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Oddworld Oddworld Crusades Of The Relec!

As you might know I have finnished Conquest of the Lost Continent. It was an exciteing and long story. Now if you liked Conquest you are indeed going to enjoy my next one called Crusades of The Relec, a sequel to Conquest and the second and important part of my trilagy if you want to get the whole gist of it. Ok enough with the chit chat where I stand with my stories I give you a short preview of what Crusades is all about!


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It has been a year since the downfall of Clorn and the defeat of the Dark Mudokins. But still they ravage the land of Salis in their harsh grip of destruction and war. Kluna and Zin have been liveing well with their friends Silak and Kleek. As for Blunk he has returned home in the underwater city of the Alpha Gabbits. And Wheely works in his own junk shop creating new inventions for the resistence. For he never wants to go back to his home in the Junk Waist. Still Kluna and Zin dream that one day they will return to Mudos. Throughout the year Zin has been learning much about Salis and it's inhabitants through Silak. For he has become wiser than when we first met him and Kluna has become a great general to the Alpha Sligs through these hard times. But now Zin has been expierenceing strange dreams lately that are more wierder than any dream he had before.

Knowing that the powers of the Omega Relec and the Relec it's self were lost in Zins defeat of Clorn, Master Chun and Vykker leader Lazlo have been trying to find aternative ways for their friends to return home. But in their attempt they have failed. In the year they have learned much about the origin of the Omega Relec and the extinct race that constructed it. a lost history is now being revieled to the races of Salis and even the Dark Muds are learning more about it. They learned that this race was extremely powerful and intelgant. But still Lazlo and Chun wounder where did this race "known as the Gargaznoo" got this mysterous power that gave birth to the Dark Muds which intern destroyed the Gargaznoo.

In the mean time Trilas and the dark muds have been secretly mineing for something of great importants deep on the other side of Salis. For most of the inhabitants now know about the ancient history of the Omega Relec and what Zin has done. The knowledge has gone as far into the continent as to the capital. And the central government has been threaten by the dark Muds take over of Salis. For the dark muds hired hooded bounty hunters to go after important Salien figures for their moolah to contribute to the mineing. It has become apparent after the certain mysterous deaths of Salien government officials, at the hands of the bounty hunters, that any talk about the Omega Relec is forbidden for safty issues. The subject has been deamed classified in the chapital.

Chun has decided to set out on the long journey across the desart to the capital to find more history of the Gargaznoo and the Relec through the archives. But he doesn't know of the mysterous deaths that has happen at the hands of the hooded bounty hunters.

Silak still determined to hunt Trilas to the death will do so. And nothing will stop him. But he is haunted by Trilas's motives of his earlier encounters. Why was the Relec useless and where is it now? An ever more growing fear that something new is on the horizon will come for the races of Salis. Their only hope of solveing these mysteries is through Kluna and Zin. Will they ever return home? And will they ever destroy the Dark Muds once and for all? Welcome back to Salis in Oddworld Crusades of the Relec. Where things have changed!


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Chapter 1 A Dream!

It was a stormy night as the wind wiped through and by the homes of the newly built Glukkon city of Zilanoff. Things in the area were quite as the guards were a sleep. Most of the city was a sleep and a peacefulness filled the area. But in the home of our hero Silak, lied Zin in his hammick tossing and turning. And then he awoke and found himself alone standing upon a vast wasteland. In the distance was a cresant moon surrounded by other moons. The sky was a deep blue as the echo of Zins voice cried out.

"ANYBODY!"

As he steped forward voices began to surround him.

"Zin come now come now! Zin we want you!" cried the voices

"What!"

And a strange object that was black in color and rather large came before him. It got closer to him but suddenly Zin awoke and was screaming at the top of his lungs.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" As low thunder rumbled the skies.

"Wha what! What is it Zin?"

Zin sat there breathing hard with his frighten look to his face.

"Zin you look like you just seen a ghost!" I haven't seen that look since Clorn!" said Kluna

"Kluna its alright! It was only a dream I am fine!"

"I hope so Zin tomarrow we are going to be visiting Blunk and I hope your alright." explaned Kluna.

"Don't worry Kluna I know I know!"

"We need to get rest Zin." said Kluna as both of them went back to sleep. Zin knowing his past with dreams thought about his new dream for a second and then he fell back to sleep.


Very short first chapter but you know me how I start things off calm things will be interesting just wait.
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Chapter 2 Tension in The capital!

Far in the south of Salis the captal stood tall. As many gleaming towers connected by mass transit systems covered the landscape. In the center known as the order, tension has come to the government of Salis. As the many different govenors of all races of Salis debate over the relec and the evnts surrounding it. The supreme race, an octagi race known as the Clarnacks and their leader of the order "Sieron" speeks out to the rest of the order.

"It has come to my attention that of the Relec of the Omega has been found by the reclusive Dark Muds a year ago today. We cannot have this madness stand by us anymore. In the past we stood tall but their evil ways have crippled us because of Clorn. But Clorn is no more!"

"Supreme leader, The Glukkons have suffered a great los do to this. In the north we have been slaves to Clorn himself until two worrors from distant Mudos brought conquest to us. The Relec was lost in battle and its powers used up. It is useless. Besides we don't even know where its located. And what is the point Sieron?" explained Borlock.

"The point is that the Dark Muds still plunder our lands. They are searching for something! Mineing in the ruins of the ancient Gargaznoo. They must be stoped!"

"As representitave of the Leenas, why don't we stop them. Half of my people have turned and joined the reclusive Dark Muds and it is causeing trouble in my lands!" As the the rest of the order complains.

"Easy now! We all are feeling the threats of the Dark Muds. If they are searching for the Relec then they must not know what has happened to it."

"Sieron, there has been reports of hooded renegade bounty hunters moveing throughout the deasert regions. We must stop them. Two officials have already been killed for their moolah. If the dark Muds want the Moolah then it is obveously that what they are looking for is something bigger than we can possiably comprehend! This is a crisis!"


"Govenor Borlock, where do you get this information?" said Sieron.

"It is only a hunch Govenor!" said Borlock. "But I shall investigate further!" as the crowd stood up they cheered and Sierons aids silenced the order.

"Govenor Borlock you will carry out this investigation! And as of now, let it be known. The order has made it clear. For any talk of the relec or the Gargaznoo, it would be considered forbidden. It has been written, the Relec and any talk of the Gargaznoo has been deamed classified for the safty of not only us but the rest of Salis. I will not stand here and watch the countless slaughtering of many races take place by ruthless Bounty Hunters!" Ordered Sieron as the rest cheered him on.

Meanwhile at the same time among the crowd a hooded figure was watching everything take place as he turned around and left the Order.
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Chapter 3 The Bounty Hunter

"I have made contact with the order Trilas. Over?"

"Good Craven! Now return to me with your information! Over and out!"

"Yes my master!"

The hooded figure put his intercom into his cloak as he got into his Hunter ship. But just then down a little ways from him a fight was breaking out at a bar. The bounty Hunter went over to investigate the situation.

"GET OUT OF MY BAR YOU FOOL!" as the bar tender pushed a rather strong looking being to the ground.

"AND NEVER COME BACK!" Yelled the Bar Tender.

"Oh I will come back alright! If my name aint Cronas McNacken!" as he stumbled about.

"YOUR DRUNK!" As the bar tender threw a bottal of brew at him.

"AHHHHH WHAT EVER!"

Cronus stumbled awey as the Bounty Hunter approached him.

