The return of the Steef tribe

[Dancing Steef]

Thanx Ann Neely and to everybody else who are reading my story! I'm going to have my vaccation on thursday this week... and as a your writer may I ask you readers a favor? ya see... I use to be on this site about 15 minutes each day and write and send more on me story, but now when I'm going to have me vaccation it'll get little more complicated to do it... I'm suposed to me at me grandmother's place and she has a comp. but she's afraid I'm going to infect her comp. with some f***ing virus and all of those shit things... anyway I guess I might be able to send me story...when she doesn't know I'm on the net but I wonder if you readers could ya know...update this site, jus' send an email to this site and it'll be good. I don't want this site to disappear as my Odd-poem thread and it'll be a shame if this disappers to isn't it?

well here is some more on me story enjoy! it's not much but I sended in it anyway...


Alca shouted with angerness:
- Knock it of! I've heard enough! There will be NO voting contest and that's the way it is! If anyone of you three tries to have this contest anyhow... then he'll meet my deepest anger which no-one has ever met before... and don't make me loose my temper. The one of you who choose to do it have to leave the tribe and never return. Do you understand?
- I understand, Carak said as he turned around, Loser... Let's go brothers.

They walked away to their hut and sat down on the carpet. Vivay suddenly said:
- How are we going to have this contest now? Alca will not leave the leadership to us and if we're having this contest anyway he'll send us away from the tribe...
- Eh, calm down a bit! We stil have a chance to have our voting contest without getting discoverd by our loser to brother, said Carak with a sarcastic voice.
- What do you mean Carak? There is no way we can do it! If you and Noka are going to do that then I'm not helping you two, said Vivay.
- Oh really? It doesn't matter if you're joining or not, 'cause if he figures out that we're having the little contest anyway then he'll send us away and that includes you to. After all you were helping us in the begining...said Carak and grined.
- It's not fair, said Vivay with a sad look in his eyes.
- What is fair? NOTHING is fair! And that's it, yelled Carak.
- Carak's right Vivay... Alca is too selfish and don't care a thing about us, if he hadn't been selfish, then he would left the leadership to us without any argue... I suggest we fight against Alca and make him weak and powerless then we take his place. The only thin we have to do is how and when we're going to do our attack, asked Noka.
- Good thinking, but then we need to have a plan... a very good plan, said Carak and smiled with an evil look in his eyes.

bye see ya soon!

DS

[big bro boogie]

Absolutely great, DS.
I really really like this story, and I don't think this thread will vanish soonly, so don't worry.
I'll (or We'll)be waiting for updates as long as... as... you need to...
Aww, I suck at english sometimes.

We'll just wait 'till your next update.

See ya next time.

[Dancing Steef]

thanx BBB! and well i'm going home about two days and then i'll send some more in to you readers I've written one an a half page on me vaccation, it isn't much but it's better than notheing at all anyway on thursday you'll get my story!

See ya!

DS

[odd chick]

Nice chapter, Dancing Steef! It's really getting intense-even more than before!

[Dancing Steef]

hehe thanx Odd Chick! and sorry that I didn't send me story in yesterday, I was so tired after my vaccation... I went by train and it took almost two hours to get back home anyway here's a new part of the story and well enjoy!


Chapter four: Frey – part one




When Liana had return to the Oracle’s hut she saw that the guards had went away from their position outside it. She thought “ It’ll soon grew darker and then the rest of the tribe will wake up. And when the Alpha-leader recognize that the Steef and the Grubb’s gone then he’ll kill me...I have to warn Stranger before it’s too late!” She went in to the hut and the first thing she saw was that the Oracle talked to Stranger. The Oracle stoped talking and said:

- You don’t have to hide my little friend, c’mon in! I knew you should come so I didn’t get supriced. You’ve done a great job girl and I’m proud of you! You know...you are taking a big risk to save this young Steef ‘s life here and...well as much as I know, the Legendaries doesn’t like newcomers, but you have shown that there are some goodness in the hearts of your people...oh my, oh my...
The Legendary girl took a seat and said with an ashamed voice:
- Well uhm... thank you but I didn’t know that myself, that I was the chosen one to save a Steef and his Grubb from my own village... It’s kind of odd, isn’t it?
- Not that odd my dear...maybe it’s odd but not as odd as the Steef over here...his story and future are pretty...amazing and yes quite odd, said the Oracle and laughed a bit.

