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01-23-2004, 11:59 PM
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its in the pipe line! (no pun intended)

okay. Its been awhile since i posted up a story. After the poll it showed that Bloodwar was the most wanted. I have to appolagise that it will take a while to write, as i am in the process of writing another story.

anyway. Could you lot just say what your most looking forward to.

Bloodwar - vampires and werewolves at war. New werewolve/vampire, carries a disease. Could wipe out all vamps and weres.

Mars - coloney on mars, abandoned. People on mars angry at earth and want revenge. Strong love story tied in.

barrys story - posponed for a while

bravo 338 - posponed for a while

the thing:final clean up (remake) - ???

the thing: Fears' story - ???

Spiral 2 - ???
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01-25-2004, 02:58 PM
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Love story, you say? Errr... I vote for Mars! Purely for it's science-fictional aspects, of course. Yes. Sounds cool.
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01-26-2004, 08:26 AM
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Mars - in 2067, the world has just made peace over 17 years of world war. we go to mars and build a colonie there, to show our peace. Suddenly on earth, terrorisim breaks out. The terrorists come from mars. Mars is then abandonded, its people left there. They become very angry at eath, and so they all become terrorists.

In new york, a AT team (anti-terrorist) member called Patrick falls in love with a woman, from mars. Se then goes to mars and becomes a terrorist. Betraying his team. Its kinda like Romeo and Juliet in the future.
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01-27-2004, 05:39 AM
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The terrorists come from mars. Mars is then abandonded, its people left there.
Well that's one hell of an Oxymoron (sp.)

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She then goes to mars and becomes a terrorist. Betraying his team. Its kinda like Romeo and Juliet in the future.
Except it's not like Romeo and Juliet except for two things, two people in love, on opposite sides....

Oh and In the Pipeline isn't a pun unless you're talking about something to do with a pipeline.

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01-27-2004, 06:04 AM
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[foodflyingfromhenna'smouth]Noooooo!!! Not love stories! My life already is a tragic love story full of mishaps and betrayal....! ...thankyou.[/foodflyingfromhenna'smouth]

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01-27-2004, 08:46 AM
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Except it's not like Romeo and Juliet except for two things, two people in love, on opposite sides...
bah spelling error.

it bloody is!

Mars = girl
Earth = guy

Mars and Earth are at war.
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01-27-2004, 09:06 AM
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I'd like to see your mars story, I had once began to write a story about Mars trying to gain independance from the earth, not long after it was properly colonised, and self-sufficient. There was a war for the independance of mars based on Martian landscape. There was obviously a lot more to it, and the characters but I didn't get to far. I would like to see your take on a *similar* theme.

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01-28-2004, 08:39 AM
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it'll be up when its finshed. I'm writing this one all before i post it, so expect a wait.
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01-29-2004, 08:35 AM
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Wow... just realised it's you Ferill (damn av change)

I've known about the whole "God of War will cause a war" thing for a while now, so I wouldn't mind seeing how you spin the Mars story.

(Did anyone else notice the possible "Women are from Mars" joke?)
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01-29-2004, 08:51 AM
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(Did anyone else notice the possible "Women are from Mars" joke?)
heheeheeeh I like that one....
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