"You seem lost my friend." said the Bounty Hunter.

"What? Who are you?"

"My name is Craven. I am a Bounty hunter working for Dark Muds."

"Oh your in trouble!"

"I could help you become great!" said Craven

"Really how?"

"Follow me and you will see."

"Wait a minute. You said you work for the Dark Muds. How do I trust you?"

"You seem pretty strong my friend. What are you"

"I am Slukkon and you better be careful or I will pound you to the ground!"

"Well I have an offer for you. My Client is in desperate need of help and us Bounty Hunters are very limited."

"What is in it for me?"

"How does a billion Moolah sound?"

"Heh, A billion Moolah you say? What kind of job is this?"

"Oh my client has a few enamys that he wishes to erraticate. Hell thats why he hired us for the job." explaned Craven.

"Well then you don't need me!" said Cronus.

"On the contrary we do need you. That is how you will get your MOOLAH! You want to be a Bounty Hunter right?" You want to get back at the people you hate right? Well then follow me and you will!" explained Craven.

"You really think I can get back at those people I hate?"

"Yes if you become a Bounty Hunter with me."

"Haha I am in!"

"Splendid!" As Craven smiled.

Meanwhile morning was on the rise as Kluna and Zin were wakeing up.

Yawning "Oh what a night! this is going to be a day Kluna."

"Why do you say that?"

"We have to go visit Blunk today. And personally I have doubts of going underwater to visit our good friend Blunk."

"Oh Zin don't worry Silak will be with us."

"I don't know Kluna I think he has other things to do concerning with Wheely. I mean did you here that Wheely scavenged one of those Dark Mud spheres out of the ruins of Clorns Fortress?"

"Well now that you mentioned it, why yes Zin. I thought I heard news such as that!"

"Silak is going to Wheely's work shop to check it out." said Zin. As they were getting out of their hammicks.

"Speaking of Silak where is he?"
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I have said it many times in the past, all of your fan fics have been well done, and well written. Once again, this story meets my demands, and is doing a great job from the start again. Cant wait to see more.


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Chapter 4 Return of the relec

As Kluna and Zin were getting up Silak walked into the hut and greeted them.

"Good mourning! I am sure you had a good night sleep my friends."

"Well Silak where were you?" asked Zin.

"Well Wheely has found a most extrodinary thing for us for our war aganst the Dark Muds!"

"It must be a sphere right?" said Zin.

"Why yes! How did you know?"

"Everyone knows in the village Silak."

"Well we were excavateing the ruins of the fortress of Clorn and we saw a remaining Dark Sphere. We can surely use it for our convienence Zin! You and Kluna are going to visit Blunk today right?"

"Yes Silak we are. But I am not sure why though."

"His master Cronas wishes to speak with you about certain issues the Alpha Gabbits have been dealing with in their underwater home."

"Well why are we waisting time here we got work to do!" said Zin.

"Are you comming along Silak?" asked Kluna.

"No Kluna. The Glukkons and I are scavengeing the beach front in case we come across a small renegade platoon of Dark Muds. You go without me." said Silak.

"Alright!"

And they left. In the mean time Silak walked across the village and into Wheelys workshop as he was drilling the sphere.

"Wheely what are you doing?"

"Ah Me master Silak! It is so good to see ya here me friend!"

"Can you tell me what your doing with the sphere Wheely?"

"Oh sure me tell ya me tell ya! Come in!"

Meanwhile Kluna and Zin were approaching the dock.

"It is strange Kluna that I have been haveing wierd dreams lately."

"Zin there only dreams. Dreams pass in time."

"Yea but these dreams seem so real to me."

"I am alweys dreaming of a waist land anda strange black rectangular object that calls for me. It seems so real."

"I wouldn't worry about it Zin."

Meanwhile a patrol of Glukkon scouts were crossing the beach as out of nowhere the Omega Relec was washing up on shore. Just then a scout notice it and blew the horn.

"I know Kluna its just....What?"

The whole village was in shock as the horn blew.

"Wheely what do you think this could be?" asked Silak.

"Me don't know! But with My guess it could be some kind of weapon." explaned Wheely.

Suddenly a glukkon ran into Wheely's work shop and interupted Silak's conversation with him.

"Master Silak you might want to come!"

"What is it?"

"Just come!"

"Comeon Wheely follow me!"

Soon the whole village was on the beach as Silak slowly walked up to the Relec.

"What is this Silak?"

"People this is incredable we have just found the last of the Relec!"


just then Kluna and Zin ran in and to their surprise they were in disbleaf.
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Chapter 5 An even deeper Mystery


Just then Zin approached the relec with caution.

"Silak do you know what this means? Kluna and I will finally be going home!"

Kluna looked at them and smiled.

"Zin you can't go home. Don't you remember that the powers of this has been used up. It is useless thats what Trilas told me on the cliff that one time."

Zin stared at Silak with fustraition.

"If we can't use it then what do we do?"

"We will take it to Lazlo and Chun. Maybe they can study it and give us some answers."

"What about the dark Muds?" asked Kluna.

"They are not looking for it anymore. Like I said, Trilas knew something that we all missed." explained Silak.

"But what?" asked Zin

"That my friend is the mystery."

Meanwhile a dark Mud scout was standing on a cliff side looking down at the beach and watching our friends take the relec.

"Master Trilas they have taken the bait over!" said Orphious. "But honestly do you really think they will fall for are trap?" Thats not good leadership Trilas!"

"Quit your bickering Orphious its bad comedy! You will follow through with our plan!" said Trilas on the intercom.

"Some day Trilas, Someday you will see that I am the most powerful and you will be my servant!"

"Ha that day will be a day to see!" Over and out!"

"I hate him!"

Meanwhile our friends were approaching Lazlo's quarters.

"Lazlo we need you out here." yelled Zin.

"What is it friends?"

"Look what we have found!"

Lazlo walked up to Zin's hands and was deeply amazed.

"You found the relec. Good for you but that rock will do you nothing!" explaned Lazlo.

"Come see look what I have found in the great river."

Lazlo showed them a similar object that looked exactly like the Omega Relec.

"The two look the same!" said Silak.

"Thers more?" asked Kluna.

"Perhaps but further study on the relec and this new find must be met!" said Lazlo.

And so our friends left the relec with Lazlo to study. But an even a deeper mystery has sprung forth for now they have found 2 similar objects of equel mass and the Dark Muds are not even searching for them. What does Trilas know that our heroes don't? The answers shall be revield in time.
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This reminds me of something like a movie, The lost continent, then Crusades of the relec, is like the ongoing episodes that come weekly. Its really good so far. I have to try and catch up on everything.

Be looking for an update on Failure to Comply, and Campaign Tour this weekend.


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Chapter 6 Land of the Shadow!

Darkness covered the lands south of the Chapital. The dark Muds mineing facility sat in the middle of what was known as the land of the shadow. Or in other words the land of the long extinct Gargaznoo. Craven the bounty hunter along with his new found friend Cronus McNackin a slukkon, were headed to an ancient palace near the Dark Mud's mineing facility in their ship. Among the many parked spheres were a new kind of vehacal in which the Bounty Hunters and Dark Muds were useing. A new type of vehacal constructed by a race of beings far more intelegent then anything yet known. they were sleek and saucer shaped which had large guns sticking out upon each of its wings. Out of the top of these new vehacals were these large silver sails that made them look rather unieque in their structure. For these new forms of deadly transportation were known as Sand Sails. an expieremental vehacal inwhich could possiably replace the spheres. Trilas the leader of the Dark Muds was waiting paitiently upon a balcony of the ancient Gargaznoon palace as the sun was beginning to set. Waiting for Craven to return from the Capital.

