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07-10-2002, 01:58 AM
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Growing up; Toddlers

(OOC: My 2nd installment of the Baby story. Whoo-Hoo.)

The sneer of the medical staff as Cornesh took the children out of their confides and walked them around was unnecessary. He would understand if they were not of Orkhid origin but they were, Sperm and Eggs of Orkhid men and women. Although he did understand why he got some of the looks and remarks that were aimed at him, it was mainly due to the fact that he was immensly close to a defect Orkhid. Aisha was older now, around one year old in Orkhid years. Her hair was longer, beautiful and deadly straight that was now running down her back. It brought disgust to all of the staff that saw her...all but Cornesh. Now, she was capable of walking and wherever Cornesh went Aisha wasn't very far behind. Holding hands with Cornesh Aisha toddled along as quickly as her tiny legs could carry her, burbling to herself and totally unaware of the glances she, her friend and Cornesh, were recieving. Aisha' friend was Jaques, they were the same age and actually shared the same compound as each other. His hair was of normal Orkhid shading, black. His skin pigments the usual Pinky-white and his eyes dark brown. He was of normal height and weight and could even pass off as a normal, 100% Orkhid if he wasn't in the White overalls that the medical staff forced him to wear. Every Experimental child wore the same tiny, white suit and black shoes. The back of the suits bore a rather large Barcode which, when scanned with the proper device, displayed the childrens entire medical history and other personal details. Aisha' overall were a tad different however. When she first recieved it and was told she had to wear it, she immediatly refused and threw up one Hell of a fuss about not wearing it. Finally Cornesh persuaded her to slip it on by placing a Pink badge of a flower on it and telling her that if she wore the suit the badge would protect her from anything wanting to cause her harm. Upon telling her this, Cornesh secretly wished that this was true. Janek' promotion was a very worrying thing to the Scientist who was caring for the children and genuinly loved them. Cornesh had become increasingly fearful for the babies lives, hoping that they would soon be used to further the Orkhid race into glory. Since these were the first batch and basically a test run of something considered very deadly it was unknown when the Nanobots would actually kick in and begin to change them. And in the meantime the Scientists and other personel were ordered to examine the toddlers and learn as much as they can from them whilst they still can.

Aisha: "Corkish...Wew awe we going?"

Aisha' blue eyes stared up at the gentle giant in puzzlement. Cornesh then realised that he had being thinking too hard and missed his turning. He shook his head gently from side to side and smiled at the little girl.

Cornesh: "Silly me missed the turning. You should tell me next time. Just say: 'Corkish you missed it 'gen.' "

He mimicked her voice in a high pitched way and purposely mis-pronounced words. Aisha giggled and kissed his hand that was gripping hers. Jaques giggled abit and then tugged on Cornesh' arm that was restraining him.

Jaques: "Jaques tired..."

His voice was whiney and his eyebrows raised in a puppy-like manner. Cornesh had seen this look before and instantly knew what he wanted...to be carried. Slowly Cornesh bent down and wrapped a fat little arm around the childs waist he then did the same to Aisha so that she didn't feel left out, as soon as he was satisfied that both of them were comfortable and that he too was comfortable in their positions, he made his way back to the holding area. And as he entered the compound and placed them both in their beds (Which were basically matresses on the cold, white tiled floor with a few blankets.) and tucked them in Aisha uttered the two words that Cornesh had never heard before in his entire life...

"Love you."

(OOC: Feedback anyone? It would be much appreciated!! Critism? Praisement? Please make it more than 2 words long .)
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07-10-2002, 04:59 AM
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WOW!!! Jacob that was great i cant wait to read the rest keep it up
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07-13-2002, 01:56 AM
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Part 2

The screaming of a lone child was ear-piercing and very, very wrong. Cornesh entered the Surgery, which was on a different floor in this underground building. On occasions Cornesh wished that he had never even met the babies, that he wasn't even assigned to this 'experiment' in the first place. On other occasions he wished that the building was above ground, he used to dream of this constantly, imagining how he would use it to his advantage. Breaking out into the sunlight and running off into the woods with the children in his arms. He also imagined himself slimmer aswell, and he knew that, that was never going to happen.

Cornesh: "What are you doing!?"

