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03-27-2002, 12:30 PM
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*Setting: Nightclub somewhere in the giant cities of Oddworld. Tall sky-scrapers surround the bustling little hangout. Inside creatures of all shapes and sizes dance to the music of Marilyn Manson' 'Dope Show'. Three Shape-shifter bartenders serve drinks quickly, trying to rake in all the cash they can before the night ends. Lights flash on and off, switching colours from white to red to orange to green and more. Strobe lighting flashs from all corners of the club, lighting it up uniquely. Tables and chairs are pushed near the walls and the higher class of creatures sit there, sipping their alcoholic beverages. Security cameras watching their every move.*

Club owner: "They are spending more and more on the Glukkons drinks...Why!? Im gonna lose profit due to these bastards!!"

The club owner was talking to his Solicitor and close friend, Barker. He was a Chronicler and worked for him AND the Glukkons, depending on who paid him more...loyalty didn't really matter to Barker.

Barker: "And what did you say the drink was again...?"

He spoke perfectly...posh and intelligently...like all creatures should do in a perfect world.

Club owner: "Soulstorm...Soulstorm brew."

Barker flipped through some papers he had produced from his briefcase, finally after what seemed like hours of skimming through each individual page he came up with 3 sheets stapled together.

Barker: "Here...take a quick look."

Handing him the papers he carefully folded the others with his extra appendages.

Barker: "Check down at the bottom...you know, where it says 'Causes'. Oh, and Jake...dont tell anyone about this, ok?"

Jake looked up from reading the papers.

Jake: "Yeh-yeh sure. But...what does this mean? That they've put some sort of drug in my drinks!!"

Barker: "In their drinks...they used it to recruit workers aaaages ago. By the looks of it they are back in buisness and are using it to hustle club owners such as yourself."

Jake snarled. His breed did not take kindly to such things as being hustled. A single claw shot out of his cloven paw. He was a Ariphité. A breed of Reptilian...his dark skin allowed him to hide in the shadows and watch his prey. His eyes were black as coal and could see in any condition. Slowly he stood up, adjusting the coller to his black, white pin-stripe suit.

Jake: "I'm taking the stuff out of the cellar...stay here."

Barker: "But Jake, if you do that, your clients dont get what they want...and then they dont pay...you lose buisness rapidly."

Jake: "I lose profit just as quick...the Gluks told me that if the stuff doesn't sell then they will give me half of what they own for their inconveiniance. If it does sell...i give them half of what i own."

Barker: "Ahh...well, you have a problem there my friend."

Barker rose to his feet, packing his files and such away into his briefcase. Bidding his friend a farewell he hopped slowly towards the door.

Barker: "Oh...and one more thing. Try and ween the creatures off gradually...take it away from them too quickly they snap and become violent...and i have seen your clientel Jake...you would have a handful if those lot became too much to handle...tooda-loo."
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04-14-2002, 07:10 PM
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Part 2

*Setting: Outside the Nightclub. Jake is sat on the top of a flat roof lit by the moonlight, his legs dangling over the edge as he looks over the Club which isn't his anymore. The Neon sign pulled down and the song 'Wait and Bleed' by Slipknot playing loudly. Sillouettes of Glukkons in the office windows above the club could be seen, they were laughing and joking. Sligs guarding them and 2 Crates guarding the doors of the Club...most likely employed as Bouncers.*

Jake sighed. He had lost everything...his home, his buisness, his money and his best friend. Barker...that bastard. A tear ran down Jakes face and he inched himself closer off the edge. Preparing to jump. The music seemed to be getting louder and as it did it seemed to focus around the subject of murder. He coughed and closed his eyes...readying himself to jump.

Voice: "Ahhh...suicide...how un-original and bland."

Jake was startled and opened his eyes quickly. His claws grabbing the edge to steady himself. Without turning around he asked.

Jake: "Who are you...what do you want?"

Voice: "You could call me a friend...possibly a legend."

Jake shuffled back from the edge and turned around. A figure was enveloped in shadow and speaking softly. The form seemed to be of a Orkhid, although he didn't know for sure as the scent was different.

