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11-15-2004, 06:01 AM
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Oddworld: Conquest of the Lost Continent: revisited!

I thought I bring back my old story. This story I wrote over two years ago but it wasn't quite complete to my vision. Now you can read the completed version of my story with illustrations included!

Oddworld: Conquest of the Lost Continent! Revisited
Special Edition!
By: Paramiteabe
Illustrated by: Paramiteabe

Preview:
Meet Kluna and Zin, two unfortunate fishing mudokins who end up lost at sea and end up on a mysterious continent where the inhabitants are at war with each other. To make things worse things are not what they seem. For the mudokins that inhabit this mysterious land are highly advance and evil. It is the glukkons and the industrial races who are the good guys on this mysterious continent. Races are switched, the odds are against them, the hunt for the gods is on and will Kluna and Zin find their way back home?
This is the story of Oddworld: Conquest of the Lost Continent.
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11-17-2004, 06:26 AM
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Back Story:
It began a long time ago on a distant land named Sails. Sails, a vast continent with the most exotic oddworld inhabitants in existance, and was a place of ongoing warfare. For most of the inhabitants went into hideing from a ruthless, powerful, god like race known as the Gargaznoo. The Gargaznoo wanted to control everything and everybody. They were giants and all the inhabitants feared this great race, for they did ruthless deeds resulting in mass slavery and warfare. Zar the king of the ancient Gargaznoo wanted to take Sails for himself. But he couldn't because the only way to control Sails was to become a god and destroy the powerful Alpha Glukkons. But he would not know how he would go about doing this until the day of fate came to him.

It was the day of the arrival of the mysterious monolyh. A black rectangular object of incredible power. This monolyth possesed great powers and was a liveing being. The Gargaznoo captured it and named it Argos. Argos was a cerious monolyth whome studied the many races of Oddworld on its travels. It even studied the cultures of Mudos on many occasions. But Argos also had the ability to clone things it studied on its travels. With this uneque skill the Gargaznoo took advantage of it. Zar needed a weapon to strike back at the Alpha Glukkons and Argos was the key.

The Alpha Glukkons unlike their Mudos cousins were of good nature. Their phisical appearence was even different than their Mudos cousins. They were warrors and they stood for peace.

Zar started to forge a relec from the body of Argos and formed the Omega Relec. The weapon that will destroy the Alpha Glukkons. Out of this relec, Zar used Argos's cloneing skills and managed to create a new race. He wanted to use a race that were slaves so he went to Argos and foced the monolyth to produce a Mudokin clone. Zar named it Klorn the Dark Mudokin.
Following this creation more Dark Muds were being cloned from Argos.

These Mudokons were peer evil and ruthless. But they were slaves to the Gargaznoo. Klorn the smartest Dark Mud was a bit too intelligant to be a slave to giants. So Klorn gathered his kind and became independant of themselves. He wanted the power inwhich the Gargaznoo possessed. Then one day Klorn murdered Zar and the slaughter began. Soon the Gargaznoo were out matched by their creation and thus they were destroyed. The dark Muds took over and became an advance society who would intern bring the cycle of violence like the Gargaznoo to the races of Sails.

Klorn now the leader of the Dark Muds wanted to become a mother to the Drak Mud much like Zar to the Gargaznoo. He took the relec and with it transformed himself into a powerful Dark Mudokon egg layor where now the Dark Muds would be cloned from Klorn and not the Monolyth of Argos. Argos was abandon and forgotten and the Relec was lost. But Klorn knew that if anyone were to find the Relec and forge it back into Argos he would be destroyed. But what the Dark Muds dident know was Argos wanted a champion. He remembered on his occasional travels of the Mudokins of Mudos and how potentially spiritual they were. For they were the Monolyth's only hope in bringing peace to Sails.

This is the story of Oddworld Conquest of the Lost Continent.
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11-17-2004, 03:12 PM
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pretty neat. i have another continent storyline i nmy mind as well only theres no major war going on and the speices are diffrent.
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11-18-2004, 06:51 AM
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Presant Day:

It was morning on the vast shore line of Mudos and it was a beautiful sun rise. Flocks of birds chirped and flew their way over the waters of the Great Sea of Oddworld. The riseing mist gave way to white clouds as if the night before it rained gently over the waters. Below the white clouds opened up to the shore line as the sound of surf pounded against sand beachs and rocks. At the same time schools of Gabbits were feasting on their morning brekfest of worry fish and skipping across the blue waters like Dolphens. In the distance the sun shined on the buildings of a small mudokon fishing village and the godly blue waters of Oddworld.