His chubby hand slammed down hard on a metallic operating table that was situated next to him. He was in a dark box-like room, different from all of the others. The walls, though white, were seemingly black as no lights graced their surface. The only light in the room was that of the two Surgeons head lamps. They wore white overalls, black elbow length gloves and white masks so that their identity was unknown to Cornesh and/or the patient. One's hair was grey and anothers black, both however, were gelled back. White sandles were worn on their feet and both of them were holding down a single Black baby. The child screamed, struggling to break free from the 'monsters' that were holding him down. One of the Operators looked up, the light shining in the Scientist's eyes and blinding him for a brief second.

Surgeon: "Who da Hell are you!?"

His scalpel was stained with black blood...the blood of the baby.

Cornesh: "I am the carer to some of these children...what are you doing to them?"

His eyes glanced nervously at the child and then back at the sharp scalpel being wielded by the Orkhid.

Surgeon: "We are checking ta see if they are ok..."

Cornesh took a step forwards, by this point he was so concerned for the childs safety he would have snatched it from their grasp and cared for it until it was better. Infact, the more he thought of this the more he convinced himself it would work.

Cornesh: "You are cutting into the child!! How is that making sure it is 'k!!"

The Surgeons laughed and shook their heads slowly in amusesment of this under-educated fellow.

Surgeon: "We are making sure it can heal itself appropiatly. Now please, leave us."

Tilting his head Cornesh glanced over at the child, it was still squirming and its screams had been hushed by a Oxygen mask that had been placed and held over its mouth and nose, hushing its sobs. But as Cornesh looked on, he analysed the body and realised that the child was being cut open in a relativly painless area for Orkhid children, the baby looked up. And as it did, Cornesh did not see normal Orkhid eyes or defect Orkhid eyes for that matter. All he saw was black. As if the childs entire eyeballs had been drowned with oil. Or as if its pupil had taken over its whole eye. This motivated Cornesh to act, and act quickly. It was wrong to see a child like this...even if it was a defect.

Cornesh: "No...STOP THIS NOW!!"

Cornesh lunged forwards, grabbing the Surgeon's armed hand and pulling it above his head, he then grabbed hold of his neck and hurled the skinny little man into another Operating table. The Surgeons shocked scream erupted from a vile, foul mouth and he hit the cold, marble floor hard, hitting his head shattering his head lamp and also being knocked unconcious. As this happened his other operating partner slowly backed away, letting go of the squirming Toddler.

Cornesh: "Come here...come on."

His fat apendages grasped the naked being under its arms and he lifted it up, bits of blood spilling from its wound.

Surgeon: "Stop this...s-stop...!"

The injured Surgeon was bleeding from his head and begging the creature to stop ruining their proceedings. Ignoring them he proceeded towards the door, the eyes of the child still as black as coal.

Voice: "CORNESH, WVHAT ARE YOU DOING!?"

Halting in his tracks both he and the infant gasped in a reaction of pure fear. The light from the corridor was suddenly blocked out by a figure of pure hatred. The coller of the creature' overcoat was pointy at the ends and not folded down, thus covering the neck. The garment with such a coller also stretched down to the flooring and thus no other part of the body could be seen.

Cornesh: "S-Si-Sir...they were doing things to the..."

Voice: "I do not give a damn Cornesh. You are interferring again, are you not!? And wvhat wvere my DIRECT orders when i first got promoted?"

Cornesh: "N-Not to interfere, sir."

The figure stepped into the room. Into the view of the other member of the Surgery. The un-injured Surgeon's head turned towards the figure, his lights seemingly giving birth to it from the darkness. It was Janek, although Cornesh didn't need to see his face to know it was him, nor did the child. However doing so in sucha bright light made his greyish face almost young looking.

Janek: "Now...Cornesh, come here...please."

He lifted up a black, gloved hand and beckoned him over. Cornesh' actions suddenly seemed foolish and suicidal and not so heroic or 'right'.

Janek: "Hand him over..."

The child gurgled something that sounded like "Help(!)" but Cornesh had the eyes of Janek penetrating his pressence and so did as the Consultant ordered. The black hand of the child gripped the Scientists white lab coat, unwilling to let go. But Janek solved that problem, he harshly grabbed the child with both hands by the waist and tugged his body towards him.

Janek: "Now, Cornesh. I dont mind you developing your little bonds with the other LAB RATS. However, the black one's...you dont touch...hear me?"

Cornesh: "B..."

Janek: NO CORNESH...NO 'BUTS' , STAY AWAY FROM THIS KIND!!"

