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06-28-2001, 02:53 AM
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[OCC: Alright, I'm going to try and get things rolling again so if this post sux just tell me and I'll edit it!!! ]

Belinda looks at a large basket laying in the dirt.
"This might be able to help me fly someone and any supplies you have over!" Belinda goes and picks up the basket.

"Alright Salvador, hop in!!"
"Kay"

Salvador jumps in the basket.

"Alright now put in your supplies!!"

Spider looks around,"We don't really got any"

Belinda looks confused

"No Supplies? But how ever did you get so far with no ssupplies?"

Salvador looks up from the basket.
"Luck"
"Oh dear, this will not do at all Wait,here,while I go back to the castle and get some things!!"

Belinda flys east through the trees.

The rest stare at where she just flew off.
Spider is still staring off at where she fleew off to "Castle? I didn't know there were castles on Oddworld"
Salvador is still in the basket, "niether did I"

*MEANWHILE A THE RUINS OF TRINITY CASTLE*
Belinda looked at the pile of rubble that had once been the great and proud Trinity Castle, the Castle of air, the legendary Floating Castle.
Bodies of creatures like Belinda lay crushed under heaps of stone walls.
"I....I was the only survivor, what can be salvaged from this wreakage?"

Belinda sees a little girls doll.
"My people....dead"
Belinda falls on her knees, sobbing.
"I should have been there to help!"
*FLASHBACK*
Princess Belinda Morgna Dea had just finished her packing her small cloth bag.
"No castle is going to keep this princess from seeing the world!"
The 19-year old princess climbed out of her window to escape the captivity of castle life. She had flew just a few feet when suddenley the floating castle started to fall from the sky.
"What the.."
Suddenley a rock hit Belinda's head as she fell helplessly to the ground....
*END FLASHBACK*
"The bag, I forgot to grab the bag when I flew out the window!"
SHe got up from her knees and started searching till she found what she had been looking for, a small red cloth bag.
"These supplies can help us"
Belinda flew back to the cliff where the others were waiting.
"Sorry I'm late, I had trouble finding this"
She holds up the bag .
"These suppliess will last us for some days"
Spider looks at Belinda.
"Belinda, where did you go?"
"To Trinity Castle, or at least whats left of it"
"Wadda maen?"
"Trinity Castle is in ruins now since it fell from the sky"
"Fell from the sky?"
"Yes, the castle floats in the air or at least it did. I'm the only survivor"
"Who are you any way?"
"Princess Belinda Morgana Dea the 3rd, heir to the Trinity throne"
"A princess?"
"Yes, I survivod because I tried to leave the castle"
"Why?"
"I hate the captivity of the castle. I wanted to see the world and have an adventure, but now my foolishness cost me somthing dear"
"What?"
"The loss of the people I was born to protect and rule someday"
Belinda started to sob quietley. Spider and Salvador looked at her sadley.
"Belinda",Slavador asked,"Are you okay?"
Belinda wiped her tears.
"Of course"
She puts the bag in the basket with Salvador.
"Well, let's go
"
She fles Salvador up to the cliff and sets him in the basket down and flies to the bottom.
"That everyone?"
[OCC: I know it's long but I wanted to give some background on Belinda. Hope that's okay! Oh, and I know I should have entioned this earlier but oh well, Belinda has a British accent so she sounds kinda wierd to the others in terms of voice. Again if this sux, I'll just edit it. I just didn't want the RPG to die cause it's so kewl! ]
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06-28-2001, 04:15 AM
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(ooc: there are others, but apparently they either lost interest or and forgotten bout it. GRID! PACEN! JOE! RETTICK! WHERE ARE YOU!? *ahem* sorry. for now lets assume you have taken everyone to the top save for Spider (for obvious reasons). BTW DH's character would understand Belinda 'cause he's a Brit *grin*)

*after Belinda has taken everyone to the top, Spider takes off his pants and hands them to her.*

Spider: Ta miss

Belinda: No problem *takes his pants to the top*

Spider: *pads over to the tree* Alright...time ter get vertical...

*Spider scales up to the top of the tree with no problems, now he has an additional 20 or so feet climb up the cliff face.*

Spider: Now fer the tricky part...
*starts testing for firm hand holds. Finds one and gets a good grip on it. He find another and starts making his way up slowly, using his tail to brace himself the cliff when needed. He slips a couple of times but was able to recover. As soon as he was within reach the rest of the group helps him up the rest of the way.*

Spider: *panting heavily* ta *reclaims his pants* Now lets continue on shall we?
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06-29-2001, 04:20 PM
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[OOC: nothing wrong with british accents... at least we don't sound like YANKS! sorry bout that...

i'm resigning my bad guy from here. i'm not sure who, apart from Drag, knows all about him, but i'd appreciate you not telling anyone, as he will still be used in my third fic (i am as yet undecided on the title). you'll have to come up with a new bad guy, sorry...

actually, if i get my fic finished before you guys get to meet the bad guy, i may use him, but you'd better think of a new one, just in case.

sorry for bailing, but i thought the idea was too good to not be made into a fic, and i don't want to spoil it for anyone.

sorry again...

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06-29-2001, 08:40 PM
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(ooc: *sigh* well the only one I told was Grid and he hasn't been posting ANYWHERE lately. It looks like this is going to die anyway....no one is particapating anymore other then Capri and me....)
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06-30-2001, 12:21 AM
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OOC: No!!! I love this!!! I am really not good at writing, but here goes.

The group is now on top of the cliff, and they decide to continue on. There were no visible landmarks ahead, and the landscape sort of blended into one big blob.

. . .

It had been several hours, and after lunch the group set out again. Almost immediately, they stumbled upon a guard tower of some sort, with three sligs in the top. "What should we do now"? "We can take on those sligs, but a guard tower indicates that there is something important that is being guarded. Wha- he was stopped in mid sentence, because the sligs in the tower were opening fire.
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