Stranger gave a strange look to the Oracle and just when he should ask the Oracle said:
- I know you’re full of questions, but you see... the backstory about the Steefs is quite massive and as you may have noticed already... I can tell you the rest but it’ll take longer time and now when the night’s falling then I guess we can’t do it...
- She’s right Stranger, the Legendaries will soon recognize that you’re gone and also your friend...Liana joined in.
- But how am I going to find out were these tribes destinations are? I can’t just search all over the world to find them, it’s kind of hard to do and I REALLY need to know where they’re...please I have to know...Stranger beged.
- Eh, don’t you worry my friend...I know someone who may help you. His name is Frey and he’s also an oracle, but more powerful and more wise than me. You see he has traveled around the world and discovered things nobody has ever seen or heard of before... and he’s old as the mountains. Frey is not a Grubb he’s Wolclark.
- A Wolclark, shouted Stranger and Liana with a supriced voice at the same time.
- Yes a Wolclark. I see you two are quite supriced that a Wolclark had the ability of knowing everything. He doesn’t live with the other Wolclarks though, ‘cause they thought that he was some sort of an old fool who were pretending to know everything so...Frey moved far away from them to find a better place to live on and he found a beautiful place in the deepest and darkest corner of the Humble Mumble forest. He build a little cottage and he has stayed there since then... anyway you should be leaving now while you can. Oh I almost forgot! Here’s a map and there’s were he lives, said the Oracle and pointed at a dark spot on it and above it, it said written “ The deep Humble Mumble swamp”.
- This is where he lives... and another thing; he doesn’t let everybody come in to his cottage at least not without a password, said the Oracle as she yawned.
- A password? What’s the password then? You who has the knowledge of knowing should know, right, asked Stranger.
- I may know everything, but don’t push me and don’t make me use my powers at you!
- Oh sorry, I didn’t know that you would get so upset, said Stranger with a laid-back voice.
- Anyway... I’ll tell you the password...the password is Black Lizzard...he change the password from time to time so...if you try to use it more than once, then he wont open for you, said the Oracle with a tired look in her eyes.
- We have to go now Stranger before it’s too late, c’mon let’s move, said Liana as she rose up from her seat and went towards the exit.
- Alright let’s go...said Stranger and before he went away he thanked the Oracle for her help and giudence.




Chapter four: Frey- part two




When they’d reached the bottom of the village, Liana called on the Grubb Leader and as a sniper bullet the Leader ran out from her hideout and jumped in to the Steef’s arms with happyness. She said with joy:
- Oh Stranger I’m so glad you’re here and you’re stil alive! I thought first that them Legendaries had left you in the forest or had killed you!
- Yeah, yeah...humph! You’re going to squeze me to death if you’re huging me like that, said Stranger with a chock.
- Oh sorry Stranger, but you see I was so scared that they’d done something bad to you that’s why I reacted...explained the Leader as she climed down from him.
- It’s alright... and by the way the Oracle told me that there were some Steef-tribes left and she also told me the backstory of them...but not all of it so she gave me a map and pointed out a place were another Oracle lived. And I guess that he would tell me the rest of the story for me, explained Stranger to her as he showed the map.
- Hmmm, sounds great to me...well where do that oracle live then, asked the Leader.
- In the Humble Mumble swamp, that’s what the Oracle said to me but...I’m kind of sucpisious when it comes to swamps and all of those things, said Stranger and streched.
- Well I better get back to the village before they began to look after me...Liana paused, and Stranger be on your guard...you never know what sort of creepy creatures hiding in the swamps... and promise me to be careful, you promise?
- I promise you, I’ll be careful so don’t you worry ‘bout anything, answered Stranger while he took her hands. He thanked her for rescueing them from the prisons and guided them on the way.
She smiled, let go of his hands and climbed up the rope.