Voice: "No...dont stop the entertainment because of me. Please...carry on, i would love to see a suicide caused by that of lies."

A small chuckle followed that sentence.

Jake: "What do you mean 'By lies'?"

Voice: "You mean you dont know? The Glukkons have truely shafted you and your opposition from your nightclubs...You foolish creature. You thought they won the deal fair and square!?"

Jake stood up, brushing his suit off.

Jake: "How do you know about the deal!? And no, i knew about the drink...too late though."

Voice: "Indeed...and where was your Lawyer when you needed him, eh?"

Jake: "Barker was out...i couldn't get a hold of him. What sort of a question is that!?"

The voice seemed to get deeper and a two flash' simutaneously appeared. Jake figured they were its eyes.

Voice: "An interesting one...i know the truth. Barker was in on the deal to make you bankrupt. Although, i dont expect a creature like you to realise that."

Jake: "Dont lie. Barker is alot of things but he wouldn't do that!!"

The figure outstretched a arm, its hand facing upwards. Its hand was definatly Orkhid like.

Voice: "You want to see for yourself?"

Jake didn't have anything to lose and met his hand with his claw. As soon as he did he felt a surge of power and hatred coil around him, his head cocked upwards and a blinding light entered his eyes.

(OOC: Finish it off later...im too tired now.)
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04-14-2002, 09:09 PM
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04-14-2002, 10:05 PM
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Part 3

(OOC: Thanx!! You might not like/understand the next parts though.)

Jake found himself in a room. It seemed to be like a Lounge or conferrence room but it was to large to be that. Although he was in this new place he could still hear the music droning on in the background. That was then disregarded as voices seemed to be summoned into this new reality. The voices seemed familiar. Well...2 of them did. And thats when it happened. Three characters slowly phased into the room. Their bodies didn't seem to be full at first, and a outline was all that could be seen...and then they were filled in with detail.

Jake: "BARKER!?"

He seemed to yelp his name as he stepped back. Barker was talking to two Glukkons. One of them was the one he had made a deal with.

Glukkon #1: "And how do we do this, huh? How?"

Barker: "It is easy...i know, lemme see...hmmm 75% of Club owners in this city. 75% is alot. Now, all i have to do is get around that 25% and you will have your drink been guzzled by most, if not all, of the city dwelling folk."

He smirked...Barker' smirks were always dangerous. They always had something slimey about them.

Glukkon #2: "And vhat vhill happen if vhey dont take vhe bait!? And vhey go against our vhishes!?"

Barker chuckled and cracked his knuckles.

Barker: "They won't have any reason to do such a thing. Thats if you are able to manage it correctly. I am the Lawyer of most of the Club owners in the city...i will just make myself 'unavailable' at the time of the deal..."

Glukkon #2: "And vhey vhill go ahead!?"

Barker: "Yup...these owners always want one thing...heh, more money. Quite like you lot...but stupid...er."

Glukkon #1: "Ya...stupid!!"

The Glukkon started chuckling to itself, its mouth gaping wide showing tobacco ridden teeth.

Voice: "You want to see more...or is, heh...that enough?"

The voice shattered Jakes concentration, it was deep and echoey. He looked down at his feet.

Jake: "I've seen enough...you were right."

Voice: "You...you seem dissapointed. Why?"

Jake: "Barker was my friend...and although i knew he'd do anything for money...i didn't think he'd do something like this."

The ground began to shift. The 3 figures blurred, waving from left to right. Jake shot his hands out and spread out his feet to try and keep his balance.

Jake: "Whats...whats going oooo...ahhhgggrrrr!!"

The light hit his eyes again, this time it seemed to wrap around his very eye balls and try and prise them out. This time when he opened them he was back to were he was before...only this time on the grubby floor of the roof. The figure was stood a couple of feet away from him in the moonlight, staring at the moon. He turned around, he was Orkhid. His face looked white and drained of colour and 2 strands of his white hair was draped in front of his face. He wore a long leather jacket that came down to his ankles and Jake noticed the big black boots that most Orkhids wear.

