The Thing: final clean up.

Fez · #1 11-09-2002, 07:49 PM

the helecopter wherled through the icy wind, my name is corporal Tom Green of U.S. special forces, my team was sent to U.S. outpost north 31 with three objectives, i read them over and over to memorise them:

1. find and capture captain Blake.

2. find out what happed to commander Whitley.

3. plant C4 in the power plant at the base.

strange things had been seen at the base and rumors of the crashed UFO and a frozen alien had spread across the ranks. I loaded my MP5, it was state of the art, 60 round clip, pump to cock, laser sighted. On my team was Joe western, always coming out with the jokes. Pete burrows, a very dark person who was my best sniper, Nick black - demolitions, and our pilot of the chopper "bishop", he could fly any where, any time.

the chopper landed and we all jumped out, bishop would meet us on the other side of the base at oh 7 hours and extract us. " remember your missions Green", said bishop "i'll try to get more ammo for you later, and errrrr, dont forget that its 40 below out there, try to find shelter befor you freeze to death."

We ran to the nearist shelter, the medic bay, the lights were out so i had western fix the power box and turn the lights back on. "jesus christ" he said "damn" said burrows "something very strange is going on corporal" said black, i turned, and saw what they ment.

tell me if you want me to go on, the inspiration for writing this came from M.O.M, cheers mate.

M.O.M · #2 11-10-2002, 08:42 AM

Keep going im interested, your a preety good writer

Fez · #3 11-10-2002, 09:05 AM

"holy shit", i said. In front of us were the remaines of squad 224, they had been ripped apart, decapitated and cut in half. "what the hell happened here corporal" said nick "definetally not friendly fire, they have been torn to pieces". I walked over to a body that was completely untouched. "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the body was still alive "get away from me i'm warning you" he took out a desert eagle. "My name is corporal Tom Green, mt team and i were sent here to see what happened" "MONSTERS" he shouted, "MONSTERS".

"pull your self together, what happened here" shouted burrows.
"we were calling for help when these things jumped us, the squad was torn to pieces, but i hid my self away" "you cant stop them, we waisted thousands of rounds on them, they just keep coming, no one can stop them" "ITS GOING TO COME BACK AND KILL YOU ALL!!!!" he shouted.

"whats your name"i said "corey, corey rinaldi" he replyed "ITS COMING" he shouted again. "look corporal, were not going to get anything out of this guy" said Western "monsters, monsters" he whisperded. "shut up" said nick "what the hell are you talking about" "THEY ARE COMING" he shouted again. I took out my desert eagle and pointed it at him "DO IT!!" he said "PUT ME OUT OF MY MISERY!!!!" i fired at the head, killing him.

"stay tight people" i said "we dont know what we are dealing with, but what ever it is, it killed squad 224 and made this guy go crazy" "every thing alright" said Bishop over the comm. "weve found the remaines of squad 224" i said "want me to send someone i to get the bodys" replyed bishop "no, you will have to scrape them of the walls first" "roger that Green".

then the door burst down.

if you want to see what happens next then tell me.

M.O.M · #4 11-10-2002, 09:08 AM

TELL ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fez · #5 11-10-2002, 05:48 PM

the door burst open, a figure staggered in. It was human, i went closer, it was Jhon Perry, a millitary engineir, "perry" i shouted. His face was struken as if he had seen a ghost, "stay the hell away from me" he said "perry, its us, were here to save you" I said "dont give me that bull, your infected just like the rest" "what?" I replyed. He had a flamethrower "come on perry i dont have time for this bull shit, tell us what happened" "did you find rinaldi?" he said "yeah, shot him, he asked me to, kept mumbling about monsters" "good reason too" said perry.