Craven's Sand Sail came to a stop near the enterance to the palace as he and Cronus were heading up the ramp to the gate. At the large gateway were two Dark Mud guards holding huge leashes that were attached to Rorm beasts. The two Rorms snarled at Craven and Cronus and stared them on as the gate was opening.

"Stand aside we have business to attend to!" said Craven as the gate was opening. Back up on the balcony a guard entered the balcony in which Trilas was standing on and told him.

"Sir I balieve Craven has returned my master. But with a Slukkon master. Should I order him dead?"

"A Slukkon you say? said Trilas. "How interesting, Bring them in!" ordered Trilas.

And so they were brought in and were greeted by Trilas and sat down to get right to business.

"Please come in my friend. Tell me who is your Slukkon friend Craven?"

"He's Cronus. he wishes to help us out on this project Trilas." explaned Craven.

"Very well. He looks tough enough for the Job that he could possably replace Orphious someday I hope!" said Trilas.

Cronus looked at both of them and was kind of embaressed.

"Pardon me for asking but can I step out for a minute?" asked Cronus.

"You may go Cronus wait for me at my Sand Sail." said Craven.

As Cronus was leaveing he was stareing at Craven and Trilas discussing their business as the door to the room shut.

"Your friend seems a bit shy." said Trilas.

"Oh Cronus? its nothing he just likes being by himself all the time and I respect that of him." said Craven.

"What ever, now right to business. You will be most pleased in how our progress is comming. I can feel it we are close!" explaned Trilas.

"Pardon me for asking Trilas but what is it that we are actually seeking?"

"Fortune and glory Craven Fortune and glory!"

A strange smirk came upon Cravens face as he smiled.

"For a year now the resistence have been looking for the Omega Relec which was lost of those cursid Mudokins of Mudos. Just reciently Orphious has reported that they have found the Relec. But that is not what we are in search for. Yes my friend the powers of the Relec have been striped awey from that rock and now it is useless. You may ask what is it that I seek? Well what if I told you that the powers of the Relec came from something else in origen?"

"Thats imposable Trilas! There is no such thing on Oddworld that could possably hold the powers of the Relec other than itself!" said Craven.

"But you are wrong Craven. Weeks ago a group Zilen researchers stumbled upon some strange black dust that seems to be made out of the same materal of the Relec. Now this black dust had to have come from something we have never seen before. And I balieve this could be the key to unlocking the secrets to the powers of the Relec." as Trilas smiled.

"You really think we could be onto something Trilas?"

"Craven!" as Trilas laughed "I know we are on to something and it is a matter of time until we find it."
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chapter 7 A Strange Discovery

Deep in the great white north of Sailas high upon a plataue a small vessel was flying over the frozen landscape. This vessel was Zilean in origen. a race of beings whoes intellengants surpasses even the Vykkers. For this race cares not of Oddworld and looks to stars for their needs. In their native language the Zielean ordered the gates to their stronghold of ice opened. as his ship flew in. The studiers these creatures were known as. As they lived in such steral enviorments.

"Clees nok saleneen!" as the door opened and the ship flew in and came to a landing. The hatch opened and the Zilean came out and greeted his other comrads.

"Bleek clok sleen."

"Bawa tee na nitti ba." said the other as the heads began to glow. For this was the Zilean greeting.

"Please follow me." as another Zilean approached the two.

"You will find that we are indeed on schedual. For our main facility in this laberynth of ice hides one of the most extrodinary finds since The Relec.

"What may that be master Con?"

"I give you our future off this rock."

As the Zileans approached a massive round door strange humming noises came from behind.

"This my friends is the future. We call it the Argolyth. An object of unspeakable power. It even surpasses the Relec!"

"What is it?"

"Some caltures balieve this thing was formed in the beginning of time made of negative energy. Others balieve it is liveing and that it lives for infanity. We tend to balieve it was made of the same materal the Relec was forged from."

As the Zileans walked off and discussed the Argolyth, one Zilean approached the circular doorway and touched the door. Sudenly the humming noise from behind the door in which came from within was getting louder as the Zilean pulled his hand back. He looked in and saw darkness and was scared as he walked off.
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Chapter 8 The day of Reaconing.

Meanwhile back in the Glukkon village Kluna and Zin were about to venture into the deep underwater world of their comrad Blunk.

"It scares me that we have found a simmilar object of the Omega Relec Kluna. I just don't understand why!" explaned Zin.

"Maybe it has to do with your so called dreams Zin. But don't quote me on that."

Meanwhile Orphious and his band of dark Mud solders were waiting ever more paitiently high upon a cliff over looking Zilanoff. Suddenly a small fleet of Sand sails and spheres came into the area lead by Trilas.

"Trilas?" said Orphious.

"We have come with reanforcement for your attack. I figured you would probabally fail your mission. This is Craven and Cronus Mc Nackin they will lead this attack."

"Why can't I Trilas?" bikkered Orphious.

"Stop your bikkering Orphious with you as a leader ha. Thats bad comedy!"

"Some day Trilas Some day."

"Some day I will have your head on my wall! Don't tempt me!"

Suddenly Orphious took a small pistal and shot towards Trilas but missed him. Then Trilas took his arm gun and pined Orphious to the ground.

"Like I said you will alweys be less of me Orphious! That my friend, is strike one!"

As Trilas let go, Orphious readied himself for battle.

"Trilas what are we supposed to do?" asked Craven

"Seek out Silak and those Muds destroy the village! And find this so called Chun!"

Meanwhile Kluna and Zin were cruiseing underwater in a small Alpha Gabbit submerine traveling to the city of the gabbits. Many strange fish of all sizes were approaching the little sub as they were getting deeper.

"These fish are rather interesting to look at Zin. And I am amazed how deep the Great River is."

Suddenly they approached to what appeared to be the Great city. But it looked as if it was attacked. Suddenly fleeing Alpha Gabbits were swimming past the sub for safty when Kluna and Zin noticed a black cloud comming from the city.

Some of the Alpha gabbits were injured others were dead. The site indeed was frightening and then it happened.

On the surface suddenly Trilas gave the word to attack as the horn blew.

"On my orders ATTACK!"

"Sand Sails and spheres came rushing into the city of Zilanoff as the Glukkons blew their horns for battle. In a matter of minutes the place was once again engulped in flames as the mercilous bounty hunters and Dark Muds attacked. Silak being brave mounted to his Alpha Elum and blew the horn to get the attention of the Alpha Sligs. And now the two respected races were fighting their way out of the fire storm. At the same time Kluna and Zin were trying to figure out what was happening as attack was growing more and more dangerous above.

"What is that Zin?"

"I don't know. In a way it resembels that black powder that was on the replica of the Relec."

"Maybe thats what could be causeing the Alpha Gabbits to flee!"

"Mann I hope Blunk is ok!"

"Me too." said Zin.

Back on the surface Silak was meeting up with Kleek.

"Whats happening Silak?" asked Kleek.

"We have to get out of here. The Dark Muds are attacking! Blow the whistle of retreat!" yelled Silak.

Suddenly Trilas in his Sphere came rushing into the area and cornored Silak and Kleek.

"Stop right there Silak! You never thought I would meet up with you again did you?"

"Trilas you want the Relec take it!"

"You fool I don't want that rock I want you!"

