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12-03-2002, 07:50 PM
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Oddworld Night Patrol: A Sligs Story

The night was clear, the moon gaped down on JK as he yawned on his daily night Patrol. He was a Popper, Cheap and lazy but he wasnt forced with the night shift, he needed extra money. He was a gambler, and he lost it all and he needed the money for hopefully steroid treatment then eventually ARMOUR!
The words rang out sucsess and admiration in his head, he so badly wanted to become a big bro!

His thoughts were broken when he heard a loud thump, he stared down the darkwalkway located outside the Fee. Co Depot, JK saw nothing, he heard the thump again, cocked his standerd issue machine gun and started slowly walking along the metallic walkway, his eyes panned left to right across th
e walkway till he came to the intersection then suddlenly he saw it!

A Tall figure was running towards him then he realised what it was, it was a scrub, the scrub kept looking behind him and as he did he ran into JK, literally. Jk got up to see the mud passed out,
"Damn" he muttered as he knew he would have to drag him back.

He got the muds arms and started dragging him to the Fee. Co Depot employment centre, the night was cold, JK shivered in the breeze....'Thump' Jk span round with gun ready to muller whoever or whatever was there...he stood there but nothing came out of the darkness ready to brutally kill him.

"Im going Paranoid" he chuckled to himself as he again started to drag the mud.

He entered the employment centre, it was a red, grotty room with scrubs being beaten and forced to clen the walls, he dragged the mud to the desk where another slig was napping in a rotatable chair....."Dude"...no reply..."Yo"...the only reply was a snore!

JK sighed and punched the slig in the face:

"Uh....What" yawned the slig

"Escapee" Said JK

"Take him away" said the slig , as the words had left his mouth a big bro had entered and was dragging the scrub away.

JK looked at the clock, 4:30 his quittin time, he walked up to the teleporter in the corner of the room to the slig barracks, he pulled the lever and with an instant there he was in the foyer of the barracks where there was a few sligs and big bro's, he looked up and saw 2 flying sligs hovering along next to each other. He started walking towards his barracks room, he found it after walking for about 5 minutes, No. 5673 read the sign above the door.

He walked in and was met with a suprise!



does it sound good so far!?
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12-04-2002, 05:34 PM
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I like it, it's very "slig-ish". Keep it up.
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In his home made mail box that was next to his sleeping bag there was a note, the paper was a vomit yellow and scrawled on it was 'If you want to become a big bro meet in barracks No. 7868 tomorrow night 7:00'

He stared at the paper, when a voice behind him said;

"Whats that?"

JK jumped and span to come face to face with another slig,

"nothing much"

The slig huffed and walked out, JK got into his sleeping bag and fell asleep almost instantly.

Noise greeted him in the morning, of sligs, and bigbros going in and out the barracks, he got up and looked at the notice board, no new news except for one note, scribbled on it was next week 7:00 Valet the slig will provide entertainment for the night.

JK didnt take too much notice to it, he was still thinking about the note. He once remembered a loser of a crawling slig got a note like that, and when he went he was beaten to a pulp.

His day job as gaurd at the Fee. Co Depot main station passed quickly, and it was his night off, so no night patrol tonight.

The time was 6:30, the barracks foyer was deserted, he walked to a telporter labelled 7000-8000, just as he pulled the lever he cocked his gun. He wouldnt be beaten into a pulp. He appered in a long hall, he started walking down it, the hall was empty and silent......'Clank'.....JK dived behind a pillar he looked round the pillar and he saw a empty blitzpacker can rolling towards him, he glanced at where it came from, a sign above a door read out No. 7868, he checked his ammo, cocked his gun and walked into the door and was greeted by.......
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A fist of a big bro, JK was stunned, he shook his head and ducked in time to miss the second fist coming at him, JK turned round and started running for his life, he kept looking behind him only to meet bullets ricocheting all around him, he was starting to tire and the big bro was getting closer, JK looked at his face and noticed that this guy was ugly, he made vykkers seem pretty.

He turned at the corner and carried on running, he saw another big bro coming towards him, JK stopped and turned round, the big bro that was chasing him had just come around the corner, JK opened fire, the other big bro shouted,

"What the hell are you doing"

but no reply came as JK had started running again, he came to 3 teleporters the first one said 'Fee. Co. Depot' that one was locked the second said 'Necrum' that one was locked and the last one said 'Paramonia'.

