My fan fiction

[Stranger90]

I always think how the Munch's Oddysee adventure will continue... so this is my fiction, to explain you how I think it will continue...

ODDWORLD: MUNCH'S EXODDUS (??)

OK, at the end of Munch's Oddysee the Vykker labs blow up, OK. Munch have rescue the Gabbiar with 150 eggs inside... and now there are two moons, one with the Abe's hand, and one with Munch's fin!

A nice end, isn't it???

But the Glukkons aren't died yet... and they become more angry... very angry!!!

What happens to Lulu??? Since he lost everything, he's back to "don't do anything"!
And Abe & Munch?? Abe is returned to his friends, to live in peace, and Munch finally saved the Gabbits from extinction! But the danger aren't finished yet...

CHAPTER I: A NEW DANGER

A new Glukkon called Raptor, the brother of Molluck, decided to build a new "meat factory" from the unknown name! But he need space, so, like most Glukkons do, he decided to start a "deforestation"! Many wild animals being killed by the Sligs, and when some Mudokons that often attend that area saw what the Sligs are doing, they immediatly run to the "The Almighty Raisin" to perceive it of what happened!

The Almighty Raisin is impotent in this circumstances, and so it call Abe to him to told him the situation!

The Almighty Raisin (TAR): Zzzzz.... zzz.... uh?? Soooooo... we meet again, Abe?
Abe: This is the third time, I think!
TAR: We are in troubleee. Some Mudokons have discovered that the Glukkons are goooing to build a new "meat factory". We don't knoooow they real intention, so you have to go here and see what thet are going to do! Can you do that?
Abe: Yes, this isn't the first time that I go in a dangerous place, so I can do it!
TAR: Very goooood, you can call some Mudokons that may help you... go Abe, and then, and then.... ZZZZZZZzzzzzz.... RONF!!!
Abe: Oh no!!! The usual story!!!! C'mon friends, we must go there.

Abe is still the "stupid hero disarmed", but all the Mudokon have hope of him!
He starts to going in the place where the Glukkons are building the "meat factory" with a couple of Mudokons. Unfortunaly Munch can't come with Abe, she (or he) have 150 sons to maintain!!!
When Abe and the Mudokons are arrived, they can't see anybody!

Mudokon #1: There aren't Sligs...
Mudokon #2: There aren't machine
Mudokon #3: I'm so hungry...
Abe: There is something of strange, where are they going?
Mudokon #4: Maybe is lunch time...!
Mudokon #5: You stupid, is morning!!!!
Abe: Shhhhhh! Don't do noises!!!
Mudokon #4: OK boss!
Mudokon #5: Right...
-CRACK-
Abe & Mudokons: ??????
Unkown voice: Ah ah ah! Found, get them!
Mudokon #2: Oh no! They are found us!!!
Abe: Hurry, run!!!
-SBONK!!!-
Abe: ----
Mudokon #5: Oh no, Abe...
-SBONK!!!!-
Mudokons: ----
Unkown voice: Eh eh eh eh! Now you can't escape Abe, we have got you!!!

Abe and his friends are captured, what will happen???? Of who it is that voice??? Raptor's???

At the Mudokon village, is descent the night, but Abe and the others don't come! Alf, the best Abe's friend, is getting worried...

Alf (thinking): What is happened to Abe???
Mudokon guard: Hey, Alf, what are you doing outside the village??
Alf: Abe doesn't come...
Mudokon guard: Oh! That's pretty bad...
Alf: He should return at the lunch time, but nobody have see him around the forest.
Mudokon guard: Maybe I should perceive The Almighty Raisin!
Alf: Yes, is the best thing that we can do now!!!!

A new day come up, but Abe isn't come back!!! The situation is worrisome! The Almighty Raisin order to the Mudokons to find Abe and the others! Pass the day and the night, the night and the day, but nobody have see the Abe's shadow... BUT

In another place, in a big lake, Munch are happy because all her (his) sons are old enough to swim alone! So she (he) jump out of the water and goes into the forest to find some food (I don't know what gabbits eats)! But when is a bit far from the lake, she (he) hear a dog that bark. She (he) think immediatly that is a Slog and she (he) tries to return to the lake as fast she (he) can do! Unfortunaly slips in the ground, and the barks is more near... she (he) close the eyes for avoid the worse...