[ANN NEELY]

Nice chapter, DS, post more soon!

[Coolmanbizkit]

Nice Chapter Write more!

[big bro boogie]

Aww, she will.
Very nice chapter, DS. I won't rush you, so um, you just go and rest,
and I hope to see s'more of your cool writing style.

See ya.

[Dancing Steef]

thanx everybody! and yes, as BBB said; I WILL send more of my story, but it'll be another day, perhaps about two or three days... I want me story to be a story with quality, if ya guys know what I mean... anyway thanx again for reading it I really preciate that!

See ya!

DS

[odd chick]

Great chapter, Dancing Steef. A swamp, huh? Sounds really cool. Anyway, you rest....Get to writing the story again when you have time and don't rush just for our account. Great work!

[Dancing Steef]

thanx Odd Chick! And let me apologize for not have sending in a new part of me story when I said I should, but you see; my comp got infected with virus and some shit so I wasn't able to send me new part which was a shame... anyway here's the new part and I hope you'll like it!


Chapter four: Frey - part three



As well as they were sneakning among the tall gras and the dusty bushes, the sun began to go down in the west, and left a stripe of beautiful colours at the horizon. For five hours Stranger and the Leader had been wandering. Both of them were very exhausted and needed to rest, but the strength and the obstancy made them continue. After a couple hours the Grubb Leader stoped and took a look at the map. Stranger stoped to and asked:
- Where are we?
- Well according to the map we're close to the swamp now and if we follow the smal road over there then we'll shortly reach it, answered the Leader as she pointed at a little road.
- Right... how long is it to Frey the oracle nr two, asked the Steef.
- Hmmm...let's see...yeah well I'm not sure but I guess it's about five miles that's only my guess though, so I can't tell if the way is shorter or longer, said the Leader as she put the map in her rucksack.
- You're looking pretty tired...do you want to rest a bit, asked Stranger kindly.
- No, that's not nessesary... I'll make it I just... I just need something to eat that's all... answered the Grubb with a tired voice and with an exhuasted look in her eyes.
- So, do you have any food left or?
- Of course I have, but it's not much... You see, I thought we only would be gone a couple or three days, but we've been away for almost a week and the Grubbs in the village may wonder what has hapend to us... I hadn't expect this journey to be so long and I didn't brought that much food for both of us so, I have decided to return home...
- But you can't do that! I need your help and guidence and without you then... I'll never find Frey or any of the Steef tribes! You've got to stay and help me! Please I can't make it without you!
- Oh nonsense! You can make this trip alone... first you're stronger and faster than me, second you're wearing great Steef armour plus an dubble barrled crossbow... and I was only about to guide you to the Oracle at the first place and nomore than that. And after all this searching for other Steefs is a quest for you, not for me... and the food which's left can only feed on person am afraid, said the Leader with both a sad and a saracastic voice.
- You're making a misstake you know... I mean if we reach Frey's place and he tells us where the Steef tribes are then... it'll be much more easier to find 'em and that's not all... the Oracle told me about the Steef tribes but she also mentioned something about Carak, your old pal.
- WHAT?! But I thought Carak was gone for ever...If I'm not mistaken he must be around 40 years old, cause it was 20 years since I saw him and then he was about twenty years old...anyhow why are you telling me this now?
- I thought you would like to see him again, wouldn't you... and if I'm not misstaken then he would like to see you to, don't you think?
-...errr...I guess your right about that, but how are we going to make this trip with so little food I mean there are nothing eatable out here in the swamp and it'll take long time before we get out of here and the forest as well... but if we're stinting with the food by eating a smal part of it then I guess we can make it, said the Leader.

