My Poem

sligface202 · #1 02-26-2002, 06:48 PM

Time for some payback...Xinos!!!
I wanted to go fishing one day.
I asked my dad,he said "ok"
So i bought some bait.
The smell i absolutely HATE!

I went to the docks.
I put my bait on the hook.
i put the line in the water.
And felt a tug at the hook!

i reeled it in.
i knew i was going to win.
i tugged at the fish.
It was like Tug O' War!

i thought it was cought.
But it wasn't caught.
i pulled up the line...
Damn,i caught a bottle of wine!

munchman · #2 02-26-2002, 11:16 PM

good poem

dark_xinos · #3 03-03-2002, 02:02 PM

right... it dident rime. Oh well. Poems dont nead to rime anymore... dam new life style

. Liked it though! Whats whrong with a bottle of wine? I mean its just been... laying...on the bottom...of the... Right then! Cup of tea any one?

Teal · #4 03-03-2002, 02:05 PM

Uhm, isn't it meant to be Oddworldly stuff in here? Hence the title "fan corner"...

It's better than your first offering, anyway.

Gabbit · #5 03-13-2002, 08:14 PM

yeah its not that bad of a poem its pretty cool but add some more ODD stuff.

Gabbit · #6 03-13-2002, 11:07 PM

~You wanna here my poem~

a saw a slig with a nasty pig~~~~
it was sooo dam big~~~~
but then it ran away with its wig uh huh baby~~~
~~~how you like that~~~

VykerSawBones · #7 04-22-2002, 06:50 PM

nice poem sligface

•[cyrus]• · #8 04-24-2002, 11:40 PM

This is really cool peom SligFace202! You should write peoms for this section or something!

(800th post! Yeah!)

Mudokon101...

Majic · #9 04-25-2002, 12:04 AM

Some of you people must be really drunk and/or high, I find Sligface's poem to tarnish the name of poetry and literature... Dude, no offense, put some emaning into your stuff.