"I wont trust you" he said "the others were infected and so are you, i'm not going any where untill proper help arrives" "infected by what" said black "the alien" "corporal with all due respect, I think we should leave him here" said burrows. "Get a blood test hypo" he said "then i might trust you" i gave him my desert eagle, he looked at me "i'll still be here when you return" he said.

i told burrows and black to go down stairs to search about what happened, and i got western to work on the computers and see what research he could find. Burrows voice vame over the comm.
"errrr captain- i'm a corporal Burrows" "yeah, i think there is something you should see down here" i went down, leaving western and perry behind "watch him" i said to western, he nodded.

the power was out down stairs so it was very dark, but i could see the flairs let off by Black and Brurrows. "what the hell?" in front of me was the remaines of what looked like a UFO, but it was smashed up pretty bad. "AAAARRRRGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!" westerns voice over the comm. We all ran up perry was missing and western was liying on the deskwith a huge gash on his chest, he was still breathing, what the hell happened here, western?" i said "p-p-p-erry" he stamered "it got perry, tryed to fight it, but it was to strong" he coughed up blood "what was?" i said "th-th-th........." he died.

M.O.M · #6 11-10-2002, 06:06 PM

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*DROOLS*

Fez · #7 11-11-2002, 04:25 PM

"damn it, black, burrows, check the area for perry and find out what killed western" i started seaching my desert eagle that i gave perry was on the floor, i picked it up, the habdle was covered in slime. "Corporal, i found some PC's" said black. The PC's might have some evidence of what happened at the base. The room that said "offices 1-9" one of the PC,s was on, and the place was covered in blood, fresh blood. I looked at the PC, it said:

last saved memo 9/10/02

i looked at it, it said:

the creature that was frozen in the ice has been succesfully thawed out and i being kept in the high security part of the base.
We are all very excited to find life out side this world and i will right any more findings as thay develop.

Dr. Faraday

dr. faraday was the scientist sent to the base to look at some "classified information" i saw him a cople of days before we left. We looked around, i found some more dead bodys and blood, but no more evidence, then i found a tape recoreder.

M.O.M · #8 11-11-2002, 04:44 PM

guess what..........MORE

Fez · #9 11-11-2002, 05:13 PM

i wlked over to it, it was on, i hit play a familier voice appered:

i'm gonna hide this tape when i'm finished with it, at least if nobody survives then there will still be some kind of a record.
this storms been hitting us pretty hard now for a few days, if any one finds this then hear this trust is a hard thing to come by these days, and one other thing, they say it can morph into what ever it kills and its only weakness is fire, i think there might be some flame throwers in the amory, we aree very tired captain blake U.S. outpost north 31.

captain blake, the one we were sent here to capture. I turned around "call bishop and have him pick us up now" i said to black "storms to big" he said, i heard something scuttling behind me but i ignored it "we got to get to the comm. tower" said black "if i can find some blueprints, i'll get us there"

then the air vent behind me burst open and a small 4 legged spider thing jumped out, it was as big as a cat, and had a round body with 4 legs 2 at the front and 2 at the back, it jumped "fire!!!!!!!!!!" i shouted, the room echoed with gunfire as mt team and i fired upont the small thing, it kept coming, but the rain of bullets slowed it down and eventually killed it, it shrieked in pain and died.

"FUCK" said black, then we heard lots of scuttling nosies from the airvent "run" i said "run"

M.O.M · #10 11-11-2002, 05:15 PM

OOOH SPOOKY I WANT MORE

Fez · #11 11-11-2002, 06:12 PM

we ran back to the medic bay and locked the door. "shit" westerns body was missing. "what the hell are those things corporal" said burrows "I dont know, Black look for some blue prints" "on it" he replyed. something started smashing at the door "burrows stand back!" i shouted.

the smashing eventually stopped "okay we can go north 2 clicks to the armory or north east 3 clicks to the comm. tower" said black
"we're not going any where in this storm" i said "we'll stay here and wait for it to calm down" then something strange happened, western walked up out of the shadows "Western?" said black "yeah" he said "but you died" "no i didnt i was..... nocked out, i'm ok now" the gash on his chest was missing "what happened to your cut" i said "i put some new body armor on to stop the bleeding"

i was pretty sure that the gash went into his heart, then i remembered from the tape "it can morph into what ever it kills"
"shit" i said then western smiled, and the change began.

