Free Rider 2 oddworld track (Unfinished)

[Slag?]

Well, I've been working on a free rider map lately.
Of course its based around oddworld...
Anyways, Abe's Exoddus is the base of it, I'm half-done with it, its kind of hard so... Try switching vehicle to blob....

For those of you who are Alien to Free rider 2, I'm sure you can figure it out.

Linkey:

http://trackmill.com/free-rider-2/Tracks/1091329/

Edit:
Also, When you first start, Zoom out all the way by scrolling.
I made Abe's moon, And I'm proud of it.

Eh, My art is horrible with Computers... I'm Much Better With paper...

So yeah, that's about it.

[Sekto Springs]

Dunno if this is the right forum, though I honestly have no idea where it does belong.

[Nate]

It's borderline FC and NOG.

*moves*

[Splat]

Looks pretty, but I think you've made a classic designer's mistake, of making something only you can accomplish, because only you know exactly how it's done. I only got past the big fall a handful of times (out of many tries) and then couldn't get past the jump with the yellow arrow. If you're making something pretty for the Oddworld fan community, you'd probably want to design something you don't have to be a pro at the game to appreciate.

[Grieva]

maybe you just suck, Splat

Pretty cool, got to the end..... I think, some arrows carried him up and down then the platforms ended, but nice work so far, hope you finish it!

[Slag?]

You have a point... Really Its just for the sake of putting the art out to the internet
It's one of those "Bored and Tired" Things, If you get what I'm talking about.
Also the arrows, I was trying to make it a platform, But your right , I should probably make a ramp to get up to Bonewerkz. I'm proud of my Bonewerkz And Necrum Mines logo's I did, The Scrab.... ehh... head could be better.

Oh, And thanks for moving it, I'm a little new here...

[Ridg3]

That's as far as I got...

[Splat]

I'm clearly just rubbish. And I tried so hard!

[STM]

If it's any constellation , i couldn't get passed the arrows

[Splat]

I think you mean 'consolation'.

[Slag?]

For those of you who cant get passed the arrows, I apologize, but really there is just a Bonewerkz logo and a "Coming Soon" Sign. I'm fixing the arrows now, Its gonna be a Ramp instead...

http://trackmill.com/free-rider-2/Tracks/1092249/

Try that, Splat

UPDATE:

Full Bonewerkz Level complete, You may recognize some screens.
http://trackmill.com/free-rider-2/Tracks/1092331/

[STM]

yeh but i said constellation since i was wee

[Grieva]

Thats awesome Slag?, makes me want to get to that upper floor of bonewerkz

yeh but i said constellation since i was wee

ah, well now you know better

[Splat]

Ok, this time I'm gonna do this...


EDIT: I got as far as a glukkon and a well, only I was upside down at the time...

But it's good

[Slag?]

yeah, I haven't gotten a chance to work on it because Im visiting Family right now.
I'll be back on monday though, And I'll work double time.
Thanks for your feedback!

P.S.
Did the ramp make it easier?

P.P.S.
Also, Did you recognize that room with the glukkon?
You may have to zoom out.

[Crashpunk]

I have no idea what Free Rider is.

[Phylum]

Thank you for contributing. Did you ever think you could follow the link to get some answers? I'm not even going to bother doing a LMGTFY here because the link will answer all of your question and more.

Nice work Slag?(full stop?) What little of this I've seen I find nice (I'm worse than Splat).

[Slag?]

I have no idea what Free Rider is.

:O
WarioPunk?
Is that you?

[kapteeni13]

Cool Track! I tried many times find oddworld track and... you did it ;')

[Slag?]

Cool Track! I tried many times find oddworld track and... you did it ;')

Kapteeni?

IS EVERYONE FROM YOUTUBE ON ODDWORLD FORUMS!!!!

Oh hey, i like your trainer, I still can't figure out cheat engine codes though, especially the code for farts.

I Drink a brew and every 0 on the list turns to a 1
DX

It's me, YoImAwsome
If I ever spoke to you...
e.o


UPDATE!

I put a secret area at the bottom of the first jump pit, with the explosion:

http://trackmill.com/free-rider-2/Tracks/1099472/

[Splat]

I GOT TO SLIG BARRACKS COMING SOON!

[Slag?]

I GOT TO SLIG BARRACKS COMING SOON!

YAY, SPLAT DID SOMETHING!!!


Anyways

I did a little bit of Slig Barracks.
This level should take a while, because of such scenery.
http://trackmill.com/free-rider-2/Tracks/1099472

Oh, and Splat. Try just switching the vehicle to the blob, Its Much easier

UPDATE:
Also, I forgot, There's now a secret soulstorm kennels Area in the pit you jump over when escaping necrum (Explosion place)

If you See the Scrab, you went too far

WARNING: Secret area is kind've hard to manage, so do the best you can.

ALSO:

I have made a Video of the free rider track.
Cool and Awesome Timing

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KYcpZXfYK6s

EDIT:

It's very lonely in here....

Hello?

UPDATE:

PLEASE DO NOT LET FORUM DIEEE!!!!

ANyways, Slig barracks finished, Feeco executive office coming soon!

http://trackmill.com/free-rider-2/Tracks/1101965

[Grieva]

whoa man! you seriously added a lot, nice work on the slig barracks, it really looked like an oddworld level layout. Harder though, this is the first time I've not been able to get to the end on the bike, had to change to the blob, not that that's a bad thing as you don't want it too easy either.

I've got a couple of mini requests though if they're alright, the "k" in bonewerkz and part of an "s" in soulstorm kennels are obstacles that I thought killed me a bit unfairly a bit too often , still, great work man!

On a side note, the reason I didn't post earlier is because you were editing your post so I didn't notice. You could have double posted to let people know it'd been updated as:

* If you open a topic for your art or story and have new content to add while no new replies have been made, you are allowed to double post.

Which I think would have covered you

EDIT:

I'd gotten soooo far on the bike

[Slag?]

EDIT:

I'd gotten soooo far on the bike

O_o

Uh, Whoops, i forgot to remove that after I was editing that part.

I was using the bike and i couldn't stop in place since it was hill, so I put that there while I went to edit.

Sorry... But still, I find that pretty fucking hilarious
XD

[Splat]

How are you supposed to get down that pit in the slig barracks? Even if I don't crack my head on the far wall, I still crash when I hit the ground.

[Slag?]

How are you supposed to get down that pit in the slig barracks? Even if I don't crack my head on the far wall, I still crash when I hit the ground.

slowing down and landing parallel with the ground might work...

UPDATE:

This may not be track update but it is definitely something I wanna share with all of you, I am attempting to photoshop over a drawing I made, to improve it.

Here it is now.

[Oddey]

There's talent in that picture. Could do with a ploish here and there, but you can see the potential. Nicely done on the free rider track as well.

[Slag?]

There's talent in that picture. Could do with a ploish here and there, but you can see the potential. Nicely done on the free rider track as well.

That makes me so happy....
*sniffle* :')

Anywho:

I wont have an update until monday because I am my creators house for the weekend, so i do not have all the available resources from my home- CPU

So....
I'll leave a 20% tip:

Get a Haircut

[STM]

Coo,, hey this time I got rly far!!!

[Ridg3]

I got to the Executive office with the blob....ain't I a stinker?

EDIT: I would also like to point out at this time that my post is in multiples of three!!