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Oddworld Armament Series

I'm going to put every single Armament edition into this topic from now on. I'll start with recapping from last series, and then add the newest chapters underneath.

=== Armament 1: Slig’s Brigade===
=== Chapter 1: Differences===

Sligs come in many shapes and sizes. Small and short, stocky and tall, some were odd. The environments where they live show subtle, yet influential differences as well.

Marek has probably one of the best pairs of lungs in the whole Slig population. He was born into the very first smoke-free industrial factory. Although most Sligs found this quite a shock, eventually they realized how much moolah they could save, but also how much increase in lifespan they got in return.

Krisso had a more violent upbringing than most Sligs, as he was part of the 15 hour watch team in a factory which houses many dangerous and wild creatures. While this served as good practice, he has learned some harsh lessons about life. He made some friends in that factory, with which he told many daring stories. He was quite a role model to the other Sligs, and was always happy to lend a hand for a friend in need. He got a lot of physical fitness training while in the factory, so he is more athletic than most other Sligs.

Reint started life in a very different way. He was in a violence-free environment, a meat factory near one of the largest forests. The interesting new Glukkon ethic of treating Mudokons and Sligs in exactly the same way, no violence/no problems, proved to be quite a good moolah-maker, as there was little need for replacements or medical expenses. The Sligs acted more as guards then slavemasters, and the Mudokons got a better deal when it came to work. However, other Glukkon rivals didn’t want this kind of ethic to succeed and many sent their own thugs and vandals to try and stir up trouble. Thankfully the Glukkon in charge of security had a promising idea. Battle at close-range typically involves a lot of blood being spilt, mostly innocent blood, so the idea was to kit out Sligs with long-distance sniper rifles. If they could fire from a distance, they could effectively stop the rebels dead in their tracks, before they even got near the workforce. The skill set was different to a rifle, but many of the Sligs coped relatively well with the change in armament. Reint was especially keen to try out the new equipment. He was one of the first Sligs to purchase night-vision goggles, continuing to use the first pair he ever received.

That was in the past, the three Sligs now work for a higher power.
They stood side by side, waiting for their orders.

The name of the leader was Marek. The weapon he carelessly twirled around in his fingers like a baton was the ever powerful Moch .36 Revolver.
Capable of armour-piercing, quite deadly, in the right hands, his hands.
His quick-draw skills were perfected, allowing him ample time to shoot his 6 shots, and then reload; ready for the next strike, with two revolvers he was even more deadly.
He knows the best way to disarm an enemy Slig, one shot in the lower arm, just above the wrist. Not only is there a lot of pain, but their weapon becomes useless as they become too weak to hold the weapon up properly.

On his right, the shorter but faster, Krizzo. Whereas most Sligs like standard issue rifles to some extent, few can move around the battlefield with such ease as Krizzo. He can keep up with the majority of opponents he faces, outmatching them in stamina, quick thinking and wit. He keeps his rifle on burst-fire setting, and keeps a steady aim at virtually any speed. He is often the first to taunt in battle, and the last to comment about how badly his opponents were beaten. Impressing people is something he enjoys immensely.

On his left, his taller second-in-command, Reint. He was a patient Slig, who would often keep watch for long periods of time without taking more then five minutes of break in his allotted shift. At night, he was even more so, staring into the night as long as physically possible. He even got a night-vision visor fitted, which was not cheap. He is accurate to an astonishing degree with any gun, but his true skill is with a Varmint Mod-3 Sniper Rifle. He is able to pick off targets from a long distance with ease. He can even predict changes in the wind, adjusting his aim to an amazing degree to correct any misaligned shot.

Marek’s Squad, a force to be reckoned with, although they didn't just accept any job thrust upon them. They were mercenaries for hire, but with a purpose. They only took jobs that they felt comfortable with, always weighing the risk with reward, and this next assignment would be very risky.

“Lock n’ load” said Marek.



=== Chapter 2: Similarities===
While the Sligs had different experiences in adolescence, their experiences while young can affect their lives in ways beyond compare. Sligs often go through different experiences, but they often learn the same lessons during the way. Trust, Honesty, Deception, Strength… Ignore them at your peril.

Before Sligs can be stationed at a guard post, they must first learn the key skills needed to survive. Literacy, Numeracy, Crawling, Walking, Flying, History, Geography, Biology, Business Lessons (always with a Glukkon teacher) and of course, Target Practice.

Naturally some lessons follow a linear pattern, crawling before walking, literacy before business, and so on. However, does it really matter if a Slig learns History before Geography? Wouldn’t History benefit from knowing exactly what types of landscapes there were? Yet, how can you teach Geography without mentioning the historical formation of volcanoes or rivers?

At one (short) point during Marek’s life, he thought that mountains and hills were exactly the same. Naturally this is something that we can laugh about now, but when you are younger your perspective is different from others, you lack the experience and knowledge to understand what exactly it is that you learn and how it benefits you.

The first time Krisso wore Flying Pants, he crashed into the side of the hangar, and got himself a nice big bruise to show off to the other Slig classmates. Of course this is down to inexperience, but even something as simple as this event can benefit the Slig in question. Would Krisso have made friends more easily if he hadn’t crashed his Flying Pants? Usually it’s differences that make for interesting stories, not similarities.
If everyone had the exact same day, would it be fun to tell another person? No.

Reint often asked many questions to his teachers, some of which are beyond the scope of a typical Slig. Reint was able to study easily, and felt like reading was his way of obtaining knowledge and experience, but some things you can’t read from a book.
Reint fell over the first time he ever wore Slig Pants.

Most Sligs typically grow up in a healthy environment, and use their skills to choose a job with the prospect of developing their chosen skills further. As Glukkons, using Sligs as security guards might come as second nature. Are Glukkons purely selfish this way? Sure, they can get guards without paying them much, but Glukkons are offering the Sligs a chance of having meaning in their life, where otherwise there might not be meaning.

Sligs accept the job knowing there is risk involved, but appreciate that with risk comes reward. Do you take a chance and get lucky? Or do you stay where you are, and hope for change? Change cannot happen without action.

Krisso knew that whenever Marek said “Lock n’ load”, you only had one chance to reload your weapons and check your equipment, before it was too late. That time was now.
Krisso checked his rifle, it was fine. Safety off, clip in, mask adjusted, ready.
Marek put six bullets into his revolver, spun the chamber, and then held it still.
Reint turned his night-vision goggles on, replied “Roger” and loaded ten shots into his Sniper Rifle.

