Quests in Oddworld

[The Dark Mudokon]

This RP has no particular timeline or event.First,you have to write your character's infos(Name,Race,Age...) the choose a side:Native,Industrial or neutral.Any character can be in any team,if your character's story fit with it(ex:A fallen mudokon who joined the industtrials,a slig who shun his race iand join the natives).The RP will start when we have at least 6 people.

here's my character:

Name:Jaran
Age:16
Team:Neutral
Weapon:Spear
Appeareance:Black skin,red eyes
Personnality:Lone wolf,likes the taste of blood
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[Splat]

Alright, first off you don't have an RPG licence. Read the RPG mking rules before attempting to make an RPG. http://www.oddworldforums.net/showthread.php?t=12177

Second, as you will see, this attempt at an RPG breaks several rules. You have not been RPGing here for the slightest amount of time. It soesn't have the faintest hint of a story line. It doesn't make any sense at all.

Read the rules vefore you start doing anything, alright? It would save a lot of time.