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OK, just to let you guys in the loop of this hole story, i'm only planning on posting 4 more chapters. Two will be tonight, the next two I don't know about. I know this one was kind of short, but, I have another Fanfic coming out as soon as I finish this one. I will tell you three things about it. #1: The story is about a Clakker. #2: The story will have a new chapter atleast once every two days. The chapters are going to made to seem more like journals, except it's not going to say I everytime the main character talks. And finally, #3: I'm going to make this one much, much longer. And if I forget to post on the day right after one, I will be posting the day after that day. Enjoy chapters 9 and 10. Oh yeah, I think we should have a "Greatest Recent Short Fanfic" contest after I start my next one. Note: These two might be a little shorter than most, but it is supposed to be that way because it tells the tale from both sides in this...well, you'll find out.




Chapter Nine: Mudokons,Unite!
Klartali stood in the midst of atleast three hundred mudokons, all from four different tribes. Klartali's tribe and the other three were the only ones left in the forest on account of the rising slig attacks. Klartali stood next to the other village chiefs, looking past there warriors and at the giant force slowly emerging from the destroyed area of trees infront of them. Klartali and the other chiefs waited awkwardly as they looked forward, somewhat scared, but hopeful that they could win this giant battle. By the time the sligs had cleared out the trees, the appointed "general" (Klartali) pointed out and said, "ATTACK, MUDOKONS, ATTACK!!"
The first four rows of mudokons charged in, spears raised, to meet the first few waves of slig and outlaw soldiers. Spears and clubs clashed, guns were shot, good mudokons went down. Klartali's appointed assistant signaled for the archers to fire off the first round, and the red-feathered arrows rained death upon select ranks in the enemy battle force. For a minute, just a minute, it seemed to Klartali that this would be over quickly, but, in that minute, things changed.
A giant tank emerged from behind the enemy, and propelled giant bombs into the mudokon army. In a few seconds dozens of mudokons were blown to bits and crushed. The fight looked grim to Klartali, but amid the army of weakening mudokons, he saw a small group of shamans focusing there combined powers into a giant bolt of thunder, and it struck a path through the sligs and into the tanks front, blasting a giant hole in it. So, this would last as long as Klartali thought....


Chapter Ten: Sligs, Smash!
"Oh Odd!! I'm unfire, I'm unfire! Someone set me out now!!!" Mugol ran around outside of his tank in a fuss, until finally he rolled around and the fire was off him. The tank was still burning, but he was OK and that was what mattered. His commanders couldn't see him like this, Mugol thought to himself, and quickly jumped up with his head held high and said, "Briggens! Crush those Mud freaks!" and was answered by a, "Yay! I make you proud master! Me bash Mud skulls!" and multiple loud stomps as his pet commander stormed through the ranks of sligs and outlaws and into the rows of mudokons, smashing through loads of them at a time.
In the fight he could see Urgoth, laughing like a psycho and shooting like a crazed-man, and a few feet away from him was Larzen, getting bashed in with enemy clubs and getting stabbed with spears. Larzen fell beneath them, and to his grim happiness, Mugol smiled. "Serves him right for screwing up the work earlier..."
He sighed as he wished that the puny and weak Clakkerz had joined him in his fight. True, they were weak, but what they lacked in strength they made up in numbers. He saw another lightning bolt hurtle through his forces, destroying quite a big fraction of his force. Briggens came over to him and said, "Master, this is not looking good! Maybe we go back to Clakker Town?"
"No, you stupid idiot! We have them right where we want them, and besides, I hav-" he was cut off in mid-sentence when a giant lightning bolt ripped through Briggens' mid-section and the impact of it hit him to the ground, and then all was black...
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Wow, no one posted inbetween the 1 day time zone of which I posted nine and ten. Looks like I'll make eleven. Hopefully someone will coment soon.