His voice, although raised, seemed to be full of knowledge aswell. The Consultant turned the baby and stared at its eyes. They were still black, and with a disgusted tut he threw the child onto the hard ground. Its body hit the flooring, a small squeek erupting from its lungs, making it sound like a squeeky toy.

Janek: "GUARDS!!"

Before Cornesh could act four troops had marched in, kitted out in black kevlar and black helmets with visors covering their face. Their guns were long and sleek, but since Cornesh had never been in the military he did not know of their make. But, to him, the looked truely devastating.
*Rapid Machine gun fire*

Janek: "And that is wvhat wvill happen to ALL of them eventually, Cornesh. Wvith or wvithout your intervening..."

As he said this he put a arm behind Cornesh' back and slowly edged him towards the corridor. Cornesh' face was that of illness and disappointment, the child was bullet ridden. Black blood spurting out of the holes. And forks of electricity dancing around the deceaseds empty shell of a body...Forks of electricity?

(OOC: Any responses to this one?)
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07-13-2002, 06:18 PM
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Part 3

(OOC: I was bored...i wrote...i await a reply!!)

Voice: "C'mon!! Move it!! We gotta get this load out by nightfall!!"

An Orkhid dressed in blue overalls and equipped with a clipboard was shouting to a group of seven Mudokon Slaves that the Co-operation had purchased from the Glukkons. They were fit and healthy, each with their very own Company name. Names that were mainly numeral orientated, of course. The Orkhid was ordering them all to move a big metal crate of Foetus' to the van which was parked a few metres away from the storage facility. The 'goods' were heavy and took the Mudokons all their strength to move it a few inches.

Orkhid: "Hey, hey, hey!! No slacking...help your mates or go to the states. You know the rules!!"

It was a corny line used by many Orkhids who were trying to motivate different specie into working for them. By 'States' they meant 'City' and everyone knows that the City is no place for the Native folk. Foreigners were very much welcomed in the City, of course, thats mainly because they are vulnerable and naive. But you dont find that out until your stripped of everything you owned and left for trash.

Mudokon #3: "But sir, we're thirsty and would sure welcome a bit of water."

The Orkhid smiled and stroked his short, brown hair. Tapping the clipboard on his left leg.

Orkhid: "Yesss, i'm sure you would. But if we don't get this cargo to the Xen Labs then we're all going to be screwed. Now, hurry up and finish and i will get you what you want."

The Mudokon hushed up and got back to pushing the crate. When they had finally got it upto the van they then had to lift it and place it in the back. The transport was black with the Red Orkhid logo on the doors.

Mudokon #2: "Iight, on da count of twee. One...Tooo...TWEE!!"

All of the Slaves lifted the crate off of the ground, their legs trembling and close to buckling under the weight of such a heavy object. Finally the two at the back of the cargo pushed forwards and the box ever so slowly slid into the back of the truck. After what seemed like 10 minutes the crate was inside of the van. The doors were closed by the nearest Mudokon and then a good hard bang on the back from it signified that everything was ok and that the van could go to its destination.

Orkhid: "Ok...C'mon. Through here(!)"

The Orkhid stepped into the doorway that the Muds had walked through to get to the outside. The creatures were eager to get some food and drink down them and was told by the Glukkons that Orkhids treat their employee's well. And helped them whenever they could. This made them feel lucky and put a bound in their step as they quickly made their way towards the entrance. The Orkhid was waiting up ahead and signalled for them to hurry up, and as the naive creatures that they were, they obeyed.

Orkhid: "Ok, wait here. I'm just going to make sure the cafeteria has enough room to accomodate for you all. Be right back."

Leaving them through a electronic door the Orkhid had left them in a small, box like room. It was metal and had lights coming from the glass floor and glass ceiling. A mirror was on the right side of the room.

Mudokon #4: "Jeez, talk about tight fit, eh?"

Mudokon #2: "Uhuh. How long doya tink we will be waiting?"

Mudokon #4: "Not long."

He scratched his head as he said this. His feathery plume was purple and tied back in a pony tail. He groomed himself infront of the mirror, awaiting for their superior to return.

***

Orkhid: "Well...are they curious!?"

The Orkhid was situated behind another Mudokon, a Psychic infact. They were both in a small, dark room with a control panel at the front. Above the control panel was a window, a window that looked straight into the room of the Mudokons, but to any creature behind that window, it looked like a mirror. The Psychic was a shade of purply, black. Her eyes so white they seemed to glow and her feathers orange and yellow, clashing with her skin. She was sat infront of the control panel, her chair grey and dull compared to her. On her right eye there was a tattoo. It was spirally and jagged, something that warriors would wear to show how they could withstand the pain of sharp needles, even though it was on a painful part of the body.

