slig assassin (the story)

[bobtheguy]

Alright this may be a little bit different than the fan games storyline, but I decided to make fan fic of the slig assasin. It will probably suck since this is my first fanfic.
CHAPTER 1-Creation
I am Experiment 1717, I was created at GENE WORKZ, a genetic laboratory made by the glukkons to create more "profitable" creatures. Except I wasn't created to be chopped up and sold as a meat product, I was created for security uses. They wanted to make a slig that was much more powerfull than a normal slig and that could posses things and open bird portals like abe could, so they mixed an albino slogs genes with abes genes with a normal sligs genes, They wanted the obedeince of a slog, the body of a slig and the powers of abe. However their experiment was a disaster, and they made an albino slig with abe's powers and a mind like abe's mind. I can posses, but I haven't learned how to yet. They putme in the mis-experiments holding room, this is were experiments that the glukkons have screwed up on go to, everyone in this holding room is on a waiting list to be killed, I'm the next. I have no idea how I'm going to get out of this.
-to be continued-
UPDATES:
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chapter2added
chapter2edited
chapter3added
chapter4added
chapter5added
chapter6(part1)added
chapter6(part2)added
(chapter7 coming soon)

[JayDee]

awesome so far nice story line

[bobtheguy]

heres chapter 2
CHAPTER 2-The Visit
5 hours before I would be killed, I staired up at the meat grinder that was on a timer to come spiraling down on me, chopping me up into little peices, in 5 hours. an hour passed, now 4 hours left. then something strange happened, some strange mudokuns that were ghosts came to visit me, they were called the weirdos. They said that if I went on a mission to save the mudokuns that were slave laborers for GENE WORKZ, and assassanate the executive glukkons, then they (the weirdos) would free me. I accepted their offer. They also said that before I went on this mission I would need to pass the sligorian triles, which could be took at the sligorian temple, a temple that a secret society of sligs lived in who disagreed with what the glukkons did. If I passed these trials then I would be accepted to go on their mission. Then they somehow got some birds to come, and they turned them into a portal, they told me to hop in it, and then I would be teleported to the sligorian temple, so I did.
-to be continued-

[Rampage48]

Keep it up!

[bobtheguy]

CHAPTER 3- The Temple
I arrived outside of the sligorian temple, the landscape around it was rocky and mountanous, and there were giant trees sprinkled about the mountain. It was strange to breathe and feel the crisp outside air, In GENE WORKZ everything had been kept sterile and clean. I also had never seen so much space, at GENE WORKZ I had been kept in a small holding pin. For minutes I just stared of into the horizon, until I heard the weirdos say that they had a buisy schedule and that I better hurry up, or they'd pick someone else to go on the mission. When I got to the temple, the weirdos said their farewells and said that they'd visit me after I completed the sligorian triles. I looked around it, there were sligs everywhere, some were even chanting, like mudokuns. I made my way through the temple and eventually found the trile room. there were six doors , each one, had a different symbol above it. I made my way over to the one with a water drop symbol above it, and entered the door.
-to be continued-

[Rampage48]

+rep.

[bobtheguy]

okay heres another chapter, the spelling might be kinda bad, since I didn't check over it that much.
CHAPTER 4- Trile 1
When I entered the door and went into the trile room I noticed a long path that led upwards towards the ceiling, and there was a door at the top that led out of the trile, and I could see a couple of cages that were dangling from the ceiling. I observed the room and then I felt something cold and wet at my feet, and at that time I noticed the room was, quickly, filling up with water, I began to run up the stairs (since I didn't know how to swim). While I was running I stepped on a foot switch, which released 5 fleeches from one of the cages above, they came up to me and started trying to eat me, each time their tounges hit me they made me bleed a little, soon I began to feel dizzy, my vision was bluring and I stumbled around. I was slowing down... just one more step I though to myself... just one... ju... j... j... Then I stumbled and fell off of the side of the platform. Splash! I hit the cold water and it caused me to wake up a bit, and I slowly climbed back up the side of the platform. I started running again and was almost at the top, the fleeches were still nipping at my legs. I accidently stepped on another foot switch, it released a scrab. Lucky for me, it noticed the fleeches before it noticed me, and they got in a fight, while I ran further up the platform. Finally, I was at the top, I entered the door and it led me out of the trial. When I was out of the trial room I found a meat sack hanging from the ceiling and grabbed a chunk of meat from it and ate it. Then I sat down on a rock and decided to get some rest before going on my next trial.
-to be continued-

[bobtheguy]

heres chapter 5, kinda ouchy though
CHAPTER 5- Trile 2
After I was rested I decided to go on another trile, I made my way over to it's door, which had a slig symbol on it. When I was in the trile I noticed that it was a long strait trail that led to another door. I started walking, something didn't seem right, it was just too easy... Suddenly I heard the sound of gunfire coming from far away, I quickly dogged some bullets and darted behind a large rock, someone was shooting at me, slowly I peaked my head around the rock, and I noticed that on a far away platform there were several sligs that had their guns aimed at me, ready to fire. I quickly leaped out from behind my hiding place and behind another rock as more bullets came flying throuh the air. I hopped again, but this time to a big metal tank labeled BOOM, which had a button on it. I pressed the buton and a grenade fell out of a pipe attached to the tank, I grabbed the grenade and through it into the distance were the sligs that were firning at me were, and to my surprise they cought it and threw it back at me, there wasn't even enough time to pick it up and throw it back at them, so I just ran as quickly as I could, BOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!! the whole entire tank of grenades exploded and tiny shards of metal came shooting at me, splintering my back. I was bleeding pretty badly. I had the same dizzy feeling as when the fleeches had started biting me in my previous trile. I knew that if I ran it would make the blood in my body flow faster, which I did not want to happen, since I had so many open wounds on my back. These triles are very painfull I thought to my self. I waited until the wounds had formed scabs, and started running again, but there were no more rock barriers the rest of the way, just open land. I was almost to the door, almost was not close enough, I qucikened my pace as I felt a bullet scim my shoulder, finally I reached the door and walked through. When I got out I had another peice of meat, and then found some webs that a paramite had made and used them to bandage my wounds, and then went to go rest again.
-to be continued-

[Rampage48]

I want to say one thing:Holy crap you are good at writing stories.