Stranger smiled and said with proud:
- I knew you would change your mind. C'mon let's have sometinhg to eat and then we'll continue our trip to Frey.

more of the story will come soon!

DS

[big bro boogie]

Woo! Update!
Well that was an interesting chapter... Food. It made me hungry, so I'll go and make something to eat.

Laterz

[odd chick]

Yes, an interesting chapter it was...(Gaahh! I'm speaking like Yoda again! ) Anyway, the lack of food part makes the story very interesting and a bit dramatic. I can't wait to see the Leader's reaction when she sees her old friend.

[Dancing Steef]

glad ya liked it guys! I haven't written any new part yet cuz I've been gone for a couple of days, ya know being with friends and been with me family n' so on... anyway I'll send some more in soon so don't ya worry

*writes new part*

Here's more on the story for ya readers enjoy.



Chapther four: Frey - part four



It had started raining with potent and large puddles of water began to fill the deep lichens around the swamp. Stranger and the Leader were seaking after a place to settle down on to wait for the raining to stop. The Large puddles level got higher and transformed in to a great flood. Suddenly the Leader sliped on some slipery stones and fell in to the water. Stranger reached his hand to take hers, she grabed it and he pull her up from the mighty water. He put her on his shoulders to make sure that she didn't fell in to the flood again. The Leader said with a chock and a frightend voice:
- Oh... Thanks pal! I thought I was a goner...phew. Stranger if you weren't here then I would be lying at the bottom of the flood by now, thanks again!
- Yeah, yeah no problem... Just calm down and it'll be ok, said Stranger as he looked around for a shortcut with screwed-up eyes.
- Okay... We have to find Frey's cottage as fast as we can before the weather gets worse! C'mon hurry up, said the Leader as she also began to look around for a shortcut.
As well as they were searching, suddenly a voice ecoed through the swamp. Stranger listend. "Over Here!" the voice called. The Leader turned her head to the left and saw something grey jumping up 'n down and waved with it's hands. She gloated with amazement and shouted, while she pointed at it:
- Stranger I see something over there!

Stranger turned around and saw it to. He screwed-up his eyes to see what it was and shouted:
- Who are you?
The voice answered:
- I'm the One whom you seak! I'm Frey!
- Frey?! Great! How are you?
- I'm just fine! I know how you can across the flood. Just climb up the tree behind you and jump to the other tree right beside it. Keep going till you reach my place! The whole swamp is inundated by water, but my cottage's stands on a "little isle" now so it wouldn't be that hard to find it. Good luck to both of you! I see you at my place!
- Okay. Thanks Frey, shouted Stranger thankfully and began to climb up in the tree.
Frey, the Wolclark Oracle wispered a magic word, lifted up his hands in the air and then disappeared.



* * * * *



After some jumping, and some searching for the Oracle's home, they finaly found the little cottage. It had stoped raining and the sun peeked among the clouds and sended it's rays of sunshine at them. Stranger climbed down from the tree and went towards the cottage. Unexpected, The Wolclark who was in the cottage went out and welcomed them in to the house. When they were inside it the Leader asked him:
- I thought that there was some sort of password involved... why?
- I heard from the Grubb Oracle, whom you met before me, that you were on an important mission... and she asked me to tell you the rest of the story about the Steefs history, am I correct, answered Frey.
- Your correct when it comes to the story, but...how in the name of Odd did you find it out from the Oracle? I mean she lives in a accient cave...well now she's with them Legendaries, but anyway it's far away from here and she's to old to walk here by herself 'cause of her age, said the Leader with a supriced voice.
- I use something which is called telepathic conection to the spiritworld, and well when I use this I can let my spirit leave my body. I often do this trip to talk to other Oracle's around the world, and this time when I was on this "little trip" I met the Grubb Oracle's spirit and then she left her message to me about you. Ahhh it's so wonderful to be out sometimes... and let me tell you something else; when the spirit leaves the body then it becomes young and healthy, so it can travel long ways without to rest on the way to it's goal... pretty amazing if you ask me, he he! Enough about me, let's get to the story, shall we? Please, take a seat.

