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Slaga's Faith

For newcomers, this is the sequal to the fan fic "Slaga's Story." Read it before you read this.

Chapter 1: A rough start

Gertian and a slig trio went out in the forest to look for Slaga. They had first started right after Slaga had dissapeared after freeing all the mudokkons in Gertian's Brew. "Slaga can run, but he surely can't hide." Said Gertian. He and his slig trio kept walking. Suddenly they walked up to a wall. A mudokkon looked over it. "What do you want?" Asked the mudokkon. "Let us through!" Ordered a slig. "Fine." Replied the mudokkon. He went down and opened the gate. when the gate was fully opened, they saw a large army of mudarchers and tomahawkers.
"You're not getting through here without a fight." Said a mudokkon. "I war is what you want? Then you'll get one!" Yelled Gertian. The sligs and mudokkons started attacking eachother. The sligs were badly hurt. "Retreat!" Ordered Gertian. They all ran away. "I'm pretty sure they'll be back." Said a mudokkon. "And we'll be ready." Replied another mudokkon. The mudokkons started to train up a larger army and build more attack towers. On the other side of the forest, there was Slaga now at the age of 19. "The end of my life is near. I must fix this mess." Slaga said to himself. "There is a way." Said a voice. Then, a mudokkon shepard appeared in front of Slaga's eyes.
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Horray! A sequel! Write more please!
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Yay, I'm so glad you decided to write a sequel!! Good job with the beginning, Sliguy! I can't wait to see what happens!
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Chapter 2: A way

"Aren't you afraid of me. I'm a slig." Said Slaga. "I'm not afraid. I know you work for justice. My goal is to keep it that way." Replied the mudokkon shepard. "Don't you know that the end of my life is near?" Asked Slaga. "Yes. I know a way to make you immortal and live forever." Replied the mudokkon shepard. Slaga was puzzled. 'How can that be?' Thought Slaga. They both sat down on the hard dirt.
"There are four different kinds of fires," explained the mudokkon shepard, "you must put these fires on sticks. The first one is the regular fire, the orange fire. That can be found anywhere. The second one is the green fire. It must be found in the Marshwood Forest. The third one is the yellow fire. It can be found only in the Geruda Cave. The final one is the blue fire. It must be found on top of the Iceshad Hill. Once you have one of those fires, you must go to that temple over that hill and light one of the torcholders. Once all of them are lit, you'll be given the gift of immortality. Also, you shall stay at the age of fourteen."
It all sounded clear to Slaga. He knew what he had to do. He also knew that his life was at risk on this dangerous task. 'I must accept.' Slaga kept thinking. So he did. "Excellent. Remember Slaga, do the best you can." Replied the mudokkon shepard as he vanished.
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Yes, this story is fantastic! Keep up the good work!
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Chapter 3: Flashback

Once the mudokkon shepard had dissapeared, Slaga had went to work on the orange fire, which is the most common. He got two sticks and started rubbing them together. After a while, it didn't work. 'I don't understand,' thought Slaga, 'it worked a while ago.' He decided to take a nap before he would start this quest. Slaga leaned on a tree and started dreaming.
When asleep, he thought of his past years. First he went back to his toddler years, when his father tried to get him to be evil and read the book 'To Kill a Mudokkon.' He thought of his mother always being worried about him. Also about the time when those three boys tried to get him to shoot a dummy of a mudokkon. Then, he went back to the time when he worked at Gertian's Brew. The most scary part of the dream was when he spent a miserable year in prision. But then, shortly after that, he remembered how he had killed all the sligs in the brewery and then opened the door to freedom for all those mudokkons. He had never forgotten that day. He thought that for the rest of his life and after life, he would never forget that one day.
Suddenly, he had felt a small bonk on his head. He woke up, and then realized a shotgun shell hit him. Slaga felt it. It was still warm. Then, he had an idea. He quickly got some very light twigs, and then layed them in a pile. Slaga took the shotgun shell, and put it under the twigs. After a few short moments, the fire was created. He borrowed some of the fire for a stick. As fast as he could, he ran up the hill. There was the temple. He walked up to the orange colored torch holder. He lit it on there. The first of the four fires was received.
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I'm still trying to think of some ideas for chapter 4. I want it to be exciting and long.
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Chapter 4: In the war?

