!" The Nyaoin book worm braced herself then, in a explosion of youthful energy, broke off towards the Sword Master's home. Trying to save time Ashley decided to travel through the Leviathan Temple's territory. It's not that the area is off limits or anything of the sort, but as of late and odd crowd had been loitering there and Ashley preferred to avoid them. Hopefully the Nyaoin prodigy would not have such an encounter.

Ashley couldn't help but to stray a little towards the actual temple. The structure was made almost entirely out of sapphire. Several statues of the most attractive priestesses surrounded the temple. Word had it that the Leviathan while appearing to be a beast without mercy had a weakness to pretty faces. Ashley pondered if the Leviathan would find her attractive. Spending all her time working Ashley had poor hygiene and rarely looked at her own image. She had her mother's straight dark blue hair and ocean deep eyes. Ashley's skin was a lighter purple that was a nice medium between her mother's dark purple skin and her father's pink skin. Ashely's father always said her beauty made the sun look pale, but how could she trust her father to be unbiased?

Ashley spun around when she heard someone shouting behind her, "Hey girlie! Did the sun come out or did you just smile at me?"
Ashley giggled and thought to herself, "Well that answers my question." Two people started to approach the lone girl. They were both wearing garish clothing. The one with well kept blond hair in a pony tail looked upset about something, while the one with wild red hair had a grin almost too broad for his face. Ashley stammered, "Um can I help you gentleman?"
The red head cackled and licked his lips, "Did you hear that Kent? Curves just called us gentleman."
The blond haired one, Kent, replied slowly, "Um aren't we?"
The red head lost his grin and dismay was evident, "Look Kent I got stuck with toughening you up. If you don't get tough it makes me look soft. Ya want that Kent? You enjoy hurting others Kent?"
Kent scratched his head, "Um.. no. I'm not trying to..."
The red head interrupted, "Exactly. Now be a gentleman and grapple the lady."

Ashley's mind spiked with shock. These guys were Corsairs. Those punks that ignored the Nyaoin ways and drank alcohol. What had she done to invoke their wrath? Master Anura had taught her a little in self defense before, but she had never imagined needing to protect herself. Unable to think of anything else she just asked, "What do you want?"
The red head licked his lips again and slowly stepped closer, "We just want you baby. I got a thing for Norrans; something about your purple skin really gets me going."
"Going? Going where?"
"So naive and sweet. You're the object of my desires baby. I have a thirst that can only be satisfied by your waters. Together we will discover new horizons and destroy old walls. I want to know how you are on the inside."
Confused and scared Ashley slowly walked backwards not turning her back on the Corsair, "Um that sounds great but I really must be going."
Kent stood still unsure of what to do looking back and forth between and Ashley and his fellow Corsair.
The red head forcefully grabbed the small scholar by her wrist, "We've only just met. I'd regret it for the rest of my life if I just let you go without getting to know you first."
Ashley's heart jumped when the Corsair grabbed her. She pulled and twisted trying to get free, but the Corsair's firm painful grip would not sway, "What are you doing? Let go!"
The red head growled, "You watch your tone when you speak to me." With that the Corsair let go of the girl's arm and pulled his arm back. Then reversing the motion he slapped the small Norran with such force her body rose from the ground before falling back down on the hard stone ground.

Pain shot throughout Ashley's body. An immediate reaction to the pain her eyes swelled with tears and she screamed in pain.
The red head licked his lips as he stared at the girl's body with lust. He walked over her body and lowered his head so he could lick the girl's cheek. He rose back up and turned to face his companion, "Well Kent which hole do you want. Seeing as this is your first time I'll let you get first dibs."
Kent was astonished by the image of the polite girl that had just recently addressed him as a gentleman rolling on the ground in pain with tears streaking down her cheeks. Kent found his courage and managed to mumble, "We can't force her to do something she doesn't want to do..."
The red head's bloodshot eyes widened with anger, "Kent! Are you a woman!? If you are even the least bit tough you will get over here right now and do this girl!" The red head reached into one of his many pockets and pulled out a small knife, "Don't make me cut you Kent. I will cut you."
Kent steadied himself fighting back his tears. Unable to say anything without losing himself he made his way to the girl and his comrade moved aside. He reached to grab at her robe, but as he was doing so their eyes met. He could see the overwhelming fear in this girl and how if she could manage words she'd be screaming for help. Kent stood back up and shook his head, "I can't do this."

The red head snarled, "You don't have the tool to get the job done anyway." The angry Corsair violently pushed Kent aside and got ontop of the girl. Aware of the situation Ashley screamed and dug her claws into her assaulter which only gained her several blows to her face. The red hed inhaled calming himself and moved his wild hair from his face with his hand, "There's no reason we can't be civilized about this Curvy. Trust me you'll thank me when it's all over." The red head quickly removed Ashley's clothing leaving her naked in the middle of the street. Kent, ashamed of himself, looked the other way. Ashley tried to fight the Corsair off of her, but he was far stronger then her and easily pinned her down. The red head laughed, "Oh by the way this is going to hurt a lot, but don't worry it'll feel great for me."

That moment was the most terrifying experience of Ashley's life. She screamed and cried in pain. Each scream just hurting her throat more. She struggled and writhed trying to free herself, but she was firmly held in place. The red head, while raping Ashley, turned to face Kent, "You sure ya don't want in Kent? This stuff feels real good. I think I'm her first so I'm breaking her in for ya. She's gettin nice and slippery too, but that might be blood I'm not sure. Works all the same ya know?"

Not saying anything Kent took off his blue jacket which was far too big for him. The massive sword he wielded was strapped to his back. Unstrapping it Kent drew his sword from its sheath.
The red head was puzzled, "Woah are you into that stuff Kent? Gimmie more time with her before ya cut her up. Such a shame to let this body go to waste."
Outraged Kent screamed and charged into his fellow Corsair knocking him off of the girl. Before the red head could react Kent lifted his huge sword and impaled the man. His cheeks wet Kent asked, "How does it feel? It might hurt you, but trust me I'm enjoying this." The red head didn't respond. Lost in the reality of the situation Kent stood there for awhile looking at the man he had killed. Ashley was gone staring into nothingness completely unmoving. Glancing over at Ashley shame brought Kent back into motion. He wiped the blood from his blade and placed it back into its sheath. He walked over to Ashley's clothes, picking them up, then offered them back to her. At first Ashley was frozen without movement, but as soon as the Corsair's hand came close to her she shrieked and pushed him away from her. Trying to calm her Kent said calmly, "It's okay. It's okay. It's over. It's all over."
Ashley didn't reply but returned to crying and covered his head with her arms. Kent felt his own tears swelling again, but continued to persevere. The blond boy wrapped Ashley with her robe and lifted her from the ground. "It's okay. I'll take care of you."
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