Reint then spoke, “We know the mission spec, eliminate the rogue Scrabs… The spec said about twenty Scrabs, but I wouldn’t trust those numbers. It sounds more like thirty to me, let’s crack on shall we?”

Marek and Krisso nodded. Soon, they would have no choice.

“Alright, take one down, let’s bring them to us”, Marek’s tone was deadly serious, yet, he spoke with the very inspiration a leader should have.

Reint replied with a simple, “You got it”.
He lifted his Sniper Rifle, took aim.

BANG

The first shot, one kill, that Scrab didn’t stand a chance.
Soon the Scrab cries could be heard, and they knew, the hunt was on.

=== Chapter 3: Ferocity ===
The Scrab let out a final cry of rage, and then fell silent for eternity.
Reint was correct, there were about twenty-eight Scrabs, give or take.
All the attention of the Scrabs was now fixed upon the three Sligs, standing over a hundred yards away; they could smell the gunpowder now.

Reint knew that the Scrab’s period of indecision would be short, so made sure not to waste any time. Reint began shooting towards the Scrabs. His aim was spot on, targeting each Scrab and then moving his sight to the next one. No delay, flawless reactions.

As Reint reloaded his weapon, ten Scrabs lay on the ground now, motionless.
The alpha Scrab decided to attack, and started to charge towards the Sligs. Some Scrabs were undecided but most started to follow behind the alpha male.

Krisso and Marek acted soon after this, taking out their weapons and deciding which Scrabs to attack first. Marek took aim with his revolver, looking towards the head of the nearest Scrab, he shot two bullets, one connected with the head of the Scrab. He may not have the same accuracy or range as Reint, but he knew that he was likely to at least hit part of the Scrab from that distance, even if the bullets were slightly off-target.

Krisso aimed his rifle towards two Scrabs who were nearest to each other, he fired twice, the six shots from his burst-fire rifle managed to do heavy damage to the Scrabs. He looked around and spotted some more Scrabs coming from another direction, he changed the angle of his rifle, and shot the alpha Scrab. Marek shot another Scrab headed towards him, and reloaded.

The Scrabs realised they were running into a trap, changing their patterns, they started to run through the bushes, in order to gain cover. Reint lost the advantage of surprise. His aim was less likely to be on target now, so he acted more defensively. He managed to pick off two Scrabs which were moving less quickly than the others. Krisso reloaded his weapon.

Marek now had the advantage, mid quarter battles enabled him to get a good shot in with his revolver. As three Scrabs moved closer, Marek fired six shots. Two Scrabs fell down in pain, one shifted to the side, the injury wasn’t deep enough. Marek reloaded his revolver, shot the wounded Scrab, and managed to deal a deadly blow to another Scrab which was approaching from the other side.

As three Scrabs ran towards Krisso on his right side, he shot towards them, pressing the trigger five times. The Scrabs fell to the floor with a dull thud. Reint shot two more Scrabs approaching from Marek’s blind spot.

The Scrabs were now getting closer and closer to the Sligs. As Marek shot another Scrab’s torso, one Scrab stepped on one of the mines that Reint planted beforehand.
The last Scrab decided that it was not worth the risk, and ran off in the opposite direction.
Reint fired a last shot, immobilizing it. Their mission was now a success.
Krisso reloaded his rifle, and in satisfaction remarked, “Marek, let’s de-activate the other bombs.”

Marek and Reint however, were feeling less confident in their success. Krisso wondered why they looked so downhearted, so Reint explained; “My rifle isn’t as useful when the enemy is aware of our presence.”

Marek agreed and added “I don’t normally fight so many enemies at once either. I can’t shoot them all at once without reloading in-between!”

Krisso smiled, “Alright, alright! I get you!”. Marek and Reint smiled back, they couldn’t help but feel that Krisso was satisfied at a job well done, so they might as well just enjoy their rewards. Marek tapped the colour on the landmine, to de-activate it. He locked the power mechanism and then put it in the bag with the other unused mines.

Once they finished their preparations, they put on their backpacks, and then used Flying Pants to head for home. Kolon the Glukkon would be waiting for them.





=== Chapter 4: Downtime ===
As they approached the landing strip of Magog Mineralz, a fellow Slig waved his fluorescent batons at them, indicating where they should land. As they began lowering altitude, they spotted some other Flying Sligs headed south. Krisso recognized one of them, “Hey Kash, go get ‘em buddy!”, giving him a high-five as he passed by.

They landed on the landing strip, equipping their Walking Pants. The baton waver called Atto came over. “Welcome back, Kolon wants to see you”. Marek thanked him, beckoning his squad inside the building.

Magog Mineralz was built on a waterfall, a few hundred miles away from West Mudos. They made the finest mineral water in Oddworld and also co-operated with the Vykkers to make more effective medicines.

Kolon was the Glukkon in charge here. He was a firm but fair businessman, often in close contact with the Slig Commander, Voll. There were about a hundred Sligs employed here. There were a few guarding Mudokons but most of them were trained and transferred from other factories, who would often do trade deals and partnerships.

Reint approached the voice lock and entered the desired phrase. Past the voice lock, they headed to Kolon’s office. They knocked, waited, and then entered the office.

Kolon was standing by the window of his office. His office was decorated with paintings, coloured graphs and a large Glukkon voice controlled machine. “Come in”, Marek and his team walked into the room. “Quicker than I expected! I assume the task was completed as requested?”

“Yes sir”, Reint replied. “We took care of the Scrabs, that land will be useful to you sir”.

“Yes, yes!” Kolon enthusiastically voiced his approval. “A job well done, that’s 5,000 moolah between ya”. “Thank you sir”, Marek had a confident look about him; he knew that Kolon was very pleased with their progress. “Now, onto business”, Kolon sat at his chair, took out a cigar, and ushered them onto the seats in front of his desk.

“We have some more assignments for ya, let me know when yer ready for the next one.” Kolon took a puff of the cigar, looked out of the window, and continued. “Voll wants to personally congratulate yer on a job well done. I’ll see yer next week to discuss assignments, yer can go now”. “Yes sir”, Krisso stood up first, leading his companions out of the office.

No sooner had they got out of the office they say another young Slig called Yars, he told them Voll was on his way to the Slig barracks to meet up in a few hours time. The Sligs went to a nearby bar, and met up with some friends.

Rokko, Vinn and Kray were here. “Hey buddy, long time no see!”. Marek responded with “Hi Kray, been up to much?”. They talked about how their weeks went, and what they missed.

