Holy. Crap.
After six months there's a sudden, never expected sign.
Man... I'm really not a good writer.
Now I toyed with the idea of making the story of Jennadelle's Wrath short for all those of you who're STILL interested to find out what came next.
If there are someone left at all.
Here it is, the rest of the story.
Jennadelle's Wrath in a nutshell! Because I know that it's gonna take years to finish it because I rather draw pictures than write stories. Hate me for that or don't.
Anyway. Let's start.
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Stranger will win the fight against Duke and go back to the town with Jennadelle. The lion follows them without them knowing about him to watch anything they do. Then Stranger goes to the doctor with that scene in the movie sequel, but doesn't allow Jennadelle to enter the office with him since he has the secret of being a steef.
Then there's the sudden ambush of Booty's brother. That's also the moment where Stranger and Jennadelle are having a fun time catching the outlaws! 8D
Since Jennadelle still got a feeling to not let Stranger out of sight, she'll also follow him after the fight in the town. When Stranger and Jennadelle arrived the bridge, the outlaws will break it with their rockets and Jennadelle gets hurt fatal. At least it seems so. After Stranger beat up the outlaws, he'll turn around and see Jennadelle lying lifeless under the ruins of the bridge. He's kinda sad about it but doesn't show it because of his poker face. He goes to the next town to bag more bounty. After a while, vultures land close to Jennadelle's body and want to eat her. But suddenly, she starts to move and shoo them: "...I'm not dead yet...." she says, still feeling kinda tired. She gets up and finds out that she got a sharp wooden piece of the bridge sticking in her belly. She pulls it out, and... there wasn't even a bloody wound left. But Jennadelle doesn't have much time to wonder about it because there's suddenly a group of outlaws behind her that ambush her. That was Flint McGee's group. A big bad-ass outlaw holds Jennadelle down (and holds her arms behind her back) so that she can't move. Jennadelle totally freaks out and uses a lot of, uh, bad language so that Flint got surprised that a girl like her got a fighting spirit like that. But he first doesn't much care about that and tells one of his outlaws to steal her stuff and kill her after that. The chosen outlaw gets close to her but then:
Outlaw: "Ouch, dammit!"
Flint turns around: "What?"
Outlaw: "She bit me, boss!"
Flint: "She...WHAT?!"
And he comes close to Jennadelle, opens her mouth and has a look at her sharp demon-teeth while the bit outlaws looks at Jennadelle with HATE-eyes. :]
Now the whole group sees her teeth too and they whisper: "She got teeth like a carnivore... o_o"
Flint keeps his poker-face and starts to think. Then he lets her go (Flint does, not the outlaw that holds her down to make her moveless). Then McGee starts to smoke and asks Jennadelle: "Who are you, kid?"
"I am Jennadelle. A bounty hunter!"
Group chuckles. Flints turns to her with a grin.
"Oho, that's great! I'm Flint McGee the most feared outlaw boss. I usually kill people like you. Nice to meet ya!"
Jennadelle still shows a dangerous expression in her face while the other outlaws laugh.
"But who cares about your current job..." Flint says suddenly "I think, that you got skills that are usefuller for an outlaw than someone who hunts them for less bounty. You're cold-blooded, you're aggressive. You got claws and sharp teeth to defends yourself... and the most important thing is..." Flint craps her hair painfully, but Jennadelle doesn't do anything about it this time, she only looks angry at him "You know which persons you owe respect (Flint looks at the bit outlaw now) and which guys you don't have to owe some."
Flint let's her hair go and smoks another cigar. Then he tells his outlaw who holds Jennadelle to let her go too. Now Jennadelle stands in the middle of the group, surrounded. But doesn't attack them because they're too many. Suddenly, Flint tells three of his outlaws to attack her and Jennadelle fights with them.
After a while, Flint says loud "Enough! That was just for testin'!"
A hurt outlaw wonders "...a TEST?!".
Jennadelle stops fighting and looks at Flint too. He seemed to look friendlier than before.
"You got really good fighting skills. You're faster than my boys. I can need someone like you. How about that. You join my group and ambush clakkerz with us. Of course, you'll get part of our booty and all."
The bit outlaw: "But...but, boss!"
"Shut up, I'm the boss. you say it, and I say what's going on in that group!"
Jennadelle thinks about it. Technically seen, she really does like to kill and be bad. And she found Stranger to be a betrayer because he left her. Jennadelle didn't know that he thought she was dead.
After a conversation with McGee, Jennadelle agrees and becomes part of the outlaw group. With a brandnew outlawish outfit!
Oh, and Flint breaks her can trap. Just in case.
Then Jennadelle is having the time of her life living with the outlaws because she really enjoyed her doing. And got a rank that is almost as good as Flint's because she did a greater job than others. That's why Flint started to love her almost like a daughter. Without her, they'd never have made so much moolah.