M.O.M · #12 11-12-2002, 05:40 AM

make this mutation/morgh very detailed and gory

Fez · #13 11-12-2002, 04:45 PM

Western screamed and his face blew out wards leaving only a red mess where his face used to be, a small green tube thing came out of his face about where the nose should have been. His arms fell off and two new muscular 3 fingered, clawed armes came out, the arms were brown/tan and hade a very zombie like texture, like rotting flesh. The green tube squrted out a green sticky slime, it stuck to Black and hardened, it didnt seem to be doing any harm, but he couldnt move.

"FIRE! FIRE!!!!!!!!" i shouted burrows and i opened fire on the thing, the bullets teared through the remander of westerns clothes untill it was only waring his trousers, the bullets didnt hurt it at all, i saw burrows drop his MP5 and pull out his desert eagle and start fireing, still no damage.

the slime had losened on Black so he could move, we all head for the door "heaters on" i said, the new combat vest had a heater installed for arctic missions, we ran through the blizzared, burrows locked the door behind us, but it wasnt long befor i heard the door bust down.

every now and then we would stop to shoot at the thing, but still no damage, i saw a nother part of the base, a sign glowed "sector G" we ran to it and went in, i locked the door and roled some canisters in front of it, the thing started to bust through, i fired on the canisters, resulting i a huge explosion.

i looked up and saw the thing burning on the snow, then i remembered "it's only weakness is fire" i smiled turned around and noticed that black and burrows were missing...

M.O.M · #14 11-12-2002, 04:51 PM

More please

Abe's son · #15 11-13-2002, 09:40 PM

Please, more this is good!

Fez · #16 11-14-2002, 02:47 PM

they must of gotten lost in the storm, and its 40 below out there.
Undernieth the glowing sign of sector G i said armory but there was dry blood on the arrow, i turned left and saw a room labled "games room". it had an upturned pool table and blood was every where, there were some arcade games in the corner. A computer was on, i read what it said:

I keep hearing strange noises at night, and people are dissapering left and right. Collins and his crew were sent out on a search party last night, and they are not back yet, i think the alien might of escaped and could be causing this, im going to hide in tha armory untill this is over. luabgtinfcoirhzficbyaopdbhfrypgba

it looked like the writer had been pulled of by something, a trail of blood went out of the games room. I heard something behind me, i flipped around to see 3 humans dressed in the same marine combat suite and vest as me, on of them was very beefy and ruff looking, with a scar on his right cheek, he held an M-16. Another one was very pale and looked young and weak, he held a strange MP5 like weapon. The last one was a very attractive woman, she was blond, tanned and carried an M-16 on her shoulder.

i pointed my weapon at them, they all returned the guesture. "dont move the" the women said "who are you?" she said "i bet hes infected" said the skinny pale one said. "My name is corporal Tom Green of the U.S. special forces, i was sent here to find out wht has happened". "so was my team" she said, she took out an injection like thing, "take some blood out with this" she said "why?" i replyed "these things have a type of blood that reacts with the cold or fire, thats why they hide in humans, if your infected, the blood will dissolve". "What are you talking about i'm not infected!" i shouted "you can never tell untill its to late" she said, i had come in quite close to western, so i took some blood out, nothing happened.

suddenly the air vent burst down and 8 of the spider things jumped out. "Shit!" she said "scuttlers!, Collins, Werzbasky, fill them full of lead!" i fired with them eventually, we killed them all.

"scuttlers?" i said "yeah, level 2 as well, come on, we got to got to get to the armory, i'll explane then", 8 more "scuttlers" came out of the air vents, we ran.

