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04-09-2005, 12:47 PM
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The Clash of the Titans

My new fan fiction. The same person that bought you, "Under the Moons" and "Slaga's Story" comes a brand new epic adventure that I like to call "The Clash of the Titans." Enjoy:

Proglue

In Oddworld, life is both dangerous and peaceful. The creatures live their own ways. From a small helpless slurg, to a power-hungry glukkon. Life is normal there. Yet, on the unknown part of Oddworld, things aren't. Here's how it went.
Ages ago, back when Oddworld nearly existed, a titan named "Rulos" ruled it over. He had made Oddworld. He had created evil creatures and places. He had created such chaos onto Oddworld. He was making it an evil place. But when he married Hoah, things started to go another way. Hoah brought peace to Oddworld, which Rulos didn't like. They had many fights. So after a while, she broke up with Rulos. After a few days of being seperated, Hoah made creations to help her trap Rulos. So after a while, Hoah betrayed Rulos, and trapped his underground, never to be found again.
Hoah made creations to brighten up Oddworld. She got rid of Rulos's evil creations, but not all of them. When she was finally finished, she had to give her world a name. Since some people here and both good and evil, and that the creature and structures looked wierd, ahe named it Oddworld. When she was finished with the name, she had mysteriously hid away, never to be seen again. That's how Oddworld started. Soon, something was about to happen. Something diabolical. The worst part was that Hoah didn't know about it.
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Hmmm...the concept of this story sounds rather interesting. I can't wait to see more!
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Nice story sliguy101! Post more!
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Chapter 1

In the unknown part of Oddworld, a vast desert with nothing to be seen for miles around, a terrible thing was happening. "C'mon now! Dig! Dig! We're not goanna reach him if we don't dig! Move it!" Yelled Frendel, a glukkon. He was ordering slave mudokkons to dig so that he could free Rulos. Legends had said that he was inside a giant gate shut up tight. "Find it! I know were close to that darn gate!" Once again yelled Frendel. The mudokkons dug faster and faster everytime he yelled. If Frendel would hear a mudokkon complain, he would yelled even more, and even louder. He would even threat the mudokkons if they complained. Threats like, "next time you complain, I'll bury you here for all I care" or "stop it or else it's the shreader for you!"
After 5 hours of intense digging, they had found the gate. It had looked quite big, quite secured. It was made of full metal. They could all hear bashing coming from the gate. "Bring down the gate ram!" Ordered Frendel. Some mudokkons came in and brought down a giant gate ram. "Well, wadd'ya waiting for? Get this ram goin'!" Ordered Frendel. A few strong mudokkons got into it, and started ramming the gate. Every time they would ram it, they would hear a large 'BOOM' and then the gate would start to crack a little.
It took them 157 rams just to make the gate crack enough. The big, metal gate fell apart. It had opened, and a big black spirit came came out of the land which revealed a titan. It was fully black except for his red eyes. That titan was Rulos. "I am finally free!" Yelled Rulos. When he had opened his mouth, it seemed to have a red and orange inside, like lava. Rulos walked off. "I must take over this world once again, and seek my vengance!" He yelled as he dissapeared into the desert mist.
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04-10-2005, 01:13 PM
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This is very interesting, Sliguy! Keep it going!
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Just brilliant! Keep it up!
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Chapter 2

Back at the city of Quester, a free land for mudokkons, normal things were going on. "So, how goes the work with our new building?" Asked Mayor Elmsta. "It's going pretty well. I've had the goods and the bads starting construction." Replied Kealton. "Excellent." Said Mayor Elmsta. He leaned back more is his chair. "Something odd happened while constructing it." Said Kealton. "What?" Asked Mayor Elmsta. "Well, I had evoked memories of The Oddworld Underground Railroad." Replied Kealton. "Hey, how did that go anyways?" The mayor asked again. "It wasn't easy getting through, especially facing that phantom at the end." Replied Kealton. "Tell me more." Ordered the mayor.
Kealton had felt comfortable talking about The Oddworld Underground Railroad. It is what gave him strength, courage, pride, and a bigger dignity. "Some bad things also happened to me." Said Kealton. "What kind of things?" Asked the mayor. "Well, where should I start?" Asked Kealton, "well first, I got swallowed by a sea rex. Second, my first aid kit got lost almost halfway on the journey. Then, I had to fight an ambush of wolvarks and sligs with the other mudokkons, and then got imprisoned by them. After that." Kealton was interupted my the mayor. "Okay! I've had enough of this talk. It's makes me feel sorry for ya."
All of a sudden, they had felt the ground tremble. They went outside, and saw Rulos coming towards their city. "What is that? Quickly! Get the people outta here before they get killed!" Ordered Kealton. All of the mudokkons quickly ran out of Questar. "Tremble before me, mortals!" Yelled Rulos.
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This is very good, Sliguy! I can't wait to see what else you come up with!
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Chapter 3

Kealton and Mayor Elmsta ran out the Questar with the villagers. "What is that horrible creature that is destroying my city?" Asked the mayor. "That is Rulos, an evil titan." Replied Kealton. Rulos had smashed all the buildings in Questar by then. "Time to destroy the next village." Said Rulos to himself. He walked off.
"Rulos must be stopped!" Exclaimed a citizen. "There will be no time for that now. We must warn the other villages about this danger. After that, we'll do something about Rulos." Said Kealton. "What about us?" Asked another citizen. "All of you must find a safe place to hide. I'll deal with this." Replied Kealton. "And just how are you going to get to the villages? They're on seperate islands." Asked the mayor. "I'll use my sea rex." Replied Kealton. "You have a sea rex?" Said the mayor. "Yes. The same one a got swallowed by." Replied Kealton. Mayor Elmsta looked both confused and shocked. "Fine. Get your sea rex and warn the other villages of this danger." Ordered the mayor.
Kealton walked near this coastline. There was Menolesar, his sea rex. "Menolesar, we have a situation here." Said Kealton. "I heard." Replied Menolesar. "We must go warn the other villages on the other islands before that titan destroys them." Ordered Kealton. He climbed on Menolesar's back and then Menolesar started his journey to the first island. They saw Rulos coming there. "Looks like we're in a race here. Let's go!" Ordered Kealton.
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Comments anyone?
I won't post the next chapter unless I get some comments.
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Cool chapter, Sliguy! Keep them coming! I can't wait to see an epic fight with Rulos!
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