2 flash animations

Oddude_ · #1 12-26-2004, 07:29 AM

My friend is working with flash, and I tought yo show his 2 animations:

Stickman vs. Smily
Killing a little boy

Comments and questions, right here.

P.S: @ the 'stickman vs. smily' animation, you'll see at the end: "by DEMON".
Well, DEMON is my friend's nickname.

Oddish · #2 12-26-2004, 12:35 PM

Erm, well that wasn't great, Ive seen better, and I could make better, also it hard to read the writing. The Sickmen were better than the Boy.

Disgruntled Intern · #3 12-26-2004, 05:16 PM

You and your friend are either inredibly young or inredibly stupid.

Well, I'm actually leaning towards a combination of the two, but still.

By the way, the animations are horrid. I've pissed more amusing designs in the snow.

TheRaisin · #4 12-26-2004, 11:34 PM

Bloody, stupid, horribly put together, God-awful animation, and no sense of punctuation.

Thanks for sharing.

Facsimile · #5 12-26-2004, 11:42 PM

My first Flash was better than those two put together, and it was pretty poor.
Which is why I'm remastering it!

Biggy Bro Slig · #6 12-26-2004, 11:53 PM

I must say, it's probably not your best, and the wrighting I could not read, but I would rate it 3/5.

SeaRex · #7 12-27-2004, 08:30 AM

Well, offering some constructive criticism here, I suggest you learn to use motion and shape tweens more effectively.

Flash takes time. Not just to learn, but to produce a solid animation. Practice some more with tweens and symbols and then get back to us.

Disgruntled Intern · #8 12-27-2004, 07:10 PM

Stop being so nice all of the time.

Pansy!

Abeguy · #9 12-30-2004, 12:17 PM

BLAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
funny

odd chick · #10 12-30-2004, 03:50 PM

I thought that the Stickman vs. the Smily was really funny!

But some problems were that I couldn't read the writing and I didn't really like the Boy Killed too much. They could have definitely been better, but overall I liked the first one better than the second one, so it's cool.

Al the Glukkon · #11 12-30-2004, 03:55 PM

I am sorry but I have to agree with about everyone. How about some backgrounds?

Fuzzle Guy · #12 12-31-2004, 04:14 AM

Sould this be in the in NOA&L

TheRaisin · #13 12-31-2004, 10:24 AM

It's neither art nor literature.

SeaRex · #14 12-31-2004, 11:21 AM

Hey, here's an idea: How about you all shut the f*ck up? Hmm?

I am moving this to NOA&L. SeaRex can deal with it...

Hey... wait...

Mudokon Princess · #15 01-11-2005, 09:50 PM

what the...??? lol