Fez · #17 11-15-2002, 04:25 PM

the pale one fired his strange MP5, it sounded wierd. Ther amory was ahead of us, more "scuttlers" jumped out and chased us, bullets seemed to hurt scuttlers. The armory door needed a code, the ruff looking guy typed something in, the door slid open, and we all went in. The girl locked the door behind us. "what were those things?" i said "level 2 scuttlers?" she replyed "allow me to introduce my team", she pointed at the ruff one "this is collins, he is part of the security team at the base" "alright mate" he said, he had a very british accent "this is werzbasky" she pointed at the pale one "how are ya" he said, american. "And i am lutenent celesti gunner, i'm incharge of bravo team, but most of my team are scattered throughout the base".

"the creatures we just fought we have called scuttlers, bullets hurt them and they are a pest, the level 2 maens that they are into the mutation, the mutation levels are 1-5, that was the second stage of scuttler" "humanoids are infected humans, mostly a level 1, if the mutation proggresses past level 2, we call them walkers, we have only ever fought 1 level 5 walker, and i lost most of my team in the progress"

"how do you find all this info out?" i asked, mostly from computers in the research bay, but werzbasky knows alot about them too". "allow me to show you what we have against these things" werzbasky said. He lifted up his strange weapon, "this is a koch and heckler UMP, fires 45. caliber bullets, automatic, but the recoil is huge" "we have 3 of these" he pointed to a locker that had two more UMP's in it. "we have about 3 mags each" he said "its was an experamental weapon, so you wouldnt know that much about it"

"our total inventory is..." said collins "2 flamethrowers with about half a canister each, 5 M-16's with under 500 rounds, 3 UMP's with about 3 with about 60 rounds total, one PSG1 sniper rifle with 10 high velocity rounds, 4 MP5's with about 600 rounds, 4 C4's and about 10 desert eagles with only one clip each"

"do you know where the power plant for the base is?" i said about 10 clicks east of here" she replyed "according to Collins, that is". "we can plant the C4 there and get out, i've got a friend with a chopper who can get us out of here" "NO WAY!" she said "why? i replyed, startled "there is a rupture in the power plant" she said "a what?" i said "when a walker goes past level 5, it digs itself into the ground and slowly grows, a rupture cant move, but it sure as hell big, we've only seen one dead on on the base CCTV system, thats how we know that there is a live rupture in the power plant, we saw it on CCTV".

"there is a helepad about a click west of here, if we can get there, this friend of yours can get us out of here" said werzbasky, "but we got to get more flamethrower fule, fire of extreme cold is the only way to kill these things". "There is another armory on the other side of the base, we might get more fule there" said Collins.

so thats where we were going, to the other armory, we took all the weapons and ammo we could get, and then we went off.

TheKhanzumer · #18 11-18-2002, 11:16 PM

This is pretty good. Keep it up!

Al the Vykker · #19 12-21-2002, 01:18 PM

Please do continue you are doing a great job with this story.

-Al the Vykker

Fez · #20 12-24-2002, 09:49 AM

the door slid open, the scuttlers were gone. Werzbasky started welding up all the airvents to make sure none of them followed us.I noticed gunner had a 12 guage tactical shotgun strapped to her back, we had some good fire power now. We went back into the games room, this time we went right. Collins said that the helepad was closer. We went into a romm filled with desks and PC's, there was a CCTV station at the back of the room. I turned it on, to get to the helepad, we had to get past the heat exchanger, which was covered in slime, flesh, blood, and weired tenticles. Something moved out of view on the celing, the CCTV couldnt see what though.

Meanwhile, Bishop the pilot had stopped back at base, it was time to pick his team up.

