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06-28-2002, 07:41 PM
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Upriseing-#12

(a little background to some of the origin of raznet, when he truns renagade)

A long hall lined with cryo-tubes with 2 armored vikkers being falowed by to armoured big-bro sligs. "Do you realy think its nessisary to have so much protection?" said one. "Of corse, did you hear what happend when they opened one with no amour or hevy back up?" "no what happend?" "They were ripped to shreds, the gurads found the bodys in picesis! limbs everywere!" the other said "well, if you say so" the other said trembleing. The got to the one they were going to open. he went up and knocked off some frost reveling the number 12. One punched in a code and it opened. they liaded the smoth green body onto a fold out strecher that a big-bro was holding. they pushed the strecher back out of the room and into a large black room. bolth vikkers went up to a white table and begin seting up they're tools. The big-bro put the body onto the table. The two vikkers pressed a button and it began to warm up. "Well, when it gets to 80 digres when can begin operation, anlisis, and agmentions." "Ok it is now.....60 digres,.......70........80!" The two began. The operated on the lungs, enhanceing how long he can hold his breth, they then operated on his pain recptors and raised his pain tolerence, and encanced his strength. He was going to be a hunter unit. The anilis whent over fine, no flaws, no deformiteis. Perfect. Then came the agmentions. They agmentied a onbord computer system into his brain, and agments helping all his sensis. He was perfect. "Finely we can test him!" said one as he took off his armour, he had a strage metal cap on his head. "Yes, i to am very exsited to test his combat abiltys!" said the other. The one with the metal cap went over and got a wakeing shot, after they woke him up, the combat tests would begin....

(hope you like it, it's my first one!)
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06-29-2002, 12:10 AM
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It sounds like a brilliant start. why dont you continue with the story so we can find out more. Keep up the great work. I wait to see the rest.
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06-30-2002, 12:33 AM
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(thank you!)


Raznet awoke with a start. The two vikkers had just finished installing his computer. He looked around, He saw the yellowish armour covering almost every part of his body, before him was a large titaneum door. The vikker with the cap went up to the door, and punched in a code." Ok, lets get ready to test yer combat skills!"......








(sorry bout the sortness, and shityness, but i need to work on my sprite comic and other stuff, this was realy a fill. Sorry...)
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06-30-2002, 02:02 AM
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No problem. I will be patient.
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