Suddenly a bunch of sand Sails came into the area and now Silak and Kleek were surrounded by spheres and Sand Sails.

Silak took his arm blaster and set it for stun as he fired awey at Silak and Kleek. Both of them went falling to the ground. The Hooded Bounty Hunters then tied them up and took them onto their ships. Trilas grinned at the destruction as Orphious approached him.

"We have 200 Alpha Glukkons rounded up sir."

"Very good Orphious it wouldn't have been possable if the Bounty Hunters weren't here. Now lets leave this place to burn!"

As Orphious left Trilas alone Trilas looked down at the water just a few feat from him. He pointed his blaster to the water as a strange black substance floated to the surface. He dipped his blaster into the water and beached a dead Alpha Gabbit. He looked at it and then left as his sphere took off.

The Alpha Gabbit lied there dead and Kluna and Zin have know idea on what has just occured.
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Chapter 8 The death of Blunk

Just then Kluna and Zin sub came flying out of the water onto the davestated lands. Flames rose high as billows of smoke filled the area. The place was deserted knowing that the Glukkons along with Silak have been taken capture by the ruthless bounty hunters. The hatch opend and Kluna and Zin jumped out. They were in disbalieaf for what they saw. As zin walked among the dead he thought to himself where Silak may be.

"Kluna oh know!"

"What is it?"

"Silak he could be!"

Kluna looked at Zin and then the both of them went running to their hut calling for Silak who dident answer them.

"Silak Silak!"

"I can't find him anywhere Zin."

"Mann I hope he is ok!"

"Wait a minute what about Kleek?"

"I can't find him eather Zin."


Just then a noise was comming from the banks of the river. A weak voice called out.

"Help me! Help!" yelled the voice.

"Kluna you here that lets go check it out!"

Kluna and Zin ran over to where the voice was heard and to their surprise it was Blunk lieing on the ground covered in black muck.

"Blunk is that you?" yelled Zin.

"It is too late Zin I have been taken." explaned Blunk in his weaken voice.

Zin ran to him and kneeled down and clutched his body in disbaleaf.

"Blunk what did this to you what happened?"

In his weakend voice Blunk explaned.

"The Dark Muds took over these lands. They attacked us without us even knowing. It was so fast. Something strange was occureing in my city. The black stuff stay awey its poison! Silak and Kleek were kidnapped by Trilas and taken into the deasert. Zin You must not....!"

A silence came over Blunk in the hands of Zin.

"Must not what Blunk?"

In that moment of silence Blunk sliped awey into death as Zin clutched him with his firm grip. Anger came over Zin.

"Blunk! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" as Zin cried. He let loose of their fallen friend into the depths of the river where now he was dead.
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A very emotional chapter in my opinion, especially the death of their good friend blunk. But also a nice introduction to a new plot point/conflict arising. nice work again!.


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Chapter 9 Disturbing Facts

In that instant when Blunk died in the hands of Zin, he let him loose into the waters in which he came from. As he got himself up Zin looked at Kluna wipeing his face from his tears and the dirt that was on his face. For Zin had a different look of his face. A face of a true hero and a face of a destany not yet known to him. Kluna was proud of this for his friend. For the whole year and a half they lived on Salis the Lost Continent. A Continent purged into war of races that were so unexpected to Kluna and Zin even now they can't understand it. Befriending races that would otherwise inslave them on Mudos and being enamies to their own kind still amazed them. Meanwhile among the devastation of the burning city Lazlo and Chun were also trying to find surviveors until they found Kluna and Zin. Both of them ran to each other being thankful they were alive. But the unexpected happened.


"Kluna Zin your alive!" said Lazlo and Chun.

"I can't balieve you two are alive!" said Kluna. "Unfortunately we lost Blunk."

Zin approached them with a silent look on his face.

"Zin Blunk will alweys be with you."

"Its not Blunk, I am concerned about Silak and Kleek. Whats happened here?" asked Zin.

"We were under attack by the Dark Muds. Trilas's army is greater than we can imagine. They came in and took the Alpha Gluks and Alpha sligs captive."

"But how?" asked Kluna.

"They had with them stronger weapons controled by these ruthless bounty hunters that traveled in these powerful vehicals called sand sails.We were taken by surprise as their army out numbered us. We were weak aganst the forces of Trilas."

"Did they want the Relec?" said Zin.

"Strangly enough they dident. It was as if they were after something else that I fear I might know what it could be." explaned Chun.

"What is it" asked Kluna and Zin

"A map leading to the Lands of the Zileans" replied Chun and Lazlo.

"Zilean? Who are they?"

"A race who cares not of Oddworld and looks to the stars for their answers. It is balieved they hold the very thing that Trilas has been looking for."

"What is that?" asked Zin.

"It something we call the "ARGALYTH!" Just then a sudden silence came over them all. and a slight gust of wind blew past them that haunted all of them.

"The Argalyth? fascinateing what is it?"

"We don't know. It could be a liveing thing but we do know it has unspeakable power!" a haunting stare came over Lazlo and Chun as if they knew something Kluna and Zin dident.

"Have you seen it?"

"No, but those who have can describe it as a 12 foot black rectangular object of peer energy."

Zin turned to Kluna. "That could explan the sludge."

"Zin." as Chun stared at him with a disturbing look on his face as if he saw a ghost. "It killed many!"

Kluna and Zin were trying to understand that rather frightening phrase from Chun. For Chun and Lazlo seemed to know something in certain ways unknown to Kluna and Zin. For this kind of nature frighten them indeed. For they never seen such a look upon their friends faces.
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Chapter 10 The Storms of the Sands

A meech was feeding in the bright sun lit deasert upon a sand dune on a small creature known as a leen. Suddenly a low rumbling noise filled the area as the meech looked up and was rather fighten as it sprinted awey. For one single Sand sail came cruiseing over the dune followed by a fleet of Dark spheres and other Sails. For the army commanded by Trilas was moveing through the vast hot deasert. The sun beat down on Silak and Kleek as they sat there tied in their cages. Trilas was on foot walking among the caravan of Sand Sails and Spheres.

"I balieve we must go do west commander."

"Proceed. Were going to be in the deasert for awhile." said Trilas. I must go pay a visit to my old friend Silak."


Meanwhile Silak and Kleek were planning their escape.

"As soon as they take a rest we will escape." explaned Silak.

"On foot?" asked Kleek.

"Of course not! We might have to steal one of those Sand Sails."

"I like your thinking Silak!" smiled Kleek. "But what about the rest of the captured?"

"We will get them out too. Just follow my lead." said Silak.


Suddenly Trilas came walking up to Silak and Kleek as they sat there in the hot sun. A dark Mud offered Silak a little drink of water surprisingly. But Trilas took the canteen awey from Silak.

"I balieve that is my Canteen Silak. Ah yes old friend, arent you just happy to see me again!" laughed Trilas.

"Id rather spit in your face Trilas but I don't have any spit!"

"Shut up you fool! You have something I am looking for. And I want it!"

"What you are looking for is death Trilas!" said Silak.

"No its a map! I want it!" as Trilas slapped Silak in the face. "Why do you keep it from us?" as he slapped him again. "Where do you keep it?" once more he slapped him. "Why must we go through all this trouble in finding it?" Then just before Trilas was going to slap him again Kleek grabbed his hand tightly as Silak complained.

"Listen you scum why don't bother some other individual and leave us alone!"

"Ah Silak you still havent figured it out! No matter perhaps a day in the sands will make you talk! For the "Sand Leek" will be suitable for you and your friend!" as Trilas laughed.