I called bishop on the comm. the signal was weak, and very static. " bishop, we need to get to the armory first, wait for us at the north west helepad in 5 hours"

I got a message "bi...op we n.......armory.....st, wai.......nor.....t.....ad in 5 ..............." it was full of static "say again" i replyed, i felt something bang against the side of the chopper, i picked up a CAR 15 and cocked it. I went out side, nothing. I turned back to go in the chopper when a huge thing came out of the chopper, i screamed and fired, i bit me in the leg and then threw me into the snow, i fired again from the CAR 15, i missed, and hit the fule tank on the chopper. It exploded, killing the thing, but leaving me stranded in 40 below snow, and miles from help.

I heard "say ag....." over the comm. then i heard screams, gunfire, and then a huge explosion. "SHIT" i shouted, bishop was dead meaning we were stuck. "Were stuck here" i said. "shit" said collins, "oh great, were in some pretty shit now ar'nt we!" said werzbasky. "pull your self together" said gunner "we can still make it, there is food and supplies in the other armory, and its right next to the comm. tower, right collins?" "yeah, thats right"

We didnt have that far to go. I was quite surprised, we had made it to the armory with out attack. "there is it!" shouted werzbasky "we are gonna make it!" collins chuckled "i got the code" he typed in some numbers, we were saved. Then the whole world went down, a computerized voice said:

ACCESS DENIDE

want me to continue?

Fez · #21 12-28-2002, 11:40 AM

i got the movie of the thing now, so i can make the story more original.

Fez · #22 02-01-2003, 09:18 AM

"NO!" shouted Collins. A scuttling noise came behind us. "Guns ready people, shoot to kill" said werzbasky. An air vent exploded, spewing out what looked like a scuttler with wings, thousands of them flew at us. "FIRE, FIRE YOUR WEAPONS GODDAMN IT!!" shouted gunner. Then the door behinds us sliped open, bullets sprayed through the door, killing lots of them, they fled. A familiar voice said "come on in". I turned around, it was black and burrows.

we all went in, the door sliding to a lock behind us. This armory was bigger, and had another door leading to a bigger room. This room was the experimental weapons room, i peered in, i saw some very high-tech weapons, but i'd look at them later. "What happened to you two?" i said. "We got lost in the blizard, but saw an explosion, and went twords it. I think i saw Perry as well, but we couldnt be sure" said black. "we chased one of those spider things through the base, and wound up here." "we have lots of supplies and weapons though, we just have to wait for bishop." "I dont think thats a good idea, i heard over the comm. I think bishop is dead, i'm sorry, but were stuck her untill we can get to the comm. tower and call for evac.""oh great" said burrows "so what are we gonna do then?"

in the snow, bishop was still alive, he clutched his CAR 15, someone would have to come by sooner or later, and he wasnt that far from the base. He would dig a hole to sleep in for the night, and set of when the storm dies down. The fire from the chopper warmed him up, but it wouldnt last long, there was a bit of spare fule that didnt go up that he could make a fire with once this one died down.

I went into the experimental weaons room, burrows showed me the high-tech stuff. "OICW, the clip in the back holds 6 "smart" grenades that can be programmed when to blow up, the clip in the fromt holds 30 5.56 rounds. FN P90, not that new, fires 5.72 rounds, reliable, we dont have much ammo for it though. G11, a cassless rifle, but not very strong, and we barly have any ammo for it. 2 HK G36's, we got tons of ammo for these, and they're better then those M-16 of yours, and finally jackhammer shotgun, fully auto, bullpup design, 12 rounds, 12 guage, this babys gonna get us out alive thats for sure." "good" i said.

We all got some sleep, changing guard shift every 2 hours. The next day we all loaded up the new weapons, and dumped a few of the old, and set off to the comm. tower. We really were a small 6 person army. Burrows had an OICW and desert eagel. Black had a HK G36, werzbasky still had 2 UMP's i had the FN P90 and an MP5 and gunner had the jckhammer and 12 guage tactical and finally collins had 2 flamethrower with full fuel and an M-16!

shall i continue?