Mudokon: "I'm reading them now...each of them...they want to know more. Pathetic...vile...cretins. They're no good for work."

Orkhid: "So...So they are likely to start to snoop around? Read restricted files?"

Mudokon: "Yes. That one, there. Looking into the Mirror. He is one of the bigger problems. I say we kill them all now."

The Orkhid sighed but nodded his head. He then reached over to the control panel and pushed a small red button.

Orkhid: "There goes another batch..."

As he said this the room slowly started to be filled with a hissing sound. The coughs and splutters of the Mudokons however soon drowned out all sounds. Green gas slowly drifted in from the ceiling and floor and one by one the Slaves collapsed. Their limp bodies spasming uncontrollably as the gas slowly destroyed their nervous system.

Mudokon: "Its for the best..."

(OOC: Could i have abit of feedback by any chance? Just a smidge?)
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Part 4

(OOC: Goddamn you people!! lol!!)

Guard: "Sir, they're here."

Researcher: "Good, Good. Allow them through."

The Xenicik, or Xen, labs were a much darker and morbid place than any other Orkhid Labratory throughout Mudos. The Army base that was on the surface and, basically, protected the Labs from infiltration was infamous for its ability to churn out vicious Assassins and highly trained killers. Their philosophy of "No gun, No run." was very much feared aswell as respected amongst the Orkhid race, and many other specie too. It basically meant although you are weaponless...you do not retreat. You stand and fight for your life. Whereas many other bootcamps had thrown out this, once popular, motto.Xen had kept it. And that was basically why, if certain individuals needed a job done. They would go to General Mokmal and ask him, politely, to help them with their problems.

Researcher: "And this is the lot, i presume?"

Guard: "Sir, yessir!!"

The Guard saluted the young, crazed Orkhid and then marched off. The Researcher scratched his left arm and blew a strand of dark purple hair from his scarred face. The room was damp and dank, three large refridgerators stood at the end of the room, were little light was. The only light was that of a lamp swinging lonesomely in the air. Casting shadows of all that was lurking in the room. The Guard had wheeled in a trey of embryo's. Each one in its own tube. Each one with its own purpose. Slowly the Researcher dragged the transport to the nearest fridge and opened the door. Cool air greeted the Orkhid's face, a chill running down his spine. Grasping a tube in his pale hand he lifted it and planted it gently in the empty fridge. Pondering what would happen to the contents. What torment these...things would suffer.

***
*Setting: In the training grounds of Xen, sobs a teenage, trainee soldier. No older than 14 he is learning how to shoot and kill moving targets. The targets are, obviously, Mudokons as they are thinking creatures and fast too. Capable of thinking quickly they make great targets to practice with. The Mudokons are kept in dank cells in the prison block, every Monday, Wednesday and Friday 10 of them are rounded up and placed in a steel box. Two in each. They are then taken outside, to the training grounds, in these cramped boxes and unleashed. What makes them run so fast is hard to tell, but they do. And thats when the recruits have to shoot. Take down every moving, non-Orkhid object there is. Usually there are 10 Orkhid shooters, each having 10 bullets to take out their subject. If one gets passed the red boundary line and makes a bee-line for the Orkhid-grown forest the Snipers will take action. Taking out any and all strays.*

Troop: "B-But Major!! Please...!! It-It isn't true!!"

The young Orkhid was on his knees begging to one of two his superiors. He was reportedly missing Mudokons on purpose. This basically meant when he could shoot them in the head, torso or any other part of the body for that matter. He would hit a inanimate object near them. Making out as if he was trying...but failing. A daft thing to do. And since the Xen base did not have any Corrax facilities (See here) there was no way to get the niceness out of the 'ill' and they were usually trained to kill anyways.

Major: "Corporal, show the defect how its done, wudja."

Troop: "But M-Major!! I'm not defe..."

The sentence was cut short by a cold, black baton that connected to the teens cheek bone. It was swung by the Major. He was a rough looking man, quite short however. He had stubble on his face and wore a black berré with a red 'XV' on the front. No outsiders knew what this meant and all Xen trained Soldiers were forced to swear not to tell. And none ever did. The uniform worn by the Majors and Coporals were roughly the same. A long sleeved black jacket, black trousers, black shoes. Everything in black. Underneathe the jacket would usually be a Kevlar vest. Hidden by silver buttons that closed the jacket. The buttons and cufflinks (Silver, of course.) each had a intricet pattern embroyded onto the surface. The Majors uniform consisted of more badges however. Many of them being for bravery and loyalty.