Stranger and the Leader nodded and took a seat beside a table. The Wolclark began to tell them the rest of the Story.

[odd chick]

Oooh, a cliffie! I bet that the wolclark's history is going to be very interesting. Nice chapter, DS. You really know how to set the mood of a story.

[Dancing Steef]

Thanx Odd Chick! and yes the Wolclark's history are going to be quite interessting and both a lil action I'll be off about five days, me and my family are going to take a trip and the last day I'm goin' to be on a carneval with my pals, playing samba music I'm jus' longing for that now anyway I'll write a new part on Friday but I send it in on Saturday...
I'm glad yer Fine now

See Ya 'bout a week!

DS

[big bro boogie]

Wut? New chapter? Oh! I missed that one. Oopsie.
Cool chapter DS.
And um, have a nice carneval and see you next week.

[odd chick]

Bye, DS! Have fun at that carnival.

[ANN NEELY]

Another great chapter, DS! Have fun!

[Dancing Steef]

I'm back! Hi everyone I've missed all of ya and I'm happy to be back on the forums. The vaccation or the trip was VERY good and I really liked it alot the bad is; that there will not be any carnival for me which's very bad cuz I really wanted to go but some problems got in the way so...
Anyway enough 'bout my trip and the carneval...I'll write some more on the story and send it in as fast as I can it wont take so long. On Saturday...yeah.

See Ya soon!

DS

[odd chick]

Hey, DS! We missed ya, too-I'm glad you enjoyed your time. You didn't get to go to the carnival? I'm sorry that happened. Well, we'll be waiting for more of the story.

[Dancing Steef]

Hi! And as I promised, here's a fresh part of my story... it includes two chapters this time so enjoy! Hope ya like it!


Chapter five: Backstory - part three





Carak, Noka and Vivay were planing on how to make their brother Alca leave his leadership to them. Carak said:
- We've tried to talk to him 'bout the voting contest and who's gonna be the leader, but he said no to both. How in the name of Odd are we going to take over now? Do anyone of you have any ideas?
- Hmmm... Alca's weak point is fighting. He's strong but he doesn't like fighting, he rather stands outside a fight than joining it, said Noka.
- Good thinking, brother... but the problem is if we're going to fight him then we have to do it when we're alone with him and that's pretty difficult, said Vivay.
- I've got it! Look, we deceive him by saying that... You know Chryl? The female Steef who's sterile? I've seen that Alca's in love with her or maybe he likes her alot, anyway... If we tell him that Chryl's waiting for him in the forest, then he'll go there to see her. But instead we're there and will be waiting for him and then...Carak grined and laughed with evilness... we knock him down.
- A great idea Carak I like it so... how are we going to set up the plan, asked Noka.
- Don't you worry my brother, I know exactly how, said Carak and layed his hand on his brother's shoulder.

At the same time in Alca's hut...

- You're doing a great job, being a good leader to your people. I'm so proud of you son, said Alca's Mother proudly.
- Mom... I'm glad and lucky to have this opportunity, said Alca as he gave the Mother a hug.
- Your Father would be proud of you to... If he lived... but I know that he's stil living. His spirit lives in you now...
- Mom, I don't know if I'm the chosen one to be the leader... my brothers are quite jealous at me and wants to have a voting contest about who's going to be the leader... it's making me confused.
- You're the right one don't you understand? The people loves you very much and they don't want none of your brothers to take your place, you just have to get used to it. Look at me... there are no other leader than you who's in charge over this tribe and that's the way it is, do you understand?
Alca nodded and smiled gently back to his Mother.
- Thanks, I'll always remember those words I promise said Alca with joy.