Slig: Ehi Boby, come here!
Boby (Slog): WOF!
Slig: What have you found???
Munch: !!!!!!!!
Slig: What??? A gabbit!!! I thought that they were extinguished.
Munch: Please don't kill me!!!
Slig: I'm not a killer, so don't worry...
Munch: A "good" Slig?? Do I really trust you????
Slig: I never shoot to somebody...
Munch: You are kidding, isn't it???
Slig: No, I'm not kidding.
Boby sniff Munch
Boby: CAIIIIIIIIIN!
Slig: Let me to introduce, my name is Mitras!
Munch: Mine is Munch!
Mitras: Munch??? The gabbit that destroyed the Vykkers Saddik with the help of Abe the Mudokon????
Munch: Yes I'am... but now you will shoot me, right??
Mitras: I told that I don't shoot anybody... and why I must shoot you??? I'm a FREE Slig! From the destruction of the Rupture Farms I always watch the "MAGOG bullettin" to see the new Abe's enterprises! And I'm glad to meet you, Munch, I really hate the Glukkons!
Munch: FREE SLIG THAT HATES GLUKKONS?
Mitras: Yes, when Dripik blow up thanks to your friend, all the Sligs of the barracks now are free to do all they want! We haven't a boss that order us to kill targets!! So we now all Barrack's Slig are "good"!
Munch: That's "good"!!!
Mitras: We have many free space at the Barracks, why you don't come with me?
Munch: I can't, I have 150 sons!
Mitras: ???????????????????????????????????? 150 sons?
Munch: Yes!
Mitras: May I should tell you! Glukkon wants your lungs in a "silver plate"! There a big reward on your head.
Munch: Yes, I know!
Mitras: And hear this. Glukkons are going to build a new "meat factory"!
Munch: What???
Mitras: Two week ago I heard the news, you and your son are in serious danger, Glukkons are transforming all the forest in a desert!!
Munch: End of the peace for all us! Thanks Mitras!
Mitras: Eh eh! Don't think all the Sligs are bad! They are bad because they are under the Glukkon's control.
Munch: Maybe I should go to the Mudokon village and tell Abe the current sitaution!
Mitras: Yes, is the best that you can do!
Munch: I'm afraid of my sons, I don't want to leave them alone!
Mitras: Mmmmm... let me think! Found! We have a big pool in the Slig Barracks!
Munch: A pool? Why there is a pool in a place of Sligs, you cannot swim!
Mitras: Ehm! Dripik have order to build them... but nobody asks him why!
Munch: Thank you Mitras... I'm in debt with you.
Mitras: Don't worry, I wanna be useful!
Munch: How far is it?
Mitras: Is in the middle of the desert!
Munch: Too far!!!! There isn't a river and I can't walk good!
Mitras: Don't worry, I'm not alone, I'm arrived with a cargo flying ship, if I talk with my friends they accept to bring all you in the Barrack!
Munch: Wondeful! Wait, I'm going to call my sons!
Mitras: Take the time that you need!

So Mitras, a "good Slig", help Munch to save all her (his) sons from the new wickedness of the Glukkons!

Munch: OK, we will se soon, my sons!
Sons: Be careful mum (dad)!

The ship starts to fly to the Slig Barracks. Then Munch and Mitras (and Boby) are going to the Mudokon village... but the welcome isn't of the best!

Mudokon guard: Ehi friends! I see somebody!
Alf: Is Abe????
Mudokon guard: They are three!
Alf: ...
Munch: Maybe I should go for first, or the Mudokons will attack you!
Mitras: Gotcha!!!
Mudokon guard: Ehi, look, is Munch!!!
Mudokon guard #2: Who are the others guy?
Munch: Is a little hard that you believe, but they are a Slig and a Slog!
Mudokons: WHAT?? YOU ARE CRAZY??? HOW YOU CAN BRING A SLIG HERE????
Munch: Calm down! Is a good Slig!
Mudokons: AH! AH! AH! AH! AH! AH! Is a joke, true??
Munch: No, it's all the truth!
Big Face: I believe in Munch, that Slig is good!
Mudokons: Big Face... are you sure?
Big Face: Yes, I am! Munch we have some bad news!!
Munch: Who are you?
Mudokon guard: Hey, talk with respect with him!
Big Face: Calm down (to the Mudokon guard)! I'm one of the shaman of the Mudokon stock! Think me as the Abe's teacher!
Munch: Ok, sorry for first! Tell me the bad news!
Big Face: Don't worry! One week ago Abe is going to a far place to see what the Glukkons are doing!!! But he isn't returned!!! And also the five Mudokons with him, aren't come back!!!
Munch: !!!!!!!!!! Oh no! And now????
Big Face: We don't know what happened, maybe they are been captured! For this you are the only hope!
Mudokon guard: Hey Munch, are you sure that those Slig is a your friend?
Munch: Yes!
Mudokon guard: OK, if you say it!
Big Face: Maybe your Slig friend can help you to found Abe!
Munch: Yes, good idea! (to Mitras) Ehi Mitras, I have an another time need of your help!
Mitras: OK, what I must do?
Munch: We must search where the Glukkons have bring Abe and rescue him!
Mitras: Sounds dangerous! But OK, I will help you!
Munch: Thanks Mitras!
Big Face: You are the first good Slig that I see, where do you live?
Mitras: Well, I live in the Slig Barracks! But I'm a free slig, no Glukkon to take orders!
Big Face: OK, there isn't enough time left! Go, and search him!
Munch: OK, let's go!