Corporal: "Sir!!"

The Corporal saluted and pulled out a black Glock, equipped with laser sight.

Corporal: "UNLEASH!!"

The steel box containing two Native Mudokons was opened. The front being lifted off by two recruits. As soon as daylight hit the dark insides the two creatures leapt out. Running as fast as they could towards the forest. Their feathers were drab and grey. And they were skinny, malnourished yet fit enough to make a run for their lives.
*Bang*
The first shot seemed to devour all bird song in the area. A silver tipped, black bullet, sped off towards one of the runners. One of the quicker runners who was heading at a fast pace was the first to be struck. The bullet hit the animal in the back, snapping the spinal cord and then ripping through the heart before exiting the chest. It then continued to fly through the air. Missing the other runner by inches.

Major: "Now see, see how EASY that was. Obviously, your going to cause abit of discomfort to them on your first attempt. But as soon as you get the hang of it, bits of brain and heart will be flying everywhere. Even Corporal Summers had to start somewhere."

The injured Orkhid was propping himself up with his left elbow. Blood trickling from the corner of his mouth and his cheek already looking swollen. The Corporal turned back to the Major.

Corporal: "Do you want me to take out the other creature, sir?"

He spoke obeidiantly. As if he were still a recruit.

Major: "No Corporal, tell the Snipers to have their fun. Heh."

He patted his inferior on the shoulder, finally saluting him and then walking off back to the entrance...

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Sorry for the lack of my comments Jacob i wasnt reading for awhile but now that i have i must say that you are a great writer. the story is excellent. it is a sham good fan fics like this can not be published. keep it up.
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Part 5

*Setting: Hordes of Orkhid Researchers and Scientists were sat in a conferrence-like room. Twenty-Five large round tables were scattered in this gigantic room, each table holding ten chairs and every table was crowded. The Scientists bustled around exitedly, wondering why they had all been called for a meeting. Every Orkhid Scientist in the vicinity had come, the ones which were too far away watched on monitors back in the labs. Tv sets that were usually known as 'Shrinks' scittered overhead serving drinks. Their monitors showing big, yellow smiley faces. The Orkhid's had purchased 60 of these machines, it gave the Shrinks a new sense of life. A new meaning. And even if it didnt, it beat trying to cheer up suicidals. At the front of the room there was a raised stage. Near the front of the stage there lay a podium and a propped up desk, equipped with auto-que. A microphone stood erect on the desk also, joined by a jug and glass of water. Behind this desk was a elongigated table. Situated behind that were the top five Orkhid Scientist from around Mudos. They spoke to each other, smiling gleefully and sharing their thoughts on certain subjects. Infact the entirity of the conferrence room was doing this, none of these creatures were said to be 'powerful' enough to be in an army, yet, they were clever enough to join the Science division. Were the Orkhid soldiers would class this as a weakness, the Scientists etc knew it was a powerful attribute. As the creatures slowly took their place in the room, a tall, pale creature steps upto the microphone. The lights dim down everywhere but on him and all goes silent.*

Orkhid: "BROTHERZ. ZIZTERZ. KIN. MY NAME IZ PROFEZZEUR CHORGE AND I HAVE COME TO TELL YOU ALL WHY WE HAVE BEEN CALLED HERE TODAY, IT IZ TO WITNEZZ ZOMETHING MARVELLOUZ. ZOMETHING THAT COULD CHANGE THE WORLD AZ WE KNOW IT...FOREVER!!."

He smiled and delved into his black shirt pocket. Pulling out a small pen-like object. The end bleeped red readily.

Chorge: "I WILL NOW ZHOW YOU ZOMETHING THAT IZ HIGHLY CONFIDENTIAL. BEFORE I ZHOW YOU THIZ, I AZK THAT YOU DO NOT DIVULGE ANY OF WHAT YOUR ABOUT TO ZEE HERE TO ANY OTHER ZPECIE THAT IZ NOT OF ORKHID ORIGIN. TO DO ZO WOULD, NOT ONLY BE TREATCHEROUZ TO WE...YOUR BROTHERZ, BUT COULD ALZO LEAD TO THE DEZTRUCTION OF THIZ HIGHLY ECCLAIMED WEAPON."