After some hours of talking and planing the evil brothers went through the plan again, to be sure that it should go well.
- Okay, first Noka will go and tell Alca that Chryl's waiting for him in the forest. Second, while you're doing that I and Vivay will walk to the forest and wait for him. And, last Noka will sneak in to the woods to meet us, said Carak with an evil look in his eyes.
The other two nodded and laughed a bit.
- Noka it's your move... do what you're going to do... see you in the woods, said Carak and went away with Vivay to their destination.
Noka went away to see Alca.



Chapter five: Backstory- part four



- Alca! Alca, shouted Noka.
- I'm here Noka, in the hut, shouted Alca back.
- Alca... Good I found you. I've important information to tell you. Chryl wants to see you, she's in the forest and she told me that it was pretty important.
- Well...thanks Noka err... can you go tell her that I'm just going to change clothes then I'll come over.
- Sure I can, brother I'll do that, said Noka and went away, as planed to the woods.
But what Noka didn't recognize was that Alca's ten years older friend, who's known as Kontey, had heard everything and decided to sneak after the leader to see what was going on.


While in the forest...



- Noka should be back here any minute now... Hmmm are you ready to get your revenge on that fool, Vivay, asked Carak.
- Errr... I guess so but... do we really have to knock him down, I mean he'd been nice to us all the time and now we're going to fight against him? It doesn't feel right to me, answered Vivay with a quite disappointed voice.
- Ahh, C'mon Vivay it'll be fun... don't come and say you don't want to join us anymore. You see, Alca is too selfish and well he got a nice attitude, but it has to be more polished... and please be honest to me... I can keep a secret, said Carak with a sly voice.
Vivay turned around and said desperate:
- Alca's my best friend I can't...knock him down I would feel so terrible afterwards... and by the way we'll soon be leaders after him. I'm not sure 'bout this...
Suddenly Noka came running and said with haste:
- We've to hide Alca will soon be arriving here and we'd to get prepared for fighting, c'mon let's hide!
They hide themselves behind some of the trees and the bushes.
Alca came and called on Chryl, but she didn't appear. Instead the brothers came out from their hideouts and Carak laughed with evilness. Alca asked with supricement:
- Carak, Noka and Vivay what are you doing here? Aren't you supposed to be in the village? Have anyone of you guys seen Chryl?
- You're feeling quite confused right know am I correct? Oh dear big brother... Chryl isn't here, she's stil in the village at her place. But while you're stil here then we can have a little chat, about this leadership, hmm? Carak cleared his throat and continued, You see this leadership doesn't fit you it isn't your style... what I mean is; you don't have the right qualities for a leader and now we wish, as your brothers, to take your place just for a short time... what do you say?
Alca got angry and said with a mad voice:
- This discussion is over and you three knows it... and I'm stil not leting you taking over. Just accept it as it is... Alca turned around, but before he should walk home Carak said with an evil and sly voice:
- You're wrong Alca, completly wrong... Get him boys!

The brothers attacked Alca and kicked him in his side with thier hooves and with thier fists. Alca tried to fight them, but they were too strong. After some beating and fighting, Alca fell unconsious to the ground. Carak said with an evil grin while he put one of his hooves right over Alca's head:
- Say hello to our Father from us, will you? So long, sucker!
Just as he should tread down his hoof, Kontey came and shouted with anger in his eyes:
- Stop right there! What the hell are you doing? Are you three insane? Can't you see what you're doing, huh? You... you're trying to kill our leader! It's so low, what are you thinking about?
Carak walked to him and said with a cheeky style:
- We're kicking the shit out of our brother to loser...you got a problem with that or what? Now, move it you're standing in the way!
- I'll not move, answered Kontey back.
- Move it! Move it and do it now, your stupid varmint!
- Over my dead body...now you and your brothers will help me bringing the leader to the Steef docs office or do you rather want to stay here and let Alca's bodyguards taking care of you and put you in the jail?
Carak got mad and attacked Kontey, but as fast as snake Kontey smashed him with his horns and Carak landed on the ground with a thud.