Strike Witch · #23 02-02-2003, 10:51 AM

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fez · #24 02-08-2003, 09:41 AM

Bishop used up the last of the fule to make his fire, then he tryed to call base "this is bishop, i am stranded in the snow send pickup team to my coordinates" He didnt know if the team at home base got the message, but he would keep trying every half-hour. He didnt think that greens team would make it, if he lost a chopper to one of those things, then how would they fight off a whole base of the things? But there were some very loaded armorys and experimental weapons at the base, but even with that, his chances were still low.

we set off in the morning, it was clear out side, but still very cold, and the place crawled with walkers and scuttlers. While walking by some offices, Collins stopped and clutched his chest, threwup, and was fine again. "Are you all right?" said gunner "yeah, i'm fine" replyed Collins. The base seemed very empty in this part, which was strange, apart from the occasonal scuttler, nothing. "Theres not much here" i said, i must have spoken to soon, because the wall exploded and a huge walker came in. It had 3 arms, 2 were sythes, and the other had a huskeys head on it. It had pieces of flesh hanging of it, and its tail seemed to be the waist up of a human. "FIRE, KILL THE DAMN THING!!" shouted gunner.

the bullets tore throught it, it screamed and whacked burrows, i heard something crack. "Burn it Collins" but collins just stood there, and did not move. Werzbasky grabbed his flamethrower and burned the thing before it could get any closer. "Whats wrong with you collins?" said gunner. He started to shake, a gurgled scream came from him, blood dripped out of his mouth, his eyes popped out of there socctes. His hands just dropped off with a thud, and his chest burst open, a long purple tenticle with a mouth on the end came out, lots of worm like tenticles slithered out of his body. The his head spit open like a mouth, huge gaping teeth lined the inside of his skull. A tenticle came out of his head and wrapped around Blacks neck, it pulled him into his mouth and bit his head. It swung blacks body around untill it went limp, then threw it at the wall.

we couldnt get to the flamethrowers, so we just shot at him, the bullets not seeming to have an effect. The tenticles lifted burrows into the air. "EAT THIS!" said burrows "RUN!!!!!!!!!!!" he shouted to us. We ran down the hall. "FUCKER!" i heard burrows say, then he launched a grenade from his OICW into the mouth of the thing, blowing it in half, and buring it and burrows. I saluted burrows and black. We had lost all the flamethrowers in the explosion, meaning we could only run from any more things we see now.

"dont worry" an enigmatic smile spread across werzbaskys face. I got these" he held out 5 orange grenades. "They are full of napalm, and very explosive, we'll have to run after we let these babys go." I heard machienery ahead of us. "We must be near the power plant" said gunner "there is a rupture in there, we had better be quiet as not to be seen" We walked up to the door, it led to a balcony, we could get across the rupture without acutally killing it. We walked in, i looked down of the edge.

The rupture was hidious. It was attached to the wall, but it had a very long neck with a humans head on, lots of long tenticles waved about. There was a mouth at the base of the thing, which spewed a green slime. It had lots of green tubes sticking out of it, and 2 huge arms. one with a strange alien on it, and another with the waist up of a human with green skin. The human had both arms replaced with sythes. This would be one hell of a fight if it saw us. suddenly, werzbasky hit something which started a conveyor belt. It looked up at us, its long neck reached up at us. It screamed. "oh shit" said werzbasky.

shall i continue?

Fez · #25 03-13-2003, 05:02 PM

okay...one more chapter to go...should i continue?

Fez · #26 04-12-2003, 07:33 PM

werzbasky walked backwards, slowly, the things forehead spilt open, and a strong think appendige shot out, knocking werzbasky of the edge. He hit the ground with a thud, but the thing ignored him, more tenticles came from its back, and slashed at me and Gunner, we both fired, the bullets slicing the tenticles to shredds, but more and more of them came, a big tenticle lifted Gunner up. "Let go of her you ****ing asswipe!" i shouted, i fired at the tenticle, but it just made the creature even more angry. A huge arm banged the balcony, sending me to the ground, werzbasky had recovered, and was firing his double UMP's at oncoming scuttlers. I shot at the base of the thing, then i noticed some oil canisters to the left of the beast. But first i looked up, just to see it throw gunner at a wall, she fell, and hit the ground, hard.