Jake: "How...how did you do that? Your only a Orkhid(!)"

The Orkhid stepped forwards and held out a hand.

Orkhid: "Come...get up."

Jake grasped his hand and allowed to be lifted up. His suit was dirty with the dust from the roof. He stood, eye to eye with this powerful speciemen of a creature.

Orkhid: "What do you want out of life?"

Jake: "What does that have to do with anything!? How did you do what you just did!?"

He stepped back upon saying this, he was unsure about everything that had just happened. Trying to figure out if he could have been drugged or not.

Orkhid: "Heh...i didn't drug you. It was the truth...everything you saw really happened."

Jake span around.

Jake: "How...how...how did you know that really happened!? How...TELL ME!!"

The Reptile was getting angry and was also afraid. His claws shot out of his paws.

Orkhid: "You want to know...you have to help me. Deal?"

Jake had lost everything...he had nothing left to lose. But this still didn't quench his anger or fear.

Jake: "Whats in it for me?"

Orkhid: "True, un-adulterated POWER..."

The Orkhid hissed these words, its eyes seemed to gleam wildly. He noticed Jake' claws retracting and felt a little bit more at ease.

Jake: "Ok...deal...but, but who are you?"

His new cohort seemed to hesitate at this question. Its eyes went blank for a moment before replying with a sly smirk.

Orkhid: "Otto...Otto Bitus."
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04-14-2002, 10:10 PM
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The pair walked down the filth ridden streets. Otto speaking to him in a soft tone of voice. Telling him about the true nature of Barker's intentions and why he teamed up with the Glukkons in the first place. Why he backstabbed him...a thousand times over.

Jake: "B-But i dont understand. He doesn't hate me...we were close...like brothers!!"

Otto chuckled, patting Jakes shoulder as he did so.

Otto: "Everyone in this world is a bastard...they will do anything...for money. Its quite a interesting world you have here...it is easy."

Jake stopped and turned to him.

Jake: "What? What do you mean...you make it sound as if you dont belong here."

Otto carried on walking, he raised a white arm, the moonlight making it even more bleach like, and clicked his fingers.

Otto: "Keep up...we wouldn't want to lose you now. I have something IMPORTANT to show you."

The word 'important' was overly empthasised how ever he didn't realised this and the reptile trotted along behind him, wondering what was going to be shown to.

Otto: "You know how to use a gun, correct?"

Jake: "Yeh...but i dont want to and never have. I'm not one for shooting people. I dont condole violence, its a horrid thing."

The Orkhid span around, his mouth seemed to stretch from ear to ear in a big, chesire like smile.

Otto: "You fool...heh, you dont condole violence. How the Hell did your club survive!?"

Jake scratched the back of his head and laughed.

Jake: "Me and my punters had a mutual understanding, i spose."

A chuckle escaped Otto's lips and then he darted into a alleyway. Shouting to Jake to follow him. As Jake hadn't anywhere else to go or be he obeyed the order and disserpeard into the shadows. When Jake finally caught upto the Orkhid they were stood in a alley which was swarming with Canids. Vile, peasant like creatures. They resembled Orkhids but wore a type of Gas mask. Their skin was a brownish colour and chains were used as jewelry. Pipes were used as weapons and anything that wandered into their alley way territory...was used as food.

Otto: "So...have you ever been in a fight?"

The creature seemed to dis-regarded the fact that they were in imminent danger.

Jake: "Once or twice...when i was young. What are we doing here?"

Otto: "Good. Well, like they say: Its like riding a bicycle...you never forget."

The creature stepped around Jake, ignoring his question. When Otto was directly behind him that was when Jake felt a hard pat on the back that seemed to push him forwards, knocking him into a dustbin which in turn alerted the creatures to his and the Orkhids wherabouts. Chitters of exited, hungry Canids rose up from the darkness. The alleyway was mostly shadow...which served for good hiding places for such predatory 'animals'. Jake span around to tell Otto to run, but he wasn't there.