[bobtheguy]

I want to say one thing:Holy crap you are good at writing stories.

not really, there are much better writers than me on this forum

[Rampage48]

eh well your better than me. man i wish this was a jump in story. it would be cool. but im subscribed to this thread. Keep up the good work!

[bobtheguy]

eh well your better than me. man i wish this was a jump in story. it would be cool. but im subscribed to this thread. Keep up the good work!

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thanks, I might make the next one so that people can vote on what happens. If that's what you mean by jump in.

[Rampage48]

by jump in i ment kinda like a roleplay except mainly a story.Like we type up our own part or something. But that would be good. if you did the feature you were talking about it would be a CYOA(Choose your own adventure) and those usally dont always turn out good. But it could. You never know.

[bobtheguy]

heres a Choose Your Own Adventure Chapter
CHAPTER 6(part1)- Trile 3
When I had got some rest I headed towards another trile door, this one had a labrynth (maze) symbol above it, so I walked in. Once I was in I noticed that I had just entered a huge maze, I glanced around, there were two ways to go Left or Right, I chose Right, I walked down it for aboutan hour, it was just a straight path leading into darkness. I rested against a wall for a minute and felt something pushing at my back, I looked back and saw nothing behind me. It pushed me again, I got up and then that was when I noticed something, the walls were slowly moving towards me, I didn't want to be crushed so I started running as fast as I could back to the entrance. When I reached it the door wasn't there anymore. I decided to take left this time, I slowly walked through it, and observed it's walls, no they weren't moving in on me, so that was good. But once I got far into the left side of the maze I noticed slimy things crawling past my feet, they were slugs, and then I noticed snoaring sounds coming from the ceiling, that's when I noticed that the ceiling was covered with fleeches. I walked a bit slower, making sure I didn't step on an of the slugs. Then I did, by accident, that made the fleeches above me wake up. I started running as fast as possible, as I did I stepped on slugs causing more fleeches to fall, thousands had fallen now, and they were all after me. I suddenly reached a fork in the maze, I could either go strait forward, left, or right. I had to make a decision quickly. which way?
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And now people can vote on which way they want him to go
Left
Right
or keep going forwards
voting ends in 15 minutes,if there are no votes I will pick and if there is a tie I will flip a coin.

[STM]

FUXIN awesome thats right X

[bobtheguy]

okayno votes wer received so I'm picking sraight forward
here it is
CHAPTER 6(part 2)-Trile 3
I decided to keep running straight forward, I reached a dead end and the fleeches were near me, I was trapped. The fleaches reached me and started cutting me with their tounges, I fell down and then... died. Luckily I had quicksaved at the fork in the rode, so I got to go back to it. When I was back to it I decided to go right this time, I started running away from the fleaches again and then bumped into something, and it started chasing me, I couldn't see it in the dark, but I was guessing it was another scrab. now there were fleeches and a scrab chasing me, I kept running forward and then ran into something else, it was the end of the trial door, I dashed trough it and got back into the trial room. I decided to take another rest (as always) before going on my next trial.
-to be continued-
yeah I know tha quicksave thing was kind of odd.

[joshkrz]

Haha Lol! "Luckily I had quicksaved" sounds so casual. This is great man, your writing isn't that good (becareful with grammer and spelling), but your ideas are great!

+rep

[glukkonlulu]

okay heres another chapter, the spelling might be kinda bad, since I didn't check over it that much.
CHAPTER 4- Trile 1
When I entered the door and went into the trile room I noticed a long path that led upwards towards the ceiling, and there was a door at the top that led out of the trile, and I could see a couple of cages that were dangling from the ceiling. I observed the room and then I felt something cold and wet at my feet, and at that time I noticed the room was, quickly, filling up with water, I began to run up the stairs (since I didn't know how to swim). While I was running I stepped on a foot switch, which released 5 fleeches from one of the cages above, they came up to me and started trying to eat me, each time their tounges hit me they made me bleed a little, soon I began to feel dizzy, my vision was bluring and I stumbled around. I was slowing down... just one more step I though to myself... just one... ju... j... j... Then I stumbled and fell off of the side of the platform. Splash! I hit the cold water and it caused me to wake up a bit, and I slowly climbed back up the side of the platform. I started running again and was almost at the top, the fleeches were still nipping at my legs. I accidently stepped on another foot switch, it released a scrab. Lucky for me, it noticed the fleeches before it noticed me, and they got in a fight, while I ran further up the platform. Finally, I was at the top, I entered the door and it led me out of the trial. When I was out of the trial room I found a meat sack hanging from the ceiling and grabbed a chunk of meat from it and ate it. Then I sat down on a rock and decided to get some rest before going on my next trial.
-to be continued-

cool story

[glukkonlulu]

lol you are good at making up storys