After giving his over-hyped speech the creature blew a strand of dark red hair out of his face and pushed the end of the bleeping 'pen'. The ceiling of the room churned and slowly opened up. Turning in a anti-clockwise position. What looked like a large glowing pipe slowly emerged, electricity darted around it and lit the room for brief seconds. Showing the creatures amazed expressions and such a creation. They 'oohed' and 'aahed' gently. Smiling the Orkhid addressed them once more.

Chorge: "IMPREZZIVE...I KNOW. BUT THIZ IZ NOT THE WEAPON. THIZ, IZ THE WEAPON!!"

A blue beam of light shot out of the machine and hit a large table in the middle of the room. The personnel situated on the table shot back rapidly, fearing for their life as this insane creature attacked them.

Chorge: "Heheheheheheh. DO NOT WORRY, IT IZ MERELY A HOLOGRAM OF OUR WEAPON, IT CANNOT HARM ANYTHING EVEN IF WE WANTED IT TOO."

The light shone on the table, small blue particles swarming around inside the light. Gradually a image started to appear of a naked Orkhid male. On all the tables that were unfortunate not to see this preview they were helped by the Shrinks who televised it on their screens.

Chorge: "NOW, YOU MAY BE THINKING "BUT IT IZ A NORMAL ORKHID(!)" WELL MY FRIENDZ, I BEG TO DIFFER. THIZ CREATURE IZ THE, AZ WE LIKE TO CALL IT, BIGGER BROTHER TO UZ ORKHIDZ. ALLOW ME TO POINT YOUR ATTENTION TO ITZ CLAWZ. UNLIKE NORMAL ORCHIDZ ITZ CLAWZ ARE LIKE THAT OF A SCRABZ. WE PREDICT THAT IT WILL BE ABLE TO CUT THROUGH EVEN THE TOUGHEZT METAL."

As the Orkhid gave details about this creature he was distracted by the waving of two arms by a Orkhid viewer. The speech giving Orkhid snapped his fingers and nodded in the direction of the viewer. As soon as he did this the nearest, free Shrink scittered over to him, lowering itself down, a small microphone came from the top of the set.

Orkhid viewer: "Ermm, yes. W-What do you mean by 'predict'?"

He spoke in it clearly, stuttering somewhat at the beginning.

Chorge: "THE HOLOGRAM THAT YOU ZEE BEFORE YOU IZ MERELY A PREDICTION OF WHAT IZ TO COME. THE CREATUREZ THAT WILL GROW INTO THEZE ARE BUT INFANTZ. WE TOOK ZOME DNA FROM ONE AND, WITH MATICULOUZ CALCULATIONZ, CAME UP WITH A CREATURE LIKE THIZ. MAY I CONTINUE?"

The viewer, although surprised by such technological capabilities, sat down and returned to viewing. Taking this as a 'yes' the Orkhid continued.

Chorge: "NOW, UNLIKE UZ. THIZ CREATUREZ REGENERATION CAPABILITIEZ IZ ALOT MORE ADVANCED. A WOUND THAT MAY NEED TO HEAL FOR TWO WEEKZ FOR UZ NORMAL ORKHIDZ WOULD TAKE MERELY DAYZ, POSSIBLY HOURZ FOR THIZ KIND. IT ALZO NEED NOT FEED ON SOLID FOOD. THE WAY IT IZ ENGINEERED MEANZ ALL IT NEEDZ IZ BLOOD. THERE IZ MUCH MORE YOU NEED TO KNOW, MUCH, MUCH MORE. ALL ZHALL BE EXPLAINED IN THE DIZCZ YOU CAN PICK UP AZ YOU EXIT. ONCE YOU HAVE LEARNED ALL YOU NEED TO, DEZTROY THE DIZC IMMEDIATLY. WHAT IZ NOT EXPLAINED IZ 'WHY?' AND WE ZHALL GO INTO THAT WITH THE CREATOR AFTER THE THIRTY MINUTE BREAK. FOOD IZ AT THE BACK, AZ IZ DRINKZ. IF YOU HAVE ANY QUERIEZ PLEAZE AZK ONE OF OUR HELPERZ."

As he said this he raised a left hand to the group of Shrinks that were currently hanging from the ceiling with nothing to do.

Chorge: "THANKYOU AND ZEE YOU ZOON."

~End~

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