“One of the Mudokons escaped?!”. Reint was quite shocked, “Yeah, Rokko and me saw it happen, he just ran outside of the gates and never came back! Thanks to union rules we can’t shoot em’ anymore!” everyone laughed at Vinn’s joke.

The Sligs stayed and talked for a while, then made their way to their Slig Barracks to talk to Voll. They got there a few minutes beforehand, unloaded their equipment and waited for their commander.




=== Chapter 5: Volatile ===
At the exact time requested, Voll entered the Slig Barracks. The atmosphere completely changed, Sligs stopped talking and started to look towards the door, making motions to go to other rooms in the Slig Barracks. “I’ve got that report here for you sir”, Yars handed the piece of paper to Voll. “Excellent work Yars, get some fresh air”, “Yes sir!”. Yars then closed the door behind him, leaving Marek and his crew alone with Voll.

Voll was older than the average Slig. His skin was a shade darker than normal, he wore enhanced Slig armour, with a small black commander’s cape. His arm bore the Slig Barracks coat of arms, slightly lower lay his commander tattoo. He was part of the previous generation of Sligs, born to a different queen.

Reint motioned to put down the ammunition he was sorting, Voll said “No need Reint, I won’t keep you long”. Reint straightened himself up, and gave Voll a curt nod of his head.

Voll gestured to the seats in front of him, the Sligs sat down. Voll gave a smile and said “Good job on that latest assignment by the way, I’ll be keeping my eye on your progress”.

“Incidentally, did you hear about the escaped Mudokon?”, the Sligs nodded. Voll continued, “A brief lapse in security, it’s hard to see them muds in the dark. What can I say, the management can’t really put too much pressure on the muds, the relationships are strained right now as they are… we can’t go shootin’ every mud that tries to make an escape.”

Krisso spoke next “How is the Slig morale lately sir?”. Krisso expected Voll to look concerned about this, but Voll actually looked happier after being asked this question.

“Not too bad actually, the wages have never been better, squad morale has been at a high lately.”, Voll paced slowly around the room as he spoke. “Rokko’s group are getting on quite well, I’ve never seen anyone so skilled with a mini-gun. Flying Squad are getting plenty of work now as well, Kash got promoted to vice-captain not that long ago.”

Marek placed his revolver in his locker and sat back down. “Kolon spoke to me a few weeks ago that we would be getting some new Slig recruits, have they arrived yet?”. Voll replied “Yes, they have. You might recognize one already, Yars. He’s a rookie but still eager to prove his worth. In fact, many of the Slig recruits are ready for action.”, Voll sat down, “Yars is skilled with a Blitzknife, you know, those electric swords?”. Voll paused and sat back in his chair.

Reint wanted to ask something, “Commander Voll, did you manage to carry out our request?”. “I did, your squad is in need of new recruits and Kolon has agreed to allow the recruiting of two new Sligs for your protection squad. We have some new equipment from ya’ as well, Vykker-made, new sets of masks and a redesigned communication system.”

Krisso asked how much the squad owed the Slig Barracks for these items. Voll told them he didn’t need money from them. This was a reward for their hard work. Marek still gave him a few hundred moolah anyway, just to show respect. Voll took it gladly, and stood up.

“I remember when you first started out, the four Sligs of Marek’s Squad…”, of course, none of the Sligs could ever forget the brave Slig, Udra. “Be proud, you inspire the other Sligs here, I will leave you to your preparations”. Voll started walking towards the exit.

Marek stood up also, “Before you go sir, can you arrange for Yars to get in touch with us?”. Voll smiled again “Aha, I see your eye for good recruits hasn’t dimmed in the slightest. Yars is one of the top junior Sligs here. Of course, I’ll let him know that you’re interested.”

Marek’s Squad saluted Voll, the commander left the Slig Barracks. Reint then turned his attention to the assignment documents. “Should we look through them now?”.




=== Chapter 6: Dossier ===
Krisso put his rifle down on his bunk bed, coming over to where Reint stood. “What does it say?”.

Reint smiled, but the smile soon faded as he looked at the paper and read the contents.
Reint shuddered, dropping the papers to the floor. Surely his eyes had betrayed him. Could this really be happening again?

Marek walked over. He barely had to glance at the piece of paper to see what got Reint so riled up about. In once quick glance he could see the words; Mudokon, Terrorist, Exterminate and the names of popular Mudokon Terrorists.

Marek stamped his foot on the ground in anger. “When will these idiots realise that we don’t get involved with these kinds of missions?!”. Krisso shook his head in dismay, “It’s been a while since we got one of THOSE assignments”.

Reint promptly picked up the piece of paper, putting it in the furnace. Marek nodded in approval and his eyes were fixed on the other pieces of paper. “Let’s see here… Renegade Sligs, Glukkon Escort…”, they each read through the mission dossiers in turn, and discussed their options with each other.

Reint took one of the papers. “I like the sound of this escort mission, Farda of CheapMeeps, I wonder who’s after him?”. Krisso replied, “Probably some bounty hunters, I wouldn’t be surprised if some other Glukkons are behind this.”

Marek agreed that whenever Glukkons were involved with an escort mission, there were secret vendettas that were probably best left to them. “Nevertheless, the pay is good and we can handle something like this.”

Marek took the piece of paper and put it on his desk. “I’ll ring them in the morning and tell them that we accept”.

Krisso held the other piece of paper, “Let’s hang on to this one for a while, it might come in handy”. Marek agreed. It only said ‘capture’, not kill. He didn’t often eliminate other Sligs and only when he had good reason.

Marek then wrapped up proceedings, “Alright that’s enough for one day, let’s get some shut-eye”.

Reint and Krisso proceeded to their bunks. They told a few funny stories about recent events, and then fell asleep fairly quickly.

The next day, a security Slig was talking on a phone. “Yes, right, you want to accept the terms then? Alright, I’ll let Farda know where you are and what time you will arrive here. Okay, bye for now”. The Slig hung up the receiver and then proceeded into the next room.

“Sir, Marek’s Squad accepted the mission”.

Farda puffed his cigar and smiled “Alright, now things are starting to swing in our favour”. Farda rotated his chair so it faced the window. “Dalto, exactly how much moolah do we still have?”

“About twenty thousand boss!”. Dalto’s enthusiasm was infectious. “Well, let’s just hope we can get that loan”.

Farda then proceeded to tell Dalto exactly where he was going to get his loan from. Dalto smiled and agreed. Their plan would be a good one.

Krisso woke up later than the other two. He was still thinking about Udra. He spoke quietly to himself, as he got out of bed. “Udra, why did something like that have to happen?”.