Mitras, Munch and Boby starts to their incredible adventure! How it may finish?????

HAVE YOU ENJOYED MY FICTION??? I HOPE YES! IF THERE IS SOMETHING THAT YOU DON'T LIKE, PLEASE TELL ME!

[Arxryl]

That was pretty good. It has that kind of "radio adventure" feel to it, and that makes it pretty interesting! Good job!

[Stranger90]

Thank you. But my ideas aren't finished yet...

[Chubfish]

I enjoyed your fan fic, I found it interesting. Nice work!

[Stranger90]

CHAPTER II: TO THE ABE'S RESCUE

After leaving the Mudokons village, Munch & Mitras going into the place where Abe was captured! Thanks to Boby, that sniffed the dirty Abe's pants!

Munch: So this is the place that Abe was captured?
Mitras: Eh eh! My faithful Boby never make mistakes when he sniffs something! Nice works Boby, here a biscuits for you!
Boby: WOF! WOF!
Munch: Well, we are in the right place, and now?? Asks Boby to find another trail!
Mitras: Wait, he is still sniffing!!
Boby: WOF!
Mitras: Follow him!

Seem that Boby have find the correct trail!! After a bit they reach a big building surrounded by an eletrict gate

Mitras: This is the prison! I never see it before!
Munch: Frightful!!!
Mitras: We can't be see by the Big Bro Sligs, we have no chance with them!
Munch: Why you say "we have no chance"? You are a Slig so you haven't any problem if you want to enter in the prison!
Mitras: I forgot about it!
Munch: You are very strange...
Mitras: OK, I can enter, but you? You can't stay here, if they discovered you... your lungs are ready to replace the Lady Margaret's!
Munch: OPS!
Mitras: I have a plan, just listen me!

After 5 minutes

Munch: Do you really think that this plan will works?
Mitras: Well, is the only good idea that I have thinked!
Munch: If you think that drag me and tell at Sligs that you have captured me is a good idea... OK, I will believe...
Mitras: If the brain in your head knowns another plan, we will use it...
Munch: ....
Mitras: Now pretend you fainted!
Munch: ....
Mitras: OK, that's good, now to the prison.

Mitras reach with the "fainted Munch" the prison's entrance, Big Bro Sligs starts to make questions!

BigBro #1: Stop! Identify yourself!
Mitras: I captured this Gabbit!
BigBro #2: First we must see if is really fainted! Hey, where you put the feather???
BigBro #1: Here's!
Mitras (thinking): Oh no! I hope that the Gabbits don't suffer the tickle...
The BigBro Slig tries in different parts the feather, but Munch seem to doesn't suffer the tickle!
BigBro #2: Is really faint!
BigBro #1: Good job, Lady Margaret will be happy. Her dream will become truth! You can pass! Leave the Gabbit to the Slig at the entrance!
Mitras (thinking): (sigh). (with a low voice): You are lucky Munch, you Gabbits are really viscid!!!
Munch (with a low voice): Thanks to the compliment... How you can avoid the Slig at the entrance?
Mitras: Let me think...

The strange duo finally enter in the prison!

ReceptionSlig: Welcome to the prison, if you have someone to leave us, just put it here!
Mitras: This is a Gabbit! It needs water for live! Where I can find a pool?
ReceptionSlig: A Gabbit? They weren't amphibians??
Mitras: This is the last Gabbit in the world! If he die! Lady Margaret won't have his lungs anymore!!! You wants really that this happens??
ReceptionSlig: No no, you're right!!! We have a little pool, just go in that hallway, at the end there is a big pool, leave the Gabbit here!
Mitras: Thanks!