"Why don't you just get a life Trilas!" yelled Kleek.

"Oh I do my dear Alpha Slig and don't forget your the one down there and I am the one up here. Like I said the Sand Leek will suit you best!" as Trilas laughed and kicked dust into Silak and Kleek's eyes.


"Don't worry Kleek we will get out of this! I hope!"
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Chapter 11 An Urgency

Zin stared at Chun with a frighten look upon his face. Kluna tapped his sholder asking "Whats wrong?"

Zin looked at Kluna and said "I don't know Kluna. Something of the future that I fear for us!"

Kluna looked at him strangly. Meanwhile the caravan of Dark Muds were approaching an oasis.

"We stop here!" called out Trilas. The caravan moved in and stoped in the shades of the massive Farl Trees.

"Silak, just how are we going to get out of this?" asked Kleek.

"I am not sure Kleek but this Farl Tree reminds me of something. Something of the past. If my theory is correct we could use these trees. Just watch me."

"How Silak were tied up?"

"Just watch Kleek." as Silak explaned to him as if he knew something was in the trees. "Kleek I saw movement in the trees. Just wait."

"Alright Silak what ever you say!"

Meanwhile Zin and Kluna were following Chun and Lazlo to what was left of their respected dwellings.

"Zin take this map You an Kluna will need to travel north. It is important that you must!"

"Alright Chun but why?"

"The Argalyth." said Lazlo as both of them were pushing Kluna and Zin out the door.

"Wait a minute you two, where are we going? I damand you tell me!" said zin.

"NORTH, JUST HEAD NORTH!" as a sense of urgency came over Lazlo.

Kluna and Zin looked at each other and were puzzled by the strange urgent behavor of Lazlo and Chun.

"What about you two?"

"JUST GO! WE ARE FINE, DON'T WORRY ABOUT US ZIN WE ARE FINE!" yelled both of them.

"I am little concern about this Zin."

"I know what you mean. I never seen those two act so strangely before. With my guess we will find out soon enough!"

"What do you think they were talking about Zin?"

"I am not sure, but I think this map they gave me might have something to do with it. And the Argalyth what could it mean?" pondered Zin.
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Chapter 12 The Mrics

Kluna and Zin were questioning themselves of all of this when Silak and Kleek were about to make their attempt to escape the caravan.

"In the trees I remember there was this race. A race that lives in Farl Trees of these deasert oasis. They hate invaders. When they attack and keep the dark Muds busy we will make our escape Kleek."

"Are you sure we can do this Silak?"

"Yes trust me." smiled Silak.

"But we are tied up!"

"Just follow my lead!"


Just then Trilas approached our heroes and was about to hit Silak.

"I am going to enjoy tortureing you Silak. You can say by to your Friend!"

Suddenly a whistling noise was heard as Silak and Trilas looked up into the Farl tree and saw the creature drop down with a club in his left hand hitting one of the Dark Muds and killing it. The creature was strong looking and very angry. For this being was known as a Mric.

"What the hell! Dark Muds, get him!" yelled Trilas. The Dark Muds and the Bounty hunters were after the Mric leaveing Silak and Kleek un attended.

"Now do you see what I mean?"

Kleek laughed at Silak and said "Like I alweys say you never seem to amaze me lets get out of here!"

Both of them struggled to get themselves up as they leaned up near the tree. But suddenly they started to here many more whistling sounds as hundreds more Mrics came flying out of the tree surrounding are heroes from all sides. The Dark Muds were still chaseing the other Mric as they too were getting surrounded.

"Look over there Trilas, they are trying to escape!"

"Get them you fools!" yelled Trilas. But suddenly the onslaught of Mrics were keeping them from getting near. "Kill these damm Mrics!" yelled Trilas.

"What are we going to do Silak?!"

The Mric approached them as it stared them down. He looked at the fighting Dark Muds in the background and then turned his head and stared Silak in the eye and said In his own native language.

"Bluck nock seekra!"

Now everybody was being tied up and taken into the massive tree captive to the mighty Mrics of the Farl. The Dark Muds and the Bounty Hunters were being taken as captives aswell. They took Trilas's blaster as they pushed him into the tree along with the other struggleing Dark Muds and Hunters.
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Chapter 13 The Dark Spirit

Kluna and Zin were contemplating on the situation as something strange came over Lazlo and Chun. Their bodies began to rise off the ground. Zin was was just stareing at this as if he knew what was going on. Soon followed Lazlo and Chun began to scream in horror as their bodies disintigrated in front of Kluna and Zin. Kluna yelled out in horror and disbalief as their comrads were being killed in front of them. But Zin, He just stared on at them, stareing them with a disturbing look that hunted Kluna. "But what was going on?" Kluna thought. Zin turned to Kluna.

"Kluna we must go. We must leave this place now."

"What about Lazlo and Chun?"

"They are gone something has happened to the Alpha gabbits and Lazlo and Chun. We must leave this villiage or we will die as well. I am tired of being in the company of death. First Blunk now Lazlo and Chun." explaned Zin. We will search out this Argolyth. We will head north into the wilderness of pain. We will find our destany Kluna we will."

Kluna looked at him with a strange look as if Zin was possessed. But he couldn't quite understand what has come over Zin only something that gave a disturbing feeling in his gut.

"What about Silak and Kleek? Surely they could be expierenceing the same thing we are!" said Kluna.

Zin stopped with his Alpha Elum. "Kluna they are fine it is us that he wants not them!"

"Who Zin, who, Trilas?"

Zin laughed at Kluna as if he was nieve. "No Kluna the face!"

Just then the two of them set off into the North leaveing the devasted lands of the Alpha Glukkons and Sligs behind to burn. Where now Lazlo and Chun were gone in an instant for a strange force has taken hold of the races. But something deep came to Zin. Something dark and unknown that most likely hunted him in his dreams all along. "And could it be this Dark spirit that has caused these unusual occurences and these unfortunate deaths?" thought Zin. He dident want to balieve it but the thought loomed over him. As for Kluna he knew something bad was going happen and he knew Zin will have something to do with this. But for now they left their fallen comrads burn in the devasted lands. First the Alpha Gabbits and the black sludge that covered Blunk before he died. Then the strange behavior of Lazlo and Chun and finnally their deaths. But who is this Dark spirit?
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Chapter 14 The Crusade

Kluna and Zin were off into the unknown wilderness of Sailas once again but without their friend Silak to guide them on their unknown journey. Leaving the lands of the Alpha to burn. Nothing was alive. The fires raged across this lush region as if hell rose up. Smoke blackened the sky as the sun was setting in the west. It gave a red and orange hue in the distance among thick black clouds. Such devastation created by one single blow of the Dark Muds all because of a single map leading to the so called Argalyth. But what is the Argalyth, still it is remained to be seen. And could the so called Dark Spirit be a direct link to it? The question remains in the minds of Kluna and Zin.

Among the scorching ruble a voice cries out for help. A forgotten voice. The voice of Wheely. Struggling to get himself up he cried out "Help anybody! Me need help!"


At that moment on top of a low cliff, Borlock the Glukkon Govenor accompanied by other Alpha Gluks were arriveing to the devastated Lands of the Alpha, after a three day journey from the Capital across the deasert when they heard Wheely's cries.

"You here that Borlock?"

"Yes lets move!" And so the small group of Alpha Gluks went down to investigate.

"What in Odds name has happen to this place?" thought Borlock.