JK thought for a moment and he muttered to himself, Paramites or ugly.....Paramonia he stepped in and he was about to pull the lever when a large hand gripped around his throat and a deep voice growled,

"like muds to the slaughter"

JK reached for the lever as the grip tightened around his throat Jk's grip tightened around the lever he pulled and he fell to the floor.

Lying in front of him was a clawed hand severed at the wrist
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good story. I want to see what happens next
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He breathed a sigh of reilef. JK looked around to see the dark desolate cliffs and rocks of paramonia!

He started walking along and every now or then he heard the odd cakcle or screech, paranoia had set upon him, any noise movement made him jump!

He came to a large crack in a large rock, he walked in and he found a flame torch, he picked the torch up in his left hand and he had his gun in the other.

he carried walking through the crack...it entered into a large corridor that had webs in, Jk could fell himself sweating. he heard a screech. He spun round...nothing...he looked up and saw 3 paramites hanging on a web and they were angry!

One dived JK fired but missed! he started sprnting in the over direction as the paramites bounded after him. he could hear them getting closer, he turned round and started running backwards. one dived he fired and the the mutilated corpse fell to the ground.

he carried on running, he turned a corner and he thought "I'm Saved!"
A lift was there ready and waiting he ran to it and started pulling himself up, there was a web behind it and he saw the 2 paramites climbing up.

he reached the top first, the paramites web ended on a rock next to the lift, he shot the pulley and the lift went crashing down!

The 2 paramites reached the top of their web. one Jumped for JK but went tumbling down oly to me impaled on the lift.

The second stayed where it was while JK sprinted off. He ran round a corner into another slig.

The slig was a flying slig.
"How did you get here?" Asked JK

"I was on duty but i got chased and i cant find my way out!, how about you?" replied the slig

"It's a long story" Sighed JK

"we got plenty of time said the flying slig who was niw hovering about 2 ft above JK.

so JK told the slig all about what had happened, while the slig listened the two didnt notice the huge group of paramites forming near them!
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good story, I like the implementation of paramonia
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I'm saying that I liked how you used Paramonia in your story.
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The 2 sligs were completely oblivious too the danger they were in.

CLICK

"What was that?" whispered JK

all he was replied with was a scream as he saw the other slig being mauled and torn too peices. He Started running as fast as he could he was running along a dusty plain with 30 odd paramites behind him and they were gaining!

in the horizen he saw a line a metal door with a motion sensor...he was running so fast and the paramites were so close he could fell there breath on his back....He dived past the sensor and a metal door came up from the floor and as it was going up it smacked the nearest paramite in the jaw and the paramite flipped over onto another.
The two paramites started fighting.

JK looked up and he saw a large stone wall with four teleporters.

1) Slig Barracks
2) Flub Fuels
3) Fee. Co. Depot
4) Magog Motors

He didn't want to chance ugly again so he chose the Fee. Co. depot.

as he appeared in the main reception he looked at the time 10:00, "just in time for the night shift!" he thought, he went to reception to sign in.

"God you look as though you went through hell!" said the slig behind the desk.

"Yeah...I was somewhere worse!" Sighed JK with a sense of irony in his voice. He walked out into the cold air to start his shift.

He did his shift as normal and went back to reception he got his moolah and he teleported himselk into the foyer of the slig barracks.

He walked to his room, there were two sligs playing a card game when he entered.

"Wanna join?" one asked as the other sat there smoking his cigar and lokking at his opponents cards!

"Nah thanks" Yawned JK as he pulled a box out of his locker.

he undid the box with a combination. he added up all the money in there with his cheque he got today and it came up too 5000 moolah.

"YES" he shouted, the other too sligs just turned their heads then carried on with their game.

JK had enough money to by Steroid treatment and a new gun!

he locked his box and put it away and went to sleep a happy slig!



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JK woke up and immediatley poured his money into his wallet and rushed to the M.A.S.H clinic.

He burst through the doors and skidded to a halt at the front desk where there was a vykker, a relativly ugly one it almost could compete with the big bro that almost killed him.

"Yes?" it schreeched

"I'm here for the steroid treatment." gasped JK.

"Through there" it schreeched as its clawed hand jabbed to a double door.

JK took a deep breath and walked in to see a hunched back of a vykker studieng a saw which was stained brown with blood and rust.

"Excuse me" JK said

the vykker turned round, this one wasnt as ugly but still JK's stomach turned. The vykker was wearing a lamp on its head.

"And you are here for?" he asked in a quite subtle but scratchy voice.

"I'm here for the steroid treatment" Grinned JK.

"ahh....may i have the payment." JK gave the doc the money. "Lie down" said the vykker as he batted a worn out operating table.

