OOC: Sorry to say it, but Jordan_Boi, that village of Mudokons has been destoryed. All is left are ruins of house, watch towers, and more. Apparently, it was eliminated quite some time ago. I need to really make some updations about Sindera, just to cover up everything that has happened. Or, you could just read the rest of the storyline.
Perry, I was seriousily impressed how you handled the sitution. You clearly explained every character and tried to introduce new concepts to our newest member. Even I wouldn't do that! You have gone a long way from where you started.
Welcome Mudokon Shaman! Your character is pretty done well, but I suggest you change your backstory to fit more into the subject of West Shrubton. Now, I know it is difficult to adjust to the RPG, since you would have to read all 15 pages. I know it can be irritating, but it will be worth it. If you need some summarization, you could look here:
http://www.oddworldforums.net/showpo...&postcount=359
This should cover up about half of the important events going in the The Albino Scrab, but has everything to do with the colony. On the other hand, I need could also update Sindera's profile to cover up the other half of the story.
IC: Slurp 1 had decided to stick around in the cave, wandering around so he could find something to do. He was still in shock to find out what he was like back in the early days. Or just that morning. Slurp had to breath it all in to realize what had happened. He just remembered trying to get food for the queen, but in a second, Slurp saw his home being attacked by Sligs! How did this happen? Why did these Glukkons want from that huge home of his? Did they want to live there too? But why didn't they just ask? He wasn't sure, but whatever they had tried to do, he stand his ground. He couldn't let the Walk men get the better of him.
Slurp slithered through out the cave, wondering what he could do. He could rest, but what if Paramites come to attack? Shouldn't he try to make them join? Or what about Shryke? Shouldn't he try to make that the four armed, big headed creature wasn't a spy? Or what if Fleeches were going to try to return back into the world of the mine? Shouldn't he keep watch? He could sense that Fleeches were going to collect more food, for the colony. Maybe he should join them as well? Slurp was unsure of what to do currently.
Yet, as he tried to think, a Fleech approuched him. He was quite frightening looking, but this was all because most of his skin was burnt off. He could almost see his visible muscles which weren't suppose to be seen. The Fleech seemed bothered by this, since his sorrow could be sensed. The Fleech tried to ignore this, when his commented,
"The Queen wishes to speak with you, oh Sav-" He rasped a cough, trying to strifle his very illness to the public. Slurp could feel that the Fleech was very ill, and deserved to rest, and not to go out to fill out orders from the Queen. Slurp pitied the Fleech and hissed to him so no one could hear except the servent,
"Why don't you have take a visit to the walk man around here? You could heal those wounds of your's. I can slither to the Queen myself. I'll tell her you fainted."
The Fleech breathed hastily in thanks, and nodded his head. He tried to use as much effort to lead himself to the sensed Mudokon. His sorrow was turning into graditude. Slurp could sense it. Slurp happily congratulated himself for helping that Fleech, and then slid away from his position.
Slurp tried to sense his way around the place, through the possibility of sensing eggs from the Queen. He slithered along the the Fleeches going with him, which he tried to pay no attention to. They seemed to be carrying food for the Queen. Maybe he could find out if he is going the right way if he followed them. He continued to go deeper into the cave, until the Fleeches took and turn and accessed the chamber that held the Queen. Slurp followed them into the cave, to find a rather interesting place.
The cavern was large to support the numerous Fleeches that were to enter, and also contained slightily smaller sub chambers. The sub chambers supported the young Fleeches that had recently hatched from eggs. Another chamber had small dents in the ground that held eggs from the Queen. Adult Fleeches watched over these sub chambers, as other adults watched and guarded the Queen herself. She had laid on larger level of the cave, and had a large dent going into the ground for her preferrance. This contained the surplus of food presented for her. She had used her tounge to slurp up the food before her to eat. Royality always gets the spoiled treatment.
The Queen noticed that her son was before her after the Fleeches had left, and she barked,
"Ah my son, it is so great to see you! Where is the subject that brought you here?"
Slurp grumbled in the thought that she never considered he was almost dying and replied
, "He has fainted in his pain."
"What a shame. Anyways, I am offering you a position on the Offense Class."
"Your honor, wasn't I not drafted there this very morning?"
"Yes, but you are to make a new class. You see, you are the only remaining member of the Offense Class, according to my servants. Therefore, you are to compose a new one, as the Commander of the Offense Class."
"Your honor, this is a great opprunity for me. Could I employee Shryke?"
"Why, you can't, because he is already above your status!"
Slurp was surprised to hear this. Shryke was already above him? Did this mean his friend was more respected than he was already? Slurp uttered,
"I don't understand."
"Your friend saved every life here in the colony. He is going to be my personal Admiral, who could do anything without interference of me or anyone else. You are going to help him, by choosing the Fleeches you know that could be of use of him. You are dismissed."
Still in shock of this decision, Slurp replied trying to cover his disgust,
"I will tell Shryke myself. Thank you for the position." Slurp left the place with a feeling of being dishonored. He seemed like he was underapperiated ever since Shryke had grown popular of the Fleeches. But he was not jealous, but rather disappionted on his position. He continued through the corriders to tell that to Shryke.