"Sir we will scavenge for whatever we find." said one of the Alpha Gluks known as Clain.

"Thats fine I am going to look over here, besides I thought I heard something."

Just then Borlock approached Wheely's destroyed workshop as he went in.

"Anybody here?"

Suddenly Wheely cried out again. "Help, who ever you are!"

"Oh my! Gluks get over here a survivor! I found a Junkyak!" yelled Borlock. "It will be ok stranger, your in good hands. Whats happened here?"

"Dark Muds destroyed these lands. They took captive Me master Silak and Kleek and others. Alpha Gabbits too me friends dead I am not what I use to be."

"Can you ride?"

"Me think I can still, oh but me have found dark sphere that might come in handy!"

"Good, where?"

"Over here! Look do look. Me scavenged from the ruins of Clorn's Fortress. It still works with a few modefications from me knowledge."

"A Junkyak Borlock? You sure we can trust it?" said Clain.

"Well its not everyday we see a Junkyak this far south. They live far awey beyond the great Lake of Osmikea the Misty One in a land overunned taken by Gonkyaks. A horrable place covered in massive mountains of old junk left by the ancient Gargaznoo known as the Junkwaist. I say he is a friend of these tribes. Tell me friend, whats your name?"

"Me name is Wheely I served in the fall of Clorn and with the worriors from Mudos Kluna and Zin."

"Is that answer your question Clain?" said Borlock.

"You bet!" replied Clain

They both started laughing. "We are from the Capital on a mission of peace to bring an end to the Dark Muds so called dealings with that Omega Relec. Your captive friends we will find. Can you tell us where they might have gone?"

"I baleave me think they went into the desert towards the Chapital but why?" said Wheely

"Well Wheely it is your lucky day the Dark Muds have joined forces with Bounty Hunters and search for this map that has something to do with the land of the Gargaznoo and the Omega Relec. It has been deamed classified for us to talk about such things but since we are so far I don't see any problem."

"Simple Borlock Map is in the sphere. Silak gave it to me before the attack."

"Splendid lets roll!"

And so Borlock and Wheely hopped into the Sphere followed by the small troop of Alpha Gluks lead by Clain leaveing the destroyed lands of the Alpha behind in search of Silak and Kleek and the rest of their tribes. At the same time Kluna and Zin seek their destany of the so called Argalyth for a new war has brewed and thus the Crusades has begun.
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Chapter 15 The Approaching Storm

A wisp a fog rose over the rocky landscape and the wind was low. The sky was grey and dark as low rumbles of thunder was heard. It began to drizzle and the air was slightly cold. It was as if the land of Sailas laid waist to the war. Kluna and Zin were moveing up the ridge in hopes of makeing it to the prarie lands of the Alpha where the conquest began one year ago today.

"Zin why are we doing this?" cried Kluna.

"Its are destany to do this Kluna. We must find this Argalyth and we must unlock its secrets." explained Zin.

"Its just that we have been traveling for a day now leaveing behind Zilanoff and our friends." said Kluna. "I am cold and tired and not to mention hungry."

"Friends Kluna? What friends? This place has cursed us for a year now. We have been stuck here trying to find ways to go back to Mudos but we can't. Why? Because of Lazlo and his pointless waisting of time of finding alternative routes back home maybe its good that he is dead now. They say building a raft and ventureing across the sea would be suicidal and that we would never make it past Logras Point. A place devastated by storms. And then you have this war with the Dark Muds and now most of them occupy the coast. To put it certain I hate this place!"

"What about your friend Silak?" asked Kluna.

"Silak? He is indeed a great friend but we cannot be with these people forever Kluna. They are Glukkons and we are Mudokins. I hope you dident forget that." explained Zin.

"No I dident but these people are different. They are not like the others on Mudos you know that. You said so yourself. Don't you remember Zin?"

"Perhaps, But let us keep pressing on Northward."

And so an unknown storm is over the horizon as Kluna and Zin press on to the North in hopes of seeking the mysterous Argalyth and unlocking its secrets. For Kluna is beginning to realise something that is just not right with Zin. For his attitude has changed a bit. A rather disturbing feeling came over Kluna and he was determined to figure this out. For the sake of his friend Zin and for the sake of himself aswell.
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Chapter 16 The Doomed Captives of the Mrics!

Meanwhile deep in the south, high upon the deasert plateau the captured Sphere rides along, holding Wheely and Borlock. Accompaning them are the rest of the small band of Alpha Glukkon scouts from the Capital. Determined to find their lost comrads hidden in the deasert. Little do they know that Silak and Kleek and the rest along with Trilas and the large army of Dark Mudokins and Bounty Hunters, have been captured by the savage Mrics of the Farl Trees. Wheely speaks to Borlock.


"Borlock, if me friends are dead then Me don't know what we could do. A certain los will be costly."

"Wheely I wouldnt worry too much about your friends. Silak is strong and very smart. I am sure he is planning, as of now his escape." said Borlock.

Meanwhile the whip of the Mric slashes Silak and Kleek in their backs as they were tied together in the Mric underground dwellings. The whaleing of other Alpha Gluks and sligs were herd.

Suddenly they were shoved into small cells as the two Mric guards left them.

"What do we do Silak?" said Kleek. "We can't possably face these savages and the Dark Muds and the Bounty Hunters!"

"I know Kleek but we can escape them."

Suddenly an approaching Mric came in and opened the cells and grabbed Silak and Kleek and shoved them onward to the surface.

"Clenock Block sanuclock fu senock!"

"What the hell does that mean Silak?"

"Its Mricish." As Silak stared at the guard with a smirk on his face.

"Well what did he say?"

"He said infidel, we are to be put to death for trespassing on their lands. For the gods have spoken."

"Really! By what manner?"

Silak turned to the Mric and spoke in their native language.

"Busnock senock cu fussock?" said Silak.

The Mric turned to Silak. "Heh, Blusnock clusnock du Blogyak heh!"

"He said we will die in the belly of the mighty Blogyak." said Silak.

Kleek looked at the Mric and smiled. "What a vivid imagination!"

Suddenly he was punched in the face and both of them were taken to the surface to be transported to the Blogyak nests.

When they got to the surface they saw the others too being taken to the Blogyak nests aswell as the Dark Muds and the Bounty Hunters. for all of them were flying over huge sand dunes on flying ships of the Mrics. As they got closer to the location of the nests of the mighty Blogyaks, tension grew among the Dark Muds.
Trilas was stareing Silak down even though he too was a captive.

"Silak, ready to die?"

"More ready than you will ever be Trilas!"

"Of course you know I will win this crusade and you will be in the belly of the Blogyak!"

"I think your mistaken Trilas! I am not the only one captive at the moment!"

"We will see. For this is a race for the Relec's powers!" said Trilas

"My saul is prepared how is yours." replied Silak.


"Let me at him Silak, if I can just get out of these ropes!" said Kleek as he struggled.

"Easy now Kleek. We will get through this."

Suddenly they approached the nests of the mighty Blogyaks. For the Blogyak is a mighty sandworm who moves swiftly through deasert sands. For anyone caught in track of this beast will be devoured quickly.

Silak and Kleek looked down at the hideous beast and surpriseingly these worms resembeled fleeches only that these were massive, as they were shoved onto a plank, The others were shoved aswell over their respective nests. Their was six Blogyaks in the area ready to devour the captives. Will they survive? Time will tell.

"Mann we picked a wrong day to be hastages!" cried Kleek.
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Chapter 17 The Desert Worrors.