Mitras, availing of the Slig's distraction, enters in the hallway for the cells!

Mitras: For now the plan is going good!
Munch: It's boring...
Mitras: Well, we are lucky! Now the Sligs are sleeping!

After 5 minuter of searchs

Boby: WOF! WOF!
Mitras: Good, we have found him! He is behind this metal door! (Mitras starts to read): "Attention, in this cell is incarcerated the "1° public enemy of the MAGOG cartel". Is prohibited open the door at least that you want to die!"
Munch: Nice works, but now how we can open the door?
Mitras: Eh eh! There is a security keyboard, but I don't know the password!
Munch: Fine, and now?
Mitras: We must found the password!
Munch: Oh yeah! Who has got it?
Mitras: We must go to the Slig's lockers!
Munch: It's a suicide!
Mitras: Well, you may stay in the pool. Now there aren't Sligs, so you can stay there with no problems!
Munch: OK, bring me there!

Mitras leave Munch in the pool, and goes to the Slig's Lockers!

Mitras (thinking): There are over 200 lockers! What it will be??
Slig: Are you searching something friend?
Mitras: Yes, I forget the Abe's cell password!
Slig: Oh... I forget to feed him. I don't want do it! The password is 1234567890! The food is in the kitchen, you can't miss it!
Mitras: Thanks!

First Mitras goes to the pool, but when he arrives, Munch isn't here!

Mitras: OH NO! Where she (he) goes? She (will) be bring away? Boby, sniff the Munch's smelly!
Boby declines
Mitras: C'mon! If you do that, I will give you all biscuits you wants!

Boby doesn't think other times and begin to sniff the Munch's trail, even if he really smelly bad! They arrive, but... Munch is in a barrow and a Vykker is going to remove his lungs!

Munch (thinking): Damn you Mitras!!!!
Mitras (thinking): Oh no! Now I must do something! Ah ah... great idea.
Vykker: Now be calm, your lungs will be removed in an istant...
Munch: YAY!
Mitras: Ehi Doctor!
Vykker: Eh? Slig can't stay here, Slogs too!
Mitras: Sorry for my intrusion doctor, but I see a fuzzle that is escaped from a cage!!
Vykker: WHAT? OH NO! WHERE IT ESCAPED?? WHERE IT ESCAPEEEED? (and runs away)
Mitras: He he, very stupid!
Munch: Thanks to you a Vykker may have cutted me in half!
Mitras: There is no time to talk, now I'm gonna to free you!
Vykker: Ehi! What the hell are you doing?????
Munch: Good move, Mitras!!!
Vykker: Now you can't escape! (the Vykker take a big surgical axe)
Mitras: AAAARRRGHH!!!!
Boby: CAIN!
Munch: SOB!
Vykker: HEY! PUT YOUR HANDS AWAY FROM MY GABBIT!
Mitras: This is my Gabbit!
Munch: I'm not the Gabbit of anybody!!!
Vykker: WHAT YOU WANT! CRAZY SLIG! I WILL ACTIVATE THE ALARM!!
(Alarm): WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mitras: I should to oil my pants!
Munch: Continue to run Mitras, if the mad doctor get us! Who will take care of my 150 sons???
Mitras: -_-

Avoiding Sligs, Munch, Mitras and Boby arrive at the Abe's cell!

Munch: Hurry, they are arriving!
Sligs: YOU HAVE NO WAY TO RUN! JUST SURRENDER!!!!
Mitras: OPEN!
Abe: ??? It's time to eat?
Mitras: No, it's time to escape!
Abe: Munch, what are you doing in a barrow?
Munch: I will tell you when we can exit!
Sligs: STOP! (start to shoot)
Abe: TURN RIGHT!!
Sligs: HURRY, GET THEM!!!
Mitras: Where this hallway go?
Abe: It's a slide!
Mitras: And where that slide conduces?
Abe: Who know?
Mitras: I hope isn't the meat slasher!
All: AAAAAAAAHHHHHH! CAIIIIIN!
Slig #1: They are entered in the sewer slide!
Slig #2: They will not escape from here!
Sligs: Ah ah ah ah ah!

CONTINUE...