Jake: "Otto...Otto!?"

The Orkhid never replied and Jake was becoming increasingly worried. He span around again to face the creatures, making sure they weren't sprinting towards him. Noting that they wasn't (as of yet anyway) he turned and ran towards the road. The alleyways exit was his only hope. But Canids were already scaling the wall to block his path. A clawed paw grabbed his shoulder and span him around. It was a female Canid...with a child clinging to her side. Jake felt almost sorry for the pathetic creature...knowing that its offspring would most likely die within the next week or so if it didn't get a good meal. But as the other creatures moved in for the kill...his survival instinct kicked in...and he wanted to live...

(OOC: Rubbishy pooness...UGH!!)
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04-27-2002, 07:32 PM
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Part 5

Otto: "A Sniper Rifle."

It was a sinister reply to Jakes question. Otto was grasping a black, long gun. It was a sleek weapon of death, much admired by Orkhids.

Jake: "And? You want me to do what with it?"

Jake was sat ontop of a wheely bin down a alleyway. His suit was ragged and torn, he was a shell of his former self. It had been 7 months since the incident and he had grown increasingly attached to Otto. He was his mentaur, protector but most of all his family.

Otto: "I want you to kill with it. Kill your enemies, kill the creatures that took away your home...took away your lively hood."

A titter of amusement seemed to hurtle out of Jakes mouth. He leapt off the wheely bin and snatched the rifle out of Otto' hand, throwing it to the ground he turned away and proceeded to exit the alley.

Otto: "Where are you going!?"

Without turning Jake replied to his question.

Jake: "I'm not a violent person Ot, its not in my nature. They screwed me...sure. But they dont deserve to die for it."

Otto brushed a white strand of hair that fell in front of his face away. His eyes went to pure blackness and red smoke circled around him. Jake turned.

Jake: "Come on...lets get something to eat."

Otto had managed to stop the red smoke from circling, making it disperse into nothingness and changed his eyes back to normal.

Otto: "Ok...where to?"

Jake: "Ermmm...how about we have a walk down south? I hear they have some good stuff there."

The Orkhid smiled a warm smile. One that Jake had never encountered before when he was with Barker.

Otto: "I'll be right there. You go on ahead, i need to take a leak."

Jake nodded his head and turned, exiting the alley. Otto watched him go round the corner. As soon as he was out of sight he dropped to his knee'. His form began to shift...his clothing was already torn and ripped, he managed to pass that off however. Saying he was a outcast from the Orkhid regime. Slowly the body shifted into a dark, shadowy shape. It wasn't solid however, more of a sillouette than anything. The eyes shone white and then darkened to red. He brought his hands in front of his face, they were fading. He needed to change bodies, he needed a host and quickly. With every ounce of energy left in him he concentrated. Managing to stabalise his form and keep the Orkhid appearence. Standing up he coughed, he reached his arm out, pointing it towards the rifle. It flew up into his hand. He grasped it firmly in the middle, a sneaky smile stretched across his face and he then straightened himself up. Coughed again. And headed out of the alley.
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04-28-2002, 01:45 PM
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thats brillant jacob keep writing more you have a real knack for it.

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Part 6

Otto: "You have to learn how to defend yourself. It'd be no good you being attacked and then not fighting back now would it?"

It had been two and a half months since he had shown Jake the Sniper Rifle...and nothing. Not one fight, Jake never even cursed another creature...it was depressing. For Otto at least.

Jake: "I'll cross that bridge when it comes to it, ya know...fight when i have to, kill when i NEED to. Otherwise i won't resort to violence."

Cracking his neck Otto smiled, he was slowly leading Jake into the rougher side of the city. The place were you could get attacked for a internal organ or mugged because you still had the souls on your shoes, petty stuff like that. Jake however was to wrapped up in the conversation to actually pay attention to where they were wondering. It was obvious really, the street lights were smashed, graffiti was 'honouring' every wall nearly. Trash was basically strewn everywhere. Drug needles, alcoholic beverages and used contraceptives were also amongst the rubbish that littered the pavement. Otto sneered and patted Jake on the back.

