2D screw ups

[Abe's son]

Alrighty, Starting up the old Photo paint again and startin to pump out sprite comics, they need a home. and Im gona post them. Any way heres the Cast

CAST

Name: COAH NO.662
other names: Coah, Cy-bot, 1-eye freak thing from hell
Appearance: Has a big red eye in the middle of his forehead, is a robot
Status: Was just stabbed in the eye by a very spastic AS, and is now in "Robot Hell"
Person who he represents: Tim, my human punching bag

Name: Proto-COAH NO.223
other names: Red eye, RE, Proto
Appearance, looks normal except one eye is red
Status: looking for beer
Person who he represents: Brain, they dude who runs when there trouble

Name: AS
other names: Over reactive freak, *insert every offensive name you can think of*, Physcopath
Appearance: Wears gray sun-glasses
Status: Stabing Coah's eye out
Person who he represents: If you cant figure this one out, your either very, very, very dense, or your a newbie

Name: X-head/Ja(not yet introduced)
other names: X-dude, X-head-thing-guy-demon-person
Appearance: Has an X on his face with his eyes in between either side's of the X
Status: Waiting to be released from "Robot Hell" even though he isn't a robot (O.o go figure)
Person who he represents: Joel, crazy, innocent at first glance, but when angered shows no mercy(I'm skeeeerd O_O)

Name:Zin(not yet introduced)
other names: Oval eyes, wack head, sped
Appearance: 2 screwed up oval eyes
Status: Some were in the city, n00bzerville
Person who he represents: Xaiver(NOT THE FORUMS ONE!!)

Name:Slits (not yet introduced)
other names: shadey, rectangle eyes
Appearance: slit like eyes -_-
Status: Being Ninja man
Person who he represents: no-one, just made him up

Ok now, heres the first comic

Fun with knifes and temper!

I Realize this is crap but hey, they'll get better, remember i need to make a plot...

[Abe's son]

Feedback, please!

[Disgruntled Intern]

Don't reply to the same topic an hour later begging for feedback, loser.

[Xavier]

confusing...
you should better point who say what and make the persons more distinctive

[Facsimile]

I'm sorry, what's going on here?

[Oddsville]

Im with Fax, I too am confused...

[Majic]

Ditto... And by the way, try to make your drawings more comprehensive. *shrug*

[General Drippik]

I am just going out side to look at my cat's asshole for a second. It costs less than AS's pictures, and it is just as fun!

[Abe's son]

Well drippik you dont have to be a dickwad, you could just say, needs improvement that rather be an asshole and anounce your pleasures of looking up your cat's ass. Poor kitty.

[Abe's son]

Ok now im just gona make 1 pannle crap things, Attempt to enjoy

[Canned Gabbiar]

Hey guys, I realise that that first one was... very crappy (sorry AS) but don't get all nasty. And don't get all nasty yourself AS.

Anyway, AS, your 2D stick figures are... amusing but wouldn't you feel more comfortable if you went back to drawing those kick-ass manga characters and mecha(like the ones in your Epoch thread... they were bloody good!) I mean, they were really good and people liked them. These stick figure characters are just "copies" of Rob Lewis's stickdeath characters? It's been done.

Sorry if that sounded harsh but that's just how I feel.

[Abe-Gun's Return]

how did you make those stick figures????

By computer animation or something? If computer..what program did you use???

[Abe's son]

by computer and why the HELL are you bringing this low rated pice of shit crackhouse ****ing retarded comic back. I made it with Photopaint and MS paint for recoloring sprites. Look at JQ if you want something better. Jesus mods delet this pice of shit.