As Jk lied down a large needle started coming towards his neck,

"Isn't there a sedative he asked nevously"

"This IS the sedative" cackled the vykker

The needle was getting closer and closer then it stopped about 1cm from JK's neck, he sighed.

another machine started up, it was two mechanical arms, they grabbed hold of each leg and yanked the pants of him.
JK took one last look at his pants as the needle rammed itself into his neck...he passed out.



He woke up, his eyes were blurry. He tried to sit up but he couldn't he looked at his wrists there were two large shacklesbounding his muscular arms down and a large shacle around his waist.

"Why the shackles doc?" came his deep voice.

"They are for your protection, I will remove them in 30 minutes...it has been known for sligs to have huge spasm fits!"

"Why are my eye's blurry?"

"Ahh yes I almost forgot!" JK turned his head too look at the doc, the doc pushed a button, JK looked up too see a large mask coming down onto his face.

the mask locked into place and JK could see again.




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JK looked around the brown surgery room.

"Im going to unshackle you now" Sighed the Doc

"Ok" replied JK as he watched the vykker walk around him and unshackle his arms and waist.

JK felt releived to have the heavy rusty shackles off, he sat up so his muscular tail hang off the metal table, his tail touched something metal, he leaned over to see a huge pear of black metallic pants!

"Ah so you have found your pants.....well go on get in them!" grinned the doc.

JK hoisted himself into the pants, he started to move around, he pulled out his wallet and checked his money, JK looked down at his pants and grinned!

"Ahhhh I see you like, any way you may go now." grinned the Doc.

JK walked out of the clinic and started walking through the corridors till he passed a small shop, it was simply called 'GUNS, ammo and and other crap!' JK bent over to get through the door, he opened the door and entered a smoke filled room, it had 3 sligs in the room, one at the counter, one browsing and one asleep in the corner.

JK opened his wallet, and walked towards the counter, he thumped down what was left of his cash and said to the slig:

"Show me somthing special!" the slig at the counter looked a bit confused then with a mexican accent he said,

"Ahhh somthing special....follow me" he beckoned JK into another room.

JK followed the slig into the room, the room had tons of blankets covering things,

"Now this is the good stuff! Not those wussy machine guns out front!" chuckled the slig, "Take a look at anything you like!" smiled the slig.

JK went to a mouldy green cloth, he grabbed it with his clawed hand and pulled it off to reveal what looked like 2 Double barrel blitzpackers, "What are these?" asked JK.

"These are the T67939 Semi automatics!" JK raised one eyebrow,
"They may look like double bliztpackers to you but trust me, these are a lot more! I'll show you!"

The slig hurried through a door and JK followed, he saw the slig holding the T67939 Semi automatics, JK looked around to see that it was a target range.

"Take these." The slig said as he threw the guns to JK

"Right the left gun will fire:
bullets,
grenades,
tranquilliser.

while the right gun will fire:
bullets,
smoke grenades.

The switch on the left gun has three settings and they are what i just said.

These guns also come with free ammo and a set of thermal goggles!" smiled the slig.

one word left JK's mouth...."SOLD"
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JK walked out of the shop and started to stomp his way towards the rifle range. After about ten minutes he found it, he walked in...it was a grey room which only had 3 sligs in it:

A popper
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A BigBro

Jk walked to an empty stall and pulled out his guns, the flying slig and the popper walked to him and were in a state of awe.

"Woah heavy equipment" Chuckled the flying slig
"Show us what they can do then!" Snapped the popper who sounded quite Impatient.

JK aimed and fire, the bullets ripped through the wooden target (which was shaped like a mud),

"Anything else" yawned the popper,

JK fired a grenade at the second target,

"Im still not impress.......zzz....zzz" JK had shot the slig with a tranquilliser.

JK turned around to see the BigBro walking out, JK had a strange sense of Dejá vu, he walkede out and stared at the BigBro then he realised...the slig had one hand! "There goes Ugly!" he thought..he checked the clock and slowly made his way to his Night Patrol!
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Another story I just cant wait to see continue. I have noticed from even briefly looking over a lot of these stories, tha lately a lot of good stories and good new and old writers, writing great Fan Fics. Im proud to be in the presense of so many awesome stories. I just cant wait to be having these submitted to the FC contests when I get that going. Great Work again to you M.O.M. and also all the writers in FC.


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JK walked along the metal platform outside the Fee. Co. Depot to his usual patrol zone , he passed a few sligs starting and ending their shifts, he carried on walking, his pants making a lound clang as he walked....he finally found his Patrol zone and he sttod there on the lookout.