Otto: "Jake, you're one of my best friends. Heh, only friends. And although i have waited patiently, encouraged you and basically begged you to fight/kill. You haven't...and for what i'm about to do...i apologise."

Jake turned to him, cocking his head in curiosity.

Jake: "What are you talking about?"

Otto rubbed Jake's cheek and grinned.

Otto: "I...i need a body. A host if you like. I chose you cos you seemed easy...easy and willing. Obviously, you aren't as willing or easy as you seemed."

Backing up the Ariphité snarled. He did not like were this was going, what Otto was saying.

Jake: "What do you mean...a host?"

The Orkhid smiled, his eyes suddenly glowing red he turned away from the Reptile and looked at a group of Saurians who were crowded around a derelict buildings steps. Roughly there were four. Their Green skin darker than usual, possibly due to the drugs they took and injected into themselves. One didn't even have any feathers on its head. But they all wore leather jackets and all of them looked down right aggressive.

Otto: *In Jakes voice* "Hey...assholes. You want some more of that shit your pumping into yourselves, eh? Fight me...and i'll give ya some!!"

He then turned back to Jake and chuckled, dispersing into whisps of shadow.

Saurian #1: "Wha did ya say?"

Its attention had been drawn to what had been said, and suddenly the convo it was having seemed less important to being insulted. Slowly it walked over to Jake, its eye lids red and raw. Its nails short, but to make up for that, it carried a knife, a long, sharp knife.

Jake: "I-i never said anything. Honest(!)"

His voice was trembling...he was terrified. Not only was he in the roughest part of town but his 'friend' had just disappeared into nothingness after getting him in shit with the local scum.

Saurian #3: "Yeh...i believe you used the word 'Assholes' right?"

This ones tone was cold and full of hatred. It approached him from the side, snarling. Its eyes black and bloodshot.

Jake: "That...that wasn't me!!"

Saurian #1: "Really...thats interesting. Considering it sounded ALOT like ya."

Stepping forwards it grasped Jake' coller and brought him closer to his face. The knife slowly moving towards Jakes gut.

Saurian #4: "And you said if we beat ya...we get more of da stuff...heh...we win mate."

The knife got shoved into Jake, the Saurian brandishing it smiling evily as he made the wound deepen.

Jake: "Honestly...i-i never said it!!"

As he said this a lone tear ran down his cheek. He had wanted to die in the past, but Otto had shown him there was more to life than your buisness. True friendship for one. But obviously that was a sham. Jake gasped as he felt the knife cut more flesh as it was quickly pulled out, dropping to his knee's he stared up at his killer...who had no remorse in his eyes whatsoever. But as he pined for life to stop its cruel joke he felt something hard in his jacket. And although life was slowly draining out of him he was able to check what it was...his left paw searched for what it was whilst his right clutched the gaping hole. Slowly he drew out the object, the Saurians watching him as he slowly died and reached for some sort of life line.

Saurian #2: "Ya think ya would die quicker. Maybe ya need encouragement...no?"

The Saurians face crunched up in a giggle as it turned to the first creature. But the giggle turned to a shocked expression once it saw what the Reptile was drawing out...a gun...a Magnum.

Saurian #2: "Shit...!"

It lunged forward and grasped Jakes arm that was holding the gun. Its claws wrapped around the gun and tried to tug it away from the dying cretin. But strangely enough the grasp of the dying Ariphité was strong, as if something else was holding the gun. Jakes face was paling and although he was holding a gun his eyes were still full of fear.

Jake: "W-whats happening..."

The Saurian who was attempting to snatch the gun away was getting more and more frustrated. Twisting Jakes arm to try and snap it off and thus retrieve the gun. But Jake was having none of it, he was getting more and more scared. Not only was he dying but now he was hearing voices...Otto's voice.