It took Slaga quite some time to get down the hill because he had ran up the hill. He was tired already. Slaga could hear the screams of pain and bullets being shot in the war. It was majorly disturbing. It was yet time for another break. He was getting old, and he gets tired easily now. He was no longer young and active. That was why Slaga thought that he would not be able to complete this quest. How could an old slig do this kind of a job? It was hard for up for him. He saw a slig group come near Slaga. "You there. Why are you sitting around? Get out here!" Ordered a slig. One of the sligs grabbed him by the right arm. Slaga was confused. They must have thought that he was in the war. They reached the battlefield.
Slaga could see bullets firing back from side to side. The sligs pushed him. "Go out there and kill some mudokkons!" Ordered the sligs. Slaga hid behind a wall and got his gun prepared. Instead of actually firing, he just pretended to fire. He had his finger lightly touching the trigger. They could only see his gun sticking out, instead of his entire body. He hid like this because, well, he thought Gertian could be here.
When the ammo the mudokkons got close to him, he could leap up, run to a safer location, and then duck down again. "Get over here!" Ordered a slig. Slaga got over to the slig's location. They were pinioning a mudokkon down to the ground. "Shoot him! Shoot him!" Yelled the sligs. Yet again, that horrible flashback of the mudokkon dummy and the kids was appearing all over again. Slaga had once again lost control, and he began shooting all the sligs. "Die!" He was yelling. He had killed almost all of them until he heard a voice that said, "What is going on?" It was Gertian's voice. Slaga had run away quickly. Gertian was just standing there, looking at the dead sligs. "Slaga." Said Gertian, "don't worry my sligs, he will soon be dead."
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Great chapter, Sliguy! I like how Slaga had that flashback and then killed the other Sligs because of the pain and anger he felt from the flashback. Nice job with this chapter!
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Awesome! Please finish! I also liked when Salga had the flashback!
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Chapter 5: The Lava Earthquake

'I should really keep my eyes open for those sligs and the war,' thought Slaga. He had learn a lesson from that more. His eyes have gotten weaker now that he was older. His line of sight was sometimes blury. Even though he had bad sight, he still needed to keep his eye wide open to watch for more sligs, or even worse, Gertian.
He had finally arrived at the Marshwood Forest. Everything there was a tealish-green. From the ground, to the trees, and even the sky was. 'This is a strange place,' thought Slaga. He walked slowly, and listened carefully at the same time. It was dangerous here. The unexpected could happen at the first second being calm. Just then, the danger had happened. Slaga felt the ground tremble. Cracks were appearing. He quickly ran bet then a large crack had stopped him. The crack got wider. A strange thing happened at the same time. Lava was rising from the crack. It started on the other cracks as well. Big chunks of lava spewed and got to the ground.
Slaga was running in fear, leapping as far as he could over the cracks. Finally, Slaga got passed it. There he was, panting and holding his chest. The lava had nearly hit him. "I suvived." He said. Slaga was happy now. He was still a little strong. "I can do this." He said to himself again. He ran along a path in happiness.
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Chapter 6: The green fire

'I just barely escaped outta there,' thought Slaga, 'that almost cost my life, but it felt so darn good.' Slaga was still walking around looking around for yet other dangers. He grabbed a stick just incase if he saw the green fire. Well, he had. It was on some kind of post. He put the stick in the fir eto grab some. It was cool. He had never seen green fire before. People said it was a myth until this very day.
He had walked past the now-dead fire earthquake and thought if the mudokkon shepard would betray him. Maybe he was getting paid to do this, or maybe he was with an evil mudokkon group. Slaga got worried. He kept the green fire close to his head, but not too close. Horrible thoughts were in his mind now. He had gotten one of those horrible headaches he always gets. Back when he was young, he had realized that they have been caused by too much thought, another problem he had when he was born.
Slaga saw a shadow straight ahead. "Freeze!" It said. 'I reconize that voice.' Thought Slaga. The figure came out of the shadows. It was Gertian.

Chapter 7: Gertian

"Well well well." Said Gertian. He walked closer to Slaga. "It Slaga, the slig that can't keep his promise." "What do you want?" Asked Slaga. "Revenge is what I want. You tricked me, Slaga." Replied Gertian. "No. You realized that now?" Said Slaga in sarcasm. Gertian got even more angrier. "I may have no slig troop here now, but I learn a new trick." Said Gertian. His face start to get wrinkles. He started grunting. Something was coming out of his shoulders.
He had grown arms. No other glukkon could ever do that. Slaga tried to hit him with his torch, but Gertian knocked it away. "We have no need for weapons." He said. Gertian pinned down Slaga and started punching him. It was painful for Slaga. He couldn't do anything because his arms were too weak. "How does that make you feel Slaga? For me, it feels great!" Yelled Gertian. Slaga screamed in agony.
Suddenly, a group of mudokkon heroes crowded Gertian and chased him out of Marshwood Forest. A person had went down from that skies. What was shocking about him was that, well, he was a human. Slaga had gazed apon the human. He had blonde hair and blue eyes. He had a red shirt along with tan pants and brown shoes. The human was carrying a big, golden book. "Who are you." Asked Slaga.
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Ooooh, you added a human to the story! Now, I know of a few people that wouldn't like this idea, but I think that it can be cool if it's done right. So far, it looks as if you're doing it right. I can't wait to see what else you come up with!
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Chapter 8: Philip