Reint handed Krisso the morning paper and a bottle of Brew.



=== Chapter 7: Yars and Bars ===
Yars raised his BlitzKnife, slicing right through the metal target. Yars took his BlitzKnife and threw it into the next metal target. The target split in two halves, the BlitzKnife was deeply embedded in the target area across the torso.

“Good, now pick up the pace”.

Voll’s voice had power behind it, as he motivated Yars onward to the next challenge.
Yars swiftly took care of five more metal targets. Yars then faced a massive metal target, similar in size to a Big Bro. He held the BlitzKnife at arms length, bend his arm to form an L shape, charging the Knife. A few seconds later he struck the metal target in the center, the metal object cracked first, and then split into hundreds of pieces.

Yars took the BlitzKnife, deactivated it, placing in it’s holster just below the back of his neck.

“Impressive Yars, you’ll be good to go in no time now. Dismissed.”
“Thank you, Voll, sir”.

Yars walked out of the training area, secretly pleased with his performance.

= = =

Krisso finished his breakfast and made his way over to where Marek and Reint were talking. Reint was in the middle of a story, “… and that’s how it was, I never saw him again. Having said that, he did seem very depressed that day, maybe he decided to walk out of that place? Anyway, long story short, I got his bunk.”

Krisso was eager to join up with the rest of the Sligs over in the main complex. “I want to see Rokko, he should be in one of the guard posts nearby”. Marek nodded and made his way to the doorway. Reint stood up, put his rifle around his back and joined him.

After talking with Rokko, Krisso headed over towards the bar. He bought some Brew for his pals, looking over his shoulder. Some Sligs were doing some dancing over in the corner, there were about eight or so of them now. One Slig was doing karaoke in the opposite corner. The Glukkons were sat in a VIP room, near the back of the bar.

Atto walked into the bar. “Man my arms are killing me, I think I waved these a bit too much today!”. He put his fluorescent batons down on the table and sighed. Reint put his hand round his shoulder and said sarcastically “It’s a tough life, eh?”. Atto looked at Reint and laughed.

Marek watched as Voll went past the bar with some armoured guards. Marek raised an eyebrow. “It’s not like Voll to walk around with escorts”. Marek took another swig and then proceeded to talk with Krisso.

= = =

Since Yars was a rookie, he didn’t know where a lot of the facilities were. He looked at the nearest map, finding what he was looking for.

Yars entered the bar, sitting on a seat next to Marek. “Hiya Marek!”. Marek smiled and responded, “I heard you did well in training today. I’ll be happy to take you on board”. Yars nodded, “I’ve been looking forward to some real action. I want to prove that rookies can make a difference”.

Krisso bought him a Brew and told him a couple of stories about when he was a rookie.
“… and then, I remembered. My pants were under my bed all along!”. The Sligs all laughed, banging their glasses together in a friendly manner. Tonight was a nice to remember.

A thundercloud passed over the building, the rain began.

=== Chapter 8: Worst Intentions ===

A few minutes passed, Yars came back to the table carrying a tray of brew.
It was not long after that the all of the lights in the bar started flickering.

Marek looked up, "That's odd, I've never seen that happening before".
Without warning, a lightning bolt hit one of the communication towers, the room went pitch black, all electronics in the room shut down.

"Awwww", Krisso spilled his drink. Everyone was talking and looking around now, the atmosphere was different now.

Yars stood up, and activated his BlitzKnife's secondary function, as a temporary torch.
Reint got to his feet, "Could this have something to do with Voll's escorts?".

None of the Sligs answered, they feared the worst and all headed for the exit.
One of the Glukkons was irritated and was yelling at the top of his lungs.

The security orbs floating around the main hallway began lighting up more than usual, acting as a kind of emergency lighting system.

Yars led the way down the hallway, "Voll said he was going to head to the East sector today, he never said what for". Marek was getting restless, "I just hope Voll's alright. He's been a good commander to us all".

As Krisso went around the corner, he spotted something out of the ordinary. One of the escorts was slumped against a wall. Krisso ran towards him, realizing that he had been shot in the lower torso on his left side. "Are you alright bud? What happened?". The Slig was clearly in no fit state to talk, he was trying desperately to stop the wound from bleeding. "Voll... He's in danger...".

Reint took out his medipak and sat down next to him. "I'll help him, go make sure Voll is alright". Marek nodded and the other Sligs headed down the hallway.

As Marek turned around the next corner, he ducked and barely avoided being shot. He realised that it was not a rogue Slig, but a malfunctioning piece of machinery. Vykker-made, he thought to himself.

Voll’s yell could be heard nearby, Marek had to act fast.

=== Chapter 9: Stray Bullets ===

Marek looked at his weapon, there was no way a revolver could stop a rampaging robot on the loose. He looked at Krisso, there was no way he could beat it either. Krisso only had his backup rifle with him, with not nearly enough ammo.

Yars spoke next. "I can handle this, I've trained enough". Marek doubted the young Slig's talent, but unfortunately he had no choice. Krisso told Marek that he could act as bait, and get the robot's attention.

Krisso looked around the corner to see Voll and his escort behind a slab of metal, the robot standing around 50 feet away. The escort wasn't injured, but his pants had been shot, one of the metal legs was broken off, twitching randomly.

Krisso started to sprint, luring the robot away from Voll. As the robot turned towards Krisso, Marek took aim with his revolver and shot one of the robot's optic receptors, the robot became confused. Yars crept along the wall silently. A few seconds later, he activated his BlitzKnife and sliced the arm off the robot in a single stroke. Before the robot could retaliate, Yars sliced off the robot's head. The robot de-activated, the electrical systems shut down.

Voll stood up, "Thanks kid, that was a close one". Yars de-activated his BlitzKnife and went to help the escort Slig find some pants. Marek walked up to Voll, "What happened sir?".

Voll revealed what happened. While heading to a high-security prison facility in the compound, a stray lightning bolt hit the communications tower. This robot was somehow affected by the lightning and suddenly became activated, firing at the nearby Sligs. It had been close to Voll when the machine suddenly started making wild movements. Voll thought this was suspicious and ushered his guards forward. The machine gave chase, one of the escorts nearly tripped while approaching the corner, ending up getting shot by the machine. The robot was more concerned with Voll and the other escort, so the other Slig managed to escape with a minor injury, hidden in an alcove just across from the hallway.

Voll wiped his forehead. Yars managed to acquire a new pair of pants for the escort, who thanked him gladly. Voll got a radio call from the prison facility. All of the power was back online and the prison was secure. Voll continued to talk on the radio, giving Marek and the others a salute before running off.

