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05-11-2005, 02:16 PM
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The Wrath of Molluk

Hullo people! Welcome to the third installment to my series about Slaga. It is called "The Wrath of Molluk." Remember, Molluk doesn't look like himself. He looked like the mudokkon shepard, remember? Okay, don't read this if you haven't read:

#1-Slaga's Story
#2-Slaga's Faith *HIGHLY RECOMENDED*

Here we go!

Chapter 1: A message

In the kindom of Odd-heaven, there was Slaga. In a hut, sitting in a chair, looking into a omniscience mirror. On his side, there were his parents, Lou and Grily. "See anything?" Asked Lou. "Nope. Just another plain day." Replied Slaga. "Good. I don't want a burdon today." Said Grily. "Why is that, mother?" Asked Slaga. "Well." Grily started out, "the goddess of Oddworld told me that I have to have a small talk with her today. Oh, Odd knows what it's about."
Slaga stopped looking in the mirror for a while and then looked out the window. He saw Oddworld angles, both male, female, adult, child, were as busisy as bees out there. Suddenly, he saw Skaihera running down the streets. "A message to the goddess, a message to the goddess!" She yelled. Slaga went out the door and followed her. "A message?" Said Lou ponderously.
Slaga could overhear Skaihera's conversation with the goddess of Oddworld. "What is the message?" The goddess asked. "The shepard! The shepard! He is going to attack Oddworld!" Replied Skaihera. "The shepard? You mean Molluk, right?" Asked the goddess. Skaihera nodded. "Oh poor Oddworld. Get Slaga! He'll know what to do!" Ordered the goddess of Oddworld.
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05-12-2005, 01:29 PM
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THIS THREAD IS A TOTAL GHOST TOWN!!!!!!!!!!!
AFTER ONE DAY, NO POSTS!!!

Sry people, I'm just crabby today.
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05-12-2005, 01:39 PM
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Urm, I didn't read it, but good work.
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05-12-2005, 04:53 PM
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Sorry I didn't read this sooner, Sliguy. Anyway, this is a good beginning for your story-I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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05-13-2005, 01:35 PM
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Chapter 2: Another quest

"There he is." Said Skaihera pointing to Slaga. "Yes. It's me." He said. "Good, because we are in desperate need of you!" Replied the goddess of Oddworld. "It's because the shepard is out on a rampage, right?" Asked Slaga. Skaihera nodded. Slaga sat down.
"I can defeat him on my own." Slaga had said. "I need some allies to help me." "I know plenty of people to help you." Said the goddess of Oddworld. She put a hand on the side of her mouth. "Philip! Come in here!" She ordered. In a bright flash of light, he had arrived, still his normal self. "How shall I serve you goddess?" He asked. "The shepard is on the loose. You, Slaga, and some more allies are going to fix this mess. Yerus! You too." Said the goddess. A small pool of water came out of the ground. Slowly, Yerus had emerged as the pool slowly dissapeared. "I heard the whole thing, goddess." Said Yerus. "Don't worry, the shepard will be defeated once and for all.
"Now." The goddess started out. "Skaihera, you go with them too. You four must find more heroes to help you on Odworld. Sadly I just an't teleport them here. Got it?" "Yes goddess." Said all four of them. They all surrounded a cricle of light around themselves and got transfered to Oddworld.
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05-13-2005, 04:37 PM
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Interesting idea. I liked the chapter. Hmm...I wonder who the heroes that are recruited for this quest will be? Anyway, good job with this chapter.
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yeeeaaah, nice chapter!

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