"BONG"

JK looked around him, he saw nothing.

"Bong, Bong, Bong"

Jk looked around again...and again he saw nothing.

"Bong"

JK flipped down his thermal goggles and he looked to the left.....nothing.
He looked to the right.......there was something there.....there wwas more than one of them. Then it hit him SIX muds all standing there silent, JK turned off his thermal goggles....he saw nothing, He turned them on an Ta-daa they were there!

"Go kick some booty!" came a voice and with that JK was being battered with spooce! He dived behind a corner, he set his gun to tranquilliser...."Think of the reward.....Think of the head lines!!" he thought to him self!

He took a deep breath and... he stepped out and fired. He carried on swing his guns from left to right, the muds going down one by one until it came to one more, this one didnt have a weapon....it started chanting JK fired, Six darts left his gone and thrusted there needles into the muds chest and neck. The mud stopped chanting, his limp body fell to the floor.

JK turned off his thermal goggles....they were still invisible, so yhe turned them back on he walked over to the limp bodies of the mud an mudarchers. he picked them up, he had two over each shoulder and was dragging two.

He walked and walked and walked....and for a little change of pace he walked some more. He walked past a armoured popper,

"Whatcha got there? Beefy" he asked

"Watch." Said JK as he turned his thermal goggles off...slowly but surely the bodies became visible.

"Woah!" gasped the slig as JK carried on walking until he walked into reception.

the same slacking slig was at the desk as last time,

"Yo" shouted JK

"uhhh...what" Yawned the slig.

"Detainees" Grinned JK, two other BigBro's took the muds while the slig at reception typed out a note and gave it to JK.

"Take this to your CEO!" Yawned the slig.

"Will do chuckled JK as he walked out of reception and started to walk to his CEO.....Howitzer.

no one knew his first name apart from his mother.

this Gluk struck fear into the hardest BigBro but not JK, they had been friends since JK got his first gun!

JK stomped off towards Howitzer's office to collect his reward!
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BANG!!! Howitzer span round to see the hulking body of JK standing in his doorway,

"Yes...." came the deep throaty voice Howitzer, "can I help you Son?"

"You cant reconise old JK can you!" Chuckled JK.

Howitzer squinted into the light....he paused then started to roar with laughter,

"JK!" he shouted "Come in, sit down, tellme your worries !"

JK was obliged but declined, he was afraid the chair would break under his weight!

"How you getting on Howitzer?" JK said with a grin as he stared at the jade green pin stripe suit with the Silver hankercheif that Howitzer was wearing. "So almost to the top Howitzer...I bet life is good for you!",

"Oh it is!" chuckled Howitzer.... "anyways what you doing here?" asked the Gluk,

JK Slapped down the note which read... 'this hearby slig has captured six alive mudokons'

Howitzer had put on a pair of glasses and had read the note...now he was shuffling under his desk....he finally appeared with a cloth bag and he gave it to JK.

JK opened it, it revealed 3000 moolah and tickets to see Valet...CO's Box!

JK gasped...."No Slig has ever been up there!"

"and your gonna be the first!" smiled the Gluk... "I hear these muds were mudarchers and one of them was suspected to be abe and you took them all down without killing one!" said Howitzer in a state of amazement.

"Yep none were killed, they took me by suprise though, they somehow were invisble."

"Invisible you say, im gonna check out that...any im gonna get to the point, i know you had that problem but you've over come it and you've made your way this far so im gonna transfer you to boot camp!"

"Boot Camp..." shouted JK... "why are you demoting me?!?!"

Howitzer laughed "Im not demoting you, im sending you to boot camp for..."

JK's eyes lit up...."S.A.S.S"....Howitzer grinned and nodded JK yelled for joy, thanked his CO and ran to his barracks so he could yell some more!
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MORE more more! *Was* the chanting mud Abe? Why were the mudarchers there and how were they invisible?
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The S.A.S.S meant Special Armed Slig Services and it was the elite group...it tokk strentgh, brutality, courage and big ass guns to get in!

JK was waiting in line for the sign up, the line wasnt to long and suprisingly most of the sligs were just popper's, he was the only big bro in the line, but he didnt have to go through the whole are you willing crap...he had a pass from Howitzer!

He finally arrived at the desk to see a small slig, JK shoved the pass in the slig's face, the slig put on some glasses and quicikly read through the note and signalled To Jk to go through a door in front of him and as JK did it would change his life in many ways!!!
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