Marek sighed, "Well that was a close one, Good job there Yars".
The escort seemed embarrassed. "Um... gotta see a Slig about a Slog, bye".

Krisso smiled, and headed back the way they came.
Halfway along they met Reint, who explained that the other escort had been taken to the medical facility. Marek told Reint what happened.

Elsewhere, Kolon was making some very angry phonecalls to his Vykker suppliers.


=== Chapter 10: We Prepare ===
Marek and his squad prepared for their next assignment. Reint was busy fixing a scope to his sniper rifle. As Reint clicked it into place, Krisso came back in the room. “Man, I can’t wait to get some action.”

Rokko came in about a minute later, and asked Krisso where they were going.

Krisso sat down and started cleaning his rifle. “We have to guard a Glukkon, Farda. He’s a pretty popular Glukkon, though his moolah ain’t looking too good nowadays. We have to make sure that no one tries to bump him off on his way to Zorbs place.”

Rokko nodded, “Alright pal, good luck out there man”. He shook Krisso’s hand and then left the room.

Reint was counting the number of UXB mines they had left, at least five… no wait, there was another one at the bottom of the backpack.

Yars came in shortly after, Marek filling him in on the mission details. “Listen, when we’re out there, we have to look out for each other. Guard each other’s backs at all costs. We aren’t some ragtag band of mercenaries. We look out for each other”.

Reint put his rifle on his shoulder. “The most important thing, is to keep calm at all times. When everyone else is losing their heads, you are keeping yours, looking for the right moment to take action”.

Krisso nodded, “Don’t sweat it kid, you’ll be fine”. Yars nodded, Marek looked at him. “Listen, you’ll still need a backup weapon, just in case your BlitzKnife fails on you”.

Yars looked back, “I think you’re right, I’ve got a few spares in my locker”. Yars went out of the room for a minute or so, and came back with his locker contents. “Where can I put these?”. Krisso turned his head, “Um, Put them in the locker over there”, motioning to a locker next to Marek. Yars read the notice on the top of the locker, “Udra? Can I ask who that is?”.

Marek looked at Yars with a concerned expression. “Udra, used to belong to my squad”.
Marek told Yars all about Udra. Throughout the story, Yars’s expression went from interest, to shock, to concern and finally he settled on being speechless.

Krisso hung his head low, wishing that Udra was still with them.

Yars decided to change the subject. “I’ll stick with the sniper rifle I think”. Yars took out his sniper rifle, a Quentar. Reint looked towards it, “Oh wow, that takes me back. I used to practice on Quentars all the time!”. Yars smiled, “Any tips for me?”.

Reint sighed. “Well, the trigger is easily breakable. The scope is fine, but decreases power slightly… Let’s see…”, Reint picked up the weapon, “Ammo size is .58, like mine, aim is slightly twisted, hold on a sec…”, Reint gave the weapon a little click, and twisted the nozzle slightly, “correction: aim WAS slightly twisted… a powerful weapon”.

Yars took his weapon back, “Thanks, I have a fairly steady aim when it comes to it”. Reint nodded, “That’s good to know, but remember, sniping is not your main skill, so don’t attempt any shots longer than about a hundred yards or so”.

Yars agreed, “I’ll just back you up”.

“Alright”, Marek said, “Let’s get going”.

Marek, Krisso, Reint and Yars made some final preparations and left the barracks.
Voll gave them a salute as they passed. Atto wished them luck, directing them where to go with his fluorescent batons. The Sligs changed equipment to Flying Pants, and flew in the direction of CheepMeeps. The journey would take a few days.
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=== Armament 2: Slig’s Regiment===
=== Chapter 11: Udra===

= 1 Year Ago =

A Paramite bit deep into Udra's side. He screamed in pain as he tried to get the thing off. Reint heard his cry and aimed very carefully. He shot the Paramite so that it instantly let go of Udra. Udra fell to his knees, holding his stomach.

"Udra!". Marek called over to him, "Get over here quickly!". Udra nodded, picked himself up and ran towards Marek, his mechanical pants whirring noisily as the Paramite hisses could be heard. Gunshots were heard nearby. Reint and Krisso were picking off as many Paramites as they could. Reint reloaded. Suddenly he noticed something, "Hey Krisso, on your right!". Krisso turned around as three Paramites were running towards him. With a quick burst-fire shot from his rifle, they fell down to the ground.

Meanwhile Udra reached where Marek was. He leaned against a tree, wincing as the pain rushed to his side. Marek looked at Udra’s wound, "You OK, Udra?". "I'm alright, just a bit shaken that's all", Udra stood up, "Come on, let's get out of this place".

Udra and Marek headed for a nearby boulder in order to reload their weapons and look around. "This place is some kind of canyon", Marek looked around sighed. Udra looked concerned, "This is more like a death-trap, it's like those things knew we would be here".

A Mudokon with a spoocebow walked up to them, he held it at waist height. "What business do you have here?", the Mudokon snarled. Marek stood up slowly, not making any sudden movements. "Listen pal, we have orders to get rid of the Paramites here for the Glukkons to build a factory", Marek gestured towards the field, the Mudokon gave him an indifferent expression, lowering his bow.

Udra stood up, "We can do this two ways, either we can blast all these Paramites into bits, or you can help us move them. We work for the M.A., we promise that the native Mudokons in this land will not come to any harm". As much as the Mudokon might want to shoot the Slig, he knew that the Slig was being sincere. Besides, if he killed the Sligs there would only be more replacements brought into the area. More violence towards the native Mudokons and unwanted bloodshed would be catastrophic.

The Mudokon turned away, "There's hundreds of Paramites here, you won't be able to shoot them all to death. Why don’t we get the chanters to make them move to a new area?". Udra nodded, "Thanks, I'll see that the Mudokons get treated well, you have my word".

There would be no hostile takeover. The Merchants Alliance was created in order to unify the native Mudokons with the Industrial Glukkons. Happy workers are busy workers. Instead of slave labor the Mudokons were free to choose whether to join up or not.

Marek whistled to Reint and Krisso, they walked up to him. "Change of plan, we're letting the natives handle this". Reint nodded, "Alright. Let's call our boss then".

Marek called Kolon and informed him of what happened. As Marek hung up the phone, he smiled, looking at Udra. Udra smiled back, but the smile faded from his face, his muscles and nerves going numb.

Marek's expression turned to shock as he watched Udra collapse to the floor, Udra didn't make a sound... he just slumped to the floor, all muscles gave way and he hit the floor face down, not moving, not making any noise.

