a sligy sligy poem

[Gabbit]

I saw a slig with a wig.
And he had a pig.

-The End I did that when i was in 1 grade and i was 6 there. It isnt bad for a first grader HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa

[dark_xinos]

Lol! Thats nice and short! Not nice and short in the way that its good that its short, no, nice....and short

[~MuDoKoN~hAwKEr]

hehe thx for saying its nice im trying to make another in my mind

[Whistling kettle]

Yup! Nice and short.

EDIT:
Posted by Cool paramite:

There's a fuzzle on my head
And the fuzzle is mad

And I asked him what?!
Have your brother been shot?

Was he shot by a slig
Or are you just sick?

Or have you cornered a paramite?
You know that's not bright

But the fuzzle on my head
Said nothing and is still mad!

and
Posted by Sligface 202

my name is sligface.
im tryin to stop the mudokon race.
u got a problem wit dat.
then go F*** a rat!

im hea chillin in da cab.
waitin' to go to Vykerrs lab.
im gonna test a fuzzle.
i think im gonna be puzzled.

i got to hyper.
so,i shot a vykerr.
i left vykerrs lab.
it was the only choice i had.

i got real hungry.
so,i went to a shack.
i looked at the left.
i saw some sligs smokin' on crack.

i looked at the right.
i saw a paramite.
as usual i shot it.
but,i missed it.

i got chased.
both of us raced.
i shot it again.
and it felt the pain!

it finally died.
it was paramite pied.
it was delicious.
it was nutricious!

i went to the slig barracks.
i saw the sligs smokin' on crack.
they saw me.
so,i said he he he.

i said hi.
they said bleh!
i said want some paramite pie?
they said bleh!

i got pissed.
so,i hissed.
i called my big bro slig.
but,he was to busy at Rupture Farms cuttin' a pig.

i went to bed.
thinkin' about the paramite that was dead.
i closed my eyes.
i woke up to the sound of get your free paramite pies!

they were my pies.
gettin' sold by crawling sligs.
i stepped on it.
but,when i looked up i saw molluck.

i said oopps.
he said that i was fired.
he went to poop.
but,i shot him.

he did die.
i actually saved the mudokon race.
i know the mudokons won't forget,
the name sligface!

and also
Posted by gabbit

I saw a slig with a wig.
And he had a pig.

The oddy poems collection by ME


-Tolle, lege. Take (this) and read

[~MuDoKoN~hAwKEr]

wow!! that was a better poem then mine good job

[dark_xinos]

Whistling Kettle... YOU FORGOTT MINE!!!!!!!

[Alector]

Shame on you WK, you also forgot mine! *slaps him*

To Gabbit...very short poem...the rhymes seem not logical to me because : Why does a Slig needs a wig? And does he needs a pig for something, does the Sligwants to eat it, or is it the pet of him?

When you start to make a poem, don't think of quick rhymes, you also have to respect the poetical logic in every row.

My tip : Try it again ^^

[Dequibenzo]

Fingers twitching in elation
Thumb pads sweating, palms clasped round
That which beats the crap play station
2 into the bloody ground
Black and plastic, custom fitting
Like it's tailored to my grip
Butt's asleep from all this sitting
From my soda, take a sip
On the screen are two half-bumbling
Heroes of fantastic lore
Praise for Oddworld that I'm mumbling
Even greater than before
Abe's were great, but Munch, fantastic
PSX was nice, but wow
To stay here with the Xbox, drastic
measures must be made, but how?
My gaze flits left, my eyes dart right
But no quick fix falls in my zone
I stay at my friend's house tonight
Tommorrow, though, I *sniff* go home