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10-27-2001, 12:07 PM
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OK, it didn't become any witch evening because of my aunts damned boyfriend, what a idiot...

We sat in a small room he called kitchen. We talked about almost everything, but mostly about Gaia. The little I catched about him was that he sure was a philosocic mud. He seemed to know a reason about everything. His coffee was old and tasted mostly dust, but I needed something to eat. Hungry... He seemed to think about something totally different while we speaked.
"How did you find her?" he suddenly said. I didn't really have an answer.
"Uh... I don't know... I think I've been there before... Somehow I believe I knew everything."
He gave me a doubtful look.
"I mean... I knew where to go but not how and..."
"I know." a third voice said. We looked around and saw Gaia in the door.
"Gaia, you would be in..." Noah said and took her arm, but she pulled it away. She looked at me.
"I think I know it all, it's just that.." she said and yawned. Then she shaked her head and went back to her room. Noah stood there and looked at Gaia's door. He looked sad. I didn't understand a thing. He sighed.
"It's time to sleep.." he said and walked away. A door slammed. I sait there, didn't understand a thing... Not a thing...

I sat down against one of the shelfes in his store, playing with my knife. I had no idea about how Tzhekhel had meant with sending me here, how was I supposed to know anything? I was thinking. But thinking was so hard, so hard... Then I got an idea..
"Of course!" I said and ran out on the street. I knew exactly what to do...

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10-27-2001, 10:05 PM
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Woow!
A very good and cool story!
I like this kind of stories.
Keep up the good work.

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Don´t you like my style??
Why don´t you come and play, I guarantee you a great big smile.
I come from the imagination, and I´m here stricly by your invocation..so what´d you say?
Why don´t we dance a while?
Cause' I know what you feel boy.
I know just what you feel boy.
You call me and I come a-runnin.
I turn the music on I bring the fun in.

I can bring whole city`s to ruin, and still have time to get a soft shoe in.

Now, we´re partying, that´s what it´s all about!

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10-28-2001, 02:23 PM
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Wow! Ooh, the suspense is killing me! Oh, BTW, I tried drawing Eben, but I was unsure of color, so I left it black and white. *reads again and again* Oh, I just love this story!
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11-01-2001, 08:27 PM
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What?! Have you really tried to draw Eben?! Post it!! And wow... I didn't excpect people to like my story this much... All I have to say is thanx! (because of this you're probably just joking 'bout it, but what the heck...)

I didn't know why I did everything that I did, it didn't make any sense to me... And still, it was so smart done. When you don't understand what you are doing, then it's time to let the nice men in white coats lock you up somewhere... I ran across the street to the other house. It seemed to have inhabitants, so I knocked on the door. No one came to open. I knocked harder.
"Hello?!" I shouted. "Is it someone there?!" No respond. I knocked harder. I was just about to give up and go back to my odd thoughts when I heard steps. A young slig came and opened the door. He looked at me. I couldn't resist but to notice that he had 'hidden' a gun in his belt... Belt? He looked around me and then went back to looking on me.
"Yeah?" he said. I almost liked to hear another sligs voice for once.
"I think that you know something I need to know." I gently said.
"What?" he asked and scrathced his head. "Ooh, no... Little Tammer don't know anything. No, not me..." he said and tried to close the door. I stopped him. He looked afraid and his hand was moving against the gun.
"Look, kid." I said. "I'm not here to hurt you, Tammer, was it?"
He nodded.
"Well, something told me you have some info to give me. Or shall we say share with me?" He gulped.
"Well... Boss is kinda... Loose tounged... You can't possibly avoid to hear his chit-chat unless you're deaf, but I don't think his so called drugdeals is interesting you."
I nodded.
"Well, tell me about it."
Tammer smiled.
"Come in, who ever you are."
I walked in. He closed the door and we went up the stairs. He opened another door and went in. I followed him and closed the door after me.
"So... Your boss is doing drugs?"
"Not really. We call it that way, cuz it so much shch-shch about it."
"But, what is he doing then?"
Tammer smiled and sat down on a chair. I just stood by the wall and looked on him.
"He's with slaves."
"What?"
"Slaves. He takes people from some regions, and he makes them into slaves. Ok?"
I nodded.
"Was that all you wanted to know?"
I thought for a moment. There was something... Why was it so clearly that I had to know that a sligs boss was selling slaves? Why was that importnant for me? There was a small thought that was chewing on the back of my head. Finally, it appeared.
"And... What are you doing there? What is your work?"
He looked stunned.
"I... guard them. But first I didn't know they were slaves, I thought they were workers. Everyone calls them that... But of course, I'm a 'worker' too in my eyes and... uh oh..." he said.
"What?"
"Something tells me you're goin for a quest, boy. If you do, let me join you. I might do something brave for once in my life!"
I smiled. Something told me I had just won myself a new friend...

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11-03-2001, 10:07 PM
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In the rest of the time I spent at Tammer's place, we mostly talked about that town and what was outside. He told me that someone people called 'The Empress' was ruling only this town with an iron grip. No one was allowed to leave the town without her permission. He said that everything started 10 years ago. Something big happened in her palace, and since then she has been all hard and ruthless all the time. Odd... I wondered what could possibly change someone like that.

We were in the middle of a pointless chat about the strange weather when suddenly we heard something. I didn't know what it was. Tammer walked away to the window and looked out. He seemed to search for something. He looked down on the street all the time. Looking for what? Then he seemed to find it. He gasped.
"Hey, Gold. Come here and look." he said. I walked to him and looked down on the street. It was a big wagon, driven by two elums. I bet the motor was broken. In the wagon was people. Many sligs, mudokons, glukkons and a few gabbits. Crowded up in that... thing. But, there was one there I recognized.
Who could that be. I thought and literally stared at him. Then I saw it.
"Orion!" I said.
"Huh? Who?" Tammer said and looked back.
"No, down there. In the wagon, that mudokon. It's a friend of mine."
Tammer looked at the wagon until it was off his sight.
"I didn't see anyone."
I thought. I had to find out a way to get Orion out of that cage. But how?
"Tammer, are those slaves in the wagon for sale?"
"Well, yeah, but they're expensive as hell."
"Oh, really? How much do they usually take?"
He looked up in the roof.
"I don't know. Very, very much."
I mumbled for myself. I couldn't buy Orion. And I bet it would be bad trying to get him out in a violent way. Then what was left?
"Tammer, are you going to work tomorrow?"
"Uh... Yeah, but I don't see the point in your question."
I smiled.
"You're just about to have a vacation." I said and started to explain.

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11-10-2001, 10:33 AM
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Super_slig, your link don't work anymore. Sorry for not writing yet, but I need ideas. *thinks*

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