"Udra, you OK? Udra? UDRA?!".

Reint and Krisso came running, Reint quickly took out a first-aid kid.


=== Chapter 12: Trapped ===

= 1 Week Later =

Marek and Reint were talking in a medical facility. A Vykker entered the room. Reint stood up, with a concerned expression on his face, "Doc, how is he?". The Vykker hung his head, "I'm sorry, but he's in a pretty bad shape, he had a very bad reaction to that bite, we believe it was some kind of infection". Marek looked at the Vykker, "Is he going to live?". The Vykker nodded, "He is stable, but I'm afraid there are worse complications then that", the Vykker motioned towards a health-chart next to Udra's bed.

"His muscles and nerves SHOULD be working fine, but there is something wrong, it's as if his brain has gone into a kind of stasis... nothing we can do will get his attention. This kind of infection is very serious can cannot be cured with standard medicine". Marek looked worried, "Doc, is there anything we can do?". The Vykker shook his head, "Without specialized equipment and medicine, he's going to be stuck in that state. Even I don't know how long it will last, weeks? months?".

Reint felt a tear forming underneath his mask. He hung his head and looked depressed. Marek focused on the Vykker once more, "Listen, whatever equipment he needs, we'll pay for it. We have plenty of cash from the Glukkons". The Vykker walked away, "I'll see what I can do, come back in a week and we'll talk some more about his condition".

Reint sat on the chair next to Udra's bed. He was clearly on the verge of a breakdown. Marek put his hand on Reint's shoulder. “Come on man, there's nothing we can do for him now. Let's go back to the Barracks and think this through”.

Reint nodded and stood up, the pair left the room. Reint turned his head towards Udra, after all this time... how long would it take Udra to get back to normal?

= 1 Year and 1 Month later =

Udra blinked, he moved his arms in order to raise his body. The Vykker nearby gasped. He yelled for the nearest Intern, “Get in here quick! He’s awake!”.

= 1 Month ago (Present Day) =

Marek and his squad were flying towards Farda’s location. They lowered altitude and headed towards the ground. They equipped their walking pants. Reint approached Marek. “Wait. I don’t like this. Farda is up to something”. Marek nodded, “I agree, it is not natural for a Glukkon to request protection from a small squad like us… especially at a time like this”.

Yars walked up to Marek. “Are you saying he wants us dead?”, Reint shrugged, “I don’t know but something just doesn’t feel right”. Krisso approached them, “Alright, we’ll just keep our wits about us. Let’s get going”.

They walked to the east. A chilling breeze was blowing from the north. Marek adjusted his pistol and walked forward. “How far?”, Reint checked his navigator, “About three miles”. Marek and his squad kept walking for a while, before stopping to set up camp.

Shortly after, Reint began tinkering with his rifle, motioning Yars over. Yars and Reint were talking about rifle tactics when a noise nearby made Marek stand up.

Another twig snapped, Marek’s squad turned around, their guns pointing towards the source of the noise. Suddenly one thing was made clear… they had been set up.
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=== Chapter 13: Deception===

"Well well well, what do we have here then?". A tall Slig with an older style of visor approached them, his gun at the ready. Marek glared, "This was Farda's doin right?". "Not as stupid as you look then", the tall Slig smiled, "Now, which one of you is Marek. "That would be me then, are you gonna kill us?", the tall Slig laughed, "Hah, naw, you're worth more alive... but I wouldn't hesitate, if yer tried anythin funny". A few seconds later, two more Sligs arrived, marking Krisso and Reint with their weapons, making sure nothing would happen.

They had failed to notice Yars at all, who sneaked behind the taller Slig. Within an instant the tall Slig's metal pants and gun were sliced in two. "Get 'em", Krisso yelled. Reint and Krisso both rushed the nearest Sligs and knocked the weapons out of their hands. Krisso punched the Slig until he fainted. Reint gave the other one a smart smack over the head with his Sniper Rifle.

Once the Sligs were subdued, Marek stood over the taller Slig's body. The taller Slig yelped. "You can either go to your boss and tell him what happened or you can just smeg off, Your choice". The Slig leader decided to run away as fast as he could.

Marek looked at Reint. "A set up, how could we have fallen for this?". Reint sighed, "To be fair, most Glukkons aren't smart enough to think of something like this. Farda must be really desperate for some quick cash". Yars glared at them, "That crazy dook, he tried to have us killed? What do we do noW?". Krisso smiled, "Farda took a risk by hiring those other Sligs, now he'll be at a disadvantage". Marek looked at Yars, "We're still going to Zorbs', only now Farda will be in a prisoner's garb, ready to see Lady Margaret. Same mission, different situation".

Reint looked around, "We should try and get some rest, I'll secure this area with some mines just in case".

It was now morning, everyone had slept reasonably well. Time to find Farda.A few miles further, they found him just outside of one of his facilities, unguarded.

"Farda, well this is a surprise". Marek walked up to him. "We know what you tried to do, you took a risk and your gamble was wasted. Now you'll be going to Miss Margaret soon enough". Farda glared at them, "How dare you do that to me? I'll make you pay for this". Krisso smirked, "Unlikely friend, now come with us or we'll knock yer out". The Glukkon glared at them, but followed. Marek looked at the Glukkon, "You drastically underestimated our abilities. I promise you won't make the same mistake again". Farda cursed under his breath, but kept walking.

About an hour later, the Sligs and Glukkon were walking north. Farda was getting nervous, Marek looked at the Glukkon's nervous movements and had a good idea what was going to happen. He saw some Sligs with weapons in the distance and his suspicions were confirmed. "Ambush!". Marek yelled and ducked down, picking a spot to shoot from. Reint took out his rifle, aiming at the horizon. No sooner had Marek yelled then a few Sligs started shooting towards them. Yars picked off a Slig in the horizon, and Reint shot out a fuel tank nearby, taking out a Slig. The other Sligs ran away, Krisso smiled, "Cowards... Come on let's continue".
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=== Chapter 14: Bulk Order===

Marek and his crew continued walking. Suddenly they saw a tank ahead of them. "Wait", he held out his hand in front of them. "Looks like a roadblock". They looked around, "Damn, there's about five Big Bros and quite a few Flyers... now what?". Krisso raised his hand, "We could just take em out quick, before they have a chance to attack?". Yars stepped forward, "I do have a secret weapon". Everyone was shocked. Reint looked at him, "What is it?". Yars took out a little syringe, injecting himself with it. "This should take effect really quickly, just remember... I'm the one with the BlitzKnife on the back". Yars muscles began convulsing and growing at an alarming rate. Yars pressed a button on his pants, and suddenly two extra legs appeared from the base. The other legs also became somewhat fortified, appearing to be larger than before. He was steadily growing in size from normal Slig to... "A Big Bro!", Krisso stepped back. Yars smiled, his voice slightly deeper now, "These are some special steroids that the docs gave me to test out. They take effect quickly, but they won't last too long. Let's go get 'em". They took their positions. Reint was looking at the flyers. "If I can just shoot one of them, it'll cause confusion".

