The Story behind the Story

Nathanton · #1 03-07-2002, 05:22 PM

This is MY first story so, dont laugh...Anyway its a mystery action...

After a long nights rest, prake sets of on his usual trail, slythering around, and poisoning those small isignificant creatures.( no fuzzles, just fleeches and stuff ) As he journeys, he hears a noise, a noise of technology taking place. Prake, having always considered himself as a guardian of the forest, decides to drop everything, turns invisible, and inspect...As he moves closer, and the trees give way, he sees something that gives him the shock of his life... Before him, there is an army of workers and sligs. At least a 1000 mudokons chopping away all that is green. 100 Bigbro sligs are making sure there is enough security, and no escapees. He sees a machine, "bird zapper". but before he has time to inspect, a mudokon tries to escape. It is running as fast as he can, but a bigbro gives a shot. BOf!.It is all over for him. Then he sees another machine, "soulsucker", it comes closer, it looks like a vacume cleaner just a lot bigger and comes with a controll room.As it stands halfway over the lifeles mudokon, it starts making noises. Even though he is dead, he starts screaming, it is the most grusome thing prake has ever seen. in a flashing of colours there just goes a final BOOOM!.The mudokon, a green colour, has now turned black, a pitch black. The machine now turns around. A gang of Vykkers come out! That is odd.Though close, Glukkon businesses and vykkers have never worked together.The gang of Vykkers are now working on the dark mud. After a while, they give way.It is grusome. Where he was shot, is now a huge bulking machine, claws and all. Prake now notices more of thes, these things! They all have metallic parts on different places, of wich the most grusome is the one with the robotic head. Upon further inspection, prake notices Interns, sligs of all kinds, slogs, Glukkons, every bad creature in his head is there.All this is to much for him. He has to get out of here! They have all united! He has to warn the mudokons, we must prepare for what is to come!

munchman · #2 03-09-2002, 05:24 PM

good story

Nathanton · #3 03-09-2002, 05:33 PM

Would somebody (other than myself) please answer, or at least comment? PLS, thankyou!

salty pretzils · #4 03-09-2002, 05:44 PM

okay*cracks knuckles* this is my first ever try at this sort of thing...here goes..
di soared high above the trees,his twin implanted jet engines pumping out noxious smoke.the parimite side of him urging him to dive,devour,when he sensed something and halted in mid air..he was sue he had sniffed the awful stink of slig.his teeth clenched in a hideous grimase,he soared down and saw something that caused him to spit out a huge gob of toxic slime..he had seen a huge mass of those mutilated freaks..vykers..he also saw aq creature of some race unown to him racing through the forest. locking on,he began to follow..(my creature is a mutilated end of a ruined experiment..it's a parimite with jet engines)

Nathanton · #5 03-09-2002, 06:29 PM

Prake, running as fast as his tail thingy could carry him, had noticed that, out of shock, he had gone visible again. Ho suddenly thinks that someone saw him, what if thay did? As he runs, not concetrating though, he suddenly notices a shadow below him! He is now so worried he cant control himself, or his powers!He starts flashing, 1st visible, then not ,then again! It goes on until finally he collapses, hoping that whatever chased him, is friendly...

salty pretzils · #6 03-10-2002, 05:28 PM

di looked down at the creature beneath him,landed and gingerly sniffed at him.he came to the conclusion that the thing was at least harmless at the moment,and said "what are you doing in my forest?".he felt that perhaps this thing had seen what he had,and waited for its response...