Mudokons were starting to get up and go to their work as small mudokon sail boats were leaving the harbor to harvest worry fish. The fishing village was a small town that only a few hundred mudokons lived in. One paticular mudokon named Zin was just getting up and getting his newspaper "The Daily Deception" He stretched out his legs and arms on a small long chair overlooking the harbor. His friend Kluna was still asleep in the mudokon hut. Zin yelled out "Kluna get your behind up we got work to do!"

Behind him in the hut snoreing was heard and Kluna wasn't paying much attention to his friend Zin. Zin Kept yelling out to him "Get your ass out here now!"

Suddenly Kluna laying down on his hammick woke up so fast that the hammick rolled over and Kluna went falling down to the floor.

"Wa whats going on?" murmured Kluna as he was on the floor half awake. He then proceded to get up only again as being the cluts he is, smacked his head against the bar that was holding up the Hammick. Zin was still yelling out to him, "Kluna would you get out here we have work to do!" Kluna rubbing his head said "I hear you I hear you, geez mann I can't get much sleep around hear with you yelling like that! Old Mud Ram is not going to like this and he will bring it up at the next village meeting! You know how he is with loud noise. He can't stand it. After his fateful accident with the sea rex and what it did to his hearing I don't blame him!"

Zin got out of his chair and began working on his sail boat as he grabbed a tool and turned a small Oddworld style radio on. "I don't care Kluna its morning and we have a lot of work to do and so little time. We need to get our fishing boat sea worthy for Saturday's fishing challenge. The prize for the one to catch the most fish in the shortest amount of time is guaranteed 10 thousand moolah, a year supply of spooce for mudokons who are entering, and plus a chance to become Lead fisher. This is important for me Kluna and I do not want Brufis to win this event. You know how he treats me!" explaned Zin.

Kluna walking out onto the small dock towards Zin mummbled to himself "I know I know!" Suddenly over the radio there was an announcement. "Attention attention this is an important news bulletin and news you can use mudokon terrorist known as Abe who shut down Rupture Farms and destroyed Saul Storm Brewery is now in agreement with the industrialist to a peace treaty between the two worlds. After years of conflict between industrialist and natives peace has finnally come. It is evident that our two cultures must not remember the past and improve on the future. This is your local bulletin signing out! We now return to our regularly scheduled chum!"


"Ah that Abe he shure saved us all. I can't believe we can now live peacefully among industrialist" said Zin. Meanwhile Brufis a fat mudokon approached Kluna and Zin's home and started clapping his hands. "Boys boys boys! you really think you can get that peace of junk to sail? You might aswell give up because Im going to be lead fisher tomarrow not you!" as he pointed his finger at Zin. "The moolah is mine and its my job!" I am loved in this community and you are nothing but weaklings!"

"What do you want Brufis?" replied Zin angerly as he stared right at Brufis.
"Moolah Zin moolah and I am intitled to it!" replied Brufis.

Kluna tapped on Zin's shoulder, "comeon Zin just leave him alone! He is going to lose."

"Wait a minute Brufis your a cheater and you will see us win tomarrow!"

"Oh yeah! if you look to your right you will see my boat." as Brufis pointed towards a huge sail boat that was floating next to there dock. It was a large boat with a crew of ten includeing two sligs and a big bro.

"I hate to tell you me friends that ye has the finast crew of the seven seas of Oddworld. With seven of the best fishing mudokons in the village and two sligs and one big bro we are surely going to win and I will control this village and become lead fisher the most highest status in our lovely town."

Zin was getting more angry with Brufis as Brufis was walking up onto his boat. Zin lashed at him and yelled "and just how you going to to do this?"

Brufis's crew grabbed him before he can do something. He smiled rather annoyingly and said "why with industrial power me friends what else! hehehehe lets go leave these fools with their piece of junk!" Just then the boat took off and everyone of Brufis's crew started laughing. Kluna turned to Zin and said "don't worry about him we will beat him. He is nothing but a gloat."

Zin looking out at the harbor and said "I sure hope so Kluna I sure Hope so! This means a whole lot for me Kluna. To become lead fisher has always been my passion and I just don't want to lose to an old mud like Brufis. You understand right?"

"Of course Zin of course we will win tomarrow!"

"Zin turned to Kluna and said "Tomarrow!"
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12-10-2004, 09:50 PM
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Great story so far paramiteabe!
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