A few minutes later a plan was formulated. Krisso gave the signal. Reint shot at the flying Slig overhead, which crashed into the ground. One of the Sligs on the ground started running in confusion. Marek and Krisso ambushed some other Sligs on the other side of the ravine. Marek turned towards the nearest one, “Freeze!”. The Sligs raised their arms and pleaded for them not to be shot. Marek smiled and knocked them unconscious.

Yars snook behind some Big Bros. He used a BlitzKnife silently on the nearest one, taking his weapon. He then fired upon the other Big Bros, taking them out one by one. His training had paid off. The other Big Bros tried to attack Yars, but his immense training meant that he was much faster than they were. Despite his size, Yars was pretty much undefeatable in this regard. His size was decreasing slightly though, so he had to make sure to finish the other ones off quickly, before his muscle mass returned to normal.

After a minute of fighting, the other Sligs ran away. Krisso smiled, "Yet again, we prevail. Let's get Farda". Yars walked up to Marek and Krisso, he was now the normal Slig size.

They previously hid Farda in a hole in the ground and tied him up. He was getting pretty annoyed, but he wouldn't escape very far anyway without guards. They continued walking towards Zorbs. “Now, only a few miles away now. Let’s get you to Zorbs”. Farda shuddered, “Darnit, I’ll make you pay for this”.
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I have one question... How did Yars move about if he was a bigbro in normal slig pants? Wouldn't they collapse or something? I liked it anyways.
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(Made changes to Chapter 14)

Oh, also for some random reason I accidently started calling Yars, "Yan". Don't know how I got mixed up between an Intern and a Slig... I guess their names are too similar for me

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=== Chapter 15: Moolah Matters===

They arrived at the entrance to Zorbs. Zorbs was like a massive financial cooking pot. Stock brokers and suppliers often came through here for both loan applications and also more serious financial matters like bankruptcy and corruption. There were two Big Bro Slig guards on the doorway. They greeted Marek’s Squad.

The massive steel door opened with a massive clunk. Several mechanisms on the sides of the doors clicked and swung into place. It took about a minute for all the mechanisms to finish turning, and the massive gates opened.

Krisso pointed his gun towards Farda, "Get in, now". Farda grumbled and moved towards the gates. Reint looked towards the Big Bros. The Big Bros watched the Sligs enter and then closed the gates behind them. The light in this place was quite dark, only a couple of lamps were dotted around the area, lighting the area up with a light green glow.

Marek crossed his arms, "Right, where to now?". Reint looked at the service map, "This way". He lead them towards one of the high ranking Zorbs officer's quarters. They found the room and then entered, pushing Farda inside. They spotted an executive Vykker sitting on a chair. "Well, what do we have here?", the Vykker asked. Krisso pointed towards Farda, "A mutinous, bankrupt Glukkon. We caught him sending a squad to ambush us, that's punishable by 10 years in Welwacks Prison". The Vykker nodded, "Yes, yes... that's correct". The Vykker made a phonecall, "Yes, Prison Officer? We need to escort a Glukkon there, send up one of your men. Okay, thanks".

Marek's squad left the office, Reint shrugged, "Well, now we have to report this to Kolon... Come on let's head back". Yars looked at Reint and followed. They headed to the exit, said goodbye to the Big Bro guards outside and then equipped their flying pants. They headed back to Magog Mineralz, unsure about how Kolon would react.
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=== Chapter 16: Fight or Flight===

It was night-time and the group were still flying. Marek had suggested getting to Magog Mineralz as quickly as possible. "We can't risk another ambush, we need to hurry back and tell Kolon what has happened so far". Krisso shrugged, "Okay, but we really need to find a place to sleep soon". Before they could continue the discussion, Reint spotted something in the distance. "Everyone, hide!". The Sligs hid behind some trees, hoping to see what Reint saw.

There were a group of five flying Sligs which flew past them, obviously looking for something. Yars looked towards them, "Do you think they are after us?". Marek shrugged, "I don't know, but I don't want to find out... let's get out of here". Marek's Squad headed to Kolon's factory as soon as the other Sligs were out of their line of sight.

As they approached the landing area, Atto was waving his light batons excitedly. "You're back, early as well!". Marek gave him a cryptic glance, "Don't ask... We ran into some problems". The group equipped their walking pants and continued to the barracks. We'll talk with Voll in the morning, in the meantime let's rest. The squad settled into a restless sleep. Yars kept waking up in a cold sweat.

The next day, Marek and his group headed to where Voll's office was. Voll was pacing in his office, talking to a rookie Slig. "... and that's why you should never, EVER press the blue button on your pants!". The younger rookie jumped back, "Yes sir!". Voll grinned, "Dismissed rookie". The rookie ran past Marek's Squad with his hands over his head, eagerly not happy with what Voll told him. Marek entered the room, Krisso, Reint and Yars followed him. Voll looked surprised, "What happened out there?". Marek looked anxious, "Farda... he betrayed us!"
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I think I'm begining to prefer some of your other fan-fics. This one is getting a tad stale if you ask me. That's the outright truth and you won't get anything else with me.
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In that case, I'll try to get to Chapter 20 as fast as I can so I can put it on hold for a while.

=== Chapter 17: The Hunter===

Voll was shocked, "A Glukkon betraying a Slig? This is bad news". Krisso nodded, "Yes sir... Several Slig bodyguards and ambushers were in cohorts with him". Voll looked Krisso, "I don't believe... you mean to say he ordered them to attack you?". Yars nodded, "Yes sir, I saw it with my own eyes".

Voll shook his head, starting to get worried now. "In that case, you four need to lay low for a while. Try and find a place to hide while this whole thing blows over. It's still going to be a few weeks before Farda is sentenced... He can still order people to attack you if he wants to". Voll looked towards Marek, "If you stay here, you put all of us in danger". Marek nodded, "Understood sir, we'll move out soon".
Voll gave them a salute and Marek's squad left the room.