[Stranger90]

CHAPTER III: A TRIP IN THE SEWERS

[We saw Munch, Mitras and his slog Boby free Abe from the prison. But they were discovered, and the only way to escape is from a slide... that conduces in the sewers!]

Abe: My head... OUCH!
Mitras: What a big fall! Luckly something have cushion it!
Munch: Yes.... my back!
Abe: Now I want to know why there is a Slig with you, Munch!
Munch: Ehm! It's hard to explain...
Abe: Hard to explain??? Are you allied with the MAGOG CARTEL?
Munch: No! Believe in me, Abe! This Slig can help us!
Abe: Really? Don't make me laugh!
Mitras: Any problem if I help your friend, are you jealous?
Abe: I hate Magog Cartel, I don't corporate with it!
Boby: GRRRRRRRR!!!!!
Mitras: I don't work anymore for it!
Abe: You think really that I take the bait? It not works with me!
Mitras: Well, now I see because Glukkons hate Mudokons!
Abe: What are you trying to tell????
Mitras: GRRRR!
Abe: GRRRR!
Munch: Ehm! May I ask a question?
Abe & Mitras: NO!
Abe: You Sligs are the worst thing that exist in Oddworld!
Mitras: Well, at least we don't stink like Mudokons!
Munch: How long this row will last?
Boby: WOF! WOF! GRRRRRR!
Mitras: What happens, Boby?
Munch: Look behind you! What are those green worms?
Mitras: Green worms????
Abe: THEY ARE FLECHEES!!!!!!!! RUN!!!!!!!
Munch: Why run? They looks so innocuous!
Abe: If they catch you, you will become their food!
Munch: Ehm! There is a problem!
Abe: What?
Munch: I can't move, I'm tied to this barrow!
Mitras: Don't wast time to untie her (him), just push the barrow!
Abe: We have a genius between us!
Munch: Oh no! Don't begin again with this story!!!! JUST RUN AWAY!!!!
Boby: GRRRR! WOF! WOF!
Mitras: BOBY, DON'T BARK AT THEM, RUN!
(gunshot)
Mitras: THEY ARE TOO MANY! AND I FINISH THE AMMO!

[After a big run for avoid the death, the crazy "threesome" encouter a waterfall in front of them!]

Abe: Oh no, and now??
Munch: We must jump!
Mitras: Let me think! I prefer to die "eated by the Fleeches", or I prefer to die "drowning in the water"?
Abe: Shut up and jump!
All: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!
-SPLASH!!!!!-
Munch: Fortunately now I free from the barrow! But where are Abe and Mitras (and his Slog)?
Abe: I hate swim...
Munch: Eh eh! Abe, I never thought that you can swim!
Abe: Yes, I make practice...
Boby: WOF?
Abe: Oh! Here's his dog, and him? Where are?
Munch: I go to see underwater.
Abe: ...
[After a while]
Munch: Found him!
Mitras: Glab! Damn robopants! Thanks Munch!
Munch: Well, I pay off the debt!
Abe: OK! Now we can proceed!
[They reach a low water zone]
Mitras: !!!
Abe: Hey... c'mon, we haven't all the day!
Mitras: My pants, they are oxidized!
Abe: OH NO! Other problems!!!!
Munch: And now? How you will move!
Abe: Just leave him here... Ih ih!
Munch: C'mon Abe, stop to be bad with him!
Mitras: You are lucky that I'm not a "normal" Slig... or you will se what will happen! SOB! I MUST LEAVE HERE MY FIRST PAIR OF ROBOPANTS AND MY MACHINE GUN, NEVER CHANGED FROM 3 YEARS!!!!! BUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! .......EJECT!
[Mitras comes down from his pants!]
Munch: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Boby: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Abe: ...........................
Mitras: What are you looking! We Slig sleep without pants! Well, go on!
Abe: Now you are less slow than Munch!
Mitras: Are you in hurry? Why don't you take me with you?
Abe: BLEACH! I don't want to touch a Slig!
Mitras: I don't need your help, I have Boby!
Abe: Munch, come here, I will take you for hurry up!
[So Mitras get on Boby and Abe take Munch with him. So, after some minutes of walk, they reach a ladder that go up from somewhere]
Abe: A ladder, Munch, can go up?
Munch: Yes, I can... but Mitras and Boby, who will take them? Please Abe...
Abe: MMMM... I have no choice...
[So Abe, thanks to Munch, bring Boby and Mitras during the climb]

CONTINUE...