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03-16-2005, 03:41 AM
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Music Video Scripts

Here's some MV scripts I made a year 1/2 ago. I'll post one at a time (just like my drawings) and tell me what you think of them.

Tool's “Aenima”

(The video starts as the camera zooms into the earth, into the state of California, and finally to the BogWing Crew. Sarah (vocals) starts to breathe heavily in the microphone, Jester (guitar and vocals) starts to play. Drummer (drums) and Dek Shen (bass) follow suit. Sarah begins to sing.)

Some say the end is near
Some say we’ll Armageddon soon
I certainly hope we will
I sure could use a vacation from this
Bullshit
Three
Ring
Circus sideshow of freaks

(She grabs the mike and screams into it.)

Here in this hopeless ****ing hole we call LA
The only way to fix it is to flush it all away
Any ****ing time
Any ****ing day
Learn to swim
I’ll see you down in Arizona Bay

(Jester and Dek rev up their interments as the camera slowly circles around Sarah as she sings the second verse.)

Fret for your figure and
Fret for your latte and
Fret for your lawsuit and
Fret for your hairpiece and
Fret for your Prozac and
Fret for your pilot and
Fret for your contract and
Fret for your car
‘Cause it’s a
Bullshit
Three
Ring
Circus sideshow of freaks

Here in this hopeless ****ing hole we call LA
The only way to fix it is to flush it all away
Any ****ing time
Any ****ing day
Learn to swim
I’ll see you down in Arizona Bay

(It starts to rain during the solo, soaking the band members. Sarah starts breathing heavily on the microphone again. Drummer looks down to see the ground cracking. He looks a little worried, but continues playing.)

Some say a comet will fall from the sky
Followed by meteor showers and tidal waves
Followed by fault lines that cannot sit still
Followed by millions of dumbfounded dip shits

(The cracks become larger than before.)

Some say the end is near
Some say we’ll Armageddon soon
I certainly hope we will
I sure could use a vacation from this

Stupid shit
Silly shit
Stupid shit

(Jester sees the cracks and slowly moves away from them.)

One great big festering neon distraction
I’ve a suggestion to keep you all occupied

Learn to swim
Learn to swim
Learn to swim

‘Cause mom’s going to fix it all soon
Mom’s coming round to put it back the way it ought to be

(Suddenly, the ground breaks up; jets of water shooting out from the ground, and cities crumble. Wings sprout out of Sarah’s back, flying up to the sky. The ground underneath Jester, Dek, and Drummer starts to break. They float from the city and flies after Sarah. Jester plays a great guitar solo. He joins in, singing with Sarah.)

Learn to swim (8x)

**** L Ron Hubbard and
**** all his clones
**** all those gun-toting
Hip gangster wannabes

Learn to swim (8x)

**** retro anything
**** your tattoos
**** all you junkies and
**** your short memory

Learn to swim (8x)

**** smiley glad-hands
With hidden agendas
**** these dysfunctional
Insecure actresses

Learn to swim (8x)

(Sarah looks up at the sky, rain running down her face.)

Cause I’m praying for rain
And I’m praying for tidal waves
I wanna see the ground give way
I wanna watch it all go down
Mom please flush it all away
I wanna watch it right in and down
I wanna watch it right in
Watch you flush it all away

(The city below them is being washed away.)

Time to bring it down again
Don’t just call me pessimist
Try and read between the lines
I can’t imagine why you wouldn’t
Welcome any change my friend

I wanna see it all come down
Bring it down
Suck it down
Flush it down

(Sarah breathes heavily as the band starts to finish off the song. Before the video ends, the camera zooms out and we the state of California, now an island.)
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03-16-2005, 09:55 PM
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Wow, that was rather interesting. I'd like to see more of these. What others have you planned to post?
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03-17-2005, 12:03 AM
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Beautiful
Gave Up
Overcome
Hurt
Wish
Happiness in Slavery
Long Way to Fall
I Miss You
Don't Stay
The Great Below
The Noose
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03-17-2005, 07:25 PM
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Awesome! I can't wait to see them.
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i dont actually think she *made* them just yet, but honestly, i'd love to d/l these songs and import them onto my mp3 playah!
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03-18-2005, 04:25 PM
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i dont actually think she *made* them just yet, but honestly, i'd love to d/l these songs and import them onto my mp3 playah!
Oh silly, I finished them. It just takes a while to work on them, that's all.

Okay, here's another one I made for Valentine's Day.

“Beautiful”
lyrics by HIM

Disclaimer and copyrights: Shiro belongs to my online friend, Seiyru.


(The video starts at the ledge of a cliff during a rainstorm. We see the ninja, Shiro, standing on the ledge, viewing the wilderness from below. Shiro then starts having flashbacks about Sarah.)

Just one look into your eyes
One look and I'm crying

(Flashback of her, looking at him with soulful, hazel eyes.)

'Cause you're so beautiful

Just one kiss and I'm alive

(Scene switches to them, kissing.)

One kiss and I'm ready to die
'Cause you're so beautiful

(Scene switches to them at the airport. Shiro telling her that he’s going away for awhile. Sarah nods her head. She brushes a lose strain of hair from his face and kisses him goodbye. Tears begin to run from Shiro’s eyes.)

Just one touch and I'm on fire
One touch and I'm crying
'Cause you're so beautiful

(She wipes his tears away and smiles at him, telling him that she will always be there for him.)

Just one smile and I'm wild
One smile and I'm ready to die
'Cause you're so beautiful

(Cut back to the cliff. A rain soaked Shiro falls to his knees, crying.)

Oh and you're so beautiful
My darling
Oh you're so beautiful
You're so beautiful

(The flashback of them start going fast and then starts to slow down.)

Oh my baby
You're so beautiful
And you're so beautiful
Oh my darling
Oh my baby
And you're so beautiful

(A hand rest on his shoulder. He turns around to see Sarah, also soaked by the rain. Shiro holds her in a embrace, crying. She hugs him back, kissing him on the top of his head. That’s where we end the video.)
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