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12-22-2003, 05:21 PM
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Blueha

(New story. Most characters and place's based on Chris Muto's art. Check it here www.nymbus7.com)


Blueha...one of those place's you don't go to. It's a place you wake up in and feel like you would after a huge party. A hangover the size of texas and you cant remember were you live or what you did last night. You can barly remember your name. The weird thing about Blueha is it seems like Purgatory after a while. Nothings really evil..and nothing's really good. But one things for sure. It's all screwed up.

Chatper 1: Let's get aquinted


He awoke, his head was throbing violently. He looked around. Sand, sand and more sand, and a few pillars of rock. Great... I'm lost... he thought to himself. Ok lets think... Who am I. ...Kevin Xavier. Alright good...at least I remember that... were did I come from? .... damn'it...I can't remember... Kevin got up, looking around again. The throbing had stopped a little but his back ached. "Hello?!" He yelled out, hoping for an answer, but all that returned was the echo of his voice. Dust blew at his anchles.
He heard the whir of an engine in the distance. What the-?! He yelled out again "Hello!!!??" he waited. "Hello!" a deep voice replyed to him from afar. Just then he heard the whir again and then a loud screching noise. Over a dune came a tall figure, organge skinned, attacked to a pare of tanktrends with long slender arms coming off a large heavily built figure. The creature took off twords Kevin, and as it got closer he noticed it had a plump round face in its chest, small silverish eyes and a large mouth, curved in a smile. He stopped short of Kevin. "Hello! My name Burgz! What your name be?!" Burgz voice boomed loudly at Kevin. "Uh...my name's Kevin. Nice to meet you Burgz. Could you kindly tell me where I am." Kevin asked. "Oh! You here!" Burgz pointed to the ground. "I know that." Said Kevin "But were is here?" Burgz thought for a moment. "Here be Outzide!" Burgz made a giant smile. "Uhn...thanks...were did you come from?" Burgz thought again. "Docter Misto's lab! Him make stuff like me there! I take you if You want!" Kevin looked up. "Could you?! I mean...I kinda lost and.." Burgz picked up Kevin and just drove off. twords the way he came. This Burgz thing isn't so bad...A little stupid mabey, but not bad at all. .


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