Just then the leader of the Mrics came out of his ship and greeted his people. The Mrics cheered him on as Silak and Kleek and the rest were about to be put to death to the Blogyaks below them. The leader of the Mrics known to everyone as Crasnick turned to the captives and spoke to them in his language.

"Blugsnock see fu clock clien! Plors clook cena Blogyak!" said Crasnick with his great voice. "Hook closk an plors cloonoo!"

Everyone listened to him say those words and everyone understood what he said. It was like regular English to everyone now.

"You will be put to death for trespassing upon our lands in the belly of the Blogyak! Guards kill them!" said Crasnick.

And thus one by one each of the guards release the planks under the captives and one by one each captive fell but hung on to dear life. As the guards were getting closer to Silak and Kleek, Silak had an idea. He knew what was going to happen but he kept it to himself.

"Well Silak, this looks like the end!" said Kleek "See you on the other side."

"Kleek relax I am on top it!" replied Silak.

Kleek being confused asked him "On top of what Silak? We are Doomed!"

"Ive noticed an old friend of ours up on that plateau awhile back. I signaled him to come and rescue us just before we were taken into the Farl Trees."

"Who Silak, Who?"

"Our old friend Wheely is traveling with a band of Alpha Glukkon officials from the Captal. They are traveling in a sphere. I must have seen at least 100 of them following Wheely. Don't worry they know whats happening." explaned Silak.

Just then the Mric guard was at their plank about to release them. The Mric stared the two down and yelled out and pulled the plank below Silak and Kleek. Trilas in the meantime was laughing. Silak and Kleek hung below the plank for their lives. Silak gripping Kleek holding onto the ledge was hopeing for Wheely.

"I don't think Wheely is comming Silak. as they struggled."

"Don't worry!" replied Silak.

"Oh I am not!" as Kleek cried out sarcastically. Suddenly a loud horn blew and on top of the dune was Wheely and Borlock standing there watching these events take place. Suddenly a missle from the sphere shot down at the Mrics. In a matter of minutes the place was in caos as the platoon went flying down the dune and started battleing the Mrics in an intense fight to free the captives. The Dark Muds and the Bounty Hunters were suddenly free as the battle raged on. Trilas got himself up. "So it begins!" as he laughed. Caos was everywhere as Silak and Kleek were indeed happy to see their old friend Wheely with renforcements. They were freed by Wheely.

"Wheely you made it!" yelled Silak and Kleek. "Who is this?"

"I am Borlock the Alpha Glukkon Govenor. We have been sent by the Capital to bring an end to this madness and to find the powers of the Relec." explaned Borlock.

"Me thought you needed help!" said Wheely.

"LOOK THE DARK MUDS ARE FREE ASWELL! GET THEM!" as one of the Alpha Glukkons yelled out.

Silak looked at Kleek and thought "Trilas!"

At the same time the Blogyaks started comming out of their nests and started wrecking havoc within all this caos. And Trilas banded together with his army as they reached the top of the dune. the enamy was getting into their spheres and Sand Sails left by the Mrics, as the battle raged on. And for a mystery still hangs on in the minds of our deasert warrors. "What of Kluna and Zin?"
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I think I am going to resume my trilogy after all I have nothing else to do.


Chapter 18 Bleak!

Kluna and Zin were climbing up the mountain in hopes of reaching the Prarie lands of the Alpha, so that they can find Osmikea once again. Little did they know that a strange force has turned the once lush praries of the Alpha into a waistland. But what force could have cause this phonomina? Could it be the same force in which wrecked havoc on the coast which cost the lives of many of Kluna and Zin's friends including Blunk, Lazlo, and Master Chun? The mystery still remains. Suddenly Kluna and Zin were makeing their way at the top and they were deeply surprised for what lied ahead of them. For miles on end the sky was dark and as far as the eye could see volcanos dotted the once beautiful Grasslands.

The place hunted our friends.

"Zin what happened?" said Kluna.

"I am not sure! Something horrible has happen to this once beautiful land. The same as it did on the cost."

Suddenly out of a small dead bush a rather strange being hopped out and startled Kluna and Zin. He looked like a deformed Gabbit but it was no Gabbit. Suddenly it spoke.

"Save me, Save me from the Argalyth! It destroyed my family save me!"

"Whats your name stranger?" asked Zin.

"My name is Bleak. Im the last of the Grass Hogs after the evil destroyed my lands and took my people to death! Save me strange Mudokins save me now!"

"Calm down Bleak tell us what has happened here? Does it have to do with the Argalyth? What is the Argalyth?"

"Only something that has been forgotten for eons now! It was the origin of the Omega Relec forged from the Argalyth by the ancient extinct race of the Gargaznoo. We must leave or the Argalyth will destroy us too!" As Bleak cried out in fear.


"It is searching, searching for the one! We must leave this place!"

"Leave Sailas?"

"No, yes leave but further we go, we must go beyond Oddworld!"

"What?"

"Zin what is he talking about?"

"I don't know but I do know this he knows what this Argalyth is? Lets follow." said Zin.

"Alright we will follow you Bleak."

And so Kluna and Zin and their new found friend Bleak started to trek across the waistland in hopes of finding more answers to this mystery.
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Chapter 19 Caos!

Meanwhile Silak and Kleek and Wheely and the Glukkon scouts were fighting their way up the dune chaseing the Dark Muds and battleing the Mric in hopes of Captureing Trilas. Their efforts were halted by a Blogyak beast which blocked their path. Suddenly the beast swiped one of the Glukkon scouts in its tail and ripped him apart "AHHHHHHHH!" before the rest could even do anything. The beast roared its mighty cry and the caos continued. The Desert winds began to pick up, and soon the place was engulped in a huge sandstorm as the battle continued. Brave Silak and Kleek began their retreat.


"Silak we can't fight these Mrics and their beasts anymore. The Dark Muds and those Bounty Hunters escaped! What do we do?" Cried Kleek.

"Retreat! We must go further into the desert! Leave these Mrics and find them before it is too late. If Trilas gets ahold of the Relec's power we are doomed! There is no telling if the Dark Muds found the Relec's power source. Because I have the Relec with me yelled Silak."

"WATCH OUT!" yelled Silak.

Suddenly the Blogyak wrapped its tail around Silak as it picked him off the ground in the swirling sands of the Desert. But Silak being as strong and brave as he is used his knife and slashed the beast's tail as it cried out in pain. The Blogyak suddenly let go and Silak fell to the ground un injured.


"LOOK! The Mric are retreating!" yelled Borlock.

The fight started to settle down as our heros were making their way up the dune. The savage Mrics were retreating to regroup. At the top of the dune our heros stood watching the sands take the small desert Valley. Beyond them lied a barren flat desert that stretched for miles.

"Its over." said Borlock.

"How many have we lost?"

"I don't know Silak but it was quite a fight." replied Borlock.

"We got to hurry and catch up with Trilas. Wheely where is the sphere?" asked Kleek.

"Its over there me master Kleek. By the way it is good that you are alive. Me was was worried!"


"Its alright Wheely. After that ordeal with the Mric I am sure we won't see them for a while!" as Silak laughed. "Lets regroup." said Silak.

And so the remaining Glukkon Scouts from the capital and our heros regrouped as Silak, Kleek, Borlock, and Wheely entered into their sphere. As for the Mric, they were buried by the sands and it will take a while for them to dig them selves out.

"Well guys let us save Sailas from this nightmare. We shall cross this desert and find Trilas for this Crusade of the Relec has only begun!" As Silak looked onward across the flat desert.
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Chapter 20 A Spy!


