Scenes I'm trifling with (Comic topic, move if need be)
Before I begin: I wasn't sure where to put this topic. I don't have any problems with moderators moving this topic. Just please don't close or delete it. If you don't want to reply, then don't.
Okay. Scene problem 1:
-The scene (or Chapter) that introduces Greg the Glukkon also introduces Greg's pet Mug, Clayton (so named from the character fom Tarzan. Greg swings from vines. You put 2+2 together). In a three-page scene Clay opens his wing caps and inflates this air-sack thing. Now, this was part theory. I was going by the blimp-things in the MO FMV, I think they were Meetles. Is that how Mugs fly as well? Keep in mind as well, Clay doen't wear Industrial Armor.
Scene problem 2:
-I am planning on a "return to Rupture Farms" sequence since, after all, that's where Actra escaped from (a rebuilt facility, not Molluck's RF.). In one sequence, Abe, Actra, Munch, Alf and Greg split up when they come to a hub. Upon the rejoining of our team, Alf and Greg get lost and Abe, Munch and Actra get caught by a Bigbro who's looking to cash-in all of their bounties. I'm having problems with the Blitzpacker gun design. Dos the can ammo face up or dowm, because I've seen two designs, and I'm not sure which one is correct.
Scene problem 3:
-Humphrey and Irwin return. (Dun dun Duuunnnn!) Apparently, a crash from an exploding blimp isn't good enough for them, is it? Is this a generally good idea?
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...And you should never argue with a rabbit.
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