- I'm gonna get you for this you... you punk, yelled Carak with pain. Kontey said:
- Get me for what? You and your brothers almost killed Alca, that's what I'm calling blaming on an innocent person like him... and by the way what has he done to you guys? Nothing! I'll return back to the village with Alca... you three suit yourselves.
Kontey lifted up Alca on his reeling legs and went carefully with him back to the village. Vivay, Noka and Carak stayed in the forest and saw them walk away.


See Ya!

DS

[big bro boogie]

OOh! Those three sneaky bastards get wut they deserve.
Nice chapters DS. I can't wait to read what's gonna happen!

[odd chick]

Yeah, that chapter was awesome! I'm glad they got what they deserved, too! Those greedy scum-bags!

[Dancing Steef]

Thanx guys! I'll soon send some more in... Glad ya liked it!
Well I gotta go now I've some work to do...

See Ya guys!

DS

[Dancing Steef]

Hi guys! here's a new part of my story! enjoy!


Chapter five: Backstory - part five



The Grubb leader looked on the Oracle with a chocking look in her eyes. " Carak", she thought, "Why did you do this to your brother? Carak... it can't be you or?" Frey continued the story.

When Kontey got back to the village, he met one of the Steef docs. The Steef doctor gloated with an chocked look in his eyes and said with a stressed voice:
- Kontey what has hapend to Alca? Oh dear Odd... C'mon help me bringing him to my office, quick!
They went away quickly to the docs place and put Alca on the bed. The Doctor took his stethoscope and listend to the leader's heart and lungs. The heart pounded a bit slower than usual and the lungs sounded hoarse when he was breathing in air. The Doctor said with a desperate and scared voice:
- I'm afraid our leader is heavy injured... The hoarse sound from the lungs shows me that he must at least broke a couple of ribs or... that's only my guess...
- Guess? What guess? What do you mean by that Doc, asked Kontey worried.
- Well err... I'm not supposed to tell, you know as a Doctor I've professional secrecy...but you brought him here so, I guess I've to do it anyhow. I don't know if Alca has some broken ribs... I'm just not sure about that, but I also got another theory... It may has hapend that some of the ribs can have punctured the lungs. I know it's sounds bad, but that's only a theory though...
- Punctured lungs? It's so bad...?
- It's only a theory Kontey, I've never said that Alca here has any punctured lungs. If Alca of some reason has it, then we may worry, but not until I have made a research on him. And Kontey... I don't want nothing of this information to be mentioned to the people about this is that understood?
- Understood, Doc.
- Good. By the way who did this terrible thing to him? Have you seen any involved?
- ...Yes... Alca's brothers did this to him, I saw it with my own eyes when they maltreated him...
- How terrible!
Kontey nodded and asked the doc:
- If Alca should have punctured lungs, then what are you going to do?
- I guess I don't have any more alternative than to operate, I'm afraid... but we have to make sure that everything's going fine till Alca's standing on his legs again so... as The leader's personal Doctor I give you, the responsiblity of the tribe while Alca is here at our small hospital.
- I'll do what I can...Oh Alca why?


I know it isn't much, but I've been busy doing other thing on the garden and so on... anyhow I'll send some more in soon!
Ps I know it's wrong to dubblepost but It's the only thing I have to do if I'm going to update this thread

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DS

[big bro boogie]

Poor, poor Alca. That doesn't sound good...
Nice chapter DS, it wasn't THAT short... but just a bit tiny.

And doubleposting is allowed in FC, as long as it features something new. So don't worry

[Dancing Steef]

Thanx BBB for the note, pal! I was kinda worried that I would get a warning if I'd dubble-post... but I guess I don't have to be that now. Anyway thanx for reading my story

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DS

[Dancing Steef]

New part of me story! Hope ya like it



Kontey went out form the hospital to see his wife and his two children. While he was on his way to his hut, he met Chryl who was sitting outside her home. She saw Kontey and asked him:
- Kontey, what's wrong? You're looking so...
Kontey said with a depressed voice:
- It's nothing Chryl, I'm fine... I, just... errr... I just need some sleep that's all so don't you worry 'bout me.
- It has to be something... Kontey please... I know you're hiding something for me aren't you?
- ...Err... Oh, I can't lie to you Chryl... Alca's heavy injured.
- Alca? What has hapend to him, asked Chryl nervously.