Across the flat deasert Trilas and the rest of his small army were moveing swiftly as the sun was beginning to set. Just then Trilas decided to stop for the night as the rest were getting tired and thirsty.

"Damm! They must of taken our rations Trilas!" said Orphious.

"We will stop here for the night."

"But what if they find us?" asked Orphious.

"Orphious, once again you proven yourself a coward thats strike 2! We will set camp here and will pick up tomarrow. Besides I have some buseness to take care of. Now set up camp you fools!"

Trilas then left the camp a little ways to be on his own. He took out a small piece of the Relec that was on him the whole time. He examined it and pondered it about its devine energy. Little did he know Craven was near by spying on him in the background.

"Its only a matter of time now until I find your source. Funny how such materal can cause such destruction. I must find your source!" Thought Trilas as he reluctantly stroked the useless materal.

Craven was also pondering why he was doing this. but then he realised that in a way that materal that came from the Relec will somehow guide Trilas to the source which he did have some idea of what it was.

"The source hmm! this could be my ticket to richness. If I am not mistaken he is trying to find the once mythical Lyth of power. In other words the Argalyth." thought Craven the Bounty Hunter.

"I will find it before he does. But why are we headed in a southern direction? It doesn't make sense to me. In the stories I read of the Lyth of Power exist in the far North of the Arctec Tundra. But what is his plan?" As Craven Pondered.

Just then Trilas was headed back to camp as he ran into Craven.

"Craven, what are you doing here?" asked Trilas.

"Nothing sir I just lost myself out of camp."

"Very well go that way."

"I must not let him know what I have to do!" thought Craven.
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Chapter 21 Across the Waistland!

Kluna, Zin and their newfound friend were moveing across what was once the Great Prarie Lands of the Alpha. Now it was nothing more than just a waistland. Volcanos dotted the landscape in its hellish devestation. Soon our heroes made it to the edge of the very forest where they found Blunk and Wheely. Only now the forest is nothing more than a burnt one. Something came to Zin as the approached the edge.

"This place looks famiure!"

"Zin don't you remember this place?" said Kluna.

Zin stoped and remembered the past as if he was reliveing it. The smells the look everything was as once was to him. But he was alone as he approached the camp. He saw himself sleeping and yelling in fear. And thus he remembered that this was where he had his first dream. Suddenly a cloaked figure Zin saw standing over his other self sleeping. It was like a ghost of blackness. Zin approached the figure and asked.


"Who are you?"

The figure turned to him "I am what I am!" As the figure pointed to the stars. "And you are what you are! Save us!"
Suddenly he came to himself again and realised something.

"Zin what is it?" asked Kluna.

"Oh Kluna the figure is close to your friend Zin. I can tell." said Bleak.

"What are you talking about Bleak?" asked Kluna.

"The Dark Spirit hunts him in his dreams. The face he sees, the voices are all part of the Dark Spirit. And its controling him."

"How do you know this Bleak?"

"I have seen it before. Your friend is destined for something I do not understand."

"Zin, are you alright?"

"I am not sure Kluna, I...I must fulfill something. I am beginning to understand my destany Kluna."

"Whats your destany Zin? I thought you fullfilled it by destroying Clorn."

"Thats not it Kluna. I don't understand it but I have been called for help."

"Help from Who?"

"I don't know. But I think it has to do with the Argalyth and we will find out."

"I sure hope so Zin, I am scared like I have never been before. Something has changed you and you seem to be someone different every now and then. I just wish you can explan this to me Zin."

Zin touched Kluna's sholder and smiled. "Kluna you will understand when the time is right but we must figure this out and all I can do is find Osmikea. She will help us.

"Ah yes Osmikea The Misty One. Then we shall go to the Great Lake and speak with her!" said Bleak. And thus our heroes headed for the lake in hopes of figureing this mystery out.
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Chapter 22 Warrors on the Run

It was daylight in the deasert as Silak and all of his freinds were racing across the dunes in hopes of Catching Trilas whome is seeking for the origen of the powers of the Relec. Little do any of them know that this origen exist within the Argalyth.


"Wheely how much further?"

"Not too much Silak a few more dunes and we should catch up with them."

"I hope hes right Silak." said Kleek.

Just then Borlock approached the moveing sphere.

"Silak tell how did this madness begin?"

"Borlock its just a long story. It began over a year ago when I ran into Kluna and Zin."

"Friends of yours?" said Borlock

"Yes only these two were Mudokins whome came from distant Mudos."

"Ah yes I have heard of Mudos. The Glukkons there are pretty greedy. Intresting Continent. A lot of legonds came from that land."

"Well to make this story short Zin found the Lost Relec of the Omega whome Trilas took and was going to use it to destroy Clorn and become a God with it. I stoped him in his tracks and Zin used all of the powers of the relec and destroyed Clorn. Now Trilas seeks the origen of the Power of The relec in hopes to uptain it."


Borlock looked at him "I see!"

Just then suddenly our heroes could see an oasis do west from where they were. Wheely called out. "Lets head there Me thirsty!"

And so our heroes headed for the oasis but what they don't realise is what lies on the otherside.
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Chapter 23 A dark Secret Of Trilas!

In the heat of day the Dark Muds and the Bounty Hunters were moveing across the flat desert towards the capital. A line of silver battle spheres and sand sails moved swiftly as Trilas was talking with one of the solders on one of the Sand Sails.

"Wheres Craven?"

"I think he is with Cronus Trilas."

"Bring him to me I must speak with him."

Meanwhile just a little ahead of the army Cronus was talking with Craven.

"Your telling me Trilas is keeping something from us?"

"Cronus you have to trust me. We will be rich beyond our wildest dreams loaded with moolah when we find the Argalyth!" said Craven.

"How do you know this?"

"Lets just say I have good ears!"

Just then Craven was called over to Trilas.

"You there are you Craven? Follow me our master needs to speak with you."

Just then Craven told Cronus to quickly leave the army and seek out Silak and the rest.

"Hold on solder I will be right there. Cronus seek out Silak don't kill him and tell him we can find the Argalyth for him. They won't trust us but truce with them until I say we will strike!"

"Yes Craven I will!"

And so Cronus left the army un noticed and headed back to seek Silak and company.

"Its nice to talk with you again Craven. After our little ordeal we had with the Mrics I am sure your feeling fine now." as Trilas kept looking ahead into the desert.

"I am fine." said Craven

"Now Craven I need to tell you this because it is very important that you know and nobody else. I know that you know about the Argalyth but I will not do anything to you. Since you already know I will tell what I am really searching for."

Trilas was silent for a few minutes. Then suddenly he took his knife and pined Craven to the floor. "Look you little sneak I am searching for the Argalyth to obtain its powers which surpasses the Relec. I know that you know about its orign and you want it for your bounty. Your not going to get it because of me. Haha you really think your clever but your not."

"So you know Trilas my Motives but that won't stop me!"

"Oh it won't will it. My friend I know what lies among that Lyth that will make you bow before it."

"And what might that be?" said Craven in his arragant self.

Trilas smiled. "My good friend Craven you don't know about them?"

"Who?"

"Why Craven, the Gargaznoo!"

"Thats impossible they have been extinct for thousands of years!"

"Have they?" laughed Trilas. Trilas kept laughing as the army passed by as Craven was tricked. But could Trilas be right in that the great extinct race of the Gargaznoo could very well still be alive all this time?
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