The human walked up to Slaga. He seemed to almost be a teen. "I am Philip, god of tall tales and storytelling." The human said. "What is that thing you're holding?" Asked Slaga. "This? This is my book of creations. Here, I summon my creatures and structures." Replied Philip. Slaga tried to peak inside the book, but Philip shut it quickly. "This book in not for the eyes of others." Said Philip. "Did you summon that group of mudokkon heroes?" Asked Slaga. Philip nodded. "What people worship you?" Asked Slaga. "Do you have to ask questions? Fine." Replied Philip. He sat on the marsh ground with Slaga.
"Many natives worship me," said Philip, "mostly grubbs, but some mudokkon tribes worship be as well. In my world, I was captured by sligs, wolvarks, vykers, any evil Oddworld creature you could possibly name. I was brought to a prison for testing, but I had escaped. When I aproached a grubb village, I asked them if I could stay. They had agreed. While I stayed, I told them stories of mighty heros from my world, and stories I made up on my own. But after five days, I was murdured. Once I was mudered and up to the skies, the other gods had given me a golden book. THey said if you write down something in it, it would come alive. On the front cover it said 'Philip: God of tall tales and stoytelling.' It was quite a proud moment for me."
"Not so fast." Said a voice. The mudokkon shepard appeared. "Helping out Slaga, eh? Well, don't do it anymore. I have omniscience, I can see everything." He said. "I could summon creatures from my book to dispose of you." Said Philip. "No use. I'll make them dissapear. Now come with me, Philip." Ordered the mudokkon shepard. "Goodbye, Slaga. Stay alive, for we will meet again." Said Philip as he and the mudokkon shepard vanished.
Slaga had looked at the stick. The green fire was still burning on it. He picked it up, and made his way back to the temple. 'Philip,' thought Slaga, 'what a bizare name. I still hope he shall favor me.'
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Interesting chapter, Sliguy. So Philip is a god? That's really cool. He has an interesting personality as well. Keep up the good work-that chapter was fantastic! *gives two thumbs up*
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All to good, write more to get my attention, anyways, good chapter!
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Chapter 9: Dream Fight

Slaga had gotten past the war in a stealthy way. He had finally reached the hill. It took him longer to climb it than the last time because he was tired. At the top, once again, he saw the temple. He lit the fire on the right torchholder. After he had done that, Slaga received a limerick. It went like this:

You have made it halfway thorugh
You should still know what to do
Don't think the other two are easy
Because they are pretty cheezy
So I say good luck to you

He was puzzled by that. Slaga climbed down the hill. "I really need some rest." Slaga said to himself. He leaned up on a tree and then went into deep sleep.
At first, it was just pure darkness. It was like a place with no doors, no windows, and no way out. But then the dreams came. He was in an empty white space. Gertian was there. "So here I am inside your dream." Said Gertian. "What are you doing here?" Asked Slaga. "I want to make you an offer." Replied Gertian. He walked up to Slaga. "Here's the deal. You work for me, and I'll give you everything. Power, moolah, armor, and everything else. But if you don't, I will hunt you down like a scrab." Offered Gertian. "Don't listen to him, Slaga!" Yelled out a voice. Philip had appeared. "If you work for him all you will receive is death!" "Will you stay out of this?" Asked Gertian. Philip sighed and rolled his eyes. Then, he had vanished.
Gertian had grown his arms again. Slaga and him both started to punch eachother. Soon, Gertian tackled Slaga down, and then headbashed him. Gertian had his right arm in his pocket. He pulled out a gun. "You have been warned." Said Gertian. Then he shot Slaga. But right after that, Slaga was back in reality. "It was only a dream." Said Slaga. He stood up and got his gun ready. "Well if Gertian strikes, I'll be ready."
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Oooh, creepy dream! I bet it was a prophecy, right? Anyway, good chapter, as usual, Sliguy. More people should read this besides Abe16, Fuzzleman and me because this is really good. You should PM some of your other buddies and get them to read this.
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Chapter 10: Walking on water

After the horrid dream that Slaga had, he decided to go off to that cave that the third fire was in. He did that so that he could just forget all about the dream. Slaga had thought, 'that the dream back there was no dream at all. It could have benn a message from Gertian. But how did he get into my head? I did remember what Philip had said. "If you go on his side all you will receive is death," or something like that.'
Luckily, Slaga didn't have to go around the war. If he did anyways, he would once again meet up with Gertian. Right now, if he saw Slaga, he would kill him for sure. 'That Gertian is a big loser instead of a big busisness glukkon.' Thought Slaga.
Slaga had know reached a lake. A great big lake. Slaga had stomped his feet in the ground. "Dangit! What am I goanna do now?" he asked himself. "Have no fear, Slaga." Said a voice. Something had slowly emerged from the lake. It had blue, scaly skin, cat's eyes, pointy ears, and murloc-type hands. Slaga backed up quickly. "Don't be afriad Slaga. I am Yerus, god of the lakes." Said the creature. "I suppose you wanna help me too?" Asked Slaga. "I just want to remind you of something." Said Yerus. Slaga listened. "You can walk on this lake. It is a special one, please trust me." Said Yearus. He went back under the lake.
Slaga took a risk. He stepped on the lake, and he didn't drown. he ran to the next island. He had never felt so much excitment in his entire life! 'Wow! This is just wonderful!' He thought. "Goob-bye Slaga. Stay alive, for we will meet again." Said the voice of Yerus.
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