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12-06-2001, 08:42 PM
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Elum Stable (no, not Elum's site)

*can't draw and doesn't have time to write fan-fics*
That's why I am posting this:
My description of Elum Stable:

This is a massive Maggog Cartel-owned warehouse full to the brim with Elum. Some Elum are are in large pens for breeding while some are in individual cages or crates ready to be shipped off to Vykkers Labs. Most of the interior of the Elum Stable is a maze of corridors, it would be suicide to walk round a corner without first checking if there was an armed Intern or any sort of Slig there. The pens are a death-trap because of how closely-packed they are with Elum, not to mention the amount of Elum faeces and urine which is always on the floor as the Elum are never moved around save for breeding and feeding, that is (no Intern has ever applied for the job of cleaning the pens so they have to be 'enticed' into it with 'offers' of free electro-shock therapy from thier pain-loving friends, the Vykkers - they never actually succeed at the job, they usually pass-out before being trampled to death).
The corridors are not quite as unsanitary as the pens, but sill, you wouldn't be found alive in there if you ate your food after you dropped it or you walked down there with an open-wound on your foot.
The only place you wouldn't mind visiting is the Executive Offices where the evil Marlik...err...sits around getting his feet massaged while profits rise and Elum get slaughtered, sold and bred.
I haven't told you about the slaughtering yet, you say? Well, the slaughter-house is a seperate building to the main Elum Stable connected by a corridor which Elum are hearded through in their thousands but, for some strange reason, they are only hearded from the warehouse to the slaughter-house but not the other way. They do, however, appear on the other side in tight-fitting barrels.
As you can see, Elum Stable is one of the Maggog Cartel's most profitable franchises due to it's vast infrastructure of Elum killing and selling. If you wish to visit again you would be more than welcome.

Sorry Elum for using your site as the name for this place...

That was what I sent into Alcar's competition,
December Competitions: now open!!!
I liked it so much I decided to post it here.

What do you think?
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12-06-2001, 09:19 PM
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yeah........um.....oh yeah!!!........what????
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12-07-2001, 04:44 AM
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I have got to say that, that piece of writing is a masterpiece!

Im not saying that you are definately the winner but this is the kind of entry i wanted to see.

All i can say... WOW!
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12-07-2001, 10:15 AM
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I'm planning on maybe using it in a fic someday, but I may have to change the name of the Glukkon as I borrowed the name from Dan
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12-07-2001, 07:09 PM
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Cool GlukSchmuck, im sure you'll wanna go here: http://www.oddworldian.net/oddworldf...c&f=1&t=001200

Read it all and im sure you can be given a 'leader' position
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12-07-2001, 08:08 PM
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Gues he really does want to be given a 'leader' position
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12-07-2001, 09:55 PM
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Why thank you. I like the title 'leader'.
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I'm gonna be a leader too!
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