It took them several days to pick out a good hiding spot, a deserted cave a few miles south-east of Magog Mineralz. Voll had been specific to ask them to find a good place to hide. "Somewhere dark, where they can't see you at night".

Marek and the squad were tired, they lay down and went to sleep. A few hours later, Marek stirred. He looked up, only to see an unfamiliar face above him. "This is going to hurt you a lot more than it hurts me". Marek felt his arm being crushed, Marek tried to yell out, but his mouth was gagged by a cloth. He looked around to see the other Sligs were bandaged and tied up by their arms.

The Slig chuckled, "They were easy to subdue, nothing a few tranq needles can't do". Marek was holding his arm, "Damn you". The Slig raised an eyebrow. He kicked Marek in the upper body, the metal pants leg causing severe internal damage. Marek clutched his chest and gave a yell of pain. The Slig walked towards him, holding his gun to Marek's head. "Now, you die".
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A plot twist always helps break a flow of boredom. Wonder what'll be next.
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=== Chapter 18: The Unexpected===

The Slig twitched as ten thousand volts of electricity pulsed through his body. The unmistakable clicking noise of a taser was heard. The Slig slumped to the ground, unable to move. An unfamiliar Slig stook a tranquilizer needle into the other Slig's body.

"Are you alright?", the Slig said. Marek nodded, "Yeah... you saved my life, who?". Marek looked at the Slig. "No, it can't be... you... Udra?". Udra nodded, "I'm back in action, the four are reunited once more".

Udra walked around the cave, giving the other Sligs a wake-up drug. Krisso and Reint both shouted "Udra!", and ran towards him. After so long they were finally reunited with their friend. Reint put his hand on Udra's shoulder, "You're back!". Udra nodded, "Yeah, I'm here to stay. I heard you guys had fallen on bad times". Krisso nodded, "You could say that. By the way, here's a new member of the team". Krisso pointed towards Yars. Yars bowed, "My name is Yars sir, I've heard a lot about you". Udra nodded, "Nice lad, I bet you must have done well at target practice to get here, what weapon are you using". Yars saluted, "Sniper rifle and BlitzKnife sir". Udra raised an eyebrow, "BlitzKnife eh? That must be new, I didn't hear about that before my coma".

Udra sat down, "So... what have I missed?". Udra seemed somewhat distant today, maybe he was just as nervous as they were. Marek told him about what happened.

"No way, Farda betrayed you?", Udra was visibly shocked. Yars nodded, "Yes, that's what happened. Now we're on the run... I'm worried about those bounty hunters. We've got a big price on our heads that is just too tempting to outsiders". Marek got up, "Come on, we'd better move".
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I knew Udra would play a vital role.
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Here are my last few chapters of Armament 2. This last section was unplanned, but I think I have made it sound convincing. This leads onto Armament 3, but also brings the story to a semi-cliffhanger. Thank you to everyone for reading my story, especially Oddey.

= * = * =

=== Chapter 19: The Hunted===

"Where the heck are those guys". Sacar was pacing up and down the hut. Caram was reloading his shotgun, "Sacar, get your head straight. We're going to find them soon enough". Caram stood up, come on, let's go find something to eat". Sacar nodded and left the hut.

"Grey Operations unit 47, report". The voice was hard and cold, like a military commander. "Hawk","Owl","Raven","Parrot". The commander laughed, "Great, you're all there. You know what to do?". The soldiers saluted, "Yes sir". The commander stepped forward, "Go and fulfil your duty". The squad saluted and moved out. The commander was checking the reward notice again. "Not bad for killing four Sligs, I'm looking forward to all that moolah". He rubbed his hands and moved away from the training area.

Marek's squad were moving towards a nearby canyon. They could see several signs of activity, the flowing river, some Fuzzles and some broken twigs. Krisso looked towards the canyon, "We'd better be careful, there could be traps anywhere". Krisso stepped forward and looked around further into the canyon. It would be a bad place to be ambushed. The group split up and went in seperate directions.

Krisso stepped into the canyon, he felt the chill of the wind. The sound from the wind was somewhat spooky. He spotted some Paramites and a Chippunk. He managed to walk past them without being spotted. He could see the light from the other side. Yars equipped his flying pants. He went over the canyon to try and see the other side. Udra and Reint took seperate sides of the river. They were careful to keep stopping and look out for possible enemies.

=== Chapter 20: The Cruelty of Fate===

Krisso arrived on the other side of the canyon. Thankfully he had made it across successfully. Reint and Udra came next. They arrived from the nearby river banks, carefully making sure they were not spotted. Yars arrived shortly after, he was using his flying pants to go across from the sky. Reint looked around, "Where's Marek?". Krisso shrugged, they looked around to see if they could see any signs. Yars looked towards the south, "Isn't that smoke?". Udra nodded, "Let's see what's going on". They headed to the smoke.

Marek was bleeding, the Scrab had injured his arm as it tried to ram into him, his mechanical pants were on the floor and an internal fire was causing smoke to appear from the screws. "Damn you". He raised his revolver, but the aim was affected by his injury. His other revolver lay on the floor, knocked out of his other hand. Marek tried to lift his arm to aim at the Scrab, but only managed to scrape the top of the Scrab's skin. The Scrab's next attack was into Marek's left arm once more, the arm strength totally left him at this point, the tendon ripped and the lower half of his arm became nothing more than ripped skin. Marek tried to pick up his other revolver as he was on the floor.

As Udra and the other Sligs walked closer, they heard a loud bang. They looked at each other and ran towards the shot. As they looked through the leaves, they heard another cry of pain and a gunshot. When they stood up they saw the Scrab, lying dead on the floor. Marek was bleeding heavily, his left arm was ripped out of his socket. His right arm was pierced with the Scrab's sharp beak. Things looked bad for Marek, even if he survived, he would probably never hold a gun in his hands ever again.

Yars let a single tear drop from his mask, "Marek... No!".

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Next time: Armament 3: Slig's Mercenaries
- As Marek's squad are hunted through the native forests, can they manage to escape the four deadly hunters?
- The Grey Ops forces mobilize in order to capture Marek's squad. Will they be able to resist attack and defeat this legendary military organization?
- Marek's injuries change his life forever. Can Yars and Udra cope with the turmoil?

All these and more shall be answered in due time.
Expect this story around about 1st of June. I'll probably go slow with that story, doing one chapter a week or something similar.
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Now that is a good idea. Almost killing one of the main charactors. Remniscant of Darth Vader. Scarred, but still capable.

I'll wait for it until then.
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