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04-06-2004, 05:46 AM
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Halo: Dark Combat

Hi,
I have wirte a halo fan fiction in german. Stil I translate it in englisc... for you!
In germany it was one of the most famouses fan fictions! (look aton www.haloorbit.de, the biggest german Fan Site)
Tis is the first chapter from 10!
The whole Story is 12 sides long.

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Halo: Dark Combat


chapter 1
1245 hours, 31 August 2552
(military calendar)
ring world halo,
edge of the Epsilon Eridani system

The sun burned itself painfully in Greeters face, and on the ring it seemed it that the sun was still hotter than on Reach, where the sun brought a considerable temperature. It had a terrible Sonnenbrant and an enormous thirst. The Warthog in which it sat, impacted several times on the hard desert soil, which made the travel not necessarily more pleasant. For hours they now already and nevertheless drove no traces of the alliance.
"Sargeant, I doesn't think, which the alliance is in this area", noticed Greeter, "Never an elite woult be hear for a long time, let alone a Grunt, we should turn around or make at least a Break..."
The Sargeant stopped the Warthog, looked his marine seriously in the face and said: "tearing yourself together. I did not accept you without reason in my team. You are a man, therefore take away you also like one."
"Yes, Sir..." Greeter read yourself slowly again into the seat sink. In the back on the Warthog cannon stood for Squall, the second member in the troop. Up to the evening they drove without a break to say and without a word when they received new instructions by the radio communication system in the Warthog from Captain Keyes.
"Forgetting it the hostile basis in the desert, we somewhat by far more important sighted, or at least of it belongs. A Rescuecap down-came in the proximity of a mechanism, in which the alliance apparent stores a majority of its vehicles! I and a troop of Marines will appear themselves there. We need each man in the next hours are available. We send a drop ship to them, indicate them their position, Keyes end." The Sargent examined the coordinates and indicated it. Already it lasted something and the landing ship came. The pelican carried the number 465. It has numerous dents in the external walls and the lacquer is complete in some places off, and one could see the Armoring from titanium A. A not everyday armoring for a pelican. They entered.







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04-06-2004, 07:16 AM
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Good! could use better translation though, but i'm not one to talk.
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