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03-16-2003, 06:12 AM
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Oddworld Inventions......

Chapter 1

Klink! A bit of metal fell to the ground. Tok didn't mind. It was usless anyway. He wiped some sweat off his large head. Then he shook his hands. This project was quite a challenge. His victim squirmed. Tok used his first two hands to hold the victim down, while he reached for a sleeper syringe with his third. Then he skillfully jabbed it into the Ratz's body. "There we are, little friend. To sleep you go." He said, then he let out a laugh. He really loved his job. He looked down at the Rat. It had slightly pale skin, a large spike where its nose would be, and a small computer terminal on its side. Its most distinguishing feature, however, was the large metal base on top of its head, which cradled a mechanical arm. This had taken alot of time to accomplish, so Tok was excited. The test would begin tomorrow........

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03-20-2003, 10:01 AM
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I'll need two replies at the most. This story is about one vykker expiriment that would threaten the world. Okay, here we go.....

Chapter 2

Blip! The computer hub awakened. Tok sat at the keyboard, looking at the screen warm up. "Lets see what this thing can do" said Tok. The Ratz's eyes went red. It stood up and scanned the scene. Tok laughed and pressed a button. Three cages opened and the fuzzles inside jumped out. "Grrrrarrr!" growled one. The Rat beeped and swiftly hopped down to face his foes. The fuzzles beared their teeth and lunged at the Rat, who showed no fear. Vling! Vling! Vling! Scra-orr! Crash! Pwer, grrr! SQUEEEEEEKK! The battle had finished. The fuzzles were all dead and the Rat was fatally wounded. It let out a small beep and collapsed, dead in a puddle of blood. Tok took some blood and DNA samples and threw the corpse in the the rubbish chute. "Well, that was an allright experiment" said Tok rather half-heartedly. He would brainstorom possibilities tomorrrow....

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Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.

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03-22-2003, 06:34 PM
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Mutated rat? World threatening experiment? Cool!

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Chapter 3


Glug,Glug! Tok wiped his face. He needed that water. Now, what to use the technology for? Well, the impants did not matter, it was the control that interested him. Now what creature caused so much trouble but was essential?
He smiled. Mudokons! He imagined slaves that would make no attempts to escape and would work to the death. It would be great for buisness and the development of the species. He would have to find a test subject first.......


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the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.

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