Eleven: The Aftermath...
The small group of mudokon scavengers, led by Klartali, searched through the ruined battlefield to find any still living mudokons that they failed to notice amongst the remains of what was the battlefield. It wasn't going to well, sense they had atleast One Hundred Thirty that weren't that damaged. Sense they had started the search six hours ago, they found seven mudokons, and twenty-one sligs. They decided to put the sligs out of their misery and killed them there on the spot.
They continued to look through the rubble whenever they found a purple headed glukkon. Klartali recognized this as the glukkon who ran out of the tank whenever the shamans blew it up. "You two, pick him up out of the rubble." he pointed to two mudokons who hurried to listen to him. Sense all of the other chiefs died, he was promoted the war leader and grand king of the mudokons in Redwood.
The mudokons picked up the glukkon and tied his legs together. It was getting late, so Klartali made a decision and said, "Lets head back to the camp. We will take care of this one there, and we will continue this...work...tommorow." The mudokons carried this 'Mugol' back to their camp and Klartali thought about his peoples' future, if they had one left in Redwood Forest, that is...
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OH and P.S guys i'm sorry that these chapters are gradually getting smaller, but I'm just so eager to get to my new story that I just want to finish this. I'm not saying I don't love this story like a child but it's more like my practice story for my awesome story coming up. I'll add chapter 12 tommorow and maybe even start my new story if I have time.
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One of my favorite fanfics.
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One of my first ones. xD
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I agree with Alex, it's one of the best I have read.
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Thank you. Chapter 12 later tonight and I may start on my new one (Official name: The Life of Officer Clucks) tommorow.
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Aww it's 3:00am so it's past night here looks like I'm gonna have to read in the morning. Make it a massive ending please
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2:00 AM here. Just now, of course. I'll make it as long as I possibly can at 2 at night...




Chapter Twelve: The Conclusion...Finally.
(Dramatic wait zone for the story )

And so there stood Klartali and The semi-conscious Mulok before the great council of shaman. They stared long at Mulok, deciding if he was worthy of life or if he shall be killed for his crimes against the mudokon race. Mulok wept and sobbed and kept on rambling, "The boss is going to kill me, the boss is going to kill me..He's going to blow up this whole forest, everyones gonna be dead, and it's all...all my fault...." Klartali stood a few feet away from him, puzzled by all the words and sentences that came spilling out of Mulok like a broken record. "I'm so so sorry..I didn't mean to..No, I did...You all should've died!" Mulok looked with hatred around the room of mudokons. "Your all gonna die! The boss'll be sure of it...He'll make it my dying wish...!!"
After Mulok's confusing crazed speech about his boss, the shamans all looked at Mulok and spoke as one to voice their decision. "Mulok is to be hung for his crimes against our kind, and against every force of nature. Get him out of our sight." Klartali signaled for the guards outside of the hut door to come in and take him, which they did with evil joy, roughly pushing him and kicking him out of the room. Klartali was about to walk out whenever one of the shamans, the eldest of them all, said, "Klartali. You did your tribe, nay, your people, a great thing these past few weeks. You are surely the greatest mudokon in these once-noble lands...." he said with a few coughs and weezes.
"Thank you oh great shaman, but I must get to my duties.." He said and bowed before them, then walked out.
Mulok grunted as he stood on the platform in the central of the camp that had been constructed for the battle, as the hundred or so warriors left stared at him with deep, intense hatred in their eyes. It was to be one hour 'till his hanging, and he really had nothing to do to pass the time except stare, stare into the emptiness of the sky. With a sudden spark his head shook violently and a voice was heard in his head. "Mulok! You fail me! I gave you all those supplies and sligs....And you FAIL ME?!?!? You are very lucky that these primitive mudokons are killing you now, or I would find you and strip layer and layer of skin from your body! Be warned before your impending death, that I will torture you into the after life. The very gods will mock you!" as the strange glukkon-like voice finished off with a mad jolt of laughter, Mulok's head shook violently and his feet began to feel weak, oh so weak....
And so, Mulok dies, and what's left of the Redwood population thrives once more......But safety will not be in those lands for long...

Epic enough for you Joshkrz? I will begin The Life of Officer Clucks tommorow, which is technically today, but you know what I mean.
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A Clakker story is very interesting. I definately enjoyed this fanfic very much, the contrast between native and industrial was very good. It makes me think of that "Hand of Odd" game where you take both sides into battle
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