And then Kontey tells her about the horrible thing Alca had been out for. Chryl gets sad and asks him:
- May I see him? Kontey... I beg you, I have to see him!
- Come with me... But don't tell anybody else, ok?
Chryl nodded and followed him to Alca.


While at the hospital...


The Doctor had just finnished laying bandage around Alca's chest and was about to take an sample of the leader's blood. He put his squirt out of his working suit pocket and just when he should take a sample, he saw Alca open his eyes and tried to move.
- Alca? Are you alright, asked the Doc with supricement.
- Doc? Errr... how did I get here? Ouch, said Alca and put his hand on his chest.
- Kontey brought you here. He saved you from your evil brothers in the very last second... If he hadn't been there then we would have lost a great leader, answered the Doctor.
- Kontey? Saved me? Where are my brothers? I have to talk to them now.
- My friend your not in a good shape for that. I'm afraid that you have a couple of broken ribs and they have to heal before you can do anything. Your brothers may wait.
- But who's going to take care of the tribe? I'm the only one who's in charge and no one else. And by the way the people needs me...
- I let Kontey take care of the tribe, only while you're injured though so you don't have to worry about anything.

At the same time Kontey went in to the Doc's hut together with Chryl. They got supriced when they saw that Alca sat up and was talking to the Doctor.
- Alca, shouted Kontey and walked towards the leader and layed his hand on Alca's shoulder.
- Kontey... I'm so greatful of what you've done, I'm proud of you...Alca paused and saw Chryl, who stil was standing in the entrance of the hut.
- Chryl... come, said Alca as he reached out his hand.
Chryl came, grabbed his hand and said with tears in her eyes:
- Oh, Alca I'm... I was so worried...
She layed her head in his arms and cried. Alca said with solace while he layed his arms around her:
- Schh... it's alright... I'm fine. The Doc says that I only have a couple of broken ribs and that's not too bad... It could have been worse. You don't have to worry about me I'll be okay.
Chryl stoped crying, looked at Alca and smiled. The leader wiped away the tears from her face and said:
- You know while I was sleeping I dreamed about you and the tribe, how lucky all the inhabitants were. The flowers were blooming and the birds were singing. And... My Father was there. He welcomed me and guided me around the village. It was so beautiful.
- That's sounds very nice Alca... really nice, said Chryl.
- Kontey... I heard from the Doc, you're taking care of the tribe now... I'll give you the whole responibility of the tribe now while I'm here and if there is something you're wondering just come here and tell me. I will give you support and some tips... by the way take care of the tribe wisely, said Alca and laughed.
- You can count on me Alca, said Kontey and went away to his hut.

- Doc, can you leave us for a moment, asked Alca.
- Of course... if you need something just call on me, answered the doctor and walked out.
- Chryl... I know you're pretty chocked over this accident, but there is something I want you to do for me, can you do it?
- Of course I can, answered Chryl.
- I want you to inform the inhabitants about everything that has hapend to me and tell my guards to arrest my brothers, they're in the forest. And Chryl...
- Yes, Alca?
- You're so beautiful... It has been hard for me to tell... you tha... said Alca as he slowly lower his head and kisses her.
She looked at him with a calm look in her eyes and said:
- I will... I will inform the inhabitants and tell your guards to arrest your brothers, I promise.
She embraced him and wispered in his ear:
- I love you, Alca with all of my heart.
- You do?
- Yes I do.
Chryl left Alca and went to her hut.


This part is larger than the other one and I'll send in more as fast as I can. I'm already writing on the Sixth part of chapter five

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DS

[odd chick]

Fantastic chapter, DS! It was very heart-warming in certain spots! Keep up the good work-I can't wait to see what else happens!