I've finally written my second article for Oddworld-Web under the guise of the mudokon named Zumer. It is about the mudokon languages, with some speculations about their history. Take a look and tell me what you think. Please question, comment and point out any mistakes.
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Great Job Khanz! From what I could see there were no mistakes, it was a great wrighting and very well put together. Congrats!
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..I managed to take out the tiger with a can of mace; but the shop owner and his son, that's a different story all together...I had to beat them to death with their own shoes...
Thanks for the input. I figured this article might be sort of boring to most people so I made it a bit short. I reread it and was feeling ashamed of my bad grammar... then I thought about Lindsey and Tori and I felt a little better.
Does anyone have any ideas for future articles? Anything in particular you would like me to write about?
Originally posted by TheKhanzumer I reread it and was feeling ashamed of my bad grammar... then I thought about Lindsey and Tori and I felt a little better.
Thanks for the ideas. I'll see what I can do about some of your suggestions. I plan on writing about most of the oddworld species, like gabbits and paramites, eventually.
Dipstikk, Writing from an industrialist perspective might be interesting but for now I'm sticking with Zumer.