She coughed up blood. Werzbasky ran over to her and protectced her from the incoming scuttlers. I circled the beast, firing at the base, but i was mearly wasting ammo, at least it hurt it. A tenticle picked up werzbasky, scuttlers swarmed over Gunner, i ran to her, and shot up all the scuttlers. Werzbasky has lifted high up into the air. He was screaming in pain, the beast mimiced his scream, and then cut him in half, just below the abdomen. he screamed and was thrown at the wall, "its toying with us" i thought. "OVER HERE" I shouted it looked at me, and tryed to grab me, but i dodged, and shot the tenticles to pieces. "were all going to die now" i said.

with 3 tenticles it lifted us all up, all hope was lost. Then the wall blew up, and Bishop and 3 marines in pryo armour came in, the beast was started at its new visitors and dropped us. The pryos burned at the base of the thing, some medics ran in, and carried werzbasky and Gunner out., Bishop and me back out, and the pryos followed. explosions were heard from the boiler. "Stop!" i said to bishop. I threw a napalm grenade into the boiler, fire went every where, burning all the escaping scuttlers, and the beast. We went out side, and loaded werzbasky and Gunner into a chopper, the 3 pryos went in as well. Me and Bishop followed.

the boiler was blowing up, but the beast was still alive, 8 huge spider like legs grew from its back, its arms fell of, and were replaced by 2 huge sythes. It the ripped it self free from the fall, and knocked down the wall, the boiler went up, but it was now out side.

the roters started turning, i heard something horrible, i turned to see the beast, it had grown legs and had followed us! it was now also twice as big! "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" I shouted. I jumped out, grabbing the last of the grenades. I ran to it, but i slahsed me aside, and went the chopper. I fired at it, and it looked at me, and screamed. "AAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!" shouted werzbasky from the chopper. He was laying down, firing his double UMP's at the things head, the .45 bullets tore through it, but it still was coming. It shot out a tenticle, and picked werzbasky up, he was still shooting, he still fired untill his ammo went dry, then the thing opened up its mouth, and bit his head off.

"BASTARD!" i shouted, i fired at it more, it dropped werzbaskys body, and picked me up, i droped my weapon. It was over, the chopper was now nearly away, just hovering. Then i remembered the grenades. "EAT THIS!" i said, and stuffed 4 napalm grenades into its mouth, and pulled the pins, it dropped me and i ran. BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEEEEEEEEEEP the grenades exploded, the napalm burning the beast, it screamed, and tryed to morph nito all the things it had killed, but it was still on fire. It burned and screamed and then hit the ground, dead.

"YEEEEEEEEEEEEEES" Ishouted in joy, the chopper landed, and the marines helped me up and closed the door. Gunner had broken 3 ribs, but would be okay. "what do ay think?" i whispered to her "not bad..." she said back to me. "Bishop, how the hell did you survive?" i said "i got the hint that these things weakness was fire, and i was picked up by these marines, they were on there way to the base to finish it off, but as we speak now, the base is being firebombed to hell by 2 B-2 stealth bombers, nothin will survive" "good work Bishop" i replyed. I heard the bombs going off as we flew away into the night.

3 days after the bombing, it was quite. A small husky walked away from the reckage of the base, it turned to look behind it, but then went on, into the antartic, dripping blood behind it...

...something survived.

Red · #27 04-12-2003, 07:52 PM

thats great! wow!

Fez · #28 04-12-2003, 07:55 PM

thanks, it over now, i just want people to read it. There might even be a sequel...

Fez · #29 08-20-2003, 08:09 PM

wow i forgot all about my first story. Can i have some feedback please people, ya never know what i might do...