Otto: "Pull the trigger you fool(!) Pull it...if you do, you will die in peace...just pull it though, rid the world of some scum(!) Damn you Jake...YOUR DYING...YOU HAVE BEEN ASSAULTED!! KILL THE..."

*Gunshot*

The Saurian gasped, the bullet had gone straight through its liver. Forcing it to die...but not as quickly as it would like. It dropped to its side and spat up blood. Jake finally felt as if he was free. And then Otto re-appeared...and his freedom slowly dispersed just as Otto once did.

Otto: "F*cking Finally(!)"

(OOC: Apologies for the rubbishness and longness of it. I was watching BB3 as i typed. V.Distracting!!)
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Part 6...continued

Otto was in full possession of Jake's body, the wound in his hosts stomach was merely a scratch to him as he sneered at the other members of the Saurian clan.

Saurian #4: "What da Hell!? H-How!?"

Otto smirked cracking his neck, he rolled back his shoulders and nodded his head towards the Saurian who asked the question.

Otto: "Ooohh, how exiting...no?"

He Raised a cloven paw, watching as the Saurian's feet slowly rose off of the ground. Its whole body sustained in mid air, it struggled. Trying to break free of this force that was doing such a thing. The other Saurians merely stared in awe at what was happening. One rubbing the plume of feathers on its head in pure anxiety and puzzlement. The Saurian who had plunged the knife deep into Jakes body moved forwards, snarling.

Saurian #1: "Y-You piece of sh*t...you little pile of st..."

Its voice was full of frustration and anger, it had attempted to kill its prey but had obviously failed. Humiliating itself in the process. The knife seemed to leap forwards, hurtling towards Jakes face. A lone left arm shot up, grasping the knifes searing blade. The paw of Otto's host tightened around the blade, drawing blood.

Otto: "We really shouldn't fight...i smell Reptilian in you."

The Saurian tried pulling the knife back, failing. Its cohorts backed away, their eyes filled with fear. They could smell something...something enraged and powerful. The Saurian that was once floating in the air had now been dropped to the ground, picking itself up slowly it growled lowly to itself.

Saurian #1: "So...i smell dead-asshole walking. Whats your point?"

Otto tutted. Shaking his head in disappointment.

Otto: "You really dont know your history do you? Reptilians are the desendants of Dragons. I could...empower you(!) Make you so powerful that you could hunt and kill anything you can imagine."

Otto purred, hoping that these sinister words would make his opposers, allies.

Otto: "So...whad'dya say? Allies?"

The Saurian sniggered and then shook his head.

Saurian #1: "Hell no...take him."

Its last two words were directed at the rest of the posse behind him, they moved towards Otto with alarming speed. Disregarding their dying friend on the floor. Who was slowly choking on more and more of his blood. Otto shook his head slowly.

Otto: "Shame. Ahhh well. Not my loss, eh?"

He winked at the druggie and then let go of the knife. His eyes glowed bright red and then his true voice could be heard. Deep and raspy. It was filled with hatred and death.

Otto: "See you."

He flung his head up towards the sky, his eyes shining brightly, even out shining the stars. His arms jotted out to the sides and a ring of red smoke was quickly emitted from him. It hit all objects and persons that surrounded his pressence. Immediatly cutting through them and decomposing their mid section. The Saurian who he had been addressing looked at him, wide eyed.

Saurian #1: "W-Why? How...?"

Otto: "Why? Because i can. How...Because i am the God of Death, the true taker of lives...Obitus."

A single red flame seemed to appear in his right eye as he said this. And he watched, amused as the bodies slowly hit the ground. Blood spilling out of their decayed mid-sections. And then he walked...walked away from it all. Walked in the direction of the Countryside...the Native land. Mudos.

~End~

(OOC: Blaaaaaahhhhh!!)
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Wow... wowwowwow... Wowowowowowowow.... Alright, let's change a little.... Wouh.... wouhwouhwouh....


...Shortly, that's one hell of a story there...

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06-02-2002, 11:41 PM
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Holy poop on a stick!!!!Thats a good story!!!I need more,MORE I SAY!!!!MOOORE!!!!!

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