But there was one mysterious happening. That was when Jennadelle's instrument got stolen and broken. It was really the lion because he did not want Jennadelle to remember. So he had to destroy the thing that might help her to remember. But Jennadelle will overcome it.
And anything else was also going well in the group of outlaws... till Stranger appeared.
Stranger has also seen a wanted-poster about her with McGee in the last town. Just before he goes hunting them, he meets the lion which tells him some things about Jennadelle. The lion knows much about Jennadelle, but she forgot about the lion because of her accident.
Lion: "So you hunt Jennadelle?"
Stranger: "Why, do I have to know something before I bag her?"
Lion: "You better don't put her in a jail, you only need to make her losing fun in being bad. Jennadelle is having a hard life already. She needs you more than anyone else!"
Stranger: "What the hell are you talking about? I do not love her or something anyway!"
Lion: "You don't have to. To be her friend is worthful enough. I've seen that she actually does like you. That's not usual. She also knows that it's something special she feels. Luckily, she doesn't know why exactly you attract her... because it never was supposed to be friendship at all... anyway! Now it's really important for her to have a good friend, you must not give her up... even if it's hard for you."
Stranger: "So why don't YOU go to her?"
Lion: "I must not go to her at all! It's a too big risk, she could remember anything by seeing me since I am actually the reason why she fell down a cliff and lost her memory. I wanted to stop her when she were doing her evil jobs. When she lost her memories, the idea came in my mind that we can change her for good and use her powers for other things than they were made for. If she ever enjoys her being bad too much, there's absolutely NOTHING that can stop her then. You must not leave her with the outlaws anymore, nor bring her into a jail for that!"
Stranger: "Why do you need her
powers anyway?"
Lion: "She's the only one who's strong enough to beat her own kind. And there will be an army of her kind soon... it's only waiting for the attack which Jennadelle has to command!"
Then the lion dissappears.
Jennadelle just went home when she saw that Stranger killed Flint and bagged him. From then on, she gets really pissed at him ("YOU BASTARD! You damn bastard!") but runs away without giving him a chance to explain or say a thing. Later she meets Raider but doesn't really like him at all. He also treats her bad. However, Jennadelle stays in his group because she needs men to take revenge of Stranger. But it got worse and worse. In the end, Raider didn't even give her a chance to leave the group.
Then there was the scene when Stranger got caught by the outlaws.
Jennadelle is just watching him, without saying a thing. Stranger is first confused about her.
Surprisedly, Jennadelle helps him to get outta this hole after the depantsing scene. Then she flees out of town together with him. When they were away far enough, Jennadelle tells him that she actually does like him but don't want to be together with him anymore. Then she leaves to think on whose side she is at all...
Jennadelle finds herself in a native temple where she suddenly found an old steef (who is Stranger's dad but anyone thought he was dead) that only came to that place to die (by a high age). Jennadelle starts a conversation with him and he gives her good advices. Then he dies.
When Stranger went in the damn to beat Sekto, Jennadelle appears again "Did you really think I'll let you do all the fun things alone?! Now let's beat up some nasty enemies!" She also explains that she isn't mad at him anymore since he only did his job while Jennadelle did hers when she was working for Flint's outlaws.
And then they fight together, become best pals, yadda yadda yadda...
After the damn got broken (both survived) and the Olden Steef died and Sekto disappeared, the lion returns when Stranger was alone to tell him: "I only wanted to say good-bye. The masacre is coming. The demons miss Jennadelle and will come to bring her back to the army... and to help her destroying Oddworld... as she was always trained for. To be their general. Please, take good care of her and don't care about me. My time has come, and there's nothing that can stop the army of demons to kill me. Now you have to go protect the innocent grubbs. Go now! I feel that the demons are coming!"
Oh, and I forgot to tell you guys that Stranger attracted Jennadelle because she's always been a steef hunter. :]
But it became friendship in the end.
The lion got killed, and the army attacks the town. When they find Jennadelle, her whole memory comes back like a bomb. She was a human before, but her hate made a demon outta her.
If she'd lose her hate and if there's someone who really loves her, she'd die (which is a good thing, a demon that dies doesn't live an eternal life in sorrow anymore). So Jennadelle had to choose on whose side she is.
Being powerful but with an eternal life of pain, or dying peaceful.
She doesn't care about dying, so she beats up the whole arms and drops after that. But she's not dead yet. Only exhausted. Stranger and other grubbs bring her in a house and take care of her so that she'd get well soon. But it only got worse with any of their tries.
One day, Stranger wanted to be alone with her because... yeah, why? :P
Anyway, he's extremly worried about her and wants her to live. With him. Jennadelle starts so shiver in that moment. Then Stranger gently gave her a kiss on the forehead. After that, Jennadelle really died. Peaceful.
That was the only way to kill demons. Love.
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Yeah, I suck at good stories. Especially love stories. >_>
At least, I don't have to worry about updating this thread anymore!
I think it should say 'For some incomprehensible reason, Jennadelle often preffered killing her preys rather than sparing them when she bagged them.' instead
